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* ClothesMakeTheSuperman: In addition to her UtilityBelt, Batgirl wears a suit of PoweredArmor that is ImmuneToBullets, grants SuperStrength, and has built-in NightVisionGoggles.NightVisionGoggles and an InvisibilityCloak.
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** Batgirl's costume broadly resembles the outfit of the [[{{ComicBook/Batgirl2000}} Cassandra Cain]] Batgirl (with full face cover, because of Mayumi having a mole on her face which could blow her identity wide open), with the abilities of the ''BatmanBeyond'' [[PoweredArmor Batsuit]] and additional gear straight out of the ''VideoGame/BatmanArkhamSeries'' (like [[EverythingSensor "Detective Vision"]]).
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** Batgirl's costume broadly resembles the outfit of the [[{{ComicBook/Batgirl2000}} Cassandra Cain]] Batgirl (with full face cover, because of Mayumi having a mole on her face which could blow her identity wide open), with the abilities of the ''BatmanBeyond'' ''WesternAnimation/BatmanBeyond'' [[PoweredArmor Batsuit]] and additional gear straight out of the ''VideoGame/BatmanArkhamSeries'' (like [[EverythingSensor "Detective Vision"]]).
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* AscendedExtra: As mentioned before, Mayumi has only appeared in an extra-canonical [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Evangelion]] [[CanonForeigner video game]] so far.
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* AscendedExtra: As mentioned before, Mayumi has only appeared in an extra-canonical [[CanonForeigner extra-canonical]] [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Evangelion]] [[CanonForeigner [[ExpandedUniverse video game]] so far.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5087216/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-2-Dark-Lady-of-Tokyo3 Superwomen of Eva 2: Dark Lady of Tokyo-3]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1615106/Mike313 Mike313]] is a Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva story in which a relatively obscure ''NeonGenesisEvangelion'' character named Mayumi Yamagishi from the SegaSaturn game ''[[http://wiki.evageeks.org/Neon_Genesis_Evangelion:_Second_Impression Second Impression]]'' takes on the role of {{Comicbook/Batgirl}}. The story focuses less on the big monster battles (as of this writing, so far, Batgirl only gets involved in one directly) and more on the subterfuge surrounding NERV and building the Bat-mythos in the [=NGE=] world.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5087216/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-2-Dark-Lady-of-Tokyo3 Superwomen of Eva 2: Dark Lady of Tokyo-3]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1615106/Mike313 Mike313]] is a Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva story in which a relatively obscure ''NeonGenesisEvangelion'' character named [[CanonForeigner Mayumi Yamagishi Yamagishi]] from the SegaSaturn game ''[[http://wiki.evageeks.org/Neon_Genesis_Evangelion:_Second_Impression Second Impression]]'' takes on the role of {{Comicbook/Batgirl}}. The story focuses less on the big monster battles (as of this writing, so far, Batgirl only gets involved in one directly) and more on the subterfuge surrounding NERV and building the Bat-mythos in the [=NGE=] world.
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** Batgirl's costume broadly resembles the outfit of the [[{{ComicBook/Batgirl2000}} Cassandra Cain]] Batgirl (with full face cover, because of Mayumi having a mole on her face which could blow her identity wide open), with the abilities of the BatmanBeyond [[PoweredArmor Batsuit]] and additional gear straight out of the VideoGame/BatmanArkhamSeries (like [[EverythingSensor "Detective Vision"]]).
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** Batgirl's costume broadly resembles the outfit of the [[{{ComicBook/Batgirl2000}} Cassandra Cain]] Batgirl (with full face cover, because of Mayumi having a mole on her face which could blow her identity wide open), with the abilities of the BatmanBeyond ''BatmanBeyond'' [[PoweredArmor Batsuit]] and additional gear straight out of the VideoGame/BatmanArkhamSeries ''VideoGame/BatmanArkhamSeries'' (like [[EverythingSensor "Detective Vision"]]).
