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''Sacrifice'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles2012'' fanfic written by Ravenshell where, after a massive portal dumps mutagen onto New York City, the Hamato Clan are able to walk amongst human beings as mutants become commonplace.

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''Sacrifice'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles2012'' fanfic written by Ravenshell where, after Ravenshell.

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* MythologyGag: The Megarift Disaster is superficially similar to the Mutagen Bomb that goes off in [[ComicBook/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtlesIDW the IDW comic series]]; a MassSuperEmpoweringEvent that creates a boom in New York's Mutant population, [[TheUnmasquedWorld making knowledge of their existence unavoidable]] and forcing humanity to adjust to this new reality.
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* YoungerMentorOlderDisciple: Rockwell agrees to work as ''Donnie's'' assistant in mass-producing retromutagen, citing that despite only being a teenager. Justified, since it's Donnie's retromutagen formula.

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* YoungerMentorOlderDisciple: Rockwell agrees to work as ''Donnie's'' assistant in mass-producing retromutagen, citing that despite only being a teenager.retromutagen. Justified, since it's Donnie's retromutagen formula.


* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Raphael points out how hilariously outclassed the underground mutants would be if they went ahead and tried conquering New York, noting that while their {{Natural Weapon}}s would win them the first battle against the unprepared humans, [[CurbStompBattle the rest of the world would be able to wipe them all out in retaliation]]. Given the fact that the mutants had only been sapient and had their new mutant physiologies for only three weeks and [[EntertaininglyWrong they think that Manhattan is the entire world]] certainly doesn't help.
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* PowerIncontinence: Isaiah was a regular kid who, after being hit with mutagen, developed {{Telepath|y}}ic and [[MindOverMatter Telekinetic]] powers. Due to his age and the traumatic nature of his mutation, he is stuck HearingVoices and is kept away from the rest of the mutants kept in containment because of it. Donnie being near him nearly drives him crazy due to the many thoughts bombarding him, creating a telekinetic whirlwind of objects trying to keep him away.

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* PowerIncontinence: Isaiah was a regular kid who, after being hit with mutagen, developed {{Telepath|y}}ic and [[MindOverMatter Telekinetic]] powers. Due to his age and the traumatic nature of his mutation, he is stuck HearingVoices and is kept away from the rest of the mutants kept in containment because of it. Donnie being near him nearly drives him crazy ''crazy'' due to the many thoughts bombarding him, creating a telekinetic whirlwind of objects trying to keep him away.
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* ALoadOfBull: Leonardo manages to take down a bull-mutant who was trying to use his new mutant strength to rob stores in broad daylight.
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* PowerIncontinence: Isaiah was a regular kid who, after being hit with mutagen, developed {{Telepath|y}}ic and [[MindOverMatter Telekinetic]] powers. Due to the age and the traumatic nature of his mutation, he is stuck HearingVoices and is kept away from the rest of the mutants kept in containment because of it. Donnie being near him nearly drives him crazy due to the many thoughts bombarding him, creating a telekinetic whirlwind of objects trying to keep him away.

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* PowerIncontinence: Isaiah was a regular kid who, after being hit with mutagen, developed {{Telepath|y}}ic and [[MindOverMatter Telekinetic]] powers. Due to the his age and the traumatic nature of his mutation, he is stuck HearingVoices and is kept away from the rest of the mutants kept in containment because of it. Donnie being near him nearly drives him crazy due to the many thoughts bombarding him, creating a telekinetic whirlwind of objects trying to keep him away.
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* InternalReveal: With how widespread and unavoidable the mutations become, the Hamato Clan out themselves to New York, Donatello explaining to New York vis Channel 6 how to avoid Dimension X's hazards and informing the populace that a retromutagen does in-fact exist.

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* InternalReveal: With how widespread and unavoidable the mutations become, the Hamato Clan out themselves to New York, Donatello Michelangelo explaining to New York vis via Channel 6 how to avoid Dimension X's hazards and informing the populace that a retromutagen does in-fact exist.
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* SamuraiShinobi: Despite being a ninja, Leonardo tells Ace that he follows Bushido.
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* PlagiarismInFiction: Averted. When questioned why Rockwell would willingly work under Donnie, Rockwell assures him that he doesn't intend on using his {{Telepathy}} to steal the retromutagen formula and take credit for it, citing that while he's smug, [[EveryoneHasStandars he isn't that kind of monkey]], and that things are too dire to be thinking about such things.

