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''See The Zone And Survive'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' / ''[[VideoGame/{{STALKER}} S.T.A.L.K.E.R.]]'' crossover started in September 23, 2012 and completed in February 20, 2014.
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''See The the Zone And and Survive'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' / ''[[VideoGame/{{STALKER}} S.T.A.L.K.E.R.]]'' crossover started in September 23, 2012 and completed in February 20, 2014.
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!!See The Zone And Survive contains examples of:
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!!''See the Zone
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%%* BaldOfAwesome: Strider.
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* CantHoldHisLiquor: Celestia almost faint after ''one'' glass of vodka. (To be fair, it's ''vodka'', so it's have more alcohol inside that most of the beverages).
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* CantHoldHisLiquor: Celestia almost faint faints after ''one'' glass of vodka. (To To be fair, it's ''vodka'', so it's have more vodka has a greater alcohol inside that content than most of the beverages).other beverages.
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ZCE comment-outs.
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After an accident with a strange anomaly in the Everfree Forest, Celestia is trapped in alternative world in the place filled with mutants, killers, even more anomalies and her magical powers are very weakened. Now, with the help of two Stalkers (and their future allies and friends) she must learn how to survive in this dangerous place which Zone is and find way to home.
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After an accident with a strange anomaly in the Everfree Forest, Celestia is trapped in alternative an alternate world in the place filled with mutants, killers, even an more anomalies and anomalies; her magical powers are very heavily weakened. Now, with the help of two Stalkers (and their future allies and friends) she must learn how to survive in this dangerous place which Zone is and find way to home.
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* ActionGirl: Celestia.
* AnimalisticAbomination / HumanoidAbomination: Zone's mutants, of course.
* AttemptedRape: [[spoiler: Happened to Celestia.]]
* BaldOfAwesome: Strider.
* AnimalisticAbomination / HumanoidAbomination: Zone's mutants, of course.
* AttemptedRape: [[spoiler: Happened to Celestia.]]
* BaldOfAwesome: Strider.
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* BearHug: Celestia receives one from a power-armored Strider.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Two moments:
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* BigDamnHeroes: Two moments:BigDamnHeroes:
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* CurbStompBattle: Strider vs. 35 bandits.
* TheEngineer: Celestia is quite good at being this.
* {{Flashback}}: Almost the whole story is basically telling the reader HowWeGotHere.
* FriendlySniper: Strider. ColdSniper too, considering his past.
* TheEngineer: Celestia is quite good at being this.
* {{Flashback}}: Almost the whole story is basically telling the reader HowWeGotHere.
* FriendlySniper: Strider. ColdSniper too, considering his past.
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* {{Flashback}}:
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* GunPorn: Oh so very, very much.
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* {{Immortality}}: [[spoiler: Strider, accidentally. As long as he isn't incinerated, vaporized, [[ChunkySalsaRule ripped to shreds]] or [[OffWithHisHead decapitated]], he can regenerate his limbs and organs. Oh, and he's ageless now. Celestia is both [[LivingForeverIsAwesome happy]] and [[WhoWantsToLiveForever worried]] about this.]]
** [[spoiler: Additionally, he also gain HealingHands ability.]]
* InterspeciesRomance: Strider and Celestia.
* ItGetsEasier: Celestia gets increasingly comfortable with violence as time goes on.
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Vano mentioned they need to advance the plot.
* MacGyvering: Strider making a defibrillator with two artifacts to save Celestia.
* MagneticWeapons: In Chapter 12 we have the Infantry Marksman Railgun Mark 3.
* MoreDakka: Vano's mondus operandi in dealing with enemies.
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Vano
* MacGyvering: Strider
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* TimeSkip: Between Chapter 12 and ''Interlude''.
* TooDumbToLive: In final chapter, some random bandits shows up and started firing at APC in which our heroes was, using some light and weak small arms. For their efforts, they were torn to shreds by BTR's heavy machine gun.
* TrappedInAnotherWorld: The entire premise.
* TooDumbToLive: In final chapter, some random bandits shows up and started firing at APC in which our heroes was, using some light and weak small arms. For their efforts, they were torn to shreds by BTR's heavy machine gun.
* TrappedInAnotherWorld: The entire premise.
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* TooDumbToLive: In the final chapter, some random bandits shows up and
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* BadassGay: Vano.
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* {{WAFF}}: Practically everytime when Strider comforts Celestia.
