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Ruby Haze is an [[InsistentTerminology experimental]] self insert by weredrago2. It involves the author’s self-insert, John, literally crash landing in the early day of ''[[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogArchieComics Archie Sonic]]'' with a Phantom Ruby fused into his hand.
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Ruby Haze is an [[InsistentTerminology experimental]] self insert by weredrago2. It involves the author’s self-insert, John, literally crash landing in the early day days of ''[[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogArchieComics Archie Sonic]]'' with a Phantom Ruby fused into his hand.
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* JiveTurkey: Vector talks almost exclusively like this, due to the story being [[EarlyInstallWeirdness early]] in the Archie continuity, much to John's annoyance and confusion. John manages to get him to tone it down.
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* JiveTurkey: Vector talks almost exclusively like this, due to the story being [[EarlyInstallWeirdness [[EarlyInstallmentWeirdness early]] in the Archie continuity, much to John's annoyance and confusion. John manages to get him to tone it down.
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* JiveTurkey: Vector talks almost exclusively like this, due to the story being [[EarlyInstallWeirdness early]] in the Archie continuity, much to John's annoyance and confusion. John manages to get him to tone it down.
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* MySkullRunnethOver: [[spoiler:When John uses a Power Ring to try and find the displaced Knuckles, he makes the mistake of asking to be shown every Echidna on Mobius. Since Knuckles is far from the LastOfHisKind in the Archie continuity, the flood of information overwhelms him until he specifically asks for Knuckles]].
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* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler:Metal Sonic's fight with Enerjak ends the second the god is able to land a clean shot on the robot]].
* NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: John tends to spontaneously develop new abilities as he needs them. It's justified, given the [[RealityWarper reality warping]] nature of the Phantom Ruby.
* OneWingedAngel: [[spoiler:When fighting Metal Sonic, John gives into the Ruby's power and transforms into a dragon]].
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* YeOldeButcheredeEnglishe: Rob O' the Hedge talks exclusively like this. It's an affectation (apparently Mercian royalty is expected to speak in such a manner); he [[OohMeAccentsSlipping drops the accent]] a couple times in more private/stressful moments.
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* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: John tends to lose control whenever he starts to really tap into the Phantom Ruby's power or is placed in a life or death situation. Thankfully he's discovered that Power Rings can help keep the Ruby's influence in check.
* YeOldeButcheredeEnglishe: Rob O' the Hedge talks exclusively like this. It's an affectation (apparently Mercian royalty is expected to speak in such a manner); he [[OohMeAccentsSlipping drops the accent]] a couple times in more private/stressfulmoments.moments.
* YourHeartsDesire: [[spoiler:Fiona wound up seeing hers when she touched the Phantom Ruby. This causes her to start making plans to steal the Ruby in order to make the vision a reality]].
* YeOldeButcheredeEnglishe: Rob O' the Hedge talks exclusively like this. It's an affectation (apparently Mercian royalty is expected to speak in such a manner); he [[OohMeAccentsSlipping drops the accent]] a couple times in more private/stressful
* YourHeartsDesire: [[spoiler:Fiona wound up seeing hers when she touched the Phantom Ruby. This causes her to start making plans to steal the Ruby in order to make the vision a reality]].
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* DiscardAndDraw: [[spoiler:In exchange for a massive increase in physical abilities, John's dragon form loses access to the abilities of the Phantom Ruby]].
* EnemyMine: [[spoiler:John is forced to team up with Metal Sonic to fight [[PhysicalGod Enerjak]]]].
* EnemyMine: [[spoiler:John is forced to team up with Metal Sonic to fight [[PhysicalGod Enerjak]]]].
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* {{Expy}}: Presto and Cadence are based on Tempo and Kat from ''VideoGame/{{Tempo}}''.
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* {{Expy}}: {{Expy}}:
** Presto and Cadence are based on Tempo and Kat from''VideoGame/{{Tempo}}''.''VideoGame/{{Tempo}}''.
** Per WordOfGod, Fifi is the author’s take on [[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogIDW Whisper the Wolf]].
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** Per WordOfGod, Fifi is the author’s take on [[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogIDW Whisper the Wolf]].
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* SentientPhlebotinum: The Phantom Ruby is implied to be sentient early on and there are times when it seems to influence his actions. [[spoiler: When fighting with Metal Sonic it seems to actively start putting thoughts in John’s head]].
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* HiredGuns: John hires a large number of mercenaries to help train the Crazy Critters on how to use their newly purchased firearms and to provide additional manpower. Mostly notable among these hires are Fiona, Bark, and Bean.
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Not evil but the idea is the same. When John saves her from badniks on a salvage mission gone wrong, Fiona can’t understand why he would bother saving her when he could’ve just let her die and take the loot for himself, especially since she duped him onto the salvage mission in the first place.
