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** [[spoiler: Kizaru]] arrives at the end of Alabasta to go after Naruto. [[spoiler:And again after successfully rescuing Vivi and stopping the slave auctions.]]

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** [[spoiler: Kizaru]] arrives at the end of Alabasta to go after Naruto. [[spoiler:And [[spoiler: And again after successfully rescuing Vivi and stopping the slave auctions.]]


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* EmbarrassingNickname: Miss Valentine is too fond of the nickname given to her by the Marines [[spoiler: "Human Albatross".]]
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* GaryStu: As mentioned in the description, Naruto is a ''total'' GaryStu in this story. There is literally no point in arguing against that, because it's just so blatant. But despite this, the story somehow manages to be pretty good.

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* GaryStu: As mentioned in the description, Naruto is a ''total'' GaryStu in this story. There is literally no point in arguing against that, because it's just so blatant. But despite this, the story somehow manages to be pretty good. good.
**It helps that, aside from a couple new jutsu, this is basically the same Naruto from the current part of the manga, just much older and more experienced.

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* OhCrap: Naruto's crew, anytime their captain wants them to learn something. See TrainingFromHell below.


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* [[OlderThanTheyLook Older Than He Looks]]: Naruto, obviously, though its recently been revealed that [[spoiler: he's only about 90 and not over 120]] like he's been saying. Turns out he was just bored of keeping track.
-->'''Naruto:''' "Keeping track of time is useless if I can't die of old age. I forgot. I might as well be older. It doesn't matter, what's the difference? Old is old."
* OhCrap: Naruto's crew, anytime their captain wants them to learn something. See TrainingFromHell below.
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* GaryStu: As mentioned in the description, Naruto is a ''total'' GaryStu in this story. There is literally no point in arguing against that, because it's just so blatant. But despite this, the story somehow manages to be pretty good.
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* WeaksauceWeakness: Kizaru has been beaten twice by [[spoiler: using a mirror to reflect him away]].
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** [[spoiler: Kizaru]] arrives at the end of Alabasta to go after Naruto.

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** [[spoiler: Kizaru]] arrives at the end of Alabasta to go after Naruto. [[spoiler:And again after successfully rescuing Vivi and stopping the slave auctions.]]
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* WantedPoster: Naruto is fairly indifferent when he sees his first wanted poster, save for that he's given the nickname "[[spoiler:Seed of War]]". His ''second'' poster and nickname, on the other hand...

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* WantedPoster: Naruto is fairly indifferent when he sees his first wanted poster, save for that he's given the nickname "[[spoiler:Seed of War]]". His ''second'' poster and nickname, nickname "[[spoiler:God Sage of Anarchy]]", on the other hand...
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The story's premise is that a semi-immortal Naruto, many, ''many'' years after ending the Fourth Shinobi War, bringing peace to the Elemental Nations, decides that there is no longer any place for him there and sets out on a small merchant's ship to explore the world. After running into and capturing a pirate crew, he sails to a small town to collect the bounties, he finds the town empty save for a lone dog in front of a pet shop and a strange ship similar to a carousel...

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The story's premise is that a semi-immortal Naruto, many, many ''many'' years after ending the Fourth Shinobi War, War and bringing peace to the Elemental Nations, decides that there is no longer any place for him there and sets out on a small merchant's ship to explore the world. After running into and capturing a pirate crew, he sails to a small town to collect the bounties, he finds the town empty save for a lone dog in front of a pet shop and a strange ship similar to a carousel...
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* MassOhCrap: Naruto's crew when [[spoiler: Kizaru]] suddenly warps smack dap on the middle of the ship.
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* CurbStompBattle: All of Naruto's fights pre-Grand Line are this, most especially against [[spoiler: the Arlong Pirates]]. Once in the Grand Line though, he doesn't have it ''as'' easy.

