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** As of chapter 21, the author confirmed that The Triumvirate, the Endbringers, and Scion could all destroy Gohan.
* CharlesAtlasSuperpower: Ki somewhat works like this, according to Gohan. While training really, really hard won't unlock ki ''specifically'', Ki is, at the most basic level, life force energy. The stronger and more physically fit you are, the more Ki you can access.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: Armsmaster claims that his comparison of Dauntless to someone who would bully people in high school is dated, as "Bullying isn't a problem in schools anymore."
** Due to his lack of obvious psychological issues and the wide variety of powers, Battery believes that Gohan is someone who got his powers from Cauldron, [[spoiler:just like she did.]] This is because, since Cauldron Capes get their powers from test tubes, they don't have a Trigger Event (which leaves psychological scars).
** Due to his lack of obvious psychological issues and the wide variety of powers, Battery believes that Gohan is someone who got his powers from Cauldron, [[spoiler:just like she did.]] This is because, since Cauldron Capes get their powers from test tubes, they don't have a Trigger Event (which leaves psychological scars).
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* EntertaininglyWrong: Armsmaster claims that his comparison of Dauntless to someone who would bully people in high school is dated, as "Bullying isn't a problem in schools anymore."
" For the record, this is in Worm, where the canon protagonist got her superpowers because one of the capes under Armsmaster's command bullied her until she had a psychological break.
** Due to his lack of obvious psychological issues and the wide variety of powers, Battery believes that Gohan is someone who got his powers from Cauldron, [[spoiler:just like she did.]] This is because, since Cauldron Capes get their powers from test tubes, they don't have a Trigger Event (which leaves psychologicalscars).scars) and often have a bunch of different powers.
** Due to his lack of obvious psychological issues and the wide variety of powers, Battery believes that Gohan is someone who got his powers from Cauldron, [[spoiler:just like she did.]] This is because, since Cauldron Capes get their powers from test tubes, they don't have a Trigger Event (which leaves psychological
* FlyingBrick: Now that Gohan can fly, he's one of these. Saiyans in canon Dragonball were this as well, and this type of power is known in Worm as an "Alexandria Package," after the famous heroine.
** Lung is a big BerserkButton for Gohan for this reason- Lung is ''strong'', yes, but he doesn't ''work'' for the strength. He doesn't train, or experiment to see how his powers would hold up under different circumstances, and doesn't seek out new challenges to test himself. He's one of the strongest capes in the world, but decided to go to Brockton Bay and sit around as the top dog, knowing that no one can stop or hurt him.
* IHaveManyNames: The SI, for lack of better term, goes through a ''lot'' of these. His original name was Mahmoud, but upon his entry into the PRT changes it to "Gohan Moha," in reference to his favorite Dragonball Character and his father. He's also granted the title of "Monkey God Of Fitness," by the internet, and goes through the cape names of "Defiant" and "Kong" before settling on "Sun Wukong" as his official cape name.
* IdiotBall: In the middle of a fight between Lung and Sun Wukong- arguably the two most physically powerful capes in the Bay area- which in itself is part of a massive gang war, a random civilian wanders into the middle of the fight and starts recording it on his cell phone. His presence forces Sun Wukong to go on the defensive and have to take a massive fire blast from Lung to save the fool, nearly costing him the fight. Had Glory Girl not shown up, it's quite possible that Sun Wukong could have been killed.
* IdiotBall: In the middle of a fight between Lung and Sun Wukong- arguably the two most physically powerful capes in the Bay area- which in itself is part of a massive gang war, a random civilian wanders into the middle of the fight and starts recording it on his cell phone. His presence forces Sun Wukong to go on the defensive and have to take a massive fire blast from Lung to save the fool, nearly costing him the fight. Had Glory Girl not shown up, it's quite possible that Sun Wukong could have been killed.
