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* MusicalThemeNaming: The Dandy Pirates are all named after bands such as Music/{{Motorhead}} and the [[Music/TwistedSister Twisted Sisters]].
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** After the TimeSkip, Soren has a hard time fighting an enemy until he decides to use haki. He rarely uses it because he worked hard to master Rokushiki and finds the ease of haki to be "bullshit".
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** He eventually takes this attitude towards the Elemental Nations as a whole, deciding to reach an equivalent standing to the [[WorldsStrongestMan Emperors]] so as to declare his homeland off-limits to the World Government.
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* AttackItsWeakPoint: When Perona attacks the crew and terrorizes them with her ghosts, she's beaten by Paulie tying up her physical body and dumping her in a tub of water.
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* ComplainingAboutRescuesTheyDontLike: [[spoiler:Bonney complains endlessly about being rescued from Akainu until Ms. Valentine threatens to send her back to the marines by shooting her out of a cannon.]]
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* ComplainingAboutRescuesTheyDontLike: [[spoiler:Bonney complains endlessly about being rescued from Akainu until Ms. Valentine threatens to send her back to the marines by shooting her out of a cannon. This is because she bears a grudge against Naruto for not being at the battle of Marineford, as she thinks his presence would have ensured Ace and Whitebeard's survival.]]
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* EmbarrassingNickname: Miss Valentine is too fond of the nickname given to her by the Marines: [[spoiler: "Human Albatross".]]
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* EmbarrassingNickname: Miss Valentine is isn't too fond of the nickname given to her by the Marines: [[spoiler: "Human Albatross".]]]]
** Naruto throws a fit when Vivi calls him "Mr. Whiskers".
** Naruto throws a fit when Vivi calls him "Mr. Whiskers".
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** [[KnightTemplar Vice-Admiral Onigumo]] holds nothing but contempt for [[DirtyCoward Spandam]] and expresses open bewilderment that such a wretched individual got such a high-ranking government job.
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* OutsideContextProblem: No one on the Grand Line is sure what to make of someone with a variety of unrelated powers and no Devil Fruit weakness to take advantage of. The Marines learn the hard way that Seastone doesn't affect Naruto in the slightest.
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** Technically all of Naruto's fights up until he spars against Jinbei since [[spoiler:he doesn't have Kurama with him.]]
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** Technically all of Naruto's fights up until he spars against Jinbei Jinbe since [[spoiler:he doesn't have Kurama with him.]]]]
** Naruto's fight with Jinbe counts for the latter as he's not nearly as strong out of water.
** Naruto's fight with Jinbe counts for the latter as he's not nearly as strong out of water.
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: [[spoiler:Bonney is implied to be a child who aged herself into an adult.]]
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: [[spoiler:Bonney is is, given her immature attitude and how hard she fought while effected by truth serum not to answer the question of how old she really was, implied to be a child who aged used her age powers to turn herself into an adult.]]
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The story is currently at the tail end of the two year timeskip and is 50 chapters in, and is easily one of the best crossover fics out there. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6314806/1/Shinobi_of_the_High_Seas here]].
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The story is currently at the tail end of the two year timeskip and is 50 51 chapters in, and is easily one of the best crossover fics out there. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6314806/1/Shinobi_of_the_High_Seas here]].
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* DeathFromAbove: Taken UpToEleven when Ms. Valentine combines haki with a fall of several thousand meters at her maximum weight. She uses it to [[spoiler:kill a worm whose mouth was the size of a battleship]] and remarks upon the crater as being a "new personal best".
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** In chapter 51, Kurama apparently has the same KillAllHumans dream that [[WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}} Bender]] did.
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** Post timeskip it seems most, if not all have awakened Haki.
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* EverythingTryingToKillYou: In the New World, even the ground can be lethal as shown on Risky Red Island where the ground has naturally occurring high explosives mixed in the sand.
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* AlwaysSomeoneBetter: Nojiko is a fairly skilled navigator but has nothing on Nami. Whereas Nojiko needs several maps to navigate the seas properly, Nami would only need one map at most. According to Nojiko, she'd often sail with just a compass to guide her.
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*ArmorPiercingQuestion: "How old are you really?"
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*** Naruto also acts as something of a GadgeteerGenius in the vein of Usopp or Franky, at least as far as supplying weapons for his crew and design ideas for his ship are concerned.