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* CurbStompBattle: All of Naruto's fights pre-Grand Line are this, most especially against [[spoiler: the Arlong Pirates]]. Once in the Grand Line though, he doesn't have it ''as'' easy. [[spoiler:Eventually he '''has to use''' the Hiraishin, Sage Mode, and the Rinnegan.]]
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Even Kidd is disgusted with the slave auctions. Keep in mind, this is a guy who [[spoiler: killed everyone on an entire island]] because they laughed at him.

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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Even Kidd is disgusted with the slave auctions. Keep in mind, this is a guy who [[spoiler: killed everyone on an entire island]] [[DisproportionateRetribution because they laughed at him.him]].
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While most crossovers simply just have Naruto join Luffy's crew from some point in the orginal manga's storyline(in this case, the Buggy arc, the author of this fic tries something different. While Naruto does travel with Luffy at first(Luffy calls him his ships' resident hobo), he soon splits off and gets his own ship(which is orange, of course) and crew(who consist of main characters from certain arcs of One Piece) together to enter then Grand Line. While he does come across Luffy and Crew during some of the more major plot points(such as Alabasta), Naruto and his crew have their own adventures, running into many familiar faces from the One Piece-verse along the way.

It should be noted that, while Naruto is essential a {{Gary Stu}} in this fic, being both semi-immortal and much more powerful than the majority of characters in the fic, this is one of the ''very'' few fanfics out there that actually does the concept right. Naruto does not simply jump in to every single fight and leave the others to just stand and watch, nor does he handle evey enemy with no effort whatsoever.

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While most crossovers simply just have Naruto join Luffy's crew from some point in the orginal manga's storyline(in storyline--in this case, the Buggy arc, the arc--the author of this fic tries something different. While Naruto does travel with Luffy at first(Luffy first (Luffy calls him his ships' resident hobo), he soon splits off and gets his own ship(which is orange, of course) and crew(who consist crew (which consists of main characters from certain arcs of One Piece) together to enter then Grand Line. While he does come across Luffy and Crew during some of the more major plot points(such points (such as Alabasta), Naruto and his crew have their own adventures, running into many familiar faces from the One Piece-verse along the way.

It should be noted that, while Naruto is essential essentially a {{Gary Stu}} in this fic, being both semi-immortal and much more powerful than the majority of characters in the fic, this is one of the ''very'' few fanfics out there that actually does the concept right. Naruto does not simply jump in to every single fight and leave the others to just stand and watch, nor does he handle evey every enemy with no effort whatsoever.



* AGodAmI: Naruto ''hates'' being refered to like this.

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* AGodAmI: Naruto ''hates'' being refered refereed to like this.



* CurbStompBattle: All of Naruto's fights Pre-Grand Line battles are this, most especially against [[spoiler: the Arlong Pirates]]. Once in the Grand Line though, he doesn't have it ''as'' easy.

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* CurbStompBattle: All of Naruto's fights Pre-Grand pre-Grand Line battles are this, most especially against [[spoiler: the Arlong Pirates]]. Once in the Grand Line though, he doesn't have it ''as'' easy.



* TrainingFromHell: Naruto rountienly increases [[spoiler: Johnny]] and [[spoiler: Yosaku]]'s chakra weights, given to them to incease their speed and strength, whenever they ajust to the added weight...and to punish them....and to teach them something... [[OverlyLongGag and whenever he feels like it]]...

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* TrainingFromHell: Naruto rountienly increases [[spoiler: Johnny]] and [[spoiler: Yosaku]]'s chakra weights, given to them to incease their speed and strength, whenever they ajust adjust to the added weight...and to punish them....and to teach them something... [[OverlyLongGag and whenever he feels like it]]...
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The story's premise is that a semi-immortal Naruto, many, ''many'' years after ending the Fourth Shinobi War, bringing peace to the Elemental Nations, decides that there is no longer any place for him there and sets out on a small merchent's ship to explore the world. After running into and capturing a pirate crew, he sails to a small town to collect the bounties, he finds the town empty save for a lone dog in front of a pet shop and a strange ship similar to a carousel...