* MistakenIdentity: Gohan first meets Glory Girl when, in the middle of a gang fight between the ABB and Empire 88, she slams him into a car, thinking he was Lung. She justifies it as seeing a Brute with obvious dragon symbols (Gohan's first costume was just a shirt with dragons on it and a mask) beating up members of the Empire and responded accordingly.
** How amusing! Saiyan BigEater eating habits are a real thing! Turns out you kind of need money in order to ''provide'' said food. Despite Mahmoud[=/=]Gohan's reservations, he has to join the PRT as they're the only ones who can foot the bill (and aren't utterly terrible people, as the Nazis, Merchants, and ABB are).
* SlaveToPR: Averted somewhat. While Public Relations is an important tool in the PRT's arsenal, they're very open to suggestions by Gohan and help immensely when putting together his costume, themes, and picking out a cape name.
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** One strength of Ki is that it can be taught to anyone in theory- no need to trigger or have a Corona Pollentia.
* SuperpowerLottery: Gohan claims that he's won this, even before he learns how to do Ki attacks or fly. Given that his strength will constantly increase over time, he can run faster than any car and concrete crumbles in his hands, he's not entirely wrong.
* SuperpowerLottery: Gohan claims that he's won this, even before he learns how to do Ki attacks or fly. Given that his strength will constantly increase over time, he can run faster than any car and concrete crumbles in his hands, he's not entirely wrong.
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Pollentia (the portion of the brain responsible for superpowers in Worm).
* SuperpowerLottery: Gohan claims that he's won this, even before he learns how to do Ki attacks or fly. Given that his strength will constantly increase over time, he's immune to bullets, has reaction times so fast that he can spend hours contemplating his next move before the opponents realize what's going on, can run faster than anycar car, and concrete crumbles in his hands, he's not entirely wrong.
* SuperpowerLottery: Gohan claims that he's won this, even before he learns how to do Ki attacks or fly. Given that his strength will constantly increase over time, he's immune to bullets, has reaction times so fast that he can spend hours contemplating his next move before the opponents realize what's going on, can run faster than any
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* OutsideContextProblem: Surprisingly, ''not'' a Saiyan in the Worm universe- they've seen people with Brute ratings, Trumps, Blasters, and more. What is an OCP is Gohan ''to himself'', as there has never been a canon instance of a human being given the body of a Saiyan. Since all Saiyans grew up with their instincts and hunger for battle, they have control over them, but how would a human with no exposure to those drives handle those being slammed into him?
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* ExtremelyShortTimespan: The story begins on the February 24 attack on Canberra, and by chapter 21, it's only March 7- eleven days later. In that time Gohan has learned how to use ki, taught others how to use ki, joined a national superhero team, and fought Lung in single combat.
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* AttackOfTheFiftyFootWhatever: Gohan does what he can to avert this- specifically, him transforming into the terrifyingly powerful, fifty-foot-tall Great Ape form of Oozaru. Once he gets his tail cut off, this ceases to be a problem. Unfortunately, there's still the Worm versions of this trope in the form of the Endbringers...
* CallingYourAttacks: Averted, but discussed- Gohan postulates that the Kamehameha is actually a very advanced technique, and saying it out loud helps perform the technique, with each syllable symbolizing a different stage in the process of the attack.
* CluelessMystery: For Tattletale and the Armsmaster, Gohan is this. They're trying to figure out how he fits into the world or knows the things he does, but all they have is in-character knowledge of their own setting... not knowledge gained by fanfictions of their universe or knowledge of a completely separate fictional universe that has never existed in Earth Bet or Aleph. In other words, they're trying to figure out the motivations of Gohan the Parahuman, when in reality, he's Gohan the human from another universe stuffed into an alien body.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: Taylor Hebert and Gohan catch each other's eye while Gohan is in the middle of a fight in chapter 19.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: Taylor Hebert and Gohan catch each other's eye while Gohan is in the middle of a fight in chapter 19. Her name is never mentioned and "Catches each other's eye" is literally all that they do before Gohan is forced back into battle.
* EntertaininglyWrong: Armsmaster claims that his comparison of Dauntless to someone who would bully people in high school is dated, as "Bullying isn't a problem in schools anymore."