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* PlagiarismInFiction: Averted. When questioned why Rockwell would willingly work under Donnie, Rockwell assures him that he doesn't intend on using his {{Telepathy}} to steal the retromutagen formula and take credit for it, citing that while he's smug, [[EveryoneHasStandars [[EveryoneHasStandards he isn't that kind of monkey]], and that things are too dire to be thinking about such things.
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* MassSuperEmpoweringEvent: The Megarift Disaster is an incident where-in a rift from Dimension X opens above New York, spilling a portion of Dimension X's contents into the City, including a massive amount of mutagen. This results in an estimated ''1.2 million'' mutants now inhabiting New York.
* PlagiarismInFiction: Averted. When questioned why Rockwell would willingly work under Donnie, Rockwell assures him that he doesn't intend on using his {{Telepathy}} to steal the retromutagen formula and take credit for it, citing that while he's smug, he isn't that kind of monkey and that things are too dire to be thinking about such things.

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* MassSuperEmpoweringEvent: The Megarift Disaster is an incident where-in wherein a rift from Dimension X opens above New York, spilling a portion of Dimension X's contents into the City, including a massive amount of mutagen. This results in an estimated ''1.2 million'' mutants now inhabiting New York.
* PlagiarismInFiction: Averted. When questioned why Rockwell would willingly work under Donnie, Rockwell assures him that he doesn't intend on using his {{Telepathy}} to steal the retromutagen formula and take credit for it, citing that while he's smug, [[EveryoneHasStandars he isn't that kind of monkey monkey]], and that things are too dire to be thinking about such things.



* TheUnmasquedWorld: While canon established a BrokenMasquerade when the Kraang first invaded New York, here the megarift disaster resulted in a new generation of mutants with a population so large that they cannot go unignored by New York's human population. This, combined with the Earth Protection Force's experience and resources in managing such events, led to an uneasy cohabitation with humans and mutant, allowing the Hamato Clan a chance to live out in the open without most of the fears their mutated physiologies gave them.

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* TheUnmasquedWorld: While canon established a BrokenMasquerade when the Kraang first invaded New York, here the megarift disaster resulted in a new generation of mutants with a population so large that they cannot go unignored ignored by New York's human population. This, combined with the Earth Protection Force's experience and resources in managing such events, led to an uneasy cohabitation with humans and mutant, allowing the Hamato Clan a chance to live out in the open without most of the fears their mutated physiologies gave them.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Raphael points out how hilariously outclassed the underground mutants would be if they went ahead and tried conquering New York, meaning that while their {{Natural Weapon}}s would win them the first battle against the unprepared humans, [[CurbStompBattle the rest of the world would be able to wipe them all out in retaliation]]. Given the fact that the mutants had only been sapient and had their new mutant physiologies for only three weeks and [[EntertaininglyWrong they think that Manhattan is the entire world]] certainly doesn't help.

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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Raphael points out how hilariously outclassed the underground mutants would be if they went ahead and tried conquering New York, meaning noting that while their {{Natural Weapon}}s would win them the first battle against the unprepared humans, [[CurbStompBattle the rest of the world would be able to wipe them all out in retaliation]]. Given the fact that the mutants had only been sapient and had their new mutant physiologies for only three weeks and [[EntertaininglyWrong they think that Manhattan is the entire world]] certainly doesn't help.
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* MassSuperEmpoweringEvent: The Megarift Disaster is an incident where-in something in Dimension X goes horribly wrong and a rift opens above New York, spilling a portion of Dimension X onto New York City, including a massive amount of mutagen. This results in an estimated ''1.2 million'' mutants now inhabiting the city.

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* MassSuperEmpoweringEvent: The Megarift Disaster is an incident where-in something in a rift from Dimension X goes horribly wrong and a rift opens above New York, spilling a portion of Dimension X onto New York X's contents into the City, including a massive amount of mutagen. This results in an estimated ''1.2 million'' mutants now inhabiting the city.New York.

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* ReluctantRuler: In his efforts to prevent a needless war between humanity and a colony of mutants who had only just recently developed sapience, Raphael ends up becoming their leader, taking on the title of "El Jéfe." Having already experienced what it was like to be a leader and not liking it, Raphael instantly regrets it.



