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* GoneHorriblyRight: During a sparring match between Joker, Mona, Skull, Panther and Serpent, the leader uses Brain Jack on the three to attack each other and gain an advantage. So he tells Panther and Serpent to have a pillow fight, while he tells Skull to punch himself. Not only Skull punches [[GroinAttack himself in the groin,]] but Serpent goes to [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown mercilessly beat Panther]] while laughing playfully. Skull (who recovered) had to use the Harisen Recovery and its outright stated that Panther was in severe pain. Joker tells himself that he'll never order a pillow fight ever again.

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* GoneHorriblyRight: During a sparring match between Joker, Mona, Skull, Panther and Serpent, the leader uses Brain Jack on the three to attack each other and gain an advantage. So he tells Panther and Serpent to have a pillow fight, while he tells Skull to punch himself. Not only does Skull punches punch [[GroinAttack himself in the groin,]] but Serpent goes to [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown mercilessly beat Panther]] while laughing playfully. Skull (who recovered) had to use the Harisen Recovery and its outright stated that Panther was in severe pain. Joker tells himself that he'll never order a pillow fight ever again.
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*** though considering in the canon game of Persona 5/5 Royal, one CAN meet and interact with Haru on the game's Day 3 after the first-ever palace infiltration, it may be better to say she is focused on as a character instead of teasing her as more than a background individual earlier than normal.

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*** though Though considering in the canon game of Persona 5/5 Royal, one CAN meet and interact with Haru on the game's Day 3 after the first-ever palace infiltration, it may be better to say she is focused on as a character instead of teasing her as more than a background individual earlier than normal.
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***though considering in the canon game of Persona 5/5 Royal, one CAN meet and interact with Haru on the game's Day 3 after the first-ever palace infiltration, it may be better to say she is focused on as a character instead of teasing her as more than a background individual earlier than normal.
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* ForcedToWatch: Played with. [[spoiler:Homura has to witness Kamoshida raping Shiho since her legs won't move because of her own shock.]]

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* ForcedToWatch: Played with. [[spoiler:Homura with Homura has to witness Kamoshida raping Shiho since her legs won't move because of her own shock.]]



** Homura slaps Asuka in Chapter 10 after spending the entire chapter acting different [[spoiler:after Shiho jumps off the school.]]

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** Homura slaps Asuka in Chapter 10 after spending the entire chapter acting different [[spoiler:after after Shiho jumps off the school.]]



* HitMeDamnit: After Ann sees the video of Shiho's rape, Homura offers to let her punch her as punishment for failing to prevent it. When this backfires due to Homura being effectively MadeOfIron, Homura urges Asuka to hit her in Ann's place, as she's the only one who can hurt her. Asuka tries to resist this before instead kicking her in the stomach.

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* HitMeDamnit: HitMeDammit: After Ann sees the video of Shiho's rape, Homura offers to let her punch her as punishment for failing to prevent it. When this backfires due to Homura being effectively MadeOfIron, Homura urges Asuka to hit her in Ann's place, as she's the only one who can hurt her. Asuka tries to resist this before instead kicking her in the stomach.

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* HitMeDamnit: After Ann sees the video of Shiho's rape, Homura offers to let her punch her as punishment for failing to prevent it. When this backfires due to Homura being effectively MadeOfIron, Homura urges Asuka to hit her in Ann's place, as she's the only one who can hurt her. Asuka tries to resist this before instead kicking her in the stomach.



** All shinobi are trained this way to the point that they have SuperStrength, SuperSpeed, and SuperToughness in just their base form. Ann found out the hard way when trying to punish [[spoiler:Homura for failing to prevent Shiho's rape]] by punching her and she nearly breaks her own hand doing so while [[spoiler:Homura]] [[NoSell barely felt anything]]. Asuka's kick not too long after that did a lot more damage to [[spoiler:Homura]] than Ann's punch ever did.

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** All shinobi are trained this way to the point that they have SuperStrength, SuperSpeed, and SuperToughness in just their base form. Ann found out the hard way when trying to punish [[spoiler:Homura Homura for failing to prevent Shiho's rape]] rape by punching her and she nearly breaks her own hand doing so while [[spoiler:Homura]] Homura [[NoSell barely felt anything]]. Asuka's kick not too long after that did a lot more damage to [[spoiler:Homura]] Homura than Ann's punch ever did.
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** In Chapter 8, when Homura starts questioning herself again over the "murder" she was framed for, Asuka [[DontSaySuchStupidThings goes\\ a little overboard]]:

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** In Chapter 8, when Homura starts questioning herself again over the "murder" she was framed for, Asuka [[DontSaySuchStupidThings goes\\ goes a little overboard]]:

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* GetAHoldOfYourselfMan: Homura slaps Asuka in Chapter 10 after spending the entire chapter acting different [[spoiler:after Shiho jumps off the school.]]

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* GetAHoldOfYourselfMan: GetAHoldOfYourselfMan:
** In Chapter 8, when Homura starts questioning herself again over the "murder" she was framed for, Asuka [[DontSaySuchStupidThings goes\\ a little overboard]]:
-->'''Homura''': You’re supposed to ''slap'' to snap them out of it. I swear, that haymaker would decapitate a normal person...
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Homura slaps Asuka in Chapter 10 after spending the entire chapter acting different [[spoiler:after Shiho jumps off the school.]]