** Due to his lack of obvious psychological issues and the wide variety of powers, Battery believes that Gohan is someone who got his powers from Cauldron, [[spoiler:just like she did.]] This is because, since Cauldron Capes get their powers from test tubes, they don't have a Trigger Event (which leaves psychological scars).
* EntertaininglyWrong: Armsmaster claims that his comparison of Dauntless to someone who would bully people in high school is dated, as "Bullying isn't a problem in schools anymore."
** Due to his lack of obvious psychological issues and the wide variety of powers, Battery believes that Gohan is someone who got his powers from Cauldron, [[spoiler:just like she did.]] This is because, since Cauldron Capes get their powers from test tubes, they don't have a Trigger Event (which leaves psychological scars).
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* ShipTease: Militia and Gohan appear to take great pleasure in eyeing one another when they think the other isn't looking. [[ItMakesSenseInContext Or when she's shooting him in the chest while he isn't wearing a shirt.]]
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* WalkingShirtlessScene: The universe itself conspires against Gohan's ability to cover his upper body, ripping shirts apart, filling shirts with bullet holes, lighting shirts on fire, shredding them, or just having Lung tear his new, Tinkertech armor to pieces with his bare hands.
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* BrilliantButLazy: Lung is accused of being this. He is one of the strongest capes in existence, but he never trains, never experiments with his powers, never tries to see how improving his base form would affect his transformed form, never seeks out stronger foes so that he can test himself. Ultimately, he sits on top of Brockton Bay, knowing that there's nothing that can really take him down or stop him, but not capitalizing on that. Gohan's new Saiyan instincts are ''furious'' at this.
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* ConflictBall: Gohan claims to the Director and Armsmaster that this is what powers do- they seek conflict and try to get their wielders to use them as such. Note that this is explicitly the case in Worm canon- Powers really ''do'' drive people to seek out conflict so that they can be used to acquire data for the Entities. This is true for Gohan, as a Saiyan, as well, but for a different reason- Saiyan Biology naturally drives Saiyans to seek out conflict to become stronger.
** Because of what he knows about Shadow Stalker, AKA Sophia Hess, AKA one of Taylor's main antagonists at Winslow, Gohan deliberately antagonizes her.
** Because of what he knows about Shadow Stalker, AKA Sophia Hess, AKA one of Taylor's main antagonists at Winslow, Gohan deliberately antagonizes her.
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* [[spoiler:AssShove]]: [[spoiler:Militia threatens to do this to Gohan with one of her knives when he keeps pestering her for said knife to cut off his tail.]]
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* BulletTime: Gohan moves so quickly that he's capable of slowing down his perception of the world to keep up with how fast he can move. The world doesn't actually move slower, but it appears that way to him.
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* ImmuneToBullets: Just like Saiyans in the original material, Gohan is immune to small-arms fire. He later uses this to train his speed by trying to catch bullets fired at him by Miss Militia.
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* InstantExpert: Gohan can learn nearly any type of fighting style or movement after watching it. He can't copy it if it requires powers to achieve it, but he can tell when movements feel "Wrong" or "Off," such as when he was trying to learn Tai Chi through an online video and found that the "expert" was actually throwing in moves to make it look better.
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* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Gohan points out that with Coil's powers, he can murder, rape, or torture people in one timeline and then collapse it, so he gets to do everything he wants in one with no repercussions.
** He holds a ''special'' hatred for Lung for allowing Sex Slaves to be a thing in the ABB.
** He holds a ''special'' hatred for Lung for allowing Sex Slaves to be a thing in the ABB.
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** Gohan is tracked down by the PRT after his first night out fighting crime? How could this be? Turns out that when a shirtless man with a tail is running around the town beating up drug dealiers, robbing them, leaping across rooftops, and then spends several hours gorging himself at an all-you-can-eat buffet, it ''might'' attract some attention.