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** By WordOfGod, the whole sequence of Mayumi sneaking in (and fighting her way out) of NERV is an extended homage to the ''Videogame/BatmanArkhamSeries'' (specifically the "Predator Challenge" rooms).
** Batgirl's costume broadly resembles the outfit of the [[{{ComicBook/Batgirl2000}} Cassandra Cain]] Batgirl (with full face cover, because of Mayumi having a mole on her face which could blow her identity wide open), with the abilities of the BatmanBeyond [[PoweredArmor Batsuit]] and additional gear straight out of the Videogame/BatmanArkhamSeries (like [[EverythingSensor "Detective Vision"]]).
** Batgirl's costume broadly resembles the outfit of the [[{{ComicBook/Batgirl2000}} Cassandra Cain]] Batgirl (with full face cover, because of Mayumi having a mole on her face which could blow her identity wide open), with the abilities of the BatmanBeyond [[PoweredArmor Batsuit]] and additional gear straight out of the Videogame/BatmanArkhamSeries (like [[EverythingSensor "Detective Vision"]]).
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** By WordOfGod, the whole sequence of Mayumi sneaking in (and fighting her way out) of NERV is an extended homage to the ''Videogame/BatmanArkhamSeries'' ''VideoGame/BatmanArkhamSeries'' (specifically the "Predator Challenge" rooms).
** Batgirl's costume broadly resembles the outfit of the [[{{ComicBook/Batgirl2000}} Cassandra Cain]] Batgirl (with full face cover, because of Mayumi having a mole on her face which could blow her identity wide open), with the abilities of the BatmanBeyond [[PoweredArmor Batsuit]] and additional gear straight out of theVideogame/BatmanArkhamSeries VideoGame/BatmanArkhamSeries (like [[EverythingSensor "Detective Vision"]]).
** Batgirl's costume broadly resembles the outfit of the [[{{ComicBook/Batgirl2000}} Cassandra Cain]] Batgirl (with full face cover, because of Mayumi having a mole on her face which could blow her identity wide open), with the abilities of the BatmanBeyond [[PoweredArmor Batsuit]] and additional gear straight out of the
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* AscendedExtra: As mentioned before, Mayumi has only appeared on an extra-canonical [[NeonGenesisEvangelion Evangelion]] videogame so far.
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* AscendedExtra: As mentioned before, Mayumi has only appeared on in an extra-canonical [[NeonGenesisEvangelion [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Evangelion]] videogame [[CanonForeigner video game]] so far.
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* CompositeCharacter: Batgirl is a composite of [[WesternAnimation/BatmanBeyond Terry McGinnis]], several DC {{ComicBook/Batgirl}}s, [[{{Franchise/Batman}} Batman himself]], and of course Mayumi Yamagishi.
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* CompositeCharacter: Batgirl is a composite of [[WesternAnimation/BatmanBeyond Terry McGinnis]], several DC {{ComicBook/Batgirl}}s, [[{{Franchise/Batman}} Batman himself]], and of course course, Mayumi Yamagishi.
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* LetNoCrisisGoToWaste: A heroic version. For several chapters, Mayumi wishes to enter NERV HQ to find what information Gendo has on her parents' assassination, but [[ImpossibleMission it's easier said than done]]. The [[BigBlackout blackout]] that occurs during [[GiantSpider Matarael's]] attack provides her with a golden opportunity to try to sneak in-which she takes.
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* LetNoCrisisGoToWaste: A heroic version. For several chapters, Mayumi wishes to enter NERV HQ to find what information Gendo has on her parents' assassination, but [[ImpossibleMission it's easier said than done]]. The [[BigBlackout blackout]] that occurs during [[GiantSpider Matarael's]] attack provides her with a golden opportunity to try to sneak in-which in, which she takes.
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* PoweredArmor: Batgirl's suit not only enhances her strength, but it also is made out of a bullet-proof smart material, can turn invisible, comes equipped with a variety of nifty vision enhancements, and other nifty gadgets.
