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The story is currently in the midst of the "Post-War Arc" and 49 chapters in, and is easily one of the best crossover fics out there. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6314806/1/Shinobi_of_the_High_Seas here]].
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The story is currently in at the midst tail end of the "Post-War Arc" two year timeskip and 49 is 50 chapters in, and is easily one of the best crossover fics out there. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6314806/1/Shinobi_of_the_High_Seas here]].
** [[spoiler: Johnny gets one after the time skip]]
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* BigNo: [[spoiler: Akainu]] screams this right before Naruto kills him.
* BlessedWithSuck: Nojiko develops Observation Haki very early. Unfortunately, between her natural inclination towards it and constant use, it keeps getting stronger and she can't turn it off. Not only does she sense problems like Sea Kings over a mile away, but she gets immense migraines from viewing battles that are too fast for her mind to keep up.
* BlessedWithSuck: Nojiko develops Observation Haki very early. Unfortunately, between her natural inclination towards it and constant use, it keeps getting stronger and she can't turn it off. Not only does she sense problems like Sea Kings over a mile away, but she gets immense migraines from viewing battles that are too fast for her mind to keep up.
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* BigNo: [[spoiler: Akainu]] screams this right before [[spoiler: Naruto kills him.
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* BlessedWithSuck: Nojiko develops Observation Haki very early. Unfortunately, between her natural inclination towards it and constant use, it keeps getting stronger and she can't turn it off. Not only does she sense problems like Sea Kings over a mile away, but she gets immense migraines from viewing battles that are too fast for her mind to keep up. [[spoiler:Although she still can't turn it off, she eventually learns to direct what she senses, namely the weather around the ship.]]
* BlessedWithSuck: Nojiko develops Observation Haki very early. Unfortunately, between her natural inclination towards it and constant use, it keeps getting stronger and she can't turn it off. Not only does she sense problems like Sea Kings over a mile away, but she gets immense migraines from viewing battles that are too fast for her mind to keep up. [[spoiler:Although she still can't turn it off, she eventually learns to direct what she senses, namely the weather around the ship.]]
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-->" "But anyway, yeah. I'm immortal." (Naruto) said before pausing and moving his hands in a ghostly manner, "Ooooooooh~…" "
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* ImprobableAimingSkills: Post time-skip, Nojiko practices sniping using targets three miles away. The fact she's on a ship and aiming at buoys increases the difficulty even further.
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* FriendlyEnemy: A minor example but Doflamingo admits he rather likes Naruto despite disagreed vehemently with him.
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* FriendlyEnemy: A minor example but Doflamingo admits he rather likes Naruto despite disagreed disagreeing vehemently with him.
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* DrJerk: Muret regularly lies into the crew for the injuries they get. Naruto actually likes this since it means she cares enough to get upset.
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* DrJerk: Muret regularly lies lays into the crew for the injuries they get. Naruto actually likes this since it means she cares enough to get upset.
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* CharlesAtlasSuperpower: All of the crew but Johnny and Yosaku especially. Neither have anything special about them but are still amount the fastest and strongest crew members respectively from sheer training.
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* FriendlyEnemy: A minor example but Doflamingo admits he rather likes Naruto despite disagreed vehemently with him.
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* WeCanRuleTogether: Naruto's offered a Shichibukai position after Alabasta. Naturally, he turns it down.
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* PersonOfMassDestruction: Naruto and [[spoiler:Akainu's]] fight is so devastating, Kong complains they'll have to redraw maps of the Red Line.
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* JackBauerInterrogationTechnique: Miss Valentine interrogates a man by sitting on his back and increasing her weight if her refuses to answer a question.
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** Technically all of Naruto's fights up until he spars against Jinbei since [[spoiler:he doesn't have Kurama with him.]]
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* AwesomeByAnalysis: Both the CP9 and Aokiji figure out how to prevent Naruto from using Hiraishin. Aokiji even does it after a single use.
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* AwesomeByAnalysis: Both the CP9 [=CP9=] and Aokiji figure out how to prevent Naruto from using Hiraishin. Aokiji even does it after a single use.
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* DefeatMeansFriendship: A more subdued example but the [[spoiler:CP9]] are willing to ally with Naruto after their defeat.
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* DefeatMeansFriendship: A more subdued example but the [[spoiler:CP9]] [[spoiler:[=CP9=] ]] are willing to ally with Naruto after their defeat.
