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* FriendInThePress: Before springing the trap she knows is waiting for her, Taylor borrows Amy's phone and leaves a call running to a friend of her father who runs a radio station. He records the Trio's harsh words, which include admitting all their guilt, and even the point where Sophia punches Taylor and cracks her ribs, and he's able to both clean up the sound quality and provide Principal Blackwell with an implicit threat that if she doesn't take action, it will become public.
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* BerserkButton: Despite knowing how important it is to keep her cool, Sophia sees red when both Taylor and then Amy tell her, "''You lose''." [[spoiler:She first attacks Taylor in a very visible way that can't be brushed off, then leaps at Amy across a room containing ''Glory Girl''. And Amy refuses to fix the resulting busted jaw and missing teeth, merely ensuring her concussion isn't dangerous.]]
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* TooMuchInformation: Lisa gripes that her power tells her all the creepy and disgusting secrets, not just the cool and fun ones. Taylor retorts that she gets it even worse.
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* TooMuchInformation: Lisa gripes that her power tells her all the creepy and disgusting secrets, not just the cool and fun ones. Taylor retorts that she gets it even worse.worse thanks to bugs crawling over everything, with an excellent sense of smell. And Amy gets total awareness of people's bodies when she heals them. By the end of the conversation, Lisa is running away with one hand over her mouth while FlippingTheBird to both Taylor and Amy.
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* TooMuchInformation: Lisa gripes that her power tells her all the creepy and disgusting secrets, not just the cool and fun ones. Taylor retorts that she gets it even worse.
--> '''Taylor:''' So I'm still not sure which is worse: roaches digging through the corpse of a dead rat, or lice telling me the exact size and shape of a homeless guy's junk, plus exactly how many days it's been since he's bathed.
--> '''Taylor:''' So I'm still not sure which is worse: roaches digging through the corpse of a dead rat, or lice telling me the exact size and shape of a homeless guy's junk, plus exactly how many days it's been since he's bathed.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10377231/1/Security Security!]]'' is a (now complete) ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Tropers/{{ack1308}} (also known for ''FanFic/HopeComesToBrocktonBay'' and ''FanFic/{{Recoil}}''). It can be found at Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ''([[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/security-a-worm-si-story.300658/ thread 1]] and [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/security-thread-2.309090/ thread 2]])'', Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/security-a-worm-si-story.3724/ here]]) and Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10377231/1/Security here]]).
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10377231/1/Security Security!]]'' is a (now complete) ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Tropers/{{ack1308}} (also known for ''FanFic/HopeComesToBrocktonBay'' and ''FanFic/{{Recoil}}''). It can be found at Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ''([[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/security-a-worm-si-story.300658/ thread 1]] and [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/security-thread-2.309090/ thread 2]])'', Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom Website/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/security-a-worm-si-story.3724/ here]]) and Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10377231/1/Security here]]).
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* MundaneUtility: Glory Girl wrings out Taylor's wet shirt so hard it's almost dry afterward.
--> ''That'' was an application for super-strength that she'd never thought of.
--> ''That'' was an application for super-strength that she'd never thought of.