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** By WordOfGod, the whole sequence of Mayumi sneaking in (and fighting her way out) of NERV is an extended homage to the [[Videogame/BatmanArkhamSeries Arkham Series]] (specifically the "Predator Challenge" rooms).
** Batgirl's costume broadly resembles the outfit of the [[{{ComicBook/Batgirl2000}} Cassandra Cain]] Batgirl (with full face cover, because of Mayumi having a mole on her face which could blow her identity wide open), with the abilities of the BatmanBeyond PoweredArmor Batsuit and additional gear straight out of the [[Videogame/BatmanArkhamSeries Arkham Series]] (like [[EverythingSensor "Detective Vision"]]).
* ShroudedInMyth: Unlike the other Superwomen stories, this one starts with Mayumi having already been operating as Batgirl for some time... [[TheDreaded and her reputation precedes her]].
** Batgirl's costume broadly resembles the outfit of the [[{{ComicBook/Batgirl2000}} Cassandra Cain]] Batgirl (with full face cover, because of Mayumi having a mole on her face which could blow her identity wide open), with the abilities of the BatmanBeyond PoweredArmor Batsuit and additional gear straight out of the [[Videogame/BatmanArkhamSeries Arkham Series]] (like [[EverythingSensor "Detective Vision"]]).
* ShroudedInMyth: Unlike the other Superwomen stories, this one starts with Mayumi having already been operating as Batgirl for some time... [[TheDreaded and her reputation precedes her]].
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** By WordOfGod, the whole sequence of Mayumi sneaking in (and fighting her way out) of NERV is an extended homage to the [[Videogame/BatmanArkhamSeries Arkham Series]] ''Videogame/BatmanArkhamSeries'' (specifically the "Predator Challenge" rooms).
** Batgirl's costume broadly resembles the outfit of the [[{{ComicBook/Batgirl2000}} Cassandra Cain]] Batgirl (with full face cover, because of Mayumi having a mole on her face which could blow her identity wide open), with the abilities of the BatmanBeyondPoweredArmor Batsuit [[PoweredArmor Batsuit]] and additional gear straight out of the [[Videogame/BatmanArkhamSeries Arkham Series]] Videogame/BatmanArkhamSeries (like [[EverythingSensor "Detective Vision"]]).
* ShroudedInMyth: Unlike the otherSuperwomen Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva stories, this one starts with Mayumi having already been operating as Batgirl for some time... [[TheDreaded and her reputation precedes her]].
** Batgirl's costume broadly resembles the outfit of the [[{{ComicBook/Batgirl2000}} Cassandra Cain]] Batgirl (with full face cover, because of Mayumi having a mole on her face which could blow her identity wide open), with the abilities of the BatmanBeyond
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* CoolBike: The Bat-Cycle. The narration mentions Mayumi having a [[CoolCar Bat-Mobile]] early on, but she was not able to bring it with her to Tokyo-3...
* CoolBike: The Bat-Cycle. The narration mentions Mayumi having a [[CoolCar Bat-Mobile]] early on, but she was not able to bring it with her to Tokyo-3...