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The story's premise is that a semi-immortal Naruto, many, ''many'' years after ending the Fourth Shinobi War, bringing peace to the Elemental Nations, decides that there is no longer any place for him there and sets out on a small merchent's merchant's ship to explore the world. After running into and capturing a pirate crew, he sails to a small town to collect the bounties, he finds the town empty save for a lone dog in front of a pet shop and a strange ship similar to a carousel...



* CurbStompBattle: All of Naruto's fights pre-Grand Line battles are this, most especially against [[spoiler: the Arlong Pirates]]. Once in the Grand Line though, he doesn't have it ''as'' easy.

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* CurbStompBattle: All of Naruto's fights pre-Grand Pre-Grand Line battles are this, most especially against [[spoiler: the Arlong Pirates]]. Once in the Grand Line though, he doesn't have it ''as'' easy.



* EvenEvilHasStandards: Even Kidd is disgusted with the slave auctions. Keep in mind, this is a guy who [[spoiler: killed eveyone on an entire island]] because they laughed at him.

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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Even Kidd is disgusted with the slave auctions. Keep in mind, this is a guy who [[spoiler: killed eveyone everyone on an entire island]] because they laughed at him.
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* BadassGrandpa: One ''could argue that Naruto is this, given his age...

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* BadassGrandpa: One ''could ''could'' argue that Naruto is this, given his age...
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The story's premise is that a semi-immortal Naruto, many, ''many'' years after ending the Fourth Shinobi War, bringing peace to the Elemental Nations, decides that there is no longer any place for him thee and sets out on a small merchent's ship to explore the world. After running into and capturing a pirate crew, he sails to a small town to collect the bounties, he finds the town empty save for a lone dog in front of a pet shop and a strange ship similar to a carousel...

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The story's premise is that a semi-immortal Naruto, many, ''many'' years after ending the Fourth Shinobi War, bringing peace to the Elemental Nations, decides that there is no longer any place for him thee there and sets out on a small merchent's ship to explore the world. After running into and capturing a pirate crew, he sails to a small town to collect the bounties, he finds the town empty save for a lone dog in front of a pet shop and a strange ship similar to a carousel...
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The story's premise is that a semi-immortal Naruto, many, ''many'' years after ending the Fourth Shinobi War, bringing peace to the Elemental Nations, decides that there is no longer any place for him thee and sets out on a small merchent's ship to explore the world. After running into and capturing a pirate crew, he sails to a small town to collect the bounties, he foinds the town empty save for a lone dog in front of a pet shop and a strange ship similar to a carousel...

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The story's premise is that a semi-immortal Naruto, many, ''many'' years after ending the Fourth Shinobi War, bringing peace to the Elemental Nations, decides that there is no longer any place for him thee and sets out on a small merchent's ship to explore the world. After running into and capturing a pirate crew, he sails to a small town to collect the bounties, he foinds finds the town empty save for a lone dog in front of a pet shop and a strange ship similar to a carousel...



* ActionGirl: [[spoiler: Nojiko]], [[spoiler:Miss Valentine]], and [[spoiler:Vivi]], due to Naruto's relentless training.

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* ActionGirl: [[spoiler: Nojiko]], [[spoiler:Miss Valentine]], and [[spoiler:Vivi]], due to Naruto's relentless training. [[spoiler:And then Vivi is hit with the DistressBall.]]
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* [[GirlsWithGuns Girl With Guns]]: [[spoiler: Nojiko]] becomes this thanks to Naruto's training.

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* [[GirlsWithGuns Girl With Guns]]: {{Gunslinger}}: [[spoiler: Nojiko]] becomes this thanks to Naruto's training.
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* FragileSpeedster: Thanks to Naruto, Johnny has become ridiculously fast.


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* MightyGlacier: Yosaku isn't very fast but he casually swings a 4 ton hammer for training.