* YoungerMentorOlderDisciple: Rockwell agrees to work as ''Donnie's'' assistant in mass-producing retromutagen, citing that despite only being a teenager, Donatello was the one who founded the cure and is willing to cooperate.

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* TheWormThatWalks: Hive Mind is a sentient colony of mutant-wasps that had joined the underground colony of mutants after the Megarift Disaster.
* YoungerMentorOlderDisciple: Rockwell agrees to work as ''Donnie's'' assistant in mass-producing retromutagen, citing that despite only being a teenager, Donatello was the one who founded the cure and is willing to cooperate.teenager. Justified, since it's Donnie's retromutagen formula.
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** When Raphael addresses the crowd of mutants, he uses "mutanimals" for animal-based mutants, "mu-plants" for plant-based mutants and "muchanicals" for machine-based mutants.

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** When Raphael addresses the crowd of mutants, he uses "mutanimals" for animal-based mutants, "mu-plants" for plant-based mutants mutants, and "muchanicals" for machine-based mutants.



* InstantSedation: Shasta's pollen has a soporific, inducing a relaxed state on anyone who breathes it in, and can even knock them out when exposed to enough of it.

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* InstantSedation: Shasta's pollen has a soporific, soporific effects, inducing a relaxed state on anyone who breathes it in, and can even knock them out when exposed to enough of it.

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** Esther, or "Ace" as Leo comes to call her, was mutated into a mutant-duck.



* InstantSedation: Shasta's pollen has a soporific, inducing a relaxed state on anyone who breathes it in, and can even knock them out when exposed to enough of it.



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* PlantPerson: Shasta was just a Queens-born, middle-aged woman before she was turned into a daisy-mutant, having been found alone in an abandoned part of the city by Raphael and Casey.

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* BirdPeople:
** Carlos Chiang O'Brien Gambe seems to have been turned into a mutant-cockatoo when the Megarift occured.
** According to Casey, the Purple Dragons were all turned into mutant-chickens.
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* FriendlyEnemy: Both Spyder Bytzes and Shredder's mutants (without him knowing about it) end up agreeing to a ceasefire with the Turtles on the condition that they are put on the VIP list for when TCRI begins distributing retromutagen.

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* FriendlyEnemy: Both Spyder Bytzes Spider Bytez and Shredder's mutants (without him knowing about it) end up agreeing to a ceasefire with the Turtles on the condition that they are put on the VIP list for when TCRI begins distributing retromutagen.



* ALoadOfBull: Leonardo manages to take down a bull-mutant who was trying to use his new mutant strength to rob stores in broad daylight.



* MassSuperEmpoweringEvent: In an event that would become known as "the Megarift Incident", an incident in Dimension X goes horribly wrong and a rift opens above New York, spilling a portion of Dimension X onto New York City, including a massive amount of mutagen. This results in an estimated ''1.2 million'' mutants now inhabiting New York.

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* MassSuperEmpoweringEvent: In an event that would become known as "the The Megarift Incident", Disaster is an incident where-in something in Dimension X goes horribly wrong and a rift opens above New York, spilling a portion of Dimension X onto New York City, including a massive amount of mutagen. This results in an estimated ''1.2 million'' mutants now inhabiting New York.the city.


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* MassSuperEmpoweringEvent: In an event that would become known as "the Megarift Incident", an incident in Dimension X goes horribly wrong and a rift opens above New York, spilling a portion of Dimension X onto New York City, including a massive amount of mutagen. This resulted in a large portion of its citizens to turn into mutants.