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5087216/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-2-Dark-Lady-of-Tokyo3 Superwomen of Eva 2: Dark Lady of Tokyo-3]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1615106/Mike313 Mike313]] is a Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva story in which a relatively obscure ''NeonGenesisEvangelion'' character named Mayumi Yamagishi from the SegaSaturn game ''[[http://wiki.evageeks.org/Neon_Genesis_Evangelion:_Second_Impression Second Impressions]]'' takes on the role of {{Comicbook/Batgirl}}. The story focuses less on the big monster battles (as of this writing, so far, Batgirl only gets involved in one directly) and more on the subterfuge surrounding NERV and building the Bat-mythos in the [=NGE=] world.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5087216/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-2-Dark-Lady-of-Tokyo3 Superwomen of Eva 2: Dark Lady of Tokyo-3]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1615106/Mike313 Mike313]] is a Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva story in which a relatively obscure ''NeonGenesisEvangelion'' character named Mayumi Yamagishi from the SegaSaturn game ''[[http://wiki.evageeks.org/Neon_Genesis_Evangelion:_Second_Impression Second Impressions]]'' Impression]]'' takes on the role of {{Comicbook/Batgirl}}. The story focuses less on the big monster battles (as of this writing, so far, Batgirl only gets involved in one directly) and more on the subterfuge surrounding NERV and building the Bat-mythos in the [=NGE=] world.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5087216/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-2-Dark-Lady-of-Tokyo3 Superwomen of Eva 2: Dark Lady of Tokyo-3]]'' by Mike313 is a Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva in which a relatively obscure ''NeonGenesisEvangelion'' character named Mayumi Yamagishi from the SegaSaturn game ''[[http://wiki.evageeks.org/Neon_Genesis_Evangelion:_Second_Impression Second Impressions]]'' takes on the role of {{Comicbook/Batgirl}}. The story focuses less on the big monster battles (As of this writing, so far Batgirl only gets involved in one directly), and more on the subterfuge surrounding NERV and building the Bat-mythos in the [=NGE=] world.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5087216/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-2-Dark-Lady-of-Tokyo3 Superwomen of Eva 2: Dark Lady of Tokyo-3]]'' by Mike313 [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1615106/Mike313 Mike313]] is a Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva story in which a relatively obscure ''NeonGenesisEvangelion'' character named Mayumi Yamagishi from the SegaSaturn game ''[[http://wiki.evageeks.org/Neon_Genesis_Evangelion:_Second_Impression Second Impressions]]'' takes on the role of {{Comicbook/Batgirl}}. The story focuses less on the big monster battles (As (as of this writing, so far far, Batgirl only gets involved in one directly), directly) and more on the subterfuge surrounding NERV and building the Bat-mythos in the [=NGE=] world.
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** Batgirl's costume broadly resembles the outfit of the [[ComicBook/Batgirl2000 Cassandra Cain]] Batgirl (with full face cover, because of Mayumi having a mole on her face which could blow her identity wide open), with the abilities of the BatmanBeyond PoweredArmor Batsuit and additional gear straight out of the [[Videogame/BatmanArkhamSeries Arkham Series]] (like [[EverythingSensor "Detective Vision"]]).
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** Batgirl's costume broadly resembles the outfit of the [[ComicBook/Batgirl2000 [[{{ComicBook/Batgirl2000}} Cassandra Cain]] Batgirl (with full face cover, because of Mayumi having a mole on her face which could blow her identity wide open), with the abilities of the BatmanBeyond PoweredArmor Batsuit and additional gear straight out of the [[Videogame/BatmanArkhamSeries Arkham Series]] (like [[EverythingSensor "Detective Vision"]]).
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* BecomingTheMask: The fact that Mayumi feels more comfortable in the cape and cowl is a given. That she would up falling for Shinji for real after leading him on for long is also a given, but happens during the fic proper
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* BecomingTheMask: The fact that Mayumi feels more comfortable in the cape and cowl is a given. That she would end up falling for Shinji for real after leading him on for long is also a given, but happens during the fic proper
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** Batgirl's costume broadly resembles the outfit of the [[Comicbook/Batgirl2000 Cassandra Cain Batgirl]] (with full face cover, because of Mayumi having a mole on her face which could blow her identity wide open), with the abilities of the BatmanBeyond PoweredArmor Batsuit and additional gear straight out of the [[Videogame/BatmanArkhamSeries Arkham Series]] (like [[EverythingSensor "Detective Vision"]]).