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* ACtionGirl: Celestia.
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* ACtionGirl: ActionGirl: Celestia.
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* ACtionGirl: Celestia.
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* {{Badass}}: Few types:
** Strider as a BaldOfAwesome,
** Vano as BadassBeard, BadassGay and surprisingly BadassBookworm,
** Celestia as ActionGirl, ActionGirlfriend and BadassAdorable.
** Strider as a BaldOfAwesome,
** Vano as BadassBeard, BadassGay and surprisingly BadassBookworm,
** Celestia as ActionGirl, ActionGirlfriend and BadassAdorable.
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* {{Badass}}: Few types:
** Strider as a BaldOfAwesome,
** Vano as BadassBeard, BadassGay and surprisingly BadassBookworm,
** Celestia as ActionGirl, ActionGirlfriend and BadassAdorable.BaldOfAwesome: Strider.
** Strider as a BaldOfAwesome,
** Vano as BadassBeard, BadassGay and surprisingly BadassBookworm,
** Celestia as ActionGirl, ActionGirlfriend and BadassAdorable.
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* BadassGay: Vano.
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* MoreDakka: Vano' Mondus operandi in dealing with enemies.
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* MoreDakka: Vano' Mondus Vano's mondus operandi in dealing with enemies.
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* {{Heartwarming}} / {{WAFF}}: Practically everytime when Strider comforts Celestia.
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* {{Heartwarming}} / {{WAFF}}: Practically everytime IgnoringBySinging: Rookie reaction when Strider comforts Celestia.said that Celestia is a beast in bed.
-->'''Rookie:''' ''“YA ne khochu znat'! LALALALALALA YA NE SLUSHAU!”''
-->'''Rookie:''' ''“YA ne khochu znat'! LALALALALALA YA NE SLUSHAU!”''
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* ShoutOut: When Vano introduce [[VideoGame/{{TeamFortress2}} himself and his machine gun]] to Celestia in Chapter 3.
** Some of the [[VideoGame/{{Fallout}} nick-names]] of major Degtyarev in Chapter 11.
** Some of the [[VideoGame/{{Fallout}} nick-names]] of major Degtyarev in Chapter 11.
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* {{WAFF}}: Practically everytime when Strider comforts Celestia.
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* BadassArmy: [[spoiler: ''Dawn'' - Faction created by Strider, Celestia and their merry band. Not only they have a large number of really good soldiers and mercenaries, assload of firearms, shitload of ammo but also a ''freaking tanks (two T-80B and one T-64BM), [=APCs=] (two BTR-70K), [=IFVs=] (four BMP-2M) and helicopters (three Mi-24D and two Mi-26S) plus workshop and maintenance bay for them''. Holy crap! Plus, they have their own R&D section.]]
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* BadassArmy: [[spoiler: ''Dawn'' - Faction created by Strider, Celestia and their merry band. Not only they have a large number of really good soldiers and mercenaries, assload of firearms, shitload of ammo but also a ''freaking tanks (two T-80B and one T-64BM), [=APCs=] (two BTR-70K), [=IFVs=] (four BMP-2M) and helicopters (three Mi-24D and two Mi-26S) plus workshop and maintenance bay for them''. Holy crap! Plus, they have their own R&D section.]]
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** Additionally, he also gain HealingHands ability.
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** [[spoiler: Additionally, he also gain HealingHands ability.]]
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* CantHoldHisLiquor: Celestia almost faint after ''one'' glass of vodka. (To be fair, it's ''vodka'', so it's have more alcohol inside that most of the beverages).
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* CantHoldHisLiquor: Celestia almost faint after ''one'' glass of vodka. (To be fair, it's ''vodka'', so it's have more alcohol inside that most of the beverages).beverages).
* CurbStompBattle: Strider vs. 35 bandits.
* CurbStompBattle: Strider vs. 35 bandits.
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* AttemptedRape: [[spoiler: Happened to Celestia.]] [[CaptainObvious It didn't end well.]]
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* AttemptedRape: [[spoiler: Happened to Celestia.]] [[CaptainObvious It didn't end well.]]
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* BerserkButton: Trying to hurt Celestia around Strider is a very bad idea.
* {{BFG}}: Strider obtains a [[ShapedLikeItself BFG]]-50A rifle.
* {{BFG}}: Strider obtains a [[ShapedLikeItself BFG]]-50A rifle.