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* SlapSlapKiss: Assault and Battery have a relationship like this. Gohan and Militia have a much more subdued version, but he privately admits to her that he really likes that she keeps him grounded and doesn't let him do some of the crazier things that he knows he's capable of because he's terrified of one day just ''not caring'' about anything he used to.
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* SuperpowerLottery: Gohan claims that he's won this, even before he learns how to do Ki attacks or fly. Given that his strength will constantly increase over time, he can run faster than any car and concrete crumbles in his hands, he's not entirely wrong.
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** Gohan's armor protects him from things that even his impressive physical resistance can't overcome, as well as allows him to enhance his training by providing resistance to his motions.
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** Gohan claims that if he meets Thomas Calvert, he plans to put his arm through his chest to instantly collapse that timeline and prevent Calvert from getting data on him. This is under "Troll" because he plans to yell the most nonsensical things possible as he does so.
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** That being said, he also ''really'' likes it when she ''does'' use her healing gifts on him, because he's a Saiyan. Saiyans have an ability called the "Zenkai Boost," where they get a massive power surge anytime they almost die.
** Panacea's healing abilities actually had an unexpected effect when healing Gohan for the first time- they unlocked her hidden ki potential.
** Panacea's healing abilities actually had an unexpected effect when healing Gohan for the first time- they unlocked her hidden ki potential.
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* HealingHands: Gohan asks Panacea to ''not'' use these on him and Glory Girl- or at least, not to the extent that she normally does. He asks that she takes care of anything serious and remove bruises from visible places (so as not to raise questions) but says that wounds serve as valuable reminders of the need to train and improve. He's also asking this so that they don't take Panacea's powers for granted and abusing that gift- which contributed to her breakdown in canon.
* SwitchingPOV: The Interlude chapters do this, examining Gohan's actions from the points of views of the other characters that he interacts with. The author took special care to show him in a more negative light during these interludes, to show how others might view his purehearted actions in a world like Worm.
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* TheUnfavorite: Amy's status as this with her mother makes her very suspicious initially of Gohan's offer to teach her how to fly.
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* XMeetsY: Gohan's powers are best described by the PRT (initially) as "Dauntless' improvement ability combined with Lung's powers."
* XMeetsY: Gohan's powers are best described by the PRT (initially) as "Dauntless' improvement ability combined with Lung's powers."
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* ArmorIsUseless: Averted. Gohan insists that Amy get better armor than just Kevlar, and Armsmaster backs this up.
** Gohan's armor protects him from things that even his impressive physical resistance can't overcome, as well as allows him to enhance his training by providing resistance to his motions.
* BerserkButton: Gohan accidentally hits one during the press conference in chapter 19 for one of the reporters, who thinks that he picked certain Japanese Kanji for his costume because it looked "Cool." He then informs her that the symbols (those for "Turtle" and "Monkey") were well-chosen for what they represent.
** Gohan's armor protects him from things that even his impressive physical resistance can't overcome, as well as allows him to enhance his training by providing resistance to his motions.
* BerserkButton: Gohan accidentally hits one during the press conference in chapter 19 for one of the reporters, who thinks that he picked certain Japanese Kanji for his costume because it looked "Cool." He then informs her that the symbols (those for "Turtle" and "Monkey") were well-chosen for what they represent.
** It's also why he joined the PRT- he literally eats as much as an elephant in a single day, and he can't pay for that sort of caloric intake on his own.
* BlatantLies: Gohan claims that when Miss Militia was walking away from him that he "Was not checking out her backside and any suggestions otherwise are lies."
* BunnyEarsLawyer: Assault may be one of the most spectacularly immature heroes in the Protectorate, but he's capable of fighting Gohan to a standstill.
* {{Cliffhanger}}: Chapter 20 ends with the announcement that [[spoiler:Lung has entered the battlefield.]]
* EarlyBirdCameo: Taylor Hebert and Gohan catch each other's eye while Gohan is in the middle of a fight in chapter 19.
