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* CombatPragmatist: Kyodai Ken will bring a sword to a martial arts fight. To be fair, Batgirl brought an Invisibility Cloak, smoke bombs, and a taser to the same fight. Then again, Kyodai Ken then proceeds to [[spoiler:bring bombs to later fights.]]
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* CombatPragmatist: Kyodai Ken will bring a sword to a martial arts fight. To be fair, Batgirl brought an Invisibility Cloak, InvisibilityCloak, smoke bombs, and a taser to the same fight. Then again, Kyodai Ken then proceeds to [[spoiler:bring bombs to later fights.]]
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* CombatPragmatist: Kyodai Ken will bring a sword to a martial arts fight. To be fair, Batgirl brought an Invisibility Cloak, smoke bombs bombs, and a taser to the same fight. Then again, Kyodai Ken then proceeds to [[spoiler:bring bombs to later fights.]]
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* RevengeBeforeReason: [[spoiler:Kyodai Ken]] threatens the destruction of Tokyo-3 ''while he's still in it'' in order to engineer a final confrontation with Batgirl. [[spoiler:[[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] when Batgirl [[BatmanGambit calls his bluff]].]]
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* RevengeBeforeReason: [[spoiler:Kyodai Ken]] threatens the destruction of Tokyo-3 ''while he's still in it'' in order to engineer a final confrontation with Batgirl. [[spoiler:[[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] when Batgirl [[BatmanGambit calls Batgirl calls]] his [[BrandishmentBluff bluff]].]]
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* RevengeBeforeReason: [[spoiler:Kyodai Ken]] threatens the destruction of Tokyo-3 ''while he's still in it'' in order to engineer a final confrontation with Batgirl.
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* RevengeBeforeReason: [[spoiler:Kyodai Ken]] threatens the destruction of Tokyo-3 ''while he's still in it'' in order to engineer a final confrontation with Batgirl. [[spoiler:[[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] when Batgirl [[BatmanGambit calls his bluff]].]]
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* ImproperlyPlacedFirearms: In Japan, perhaps the only nation in the world where gun control is successfully enforce (except for the {{Yakuza}}), in Tokyo-3, where [[spoiler:the Yakuza is run by NERV]], the [[spoiler:[[ApocalypseCult Light of the Divine]] who would have no friends among NERV (who, as mentioned, run the Yakuza)]] somehow manages to get several firearms and the ammunition to use them. For that matter, illegal firearms seem to be a ''lot'' more common in general than one would expect in Japan.
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* ImproperlyPlacedFirearms: In Japan, perhaps the only nation in the world where gun control is successfully enforce enforced (except for the {{Yakuza}}), in Tokyo-3, where [[spoiler:the Yakuza is run by NERV]], the [[spoiler:[[ApocalypseCult Light of the Divine]] who would have no friends among NERV (who, as mentioned, run the Yakuza)]] somehow manages to get several firearms and the ammunition to use them. For that matter, illegal firearms seem to be a ''lot'' more common in general than one would expect in Japan.
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* ImproperlyPlacedFirearms: In Japan, perhaps the only place where gun control is successful (except for the {{Yakuza}}), in Tokyo-3, where [[spoiler:the Yakuza is run by NERV]], the [[spoiler:[[ApocalypseCult Light of the Divine]] who would have no friends among NERV (who, as mentioned, run the Yakuza)]] somehow manages to get several firearms and the ammunition to use them. For that matter, illegal firearms seem to be a ''lot'' more common in general than one would expect in Japan.
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* ImproperlyPlacedFirearms: In Japan, perhaps the only place nation in the world where gun control is successful successfully enforce (except for the {{Yakuza}}), in Tokyo-3, where [[spoiler:the Yakuza is run by NERV]], the [[spoiler:[[ApocalypseCult Light of the Divine]] who would have no friends among NERV (who, as mentioned, run the Yakuza)]] somehow manages to get several firearms and the ammunition to use them. For that matter, illegal firearms seem to be a ''lot'' more common in general than one would expect in Japan.
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* BatmanGambit: More long term than most, but Mayumi's plan to bring down Tokyo-3's organized crime hinges on them trying to run a [[ShameIfSomethingHappened protection racket]] on her.
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* ShameIfSomethingHappened: The Penguin tries this and ends up falling into Mayumi's BatmanGambit.
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* {{Yakuza}}: They run Tokyo-3's criminal underworld. [[spoiler:ManBehindTheMan And Gendo runs them.]]
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* {{Yakuza}}: They run Tokyo-3's criminal underworld. [[spoiler:ManBehindTheMan [[spoiler:[[ManBehindTheMan And Gendo runs them.]]]]]]