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* FuelMeterOfPower: The Phantom Ruby has a finite amount of power and John needs to pull energy from other sources to recharge it. Its not clear what would happen to it if it completely ran out of power, but John isn’t eager to find out. Especially since it’s fused into his hand.
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* FuelMeterOfPower: The Phantom Ruby has a finite amount of power and John needs to pull energy from other sources to recharge it. Its not clear what would happen to it if it completely ran out of power, but John isn’t eager to find out. Especially since it’s fused into his hand.
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* MythologyGag: [[spoiler: Metal Sonic escapes from Null Space through sheer speed, just like Sonic did in ''VideoGame/SonicForces'']].
* OhCrap: [[spoiler: John has this reaction when he comes face-to-face with [[VideoGame/Sonic3AndKnuckles Big]] [[FinalBoss Arms]], while the Phantom Ruby is almost completely drained]].
* OhCrap: [[spoiler: John has this reaction when he comes face-to-face with [[VideoGame/Sonic3AndKnuckles Big]] [[FinalBoss Arms]], while the Phantom Ruby is almost completely drained]].
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: [[spoiler: After accidentally reviving Metal Sonic 2.5 and promptly trapping it in Null Space, John decides he’s had enough and attempts to cut his visit to Angel Island short. Unfortunately, Metal Sonic has other plans]].
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Ruby Haze is a [[InsistentTerminology experimental]] self insert by weredrago2. It involves the author’s self-insert, John, literally crash landing in the early day of ''[[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogArchieComics Archie Sonic]]'' with a Phantom Ruby fused into his hand.
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Ruby Haze is a an [[InsistentTerminology experimental]] self insert by weredrago2. It involves the author’s self-insert, John, literally crash landing in the early day of ''[[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogArchieComics Archie Sonic]]'' with a Phantom Ruby fused into his hand.
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* AchievementsInIgnorance: When John finally gets his hands on a book of magic, he discovers that many of his abilities are actually advanced magic techniques, the Phantom Ruby simply allowed him to skip over the basics.
* AppropriatedAppellation: After learning that Sherif’s forces have been calling him the Scarlet Wizard, John decides to take the full name of ''John Scarlet''.
* AppropriatedAppellation: After learning that Sherif’s forces have been calling him the Scarlet Wizard, John decides to take the full name of ''John Scarlet''.
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* AchievementsInIgnorance: When John finally gets his hands on a book of magic, he discovers that many of his abilities are actually advanced magic techniques, techniques; the Phantom Ruby simply allowed him to skip over the basics.
* AppropriatedAppellation: After learning thatSherif’s Sheriff’s forces have been calling him the Scarlet Wizard, John decides to take the full name of ''John Scarlet''.
* AppropriatedAppellation: After learning that
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Unlike the rest of the Robians who are just mindless drones, Barbe Vis had his mind overwritten with a fake personality so Robotnik could take advantage of his strategic abilities.]]
* ClassicalAntiHero: John. He a normal guy who’s been ripped away from everything thing he’s know and thrust into a massive conflict with powers he doesn’t understand, which has understandably left him a stressed out mess with severe confidence issues. He’s caught between being terrified of his own powers and being weighed down by the feeling that he simply just isn’t doing enough with them.
* {{Cyborg}}: [[spoiler: Presto and Cadence are these as a result of being partially roboticized.]]
* ClassicalAntiHero: John. He a normal guy who’s been ripped away from everything thing he’s know and thrust into a massive conflict with powers he doesn’t understand, which has understandably left him a stressed out mess with severe confidence issues. He’s caught between being terrified of his own powers and being weighed down by the feeling that he simply just isn’t doing enough with them.
* {{Cyborg}}: [[spoiler: Presto and Cadence are these as a result of being partially roboticized.]]
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Unlike [[spoiler:Unlike the rest of the Robians who are just mindless drones, Barbe Vis had his mind overwritten with a fake personality so Robotnik could take advantage of his strategic abilities.]]
* ClassicalAntiHero: John.He He's a normal guy who’s been ripped away from everything thing he’s know he knows and thrust into a massive conflict with powers he doesn’t understand, which has understandably left him a stressed out mess with severe confidence issues. He’s caught between being terrified of his own powers and being weighed down by the feeling that he simply just isn’t doing enough with them.
* {{Cyborg}}:[[spoiler: Presto [[spoiler:Presto and Cadence are these as a result of being partially roboticized.]]
* ClassicalAntiHero: John.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: When writing out a list of possible energy sources to look into, John crosses out Wisps.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: When writing out a list of possible energy sources to look into, John crosses out Wisps.[[VideoGame/SonicColors Wisps]].
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* FakeWizardry: Downplayed. While Phantom Ruby’s powers are essentially magic and everybody assumes he’s a wizard, John himself doesn’t actually have any powers of his own and barely knows how to use the Phantom Ruby. John simply to take a "fake it till you make it" approach to his situation and takes great care to avoid people learning about his lack of proficiency as he tries to figure out his powers. He’s working on trying to completely ditch the fake part though.