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** Positionally, Miss Valentine, like Sanji, is both the crew chef and the third strongest by a good margin. Story-wise, she has more in common with Robin, both having served as Baroque Works officers, and both possessing a good knowledge of the underworld politics of the Grand Line, as well as sharing a fairly pragmatic, even ruthless, view of the world.
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** Positionally, Miss Valentine, like Sanji, is both the crew chef and the third strongest by a good margin. Story-wise, she has more in common with Robin, both having served as Baroque Works officers, and both possessing a good knowledge of the underworld politics of the Grand Line, as well as sharing a fairly pragmatic, even ruthless, view of the world. Despite the shared backgrounds...
** Vivi is much closer to Robin. Both are fugitives from the world government, hunted by great powers due to circumstances beyond their control. Both tend towards calm reserve and level-headedness, with occasional displays of child-like humor and wonder contrasted with a strong sense of dignity, all overshadowed by an unshakable trust in the captain that rescued them.
** Paulie, like Franky, is a shipwright from water 7, with an ambition to build a ship that can sail the length of the grand line, and a strong perverted streak (although Paulie tries to mask it be complaining about shameless women).
** Byron, as with Brook, is a musician and former captain rescued from enslavement to one of the Shichibukai, and the last member to join the crew before the New World. Both also have UnfinishedBusiness relating to their former crew.
** Vivi is much closer to Robin. Both are fugitives from the world government, hunted by great powers due to circumstances beyond their control. Both tend towards calm reserve and level-headedness, with occasional displays of child-like humor and wonder contrasted with a strong sense of dignity, all overshadowed by an unshakable trust in the captain that rescued them.
** Paulie, like Franky, is a shipwright from water 7, with an ambition to build a ship that can sail the length of the grand line, and a strong perverted streak (although Paulie tries to mask it be complaining about shameless women).
** Byron, as with Brook, is a musician and former captain rescued from enslavement to one of the Shichibukai, and the last member to join the crew before the New World. Both also have UnfinishedBusiness relating to their former crew.
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* SimilarSquad: Exists (with some twists) between the Foxhound and Straw Hat Pirates.
** Naruto and Luffy being Shonen protagonists, it would probably be easier to count their differences.
** Nojiko, besides being Nami's sister, shares her skills at navigation and her position as the de facto voice of reason in most circumstances. In her combat style, she's closer to Usopp with her marksmanship and variety of weapons.
** Soren, like Zoro, started as a pirate hunter (although not for the bounties), remains the undisputed second strongest on the crew, gains an incredibly high bounty placing him among the Supernovas, desires to defeat a specific member of the Shichibukai who defeated him in the past, and even shares his alcoholic and layabout tendencies.
** Positionally, Miss Valentine, like Sanji, is both the crew chef and the third strongest by a good margin. Story-wise, she has more in common with Robin, both having served as Baroque Works officers, and both possessing a good knowledge of the underworld politics of the Grand Line, as well as sharing a fairly pragmatic, even ruthless, view of the world.
** Naruto and Luffy being Shonen protagonists, it would probably be easier to count their differences.
** Nojiko, besides being Nami's sister, shares her skills at navigation and her position as the de facto voice of reason in most circumstances. In her combat style, she's closer to Usopp with her marksmanship and variety of weapons.
** Soren, like Zoro, started as a pirate hunter (although not for the bounties), remains the undisputed second strongest on the crew, gains an incredibly high bounty placing him among the Supernovas, desires to defeat a specific member of the Shichibukai who defeated him in the past, and even shares his alcoholic and layabout tendencies.
** Positionally, Miss Valentine, like Sanji, is both the crew chef and the third strongest by a good margin. Story-wise, she has more in common with Robin, both having served as Baroque Works officers, and both possessing a good knowledge of the underworld politics of the Grand Line, as well as sharing a fairly pragmatic, even ruthless, view of the world.
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** After the timeskip, he no longer wears the headband.
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* IAmNotLeftHanded: Naruto reveals that his headband is a PowerLimiter, complete with a WorldOfCardboardSpeech. He then removes it and proceeds to [[spoiler: kick the crap out of one of the CP9, [=CP9=], destroy two-thirds of the Buster Call fleet, one-shot a Vice Admiral (who was using Armament Haki), and fight Admiral Aokiji to a stalemate.]]