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* PoisonousPerson: [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Soren the Plague]] can turn any of his body fluids into acid.
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*EvenEvilHasStandards: Even Kidd is disgusted with the slave auctions. Keep in mind, this is a guy who [[spoiler: killed eveyone on an entire island]] because they laughed at him.
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The story is currently just past the "Thriller Bark" arc and 36 chapters in, and is easily one of the best crossover fics out there. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6314806/1/Shinobi_of_the_High_Seas here]].

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The story is currently just past knee-deep in the "Thriller Bark" "Shabondy Archipelago" arc and 36 38 chapters in, and is easily one of the best crossover fics out there. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6314806/1/Shinobi_of_the_High_Seas here]].
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* [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy I Want My Friends To Be Happy]]: Naruto essentially lives and breaths this trope for his crew, its just been a long time since he's had people to care about.

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* [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy I Want My Friends To Be Happy]]: Naruto essentially lives and breaths this trope for his crew, its crew; it's just been a long time since he's had people to care about.



* TrainingFromHell: Naruto rountienly increases [[spoiler: Johnny]] and [[spoiler: Yosaku]]'s chakra weights, given to them to incease their speed and strength, whenever they ajust to the added weight...and to punish them....and to teach them something...[[OverlyLongGag and when he feels like it]]...

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* TrainingFromHell: Naruto rountienly increases [[spoiler: Johnny]] and [[spoiler: Yosaku]]'s chakra weights, given to them to incease their speed and strength, whenever they ajust to the added weight...and to punish them....and to teach them something... [[OverlyLongGag and when whenever he feels like it]]...



* WantedPoster: Naruto is fairly indifferent when he sees his first wanted poster, save for that he's give the nickname "[[spoiler: Seed of War]]". His ''second'' poster and nickname, on the other hand...

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* WantedPoster: Naruto is fairly indifferent when he sees his first wanted poster, save for that he's give given the nickname "[[spoiler: Seed "[[spoiler:Seed of War]]". His ''second'' poster and nickname, on the other hand...



-->'''Naruto(literally the first line of the fic):''' "*sigh* Boooreddddddddaaaaa!"

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-->'''Naruto(literally -->'''Naruto (literally the first line of the fic):''' "*sigh* Boooreddddddddaaaaa!"
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* DynamicEntry: Naruto pulls of the Matio Gai version of this, shouting about the "power of Youth" shortly after. he then realizes what he just said, and is understandably unsettled.

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* DynamicEntry: Naruto pulls of the Matio Maito Gai version of this, shouting about the "power complete with "Power of Youth" shortly after. he then realizes what he just said, and shout. He is understandably unsettled.unsettled about the latter, afterward.


* GettingTooOldForThis: Mostly averted in that Naruto still has all his stamina and strength, but he does say this trope once or twice.
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* GaryStu: A rare example of this trope done ''right'', though [[YourMilageMayVary YMMV]].
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* WarIsHell: Naruto spent the better part of a century bringing peace to the Elemental Nations, and he's not going to to let anyone mess with that, least of all [[spoiler: the World Government.]]
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[[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy I Want My Friends To Be Happy]]: Naruto essentially lives and breaths this trope for his crew, its just been a long time since he's had people to care about.

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* [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy I Want My Friends To Be Happy]]: Naruto essentially lives and breaths this trope for his crew, its just been a long time since he's had people to care about.
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[[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy I Want My Friends To Be Happy]]: Naruto essentially lives and breaths this trope for his crew, its just been a long time since he's had people to care about.
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* HeroicSacrifice: A non-death example. Naruto gave up living in Konoha, staying with his precious people and his dream of being Hokage to become a wandering hermit to keep the peace between villages, given that Naruto was [[spoiler: the hero of the Fourth Shinobi War and the most powerful ninja around.]]
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** [[spoiler: Kizaru]] arrives at the end of Alabasta to go after Naruto.

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