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* CatchPhrase: Asuka and Homura's 'It's sister-like!'.
** Homura also has 'Goddammit Ryuji!'. An alternate version of this happens in Chapter 63: 'Goddammit Kaneshiro!'.



** Ryuji constantly screwing up leads to Homura yelling [[CatchPhrase 'Goddammit Ryuji!']].

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** Ryuji constantly screwing up leads to Homura yelling [[CatchPhrase 'Goddammit Ryuji!']]."Goddammit Ryuji!".
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* DatePeepers:[[Spoiler:Senki Shu spying on Ryuji and Hyouki's second date in Chapter 130]] at the diner in Shibuya.

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* DatePeepers:[[Spoiler:Senki DatePeepers: [[spoiler:Senki Shu spying on Ryuji and Hyouki's second date in Chapter 130]] at the diner in Shibuya.
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* DatePeepers: [[Spoiler:Senki Shu spying on Ryuji and Hyouki's second date in Chapter 130.]]

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* DatePeepers: [[Spoiler:Senki DatePeepers:[[Spoiler:Senki Shu spying on Ryuji and Hyouki's second date in Chapter 130.]]130]] at the diner in Shibuya.
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* DatePeepers: [[Spoiler:Senki Shu spying on Ryuji and Hyouki's second date in Chapter 130/]] at the diner in Shibuya.

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* DatePeepers: [[Spoiler:Senki Shu spying on Ryuji and Hyouki's second date in Chapter 130/]] at the diner in Shibuya.130.]]
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* DatePeepers: [[Spoiler: Senki Shu spying on Ryuji and Hyouki's second date in Chapter 130]] at the diner in Shibuya.

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* DatePeepers: [[Spoiler: Senki [[Spoiler:Senki Shu spying on Ryuji and Hyouki's second date in Chapter 130]] 130/]] at the diner in Shibuya.
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* DatePeepers: [[Spoiler:Senki Shu spying on Ryuji and Hyouki's second date in Chapter 130]] at the diner in Shibuya.

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* DatePeepers: [[Spoiler:Senki [[Spoiler: Senki Shu spying on Ryuji and Hyouki's second date in Chapter 130]] at the diner in Shibuya.
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* DatePeepers: [[Spoiler:Senki Shu (minus Hyouki) in Chapter 130]] at the diner in Shibuya.

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* DatePeepers: [[Spoiler:Senki Shu (minus Hyouki) spying on Ryuji and Hyouki's second date in Chapter 130]] at the diner in Shibuya.
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* DatePeepers: [[Spoiler:SenkiShu (minus Hyouki) in Chapter 130]] at the diner in Shibuya.

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* DatePeepers: [[Spoiler:SenkiShu [[Spoiler:Senki Shu (minus Hyouki) in Chapter 130]] at the diner in Shibuya.
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* DatePeepers: [[Spoiler:SenkiShu (minus Hyouki) in Chapter 130]] at the diner in Shibuya.
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This story is a DoorStopper, with over 1,000,000 words as of 5/20/2021 and still going.

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This story is a DoorStopper, with over 1,000,000 2,400,000 words as of 5/20/2021 11/11/2023 and still going.
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* AssShove: Yumi takes a rectal temperature check at Takemi's clinic in Chapter 99.
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** [[spoiler:Hyouki]] and Ryuji are both confirmed fans of [[VideoGame/TokyoMirageSessionsFE Masqueraider]]. [[spoiler:Hyouki]] especially.


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** Ryuji x Hyouki
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The fic is also available on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27419212/chapters/67021066 here]].

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The fic is also available on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27419212/chapters/67021066 org/works/27419212 here]].
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--> '''Mirai:''' “Like olives on pizza and angsty losers who write [[Anime/{{Pokemon}} Satoshi]] [[BetrayalFic betrayal fics.]]”

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--> '''Mirai:''' “Like olives on pizza and angsty losers who write [[Anime/{{Pokemon}} [[Anime/PokemonTheSeries Satoshi]] [[BetrayalFic betrayal fics.]]”
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* BreastExpansion: Homura and Hikage have their breasts getting bigger...by eating a Big Bang Burger. It's basically a RunningGag. Doesn't work for [[ACupAngst Mirai]], though.

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* BreastExpansion: Homura and Hikage have their breasts getting bigger...by eating a Big Bang Burger. It's basically a RunningGag. Doesn't work for [[ACupAngst Mirai]], though. [[spoiler:Turns out it was intentionally developed at the expense of Maki by her family.]]
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** On the ''Senran Kagura'' side: Asuka, Homura, [[spoiler:Yumi, Miyabi, DDaidōji, and Suzune/Rin]] all gain a Persona.

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** On the ''Senran Kagura'' side: Asuka, Homura, [[spoiler:Yumi, Miyabi, DDaidōji, Daidōji, and Suzune/Rin]] all gain a Persona.

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