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* FakeWizardry: Downplayed. While Phantom Ruby’s powers are essentially magic and everybody assumes he’s a wizard, John himself doesn’t actually have any powers of his own and barely knows how to use the Phantom Ruby. John simply chooses to take a "fake it till you make it" approach to his situation and takes great care to avoid people learning about his lack of proficiency as he tries to figure out his powers. He’s working on trying to completely ditch the fake part part, though.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler: After John snaps out of his HeroicSafeMode, he realizes that he severely damaged or destroyed several Robians]].
* PatchworkFic: While the story mainly takes place in the Archie Sonic continuity, the author has stated he will be including elements from various other incarnations of Sonic.
* PatchworkFic: While the story mainly takes place in the Archie Sonic continuity, the author has stated he will be including elements from various other incarnations of Sonic.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler: After [[spoiler:After John snaps out of his HeroicSafeMode, he realizes that he severely damaged or destroyed several Robians]].
* PatchworkFic: While the story mainly takes place in the [[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogArchieComics ArchieSonic Sonic]] continuity, the author has stated he will be including drawn elements from various other incarnations of Sonic.Sonic, like the various games and cartoons.
* PatchworkFic: While the story mainly takes place in the [[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogArchieComics Archie
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* SchizoTech: Overlander weaponry is almost totally identical to tye weapons used by most modern militaries on Earth, something John finds especially jarring considering it exist side by side with more primitive firearms and sci-fi blasters.
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* SchizoTech: Overlander weaponry is almost totally identical to tye the weapons used by most modern militaries on Earth, something John finds especially jarring considering it exist exists side by side with more primitive firearms and sci-fi blasters.
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* TearsOfJoy: John gives these after [[spoiler: Merna shows him a Chao Garden]].
* UngratefulBastard: After accidentally exposing himself as an “overlander” while fighting some pirates, the captain of the ship threatens John and demands that he gets off his ship. This immediately comes back to bite him as John promptly sides with the pirates due to them treating him with respect in spite of his species.
* VillainTakesAnInterest: [[spoiler: John ends up getting on [[TheArchmage Mammoth Mogul’s]] radar, who sends the [[QuirkyMinibossSquad Fearsome Foursome]] to test him.]]
* YeOldeButcheredeEnglishe: Rob O the Hedge talks exclusively like this, apparently Mercian royalty is expected to speak in such a manner.
* UngratefulBastard: After accidentally exposing himself as an “overlander” while fighting some pirates, the captain of the ship threatens John and demands that he gets off his ship. This immediately comes back to bite him as John promptly sides with the pirates due to them treating him with respect in spite of his species.
* VillainTakesAnInterest: [[spoiler: John ends up getting on [[TheArchmage Mammoth Mogul’s]] radar, who sends the [[QuirkyMinibossSquad Fearsome Foursome]] to test him.]]
* YeOldeButcheredeEnglishe: Rob O the Hedge talks exclusively like this, apparently Mercian royalty is expected to speak in such a manner.
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* TearsOfJoy: John gives these sheds some after [[spoiler: Merna the Merhog shows him a Chao Garden]].
* UngratefulBastard: After accidentally exposing himself as an “overlander” while fighting some pirates, the captain of the ship threatens John and demands that he gets off his ship. This immediately comes back to bitehim him, as John promptly sides with the pirates due to them treating him with respect in spite of his species.
* VillainTakesAnInterest:[[spoiler: John [[spoiler:John ends up getting on [[TheArchmage Mammoth Mogul’s]] radar, who sends the [[QuirkyMinibossSquad Fearsome Foursome]] to test him.]]
* YeOldeButcheredeEnglishe: RobO O' the Hedge talks exclusively like this, apparently this. It's an affectation (apparently Mercian royalty is expected to speak in such a manner.manner); he [[OohMeAccentsSlipping drops the accent]] a couple times in more private/stressful moments.
* UngratefulBastard: After accidentally exposing himself as an “overlander” while fighting some pirates, the captain of the ship threatens John and demands that he gets off his ship. This immediately comes back to bite
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* YeOldeButcheredeEnglishe: Rob
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* *ClassicalAntiHero: John. He a normal guy who’s been ripped away from everything thing he’s know and thrust into a massive conflict with powers he doesn’t understand, which has understandably left him a stressed out mess with severe confidence issues. He’s caught between being terrified of his own powers and being weighed down by the feeling that he simply just isn’t doing enough with them.
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* *ClassicalAntiHero: ClassicalAntiHero: John. He a normal guy who’s been ripped away from everything thing he’s know and thrust into a massive conflict with powers he doesn’t understand, which has understandably left him a stressed out mess with severe confidence issues. He’s caught between being terrified of his own powers and being weighed down by the feeling that he simply just isn’t doing enough with them.