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* ManBehindTheMan: [[MagnificentBastard Gendo]] [[ManipulativeBastard Ikari]]. ''[[UpToEleven For the entire Tokyo-3 organized crime underground]]''.
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* ManBehindTheMan: [[MagnificentBastard [[spoiler:[[MagnificentBastard Gendo]] [[ManipulativeBastard Ikari]]. Ikari]].]] ''[[UpToEleven For the entire Tokyo-3 organized crime underground]]''.
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* {{Yakuza}}: They run Tokyo-3's criminal underworld. [[spoiler:ManBehindTheMan And Gendo runs them.]]
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* ElaborateUndergroundBase: As expected, the Batcave.
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* ElaborateUndergroundBase: As expected, the Batcave. Technically, NERV headquarters counts too.
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* ImproperlyPlacedFirearms: In Japan, perhaps the only place where gun control is successful (except for the {{Yakuza}}), in Tokyo-3, where [[spoiler:the Yakuza is run by NERV]], the [[spoiler:[[ApocalypseCult Light of the Divine]] who would have no friends among NERV (who, as mentioned, run the Yakuza)]] somehow manages to get several firearms and the ammunition to use them.
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* ImproperlyPlacedFirearms: In Japan, perhaps the only place where gun control is successful (except for the {{Yakuza}}), in Tokyo-3, where [[spoiler:the Yakuza is run by NERV]], the [[spoiler:[[ApocalypseCult Light of the Divine]] who would have no friends among NERV (who, as mentioned, run the Yakuza)]] somehow manages to get several firearms and the ammunition to use them. For that matter, illegal firearms seem to be a ''lot'' more common in general than one would expect in Japan.
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* LetNoCrisisGoToWaste: A heroic version. For several chapters, Mayumi wishes to enter NERV HQ to find what information Gendo has on her parents' assassination, but [[ImpossibleMission it's easier said than done]]. The [[BigBlackout blackout]] that occurs during [[GiantSpider Matarael's]] attack provides her with a golden opportunity to try to sneak in, which she takes.
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* LetNoCrisisGoToWaste: A heroic version. For several chapters, Mayumi wishes to enter NERV HQ to find what information Gendo has on her parents' assassination, but [[ImpossibleMission it's easier said than done]]. The [[BigBlackout blackout]] BigBlackout that occurs during [[GiantSpider Matarael's]] attack provides her with a golden opportunity to try to sneak in, which she takes.in. [[spoiler:[[AlwaysSaveTheGirl Too bad she's too busy saving Shinji to take advantage of it.]]]]
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* ImprobableAimingSkills: ''Shinji'', of all people, demonstrates this.
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* LetsYouAndHimFight: While [[TheMenInBlack Section Two]] are hardly heroes in the Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva stories, [[PoorCommunicaitonKills miscommunication]] results in them trying to kill Batgirl under circumstances where they should be [[EnemyMine working together against]] [[spoiler:[[ApocalypseCult the Light of the Divine]]]].
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* LetsYouAndHimFight: While [[TheMenInBlack Section Two]] are hardly heroes in the Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva stories, [[PoorCommunicaitonKills [[PoorCommunicationKills miscommunication]] results in them trying to kill Batgirl under circumstances where they should be [[EnemyMine working together against]] [[spoiler:[[ApocalypseCult the Light of the Divine]]]].
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* LetsYouAndHimFight: While [[TheMenInBlack Section Two]] are hardly heroes in the Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva stories, [[PoorCommunicaitonKills miscommunication]] results in them trying to kill Batgirl under circumstances where they should be [[EnemyMine working together against]] [[spoiler:[[ApocalypseCult the Light of the Divine]]]].
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* ImperialStormtrooperMarksmanshipAcademy: The [[spoiler:Light of the Divine]] seems to train there. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]], given that they likely lack any professional training.
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* ImperialStormtrooperMarksmanshipAcademy: The [[spoiler:Light of the Divine]] seems to train there. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]], given that they likely lack any professional training.training and are trying to shoot from one moving vehicle to another.
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* ImproperlyPlacedFirearms: In Japan, perhaps the only place where gun control is successful (except for the {{Yakuza}}), in Tokyo-3, where [[spoiler:the Yakuza is run by NERV]], the [[spoiler:[[ApocalypseCult Light of the Divine]] who would have no friends among NERV]] somehow manages to get several firearms and ammunition for them.
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* ImproperlyPlacedFirearms: In Japan, perhaps the only place where gun control is successful (except for the {{Yakuza}}), in Tokyo-3, where [[spoiler:the Yakuza is run by NERV]], the [[spoiler:[[ApocalypseCult Light of the Divine]] who would have no friends among NERV]] NERV (who, as mentioned, run the Yakuza)]] somehow manages to get several firearms and the ammunition for to use them.