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** Bonney's age changing powers don't work on Naruto due to his longevity.
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* IAteWhat: Bonney.
-->'''Miss Valentine''': "Wow, for a big-name pirate captain you were really easy to drug."
-->'''Miss Valentine''': "Wow, for a big-name pirate captain you were really easy to drug."
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** While in her ghost form, Perona's body is helpless. Thus, Paulie simply ties her up and throws her in a tub of water.
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Miss Valentine has yet to give out her real name, claiming she rather likes her Baroque Works codename.
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* DrJerk: Muret regularly lies into the crew for the injuries they get. Naruto actually likes this since it means she cares enough to get upset.
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: Sengoku tries to prevent this, stating that the new Fleet Admiral shouldn't be determined by who can kill the criminal with the highest bounty.
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Akainu.]]
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* KilledOffForReal: Arlong and [[spoiler:Akainu.]]
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** Bonney's age changing powers don't work on Naruto due to his longevity.
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: [[spoiler:Bonney is implied to be a child who aged herself into an adult.]]
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Akainu.]]
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** Later Yosaku has the same reaction when Muret finds out.
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* CoolVsAwesome: Naruto and Isobu once fought Gold Rogers and his crew.
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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: Naruto is in the middle of wondering where a fruit that would let someone turn into lava would come from when he realizes he knows exactly where Devil Fruits come from: The Shinju.
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The story is currently in the midst of the "Post-War Arc" and 45 chapters in, and is easily one of the best crossover fics out there. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6314806/1/Shinobi_of_the_High_Seas here]].
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The story is currently in the midst of the "Post-War Arc" and 45 49 chapters in, and is easily one of the best crossover fics out there. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6314806/1/Shinobi_of_the_High_Seas here]].
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* BigNo: [[spoiler: Akainu]] screams this right before Naruto kills him.
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* ButForMeItWasTuesday: Naruto tells Akainu that while their fight might be one of the most important fights of the Admiral's life, Naruto probably won't remember it in three weeks time.
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* LogicalWeakness: Naruto defeats [[SuperSmoke Smoker]] at one point by using a wind jutsu to blow him away.
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* ShoutOut: Naruto wants [[spoiler: Nojiko]] to learn how to [[{{Wanted}} bend bullets]]
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* ShoutOut: Naruto wants [[spoiler: Nojiko]] to learn how to [[{{Wanted}} [[Comicbook/{{Wanted}} bend bullets]]
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* UnwantedRescue: The marines try to rescue Vivi from Naruto whenever they meet. However, most of them don't understand that Naruto isn't holding her hostage; he's keeping her from being held hostage by the World Government.
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* DeathOfAThousandCuts: Soren overwhelms Marigold's haki by hitting the exact same spot a hundred times in quick succession
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* DeathOfAThousandCuts: Soren overwhelms Marigold's haki by hitting the exact same spot a hundred times in quick successionsuccession.
* DefeatMeansFriendship: A more subdued example but the [[spoiler:CP9]] are willing to ally with Naruto after their defeat.
* DefeatMeansFriendship: A more subdued example but the [[spoiler:CP9]] are willing to ally with Naruto after their defeat.
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* AwesomeButImpractical: During the Alabasta arc, Johnny and Yosaku's strongest techniques leave them unable to use their legs and hands respectively.
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* UnderestimatingBadassery: Naruto gets this a few times, less after he gets his second and third bounties.
** [[ThoseTwoGuys Johnny and Yosaku]] are regularly considered [[{{Mook}} mooks]].
** [[ThoseTwoGuys Johnny and Yosaku]] are regularly considered [[{{Mook}} mooks]].
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** Vivi cows the entire crew after [[spoiler: activating King's Disposition Haki]].
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** Vivi's dizziness doesn't remotely affect Naruto but he learns later it does work on others.
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** Vivi's dizziness dance doesn't remotely affect Naruto but he learns later it does work on others.
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* SheFu: Vivi starts practicing this after Naruto starts training her. It helps that she's flexible enough that Naruto can put her leg over his shoulder while standing right in front of Vivi without causing any discomfort.
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* ReadingsAreOffTheScale: Implied when Naruto punches Fukuro. While no number is given, Fukuro is initially shocked at Naruto's [[PowerLevels Doriki]] before convincing himself that he didn't get a proper reading.