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* MassSuperEmpoweringEvent: In an event that would become known as "the Megarift Incident", an incident in Dimension X goes horribly wrong and a rift opens above New York, spilling a portion of Dimension X onto New York City, including a massive amount of mutagen. This resulted results in a large portion of its citizens to turn into mutants.an estimated ''1.2 million'' mutants now inhabiting New York.
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* FriendlyEnemy: Both Spyder Bytzes and Shredder's mutants (without him knowing about it) end up agreeing to a ceasefire with the Turtles on the condition that they are put on the VIP list for when TCRI begins distributing retromutagen.
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%%* * MassSuperEmpoweringEvent: In an even event that would become known as "the Megarift Incident", an incident in Dimension X goes horribly wrong and a rift opens above New York, spilling a portion of Dimension X onto New York City, including a massive amount of mutagen. This resulted in a large portion of its citizens to turn into mutants.
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* BotanicalAbomination: While escorting Donnie and April to the [=EPF=]'s headquarters, they are nearly killed by a monstrous creature that could only be described as being part tree, part t-rex. Mikey later names it "the Tree-Rex."
--> '''Donnie (quoting Mikey)''': ...'cause it was a tree and nearly wrecked us.'
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* DifferentlyPoweredIndividuals: With mutants making up at least 1/8th of New York's population, various terms are thrown in (but as of yet remain unofficial) when it comes to mutants.
** Donatello briefly calls the new mutant population "Mutant-Americans" when April acknowledges this population boom.
** When Raphael addresses the crowd of mutants, he uses "mutanimals" for animal-based mutants, "mu-plants" for plant-based mutants and "muchanicals" for machine-based mutants.


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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Raphael points out how hilariously outclassed the underground mutants would be if they went ahead and tried conquering New York, meaning that while their {{Natural Weapon}}s would win them the first battle against the unprepared humans, [[CurbStompBattle the rest of the world would be able to wipe them all out in retaliation]]. Given the fact that the mutants had only been sapient and had their new mutant physiologies for only three weeks and [[EntertaininglyWrong they think that Manhattan is the entire world]] certainly doesn't help.
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* PowerIncontinence: Isaiah was a regular kid who, after being hit with mutagen, developed {{Telepath|y}}ic and [[MindOverMatter Telekinetic]] powers. Due to the age and the traumatic nature of his mutation, he is stuck HearingVoices and is kept away from the rest of the mutants kept in containment because of it. Donnie being near him nearly drives him crazy due to the many thoughts bombarding him, creating a telekinetic whirlwind of objects trying to keep him away.
--> '''April''': He can hear every thought of every person and every mutant in this place. Mostly it's just jumbled noise, but it's so loud to him that he can't stand it... plus he's got other powers that he can't understand and can't control, like the telekinesis.


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--> '''Donnie''': It's... so weird...\\
'''April''': What?\\
'''Donnie''': No one runs and screams when they see me... There's so many mutants in the public eye of the city, no one even reacts to one more...
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''Sacrifice'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles2012'' fanfic written by Ravenshell where, after a massive portal dumps mutagen onto New York City, the Hamato Clan are able to walk amongst human beings as mutants become commonplace.

This fanfic can be read on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/4277619/chapters/9688350 here]] and Website/FanfictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11360913/1/Sacrifice here]].
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!!''Sacrifice'' provides examples of:
* BewareTheMindReader: Rockwell ends up outing that Donnie's attraction to April is, on some level, reciprocated.
* InternalReveal: With how widespread and unavoidable the mutations become, the Hamato Clan out themselves to New York, Donatello explaining to New York vis Channel 6 how to avoid Dimension X's hazards and informing the populace that a retromutagen does in-fact exist.
* MacGuffinSuperPerson: Much like how the Kraang needed April's DNA to perfect the mutagen, April becomes a priority asset to the Earth Protection Force -- her blood is a key ingredient in creating retromutagen to cure the new mutants and her PsychicPowers induce a RestorationOfSanity on the mutants who's sudden mutations made them savage and distressed. While not a prisoner, she is held up at Earth Protection Force's facility for her own protection.
%%* MassSuperEmpoweringEvent: In an even that would become known as
* PlagiarismInFiction: Averted. When questioned why Rockwell would willingly work under Donnie, Rockwell assures him that he doesn't intend on using his {{Telepathy}} to steal the retromutagen formula and take credit for it, citing that while he's smug, he isn't that kind of monkey and that things are too dire to be thinking about such things.
* TheUnmasquedWorld: While canon established a BrokenMasquerade when the Kraang first invaded New York, here the megarift disaster resulted in a new generation of mutants with a population so large that they cannot go unignored by New York's human population. This, combined with the Earth Protection Force's experience and resources in managing such events, led to an uneasy cohabitation with humans and mutant, allowing the Hamato Clan a chance to live out in the open without most of the fears their mutated physiologies gave them.
* YoungerMentorOlderDisciple: Rockwell agrees to work as ''Donnie's'' assistant in mass-producing retromutagen, citing that despite only being a teenager, Donatello was the one who founded the cure and is willing to cooperate.
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