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** Batgirl's costume broadly resembles the outfit of the [[Comicbook/Batgirl2000 [[ComicBook/Batgirl2000 Cassandra Cain Batgirl]] Cain]] Batgirl (with full face cover, because of Mayumi having a mole on her face which could blow her identity wide open), with the abilities of the BatmanBeyond PoweredArmor Batsuit and additional gear straight out of the [[Videogame/BatmanArkhamSeries Arkham Series]] (like [[EverythingSensor "Detective Vision"]]).
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* MegaCorp: Yamagishi Enterprises. Providers of everything from regular cell phones to ArtificialLimbs to spare parts for Evangelion technology to everything a SuperHero needs to wage a war against crime.
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* ArtisticLicenseGeography: The Tokyo-3 described in the fic doesn't just contradict what's shown in the show, but is physically impossible to build in the Hakone region where Tokyo-3 is located.
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* ArtisticLicenseGeography: The Tokyo-3 described in the fic doesn't just contradict what's shown in the show, but is physically impossible to build in the Hakone region where Tokyo-3 is located. [[RuleOfCool Still makes for a pretty interesting]] [[CityOfAdventure place to read about]].
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* ManBehindTheMan: [[MagnificentBastard Gendo]] [[ManipulativeBastard Ikari]]. [[UpToEleven ''For the entire Tokyo-3 organized crime underground'']].
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* ManBehindTheMan: [[MagnificentBastard Gendo]] [[ManipulativeBastard Ikari]]. [[UpToEleven ''For ''[[UpToEleven For the entire Tokyo-3 organized crime underground'']].underground]]''.
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* AscendedExtra: As mentioned before, Mayumi has only appeared on an extra-canonical [[NeonGenesisEvangelion Evangelion]] videogame so far.
* ManBehindTheMan: [[MagnificentBastard Gendo]] [[ManipulativeBastard Ikari]]. [[UpToEleven ''For the entire Tokyo-3 organized crime underground'']].
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** Batgirl's costume broadly resembles the outfit of the [[Comicbook/Batgirl2000 Cassandra Cain Batgirl Batgirl]] (with full face cover, because of Mayumi having a mole on her face which could blow her identity wide open), with the abilities of the BatmanBeyond PoweredArmor Batsuit and additional gear straight out of the [[Videogame/BatmanArkhamSeries Arkham Series]] (like [[EverythingSensor "Detective Vision"]]).
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* [[AMinorKidtroduction]]: The story starts with [[DeathByOriginStory the murder of Mayumi's parents]] [[HarmfulToMinors in front of her]]. It's her [[DrivingQuestion wanting to know who did it and who ordered it]] that drives her on.
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* [[AMinorKidtroduction]]: AMinorKidroduction: The story starts with [[DeathByOriginStory the murder of Mayumi's parents]] [[HarmfulToMinors in front of her]]. It's her [[DrivingQuestion wanting to know who did it and who ordered it]] that drives her on.
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* [[Main/AMinorKidtroduction]]: [[AMinorKidtroduction]]: The story starts with [[DeathByOriginStory the murder of Mayumi's parents]] [[HarmfulToMinors in front of her]]. It's her [[DrivingQuestion wanting to know who did it and who ordered it]] that drives her on.
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* AMinorKidtroduction: The story starts with [[DeathByOriginStory the murder of Mayumi's parents]] [[HarmfulToMinors in front of her]]. It's her [[DrivingQuestion wanting to know who did it and who ordered it]] that drives her on.
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* AMinorKidtroduction: LetNoCrisisGoToWaste: A heroic version. For several chapters, Mayumi wishes to enter NERV HQ to find what information Gendo has on her parents' assassination, but [[ImpossibleMission it's easier said than done]]. The [[BigBlackout blackout]] that occurs during [[GiantSpider Matarael's]] attack provides her with a golden opportunity to try to sneak in-which she takes.
* [[Main/AMinorKidtroduction]]: The story starts with [[DeathByOriginStory the murder of Mayumi's parents]] [[HarmfulToMinors in front of her]]. It's her [[DrivingQuestion wanting to know who did it and who ordered it]] that drives her on.