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* BerserkButton: Trying to hurt Celestia around Strider is a very bad idea.
this for Strider.
* {{BFG}}: Strider obtains a [[ShapedLikeItselfBFG]]-50A rifle.BFG]][[http://world.guns.ru/sniper/large-caliber-sniper-rifles/usa/serbubfg-50a-e.html -50A rifle]].
* {{BFG}}: Strider obtains a [[ShapedLikeItself
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* BroughtDownToBadass: The global magic field of our world is so weak that, while she can still fly, use her TK, walk on clouds, and once [[spoiler: literally exploded in self-defense]], Celestia can't do anything powerful, complex, or subtle. Plus, some of the Zone's artifacts can absorb magic, [[CaptainObvious which is never a good thing for magic-users.]]
* [[CantHoldHisLiquor Celestia Can't Hold Her Liquor]]: She manages ''one'' glass of vodka. (To be fair, it's ''vodka'', so it's more alcohol than this trope usually deals with.)
* [[CantHoldHisLiquor Celestia Can't Hold Her Liquor]]: She manages ''one'' glass of vodka. (To be fair, it's ''vodka'', so it's more alcohol than this trope usually deals with.)
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* BroughtDownToBadass: The global magic field of our world is so weak that, while she can still fly, use her TK, walk on clouds, and once [[spoiler: literally exploded in self-defense]], Celestia can't do anything powerful, complex, or subtle. Plus, some of the Zone's artifacts can absorb magic, [[CaptainObvious which is never a good thing for magic-users.]]
magic. But it does not stop her being dangerous after she learned how to use guns.
*[[CantHoldHisLiquor CantHoldHisLiquor: Celestia Can't Hold Her Liquor]]: She manages almost faint after ''one'' glass of vodka. (To be fair, it's ''vodka'', so it's have more alcohol than this trope usually deals with.) inside that most of the beverages).
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* GentleGiant: Vano, of course. 220 centimeters tall, 130 kg of weight, posture of a bear, wears power armor, loves big guns and he is incredibly friendly.
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* GentleGiant: Vano, of course. Vano. 220 centimeters tall, of height, 130 kg of weight, posture of a bear, wears power armor, loves big guns and he is incredibly friendly.
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* MoreDakka: Vano speaks the language of bullets.
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* MoreDakka: Vano speaks the language of bullets.Vano' Mondus operandi in dealing with enemies.
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* TimeSkip: Between Chapter 12 and Interlude.
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* TimeSkip: Between Chapter 12 and Interlude.''Interlude''.
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* YouCanTalk?: Almost any time someone first meets Celestia.
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* YouCanTalk?: Almost any time when someone meets Celestia for the first meets Celestia.time.
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* {{Immortality}}: [[spoiler: Strider, accidentally. As long as he isn't incinerated, vaporized, [[ChunkySalsaRule ripped to shreds]] or [[OffWithHisHead decapitated]], he can regenerate his limbs and organs. Oh, and he's ageless. Celestia is both [[LivingForeverIsAwesome happy]] and [[WhoWantsToLiveForever worried]] about this.]]
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* {{Immortality}}: [[spoiler: Strider, accidentally. As long as he isn't incinerated, vaporized, [[ChunkySalsaRule ripped to shreds]] or [[OffWithHisHead decapitated]], he can regenerate his limbs and organs. Oh, and he's ageless.ageless now. Celestia is both [[LivingForeverIsAwesome happy]] and [[WhoWantsToLiveForever worried]] about this.]]
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* BadassArmy: [[spoiler: Faction created by Strider and his merry band. Not only they have a large number of really good soldiers and mercenaries, assload of firearms, shitload of ammo but also a ''freaking tanks (two T-80B and one T-64BM), APC (two BTR-70K), IFV (four BMP-2M) and helicopters (three Mi-24D and two Mi-26S) plus workshop and maintenance bay for them''. Holy crap! Plus, they have their own R&D section.]]
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* BadassArmy: [[spoiler: ''Dawn'' - Faction created by Strider Strider, Celestia and his their merry band. Not only they have a large number of really good soldiers and mercenaries, assload of firearms, shitload of ammo but also a ''freaking tanks (two T-80B and one T-64BM), APC [=APCs=] (two BTR-70K), IFV [=IFVs=] (four BMP-2M) and helicopters (three Mi-24D and two Mi-26S) plus workshop and maintenance bay for them''. Holy crap! Plus, they have their own R&D section.]]