* EverythingsBetterWithMonkeys: Due to the tail, Gohan is briefly known as "The Monkey God Of Fitness," due to the Internet and videos of him shirtless.
** Gohan also claims that he has the Oozaru form, which turns him into a forty-foot-tall monkey. This isn't seen before his tail is cut off.
* BlatantLies: Gohan claims that when Miss Militia was walking away from him that he "Was not checking out her backside and any suggestions otherwise are lies."
* BunnyEarsLawyer: Assault may be one of the most spectacularly immature heroes in the Protectorate, but he's capable of fighting Gohan to a standstill.
* {{Cliffhanger}}: Chapter 20 ends with the announcement that [[spoiler:Lung has entered the battlefield.]]
* EarlyBirdCameo: Taylor Hebert and Gohan catch each other's eye while Gohan is in the middle of a fight in chapter 19.
* EverythingsBetterWithMonkeys: Due to the tail, Gohan is briefly known as "The Monkey God Of Fitness," due to the Internet and videos of him shirtless.
** Gohan also claims that he has the Oozaru form, which turns him into a forty-foot-tall monkey. This isn't seen before his tail is cut off.
* InnocentlyInsensitive: While talking about [[spoiler:installing restraints in Gohan's armor as a precaution, Armsmaster defends it by saying that Gohan is a potentially unknown threat and that steps should be taken to keep him in line... and he's saying this to Dragon, who is extremely limited by her creator's restrictions for basically the same reason.]]
* KamehameHadouken: One of the trope namers is mentioned (which is somewhat of a given, seeing as how it's a Dragonball crossover) as an example of how extremely difficult ki attacks are.
* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: Gohan's noticed that his personality and way of thinking have been changing since he was turned from a Human into a Saiyan. For example, he's more aggressive and finds it harder to understand other people's intentions.
* MisaimedFandom: InUniverse. Gohan never read the original Worm, and went off of what fanon said about the Undersiders. Unfortunately for him, he realized after their meeting that the stories he read painted them in a much more sympathetic light, and that they're less heroic than he thought.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: After introducing her to anime, Amy starts calling Gohan "Sensei" to annoy him. [[spoiler:When she actually starts flying, she's so amazed she starts calling him that for real.]]
* RealityEnsues: So a mysterious person with incredible power and potential shows up out of nowhere and refuses to disclose his past? Shockingly, the PRT are not quick to trust Gohan after that and assign a guard to him full time.
* KamehameHadouken: One of the trope namers is mentioned (which is somewhat of a given, seeing as how it's a Dragonball crossover) as an example of how extremely difficult ki attacks are.
* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: Gohan's noticed that his personality and way of thinking have been changing since he was turned from a Human into a Saiyan. For example, he's more aggressive and finds it harder to understand other people's intentions.
* MisaimedFandom: InUniverse. Gohan never read the original Worm, and went off of what fanon said about the Undersiders. Unfortunately for him, he realized after their meeting that the stories he read painted them in a much more sympathetic light, and that they're less heroic than he thought.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: After introducing her to anime, Amy starts calling Gohan "Sensei" to annoy him. [[spoiler:When she actually starts flying, she's so amazed she starts calling him that for real.]]
* RealityEnsues: So a mysterious person with incredible power and potential shows up out of nowhere and refuses to disclose his past? Shockingly, the PRT are not quick to trust Gohan after that and assign a guard to him full time.
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* {{Troll}}: In an omake, when Battery asks Assault and Gohan as to why a house they were ''supposed'' to be watching burned to the ground while she was in the bathroom, they decide to answer entirely in innuendo, causing Battery to burst into tears.
* TooDumbToLive: In chapter 21, Gohan is providing the most righteous of beatdowns to Lung... and then an ordinary, bog-standard human walks into the fight and tries to record it on his phone. Not only does this moron nearly get himself killed, but in saving him Gohan loses the advantage he had on Lung and starts getting slammed.
* TheUnfavorite: Amy's status as this with her mother makes her very suspicious initially of Gohan's offer to teach her how to fly.