* [[Main/AMinorKidtroduction]]: The story starts with [[DeathByOriginStory the murder of Mayumi's parents]] [[HarmfulToMinors in front of her]]. It's her [[DrivingQuestion wanting to know who did it and who ordered it]] that drives her on.
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* ShoudedInMyth: Unlike the other Superwomen stories, this one starts with Mayumi having already been operating as Batgirl for some time... [[TheDreaded and her reputation precedes her]].
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** By WordOfGod, the whole sequence of Mayumi sneaking in (and fighting her way out) of NERV is an extended homage to the [[Videogame/BatmanArkhamSeries Arkham Series]].
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** By WordOfGod, the whole sequence of Mayumi sneaking in (and fighting her way out) of NERV is an extended homage to the [[Videogame/BatmanArkhamSeries Arkham Series]].Series]] (specifically the "Predator Challenge" rooms).
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5087216/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-2-Dark-Lady-of-Tokyo3 Superwomen of Eva 2: Dark Lady of Tokyo-3]]'' by Mike313 is a Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva in which a relatively obscure ''NeonGenesisEvangelion'' character named Mayumi Yamagishi from the SegaSaturn game ''[[http://wiki.evageeks.org/Neon_Genesis_Evangelion:_Second_Impression Second Impressions]]'' takes on the role of {{Comicbook/Batgirl}}. The story focuses less on the big monster battles (Batgirl only gets involved in one directly), and more on the subterfuge surrounding Nerv and building the Bat-mythos in the [=NGE=] world.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5087216/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-2-Dark-Lady-of-Tokyo3 Superwomen of Eva 2: Dark Lady of Tokyo-3]]'' by Mike313 is a Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva in which a relatively obscure ''NeonGenesisEvangelion'' character named Mayumi Yamagishi from the SegaSaturn game ''[[http://wiki.evageeks.org/Neon_Genesis_Evangelion:_Second_Impression Second Impressions]]'' takes on the role of {{Comicbook/Batgirl}}. The story focuses less on the big monster battles (Batgirl (As of this writing, so far Batgirl only gets involved in one directly), and more on the subterfuge surrounding Nerv NERV and building the Bat-mythos in the [=NGE=] world.
* CoolBike: The Bat-Cycle. The narration mentions Mayumi having a [[CoolCar Bat-Mobile]] early on, but she was not able to bring it with her to Tokyo-3...
* ElaborateUndergroundBase: As expected, the Batcave.
* AMinorKidtroduction: The story starts with [[DeathByOriginStory the murder of Mayumi's parents]] [[HarmfulToMinors in front of her]]. It's her [[DrivingQuestion wanting to know who did it and who ordered it]] that drives her on.
* AMinorKidtroduction: The story starts with [[DeathByOriginStory the murder of Mayumi's parents]] [[HarmfulToMinors in front of her]]. It's her [[DrivingQuestion wanting to know who did it and who ordered it]] that drives her on.
* ShoudedInMyth: Unlike the other Superwomen stories, this one starts with Mayumi having already been operating as Batgirl for some time... [[TheDreaded and her reputation precedes her]].
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** Batgirl's costume broadly resembles the outfit of the Cassandra Cain Batgirl, Batgirl (with full face cover, because of Mayumi having a mole on her face which could blow her identity wide open), with the abilities of the BatmanBeyond PoweredArmor Batsuit.Batsuit and additional gear straight out of the [[Videogame/BatmanArkhamSeries Arkham Series]] (like [[EverythingSensor "Detective Vision"]]).
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** By WordOfGod, the whole sequence of Mayumi sneaking in (and fighting her way out) of NERV is an extended homage to the [[Videogame/BatmanArkhamSeries Arkham Series]].
** Batgirl's costume broadly resembles the outfit of the Cassandra Cain Batgirl, with the abilities of the BatmanBeyond PoweredArmor Batsuit.
