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* 'AdoptionInducedPregnancy: Marinette has an important announcement for Adrien right when he presents the papers that would officially make her Emma's mother.
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* 'AdoptionInducedPregnancy: AdoptionInducedPregnancy: Marinette has an important announcement for Adrien right when he presents the papers that would officially make her Emma's mother.
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* 'AdoptionInducedPregnancy: Marinette has an important announcement for Adrien right when he presents the papers that would officially make her Emma's mother.
-->"So," he said, shifting to hover over her. "What do you say, Marinette? Will you be the mom of my child?"
-->Her breath hitched, and Adrien grew worried that he'd said something wrong. He opened his mouth, only for the response to die on his tongue when he saw the sweet look that wore. "Adrien," she said, her voice soft and gentle and precious. "I already am."
-->"So," he said, shifting to hover over her. "What do you say, Marinette? Will you be the mom of my child?"
-->Her breath hitched, and Adrien grew worried that he'd said something wrong. He opened his mouth, only for the response to die on his tongue when he saw the sweet look that wore. "Adrien," she said, her voice soft and gentle and precious. "I already am."
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* SecondLove: As referenced by the title, both Adrien and Marinette are on their second time around. Marinette's marriage ended in a tragic housefire; Adrien's ended in divorce. There is also Gabriel (after years of inner conflict) letting go of Emilie and marrying Nathalie.
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* SecondLove: SecondLove:
** As referenced by the title, both Adrien and Marinette are on their second time around. Marinette's marriage ended in a tragic housefire; Adrien's ended indivorce. divorce.
** There is also Gabriel (after years of inner conflict) letting go of Emilie and marrying Nathalie.
** As referenced by the title, both Adrien and Marinette are on their second time around. Marinette's marriage ended in a tragic housefire; Adrien's ended in
** There is also Gabriel (after years of inner conflict) letting go of Emilie and marrying Nathalie.
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* DaddysGirl: To convince Emma to do her chores, Marinette likes to emphasize how much her father would appreciate it. She later remarks on how well it works, as Emma adores her father.
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* LawOfInverseFertility: Emma was conceived by Adrien and Chloe after one drunken night while they were actually in the process of a divorce. Nathanael and Marinette, on the other hand, were trying for several years to have a child, but without success. [[spoiler:Averted when Adrien and Marinette get married; they are both expecting to require fertility treatments in order to give Emma siblings, but a few months later, they get definite proof the problem wasn't about Mari.]]
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* LawOfInverseFertility: Emma was conceived by Adrien and Chloe after one drunken night while they were actually in the process of a divorce. Nathanael and Marinette, on the other hand, were trying for several years to have a child, but without success. [[spoiler:Averted [[spoiler:Subverted when Adrien and Marinette get married; they are both expecting to require fertility treatments in order to give Emma siblings, but a few months later, they get definite proof the problem wasn't about Mari.]]
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* TotallyTrustingLoveInterest: Marinette walks in on Adrien and Lila in his house on Valentine's Day, with Lila very much dressed for the occasion and within Adrien's personal space. But she knows Adrien well enough to be instantly confident that he's uncomfortable with the situation, and she promptly helps get Lila to leave. The contrast between the two women is stark enough in Adrien's mind to lead him to a RelationshipUpgrade with Marinette shortly afterward.
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''Second Chances'' is a [[CompletedFic completed]] WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug {{Fanfiction}} by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/TheNovelArtist/pseuds/TheNovelArtist TheNovelArtist]], published on Website/FanfictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12858565/ here]]) and Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn ([[https://archiveofourown.org/works/14878527 here]]). A rewritten version is also available as [[AscendedFanfic an independent work]] on {{Creator/Amazon}}, as ''Second Chances'' by Alexandra Nicole. [[SimilarlyNamedWorks Not to be confused]] with the [[Fanfic/SecondChancesSpades44 Death Note fanfic of the same name by Spades 44]], or the Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse [[Fanfic/SecondChancesSeries fanfiction by Anafandom]].
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''Second Chances'' is a [[CompletedFic completed]] WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug {{Fanfiction}} by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/TheNovelArtist/pseuds/TheNovelArtist TheNovelArtist]], published on Website/FanfictionDotNet Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12858565/ here]]) and Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn ([[https://archiveofourown.org/works/14878527 here]]). A rewritten version is also available as [[AscendedFanfic an independent work]] on {{Creator/Amazon}}, as ''Second Chances'' by Alexandra Nicole. [[SimilarlyNamedWorks Not to be confused]] with the [[Fanfic/SecondChancesSpades44 Death Note fanfic of the same name by Spades 44]], or the Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse [[Fanfic/SecondChancesSeries fanfiction by Anafandom]].
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* PinkySwear: Emma does it twice with Adrien and once with Marinette.
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''Second Chances'' is a [[CompletedFic completed]] WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug {{Fanfiction}} by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/TheNovelArtist/pseuds/TheNovelArtist TheNovelArtist]], published on Website/FanfictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12858565/ here]]) and Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn ([[https://archiveofourown.org/works/14878527 here]]). A rewritten version is also available as [[AscendedFanfic an independent work]] on {{Creator/Amazon}}, as ''Second Chances'' by Alexandra Nicole.. [[SimilarlyNamedWorks Not to be confused]] with the [[Fanfic/SecondChancesSpades44 Death Note fanfic of the same name by Spades 44]], or the Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse [[Fanfic/SecondChancesSeries fanfiction by Anafandom]].
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''Second Chances'' is a [[CompletedFic completed]] WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug {{Fanfiction}} by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/TheNovelArtist/pseuds/TheNovelArtist TheNovelArtist]], published on Website/FanfictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12858565/ here]]) and Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn ([[https://archiveofourown.org/works/14878527 here]]). A rewritten version is also available as [[AscendedFanfic an independent work]] on {{Creator/Amazon}}, as ''Second Chances'' by Alexandra Nicole..Nicole. [[SimilarlyNamedWorks Not to be confused]] with the [[Fanfic/SecondChancesSpades44 Death Note fanfic of the same name by Spades 44]], or the Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse [[Fanfic/SecondChancesSeries fanfiction by Anafandom]].