* {{Troll}}: In an omake, when Battery asks Assault and Gohan as to why a house they were ''supposed'' to be watching burned to the ground while she was in the bathroom, they decide to answer entirely in innuendo, causing Battery to burst into tears.
* TooDumbToLive: In chapter 21, Gohan is providing the most righteous of beatdowns to Lung... and then an ordinary, bog-standard human walks into the fight and tries to record it on his phone. Not only does this moron nearly get himself killed, but in saving him Gohan loses the advantage he had on Lung and starts getting slammed.
* TheUnfavorite: Amy's status as this with her mother makes her very suspicious initially of Gohan's offer to teach her how to fly.
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* AlwaysSomeoneBetter: When it comes to Ki, this is ''Panacea.'' She manages to figure out how to do Ki sensing and ''flight'' before the person who literally introduced her to the concepts could get off the ground (literally).
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* HardWorkHardlyWorks: Armsmaster ''hates'' this. In canon it was one of the main reasons for his dislike of Dauntless- the man was able to improve all of his equipment with little to no effort, while Armsmaster had to fight and struggle to get mere percentages of efficiency out of his gear. Gohan irritates him for the same reason- anything Gohan does will improve him slowly but surely, far easier and faster than would normally be possible.
* HumansAreSpecial: Gohan believes this, but at the same time is a little upset that he's been robbed of his humanity and replaced with a species whose whole schtick is [[PunyEarthlings "better than humans at everything."]]
* HumansAreSpecial: Gohan believes this, but at the same time is a little upset that he's been robbed of his humanity and replaced with a species whose whole schtick is [[PunyEarthlings "better than humans at everything."]]
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* IAlwaysWantedToSayThat: Gohan just barely manages to keep this reaction nonverbal after he manages to pull off the [[WebVideo/HellsingUltimateAbridged "Very Enthusiastic Walks"]] conversation with Piggot.
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[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/saiyan-in-brockton-worm-dbz-self-insert.378239 Saiyans In Brockton]] is a Literature/Worm and Anime/DragonballZ CrossOver, written by DesertChocolate (Who also wrote Fanfic/HuntersOfDeath, Fanfic/AdorableMurderbeasts, and Fanfic/ThroughATemple). A SelfInsert where the main character, who takes on the moniker "Gohan Moha", wakes up in Canberra, Australia in the midst of the Simurgh attack. He is immediately hit by a boulder.
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[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/saiyan-in-brockton-worm-dbz-self-insert.378239 Saiyans In Brockton]] is a Literature/Worm Literature/{{Worm}} and Anime/DragonballZ CrossOver, written by DesertChocolate (Who also wrote Fanfic/HuntersOfDeath, Fanfic/AdorableMurderbeasts, and Fanfic/ThroughATemple). A SelfInsert where the main character, who takes on the moniker "Gohan Moha", wakes up in Canberra, Australia in the midst of the Simurgh attack. He is immediately hit by a boulder.
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[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/saiyan-in-brockton-worm-dbz-self-insert.378239 Saiyans In Brockton]] is a Literature/Worm and Anime/DragonballZ CrossOver, written by DesertChocolate (Who also wrote Fanfic/HuntersOfDeath, Fanfic/AdorableMurderbeasts, and Fanfic/ThroughATemple). A SelfInsert where the main character character, who takes on the moniker "Gohan Moha", wakes up in Canberra, Australia in the midst of the Simurgh attack. He is immediately hit by a boulder.
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* SuperEmpowering: Gohan inadvertently [[spoiler:causes Panacea to gain ki sensing.]]
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* BigEater: Once he get's money, the SI manages to shock an entire buffet restuarant with his eating, polishing off entire plates of food in seconds.
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* BigEater: Once he get's money, the SI manages to shock an entire buffet restuarant restaurant with his eating, polishing off entire plates of food in seconds.