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* PapaWolf: Spandine. When Naruto assaults his HQ, decimates his forces, and threatens him with a FateWorseThanDeath if he doesn't disclose Spandam's location (CP9 hired Naruto to pinpoint Spandam's location for them), Spandine, though absolutely terrified, refuses to give in. Naruto is so astonished by this that he relents on his threat and manages to get the information he needs diplomatically: he points out that Spandine can simply warn his son of the coming danger and relocate him after Naruto leaves, which benefits them both as Naruto isn't interested in Spandam and Spandine can protect his son.
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* PapaWolf: Spandine. When Naruto assaults his HQ, decimates his forces, and threatens him with a FateWorseThanDeath if he doesn't disclose Spandam's location (CP9 ([=CP9=] hired Naruto to pinpoint Spandam's location for them), Spandine, though absolutely terrified, refuses to give in. Naruto is so astonished by this that he relents on his threat and manages to get the information he needs diplomatically: he points out that Spandine can simply warn his son of the coming danger and relocate him after Naruto leaves, which benefits them both as Naruto isn't interested in Spandam and Spandine can protect his son.
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* IAmNotLeftHanded: Naruto reveals that his headband is a PowerLimiter, complete with a WorldOfCardboardSpeech. He then removes it and proceeds to [[spoiler: kick the crap out of one of the CP9, destroy two-thirds of the Buster Call fleet, one-shot a Vice Admiral (who was using Armament Haki), and fight Admiral Aokiji to a stalemate.]]
** Could arguably apply after he [[spoiler: retrieves Kurama]] and shortly thereafter [[spoiler: kills Akainu.]]
** Could arguably apply after he [[spoiler: retrieves Kurama]] and shortly thereafter [[spoiler: kills Akainu.]]
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* [[CantHoldHisLiquor Can't Hold Her Liquor]]: Unlike Nami, Nojiko gets drunk rather easily. Naruto notes it as being a perfect sign they're not actually related.
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-->[[spoiler: '''Law:''']] [[{{ScottPilgrim}} "So you're going to fight me for her?"]]
-->'''Yosaku:''' [[{{ScottPilgrim}} "No...I want to fight you for me."]]
-->'''Yosaku:''' [[{{ScottPilgrim}} "No...I want to fight you for me."]]
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-->[[spoiler: '''Law:''']] [[{{ScottPilgrim}} [[ComicBook/ScottPilgrim "So you're going to fight me for her?"]]
-->'''Yosaku:'''[[{{ScottPilgrim}} [[ComicBook/ScottPilgrim "No...I want to fight you for me."]]
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** In the early part of chapter 31, Johnny and Yosaku paraphrase [[RedVsBlue Caboose and Church]]'s "what are they doing now" gag.
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: [[spoiler:Bonney is implied to be a child who aged herself into an adult.]]
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: [[spoiler:Bonney is implied to be a child who aged herself into an adult.]]
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* EarlyBirdCameo: Naruto & Crew come across [[spoiler: Boa Hancock and X Drake]] much earlier in than Luffy did in the series.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: Naruto & Crew come across [[spoiler: Boa Hancock Hancock, X Drake, Eustace Kidd, and X Drake]] Jewelry Bonney]] much earlier in than Luffy did in the series.
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%%* FragileSpeedster: Thanks to Naruto, Johnny has become ridiculously fast.
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* MassOhCrap: Naruto's crew when [[spoiler: Kizaru]] suddenly warps smack dap on the middle of the ship.
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ZCE. Is he fragile?
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** [[UpToEleven Taken to the extreme the first time he activates Haki.]] [[IncendiaryExponent Johnny draws his sword so fast, the friction makes it catch fire.]]
** [[UpToEleven Taken to the extreme the first time he activates Haki.]] [[IncendiaryExponent Johnny draws his sword so fast, the friction makes it catch fire.]]
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** The World Nobles have this mentality, like in canon, though it means nothing to Naruto. When Roswald starts shouting at him, Naruto casually replies "Get out of my face," and shoves him away.
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* PapaWolf: Spandine. When Naruto assaults his HQ, decimates his forces, and threatens him with a FateWorseThanDeath if he doesn't disclose Spandam's location (CP9 hired Naruto to pinpoint Spandam's location for them), Spandine, though absolutely terrified, refuses to give in. Naruto is so astonished by this that he relents on his threat and manages to get the information he needs diplomatically: he points out that Spandine can simply warn his son of the coming danger and relocate him after Naruto leaves, which benefits them both as Naruto isn't interested in Spandam and Spandine can protect his son.
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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: The Marines have basically given up on capturing Vivi given that Naruto can take on an admiral and her connection to the Straw Hats isn't worth the effort.