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* ImperialStormtrooperMarksmanshipAcademy: The [[spoiler:Light of the Divine]] seems to train there. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]], given that they likely lack any professional training.
* ImproperlyPlacedFirearms: In Japan, perhaps the only place where gun control is successful (except for the {{Yakuza}}), in Tokyo-3, where [[spoiler:the Yakuza is run by NERV]], the [[spoiler:[[ApocalypseCult Light of the Divine]] who would have no friends among NERV]] somehow manages to get several firearms and ammunition for them.
* ImproperlyPlacedFirearms: In Japan, perhaps the only place where gun control is successful (except for the {{Yakuza}}), in Tokyo-3, where [[spoiler:the Yakuza is run by NERV]], the [[spoiler:[[ApocalypseCult Light of the Divine]] who would have no friends among NERV]] somehow manages to get several firearms and ammunition for them.
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* ApocalypseCult: The Light of the Divine makes an appearance here as well.
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* ApocalypseCult: [[spoiler:ApocalypseCult: The Light of the Divine makes an appearance here as well.]]
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* ApocalypseCult: The Light of the Divine, who believe the Angels are God's judgment.
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* ApocalypseCult: The Light of the Divine, who believe the Angels are God's judgment.Divine makes an appearance here as well.
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* CombatPragmatist: Kyodai Ken will bring a sword to a martial arts fight. To be fair, Batgirl brought smoke bombs and a taser to the same fight. Then again, Kyodai Ken then proceeds to [[spoiler:bring a bomb to a later fight.]]
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* CombatPragmatist: Kyodai Ken will bring a sword to a martial arts fight. To be fair, Batgirl brought smoke bombs and a taser to the same fight. Then again, Kyodai Ken then proceeds to [[spoiler:bring a bomb bombs to a later fight.fights.]]
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* CombatPragmatist: Kyodai Ken ''will'' bring a bomb to a sword fight.
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* CombatPragmatist: Kyodai Ken ''will'' will bring a sword to a martial arts fight. To be fair, Batgirl brought smoke bombs and a taser to the same fight. Then again, Kyodai Ken then proceeds to [[spoiler:bring a bomb to a sword later fight.]]
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* TheCommissionerGordon: Well, the Lieutenant Jun Godo, anyway.
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* TheCommissionerGordon: Well, the Lieutenant Jun Godo, anyway.Godo is quite obviously an {{Expy}} of Jim Gordon given a RaceLift to fit the setting.
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* PoweredArmor: Batgirl's suit not only enhances her strength, but it is also made out of a bulletproof smart material, can turn invisible, and comes equipped with a variety of nifty vision enhancements and other gadgets.
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** By WordOfGod, the whole sequence of Mayumi sneaking in (and fighting her way out) of NERV is an extended homage to the ''VideoGame/BatmanArkhamSeries'' (specifically the "Predator Challenge" rooms).
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** By WordOfGod, the whole sequence of Mayumi sneaking in (and fighting her way out) of NERV is an extended homage to the ''VideoGame/BatmanArkhamSeries'' (specifically the [[MookHorrorShow "Predator Challenge" Challenge"]] rooms).
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** Batgirl's costume broadly resembles the outfit of the [[{{ComicBook/Batgirl2000}} Cassandra Cain]] Batgirl (with full face cover, because of Mayumi having a mole on her face which could blow her identity wide open), with the abilities of the ''WesternAnimation/BatmanBeyond'' [[PoweredArmor Batsuit]] and additional gear straight out of the ''VideoGame/BatmanArkhamSeries'' (like [[EverythingSensor "Detective Vision"]]).
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** Batgirl's costume broadly resembles the outfit of the [[{{ComicBook/Batgirl2000}} Cassandra Cain]] Batgirl (with full face cover, because of Mayumi having a mole on her face which could blow her identity wide open), with most of the abilities of the ''WesternAnimation/BatmanBeyond'' [[PoweredArmor Batsuit]] and additional gear straight out of the ''VideoGame/BatmanArkhamSeries'' (like [[EverythingSensor "Detective Vision"]]).
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* ClothesMakeTheSuperman: In addition to her UtilityBelt, Batgirl wears a suit of PoweredArmor that is ImmuneToBullets, grants SuperStrength, and has built-in NightVisionGoggles and an InvisibilityCloak.
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* ClothesMakeTheSuperman: [[ClothesMakeTheSuperman Clothes Make the Batgirl]]: In addition to her UtilityBelt, Batgirl wears a suit of PoweredArmor that is ImmuneToBullets, grants SuperStrength, and has built-in NightVisionGoggles and an InvisibilityCloak.