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* AdaptiveAbility:
** Like all Saiyans, the SI gains an immediate boost to power when healed, in this case courtesy of [[spoiler:Panacea]]
** Like all Saiyans, the SI gains an immediate boost to power when healed, in this case courtesy of [[spoiler:Panacea]]
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* AdaptiveAbility:
**AdaptiveAbility: Like all Saiyans, the SI gains an immediate boost to power when healed, in this case courtesy of [[spoiler:Panacea]][[spoiler:Panacea healing him from his injuries.]]
* BigEater: Once he get's money, the SI manages to shock an entire buffet restuarant with his eating, polishing off entire plates of food in seconds.
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* BigEater: Once he get's money, the SI manages to shock an entire buffet restuarant with his eating, polishing off entire plates of food in seconds.
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A Literature/Worm and Anime/DragonballZ CrossOver, written by DesertChocolate (Who also wrote Fanfic/HuntersOfDeath, Fanfic/AdorableMurderbeasts, and Fanfic/ThroughATemple). A SelfInsert where the main character wakes up in Canberra, Australia in the midst of the Simurgh attack. He is immediately hit by a boulder.
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** Like all Saiyans, the SI gains an immediate boost to power when healed, in this case courtesy of [spoiler:Panacea]
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** Like all Saiyans, the SI gains an immediate boost to power when healed, in this case courtesy of [spoiler:Panacea][[spoiler:Panacea]]
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** Like all Saiyans, the SI gains an immediate boost to power when healed, in this case courtesy of [[spoiler:Panacea]
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** Like all Saiyans, the SI gains an immediate boost to power when healed, in this case courtesy of [[spoiler:Panacea][spoiler:Panacea]
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A WebNovel/Worm and Anime/DragonballZ CrossOver, written by DesertChocolate (Who also wrote Fanfic/HuntersOfDeath, Fanfic/AdorableMurderbeasts, and Fanfic/ThroughATemple). A SelfInsert where the main character wakes up in Canberra, Australia in the midst of the Simurgh attack. He is immediately hit by a boulder.
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A WebNovel/Worm Literature/Worm and Anime/DragonballZ CrossOver, written by DesertChocolate (Who also wrote Fanfic/HuntersOfDeath, Fanfic/AdorableMurderbeasts, and Fanfic/ThroughATemple). A SelfInsert where the main character wakes up in Canberra, Australia in the midst of the Simurgh attack. He is immediately hit by a boulder.
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A Literature/Worm and Anime/DragonballZ CrossOver, written by DesertChocolate (Who also wrote Fanfic/HuntersOfDeath, Fanfic/AdorableMurderbeasts, and Fanfic/ThroughATemple). A SelfInsert where the main character wakes up in Canberra, Australia in the midst of the Simurgh attack. He is immediately hit by a boulder.
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A Literature/Worm WebNovel/Worm and Anime/DragonballZ CrossOver, written by DesertChocolate (Who also wrote Fanfic/HuntersOfDeath, Fanfic/AdorableMurderbeasts, and Fanfic/ThroughATemple). A SelfInsert where the main character wakes up in Canberra, Australia in the midst of the Simurgh attack. He is immediately hit by a boulder.
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A Literature/Worm and Anime/DragonballZ CrossOver, written by DesertChocolate (Who also wrote Fanfic/HuntersOfDeath, Fanfic/AdorableMurderbeasts, and Fanfic/ThroughATemple). A SelfInsert where the main character wakes up in Canberra, Australia in the midst of the Simurgh attack. He is immediately hit by a boulder.
Upon waking up, he feels something wiggling under his back. A long, fuzzy, monkey tail.
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!!This series provides examples of the following tropes:
* AdaptiveAbility:
** Like all Saiyans, the SI gains an immediate boost to power when healed, in this case courtesy of [[spoiler:Panacea]
Upon waking up, he feels something wiggling under his back. A long, fuzzy, monkey tail.
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!!This series provides examples of the following tropes:
* AdaptiveAbility:
** Like all Saiyans, the SI gains an immediate boost to power when healed, in this case courtesy of [[spoiler:Panacea]