** By WordOfGod, the whole sequence of Mayumi sneaking in (and fighting her way out) of NERV is an extended homage to the [[Videogame/BatmanArkhamSeries Arkham Series]].
** Batgirl's costume broadly resembles the outfit of the Cassandra Cain Batgirl, with the abilities of the BatmanBeyond PoweredArmor Batsuit.
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* WretchedHive: Tokyo-3, with the old city of Hakone standing in as TheCityNarrows.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5087216/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-2-Dark-Lady-of-Tokyo3 Superwomen of Eva 2: Dark Lady of Tokyo-3]]'' by Mike313 is a SuperwomenOfEva Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva in which a relatively obscure ''NeonGenesisEvangelion'' character named Mayumi Yamagishi from the SegaSaturn game ''[[http://wiki.evageeks.org/Neon_Genesis_Evangelion:_Second_Impression Second Impressions]]'' takes on the role of {{Comicbook/Batgirl}}. The story focuses less on the big monster battles (Batgirl only gets involved in one directly), and more on the subterfuge surrounding Nerv and building the Bat-mythos in the [=NGE=] world.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5087216/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-2-Dark-Lady-of-Tokyo3 Superwomen of Eva 2: Dark Lady of Tokyo-3]]'' by Mike313 is a SuperwomenOfEva in which a relatively obscure ''NeonGenesisEvangelion'' character named Mayumi Yamagishi from the SegaSaturn game ''[[http://wiki.evageeks.org/Neon_Genesis_Evangelion:_Second_Impression Second Impressions]]'' takes on the role of {{Comicbook/Batgirl}}. The story focuses less on the big monster battles (Batgirl only gets involved in one directly), and more on the subterfuge surrounding Nerv and building the Bat-mythos in the [=NGE=] world.
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!!This work contains examples of the following tropes:
* ArtisticLicenseGeography: The Tokyo-3 described in the fic doesn't just contradict what's shown in the show, but is physically impossible to build in the Hakone region where Tokyo-3 is located.
* BecomingTheMask: The fact that Mayumi feels more comfortable in the cape and cowl is a given. That she would up falling for Shinji for real after leading him on for long is also a given, but happens during the fic proper
* CreateYourOwnVillain: [[spoiler:Batgirl knocks Gendo into a vat of Eva coolant, and when he emerges he can't survive outside sub-zero temperatures]].
* CompositeCharacter: Batgirl is a composite of [[WesternAnimation/BatmanBeyond Terry McGinnis]], several DC Batgirls, [[{{Franchise/Batman}} Batman himself]], and of course Mayumi Yamagishi.
* PoweredArmor: Batgirl's suit not only enhances her strength, but it also is made out of a bullet-proof smart material, can turn invisible, comes equipped with a variety of nifty vision enhancements, and other nifty gadgets.
* WhamEpisode: Bane's arrival.
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!!This work contains examples of the following tropes:
* ArtisticLicenseGeography: The Tokyo-3 described in the fic doesn't just contradict what's shown in the show, but is physically impossible to build in the Hakone region where Tokyo-3 is located.
* BecomingTheMask: The fact that Mayumi feels more comfortable in the cape and cowl is a given. That she would up falling for Shinji for real after leading him on for long is also a given, but happens during the fic proper
* CreateYourOwnVillain: [[spoiler:Batgirl knocks Gendo into a vat of Eva coolant, and when he emerges he can't survive outside sub-zero temperatures]].
* CompositeCharacter: Batgirl is a composite of [[WesternAnimation/BatmanBeyond Terry McGinnis]], several DC Batgirls, [[{{Franchise/Batman}} Batman himself]], and of course Mayumi Yamagishi.
* PoweredArmor: Batgirl's suit not only enhances her strength, but it also is made out of a bullet-proof smart material, can turn invisible, comes equipped with a variety of nifty vision enhancements, and other nifty gadgets.
* WhamEpisode: Bane's arrival.
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