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-->''May Marigold had seen the worst of what Remnant had to offer. Corruption and militarism ran rampant, led by James Ironwood, and apparently enabled by none other than Headmaster Ozpin, who was much more than the world knew. She had stood up for what was right, she'd left Atlas behind, and was found by none other than Salem. And thanks to the enlightenment she had offered, May knew what she had to do in order to set the world right. And it all started with Beacon. ''

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-->''May ->''May Marigold had seen the worst of what Remnant had to offer. Corruption and militarism ran rampant, led by James Ironwood, and apparently enabled by none other than Headmaster Ozpin, who was much more than the world knew. She had stood up for what was right, she'd left Atlas behind, and was found by none other than Salem. And thanks to the enlightenment she had offered, May knew what she had to do in order to set the world right. And it all started with Beacon. ''


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* TitledAfterTheSong: Chapter 13 is titled "Achilles, Come Down", from the song of the same name by Gang of Youths, a song about Achilles being talked down from suicide. [[spoiler:The chapter features Pyrrha, who's MythicalMotifs is Achilles, going to fight May, a suicidal course of action. The song also applies to May who, while not suicidal, is comitting the worst mistake of her life]].

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* TitledAfterTheSong: Chapter 13 is titled "Achilles, Come Down", from the song of the same name by Gang of Youths, Music/GangOfYouths, a song about Achilles being talked down from suicide. [[spoiler:The chapter features Pyrrha, who's MythicalMotifs is Achilles, going to fight May, a suicidal course of action. The song also applies to May who, while not suicidal, is comitting the worst mistake of her life]].
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Sadly, due to a lack of motivation to write, as well as a growing disillusionment with RWBY as a whole, the fic was eventually left dead. The final chapter, uploaded on 3rd of November 2023, provided a chapter-by-chapter recap of the planned remainng eleven chapters and ending.
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* AuthorFilibuster: Robyn's views on violent revolution in chapter 15 quite clearly give across Asheskies' own. Robyn and Joanna note that it's easy to fall into the idea that the only way to truly deal with deeply flawed institutions is to burn it all down to the ground, but that the problem is twofold: One, truly making progress is rarely straightforward and often times involves needing to make compromises in order to ensure any degree of meaningful progress is made, even if it means that it can't fit everyone who's hurting. The second and more prominent issue that when revolution turns into outright war, it's oftentimes the most vulnerable (the minorities marginalized, in this case the poor, the Faunus, the people of Mantle, etc.) who are most likely to be harmed, because the state has a powerful army that would not hesitate to exterminate them without a second thought, and progress would be set back completely, if not wiped out completely.

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* AuthorFilibuster: Robyn's views on violent revolution in chapter 15 quite clearly give across Asheskies' own. Robyn and Joanna note that it's easy to fall into the idea that the only way to truly deal with deeply flawed institutions is to burn it all down to the ground, but that the problem is twofold: One, truly making progress is rarely straightforward and often times involves needing to make compromises in order to ensure any degree of meaningful progress is made, even if it means that it can't fit everyone who's hurting. The second and more prominent issue that when revolution turns into outright war, it's oftentimes the most vulnerable (the minorities marginalized, in this case the poor, the Faunus, the people of Mantle, etc.) who are most likely to be harmed, because the state has a powerful army that would not hesitate to exterminate them without a second thought, and progress would be set back completely, drastically, if not wiped out completely.
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* AuthorFilibuster: Robyn's views on violent revolution in chapter 15 quite clearly give across Asheskies' own.
* AwesomeButImpractical: During a sparring match with a petra gigas, May uses her [[spoiler:doppler powers to turn the grimm goop on the ground into a massive claw to kill it with. As Salem points out, while this is very impressive, it would've been more practical to simply take control of the geist itself, since the arm trick takes a lot of energy and requires a supply of raw grimm]].

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* AuthorFilibuster: Robyn's views on violent revolution in chapter 15 quite clearly give across Asheskies' own.
own. Robyn and Joanna note that it's easy to fall into the idea that the only way to truly deal with deeply flawed institutions is to burn it all down to the ground, but that the problem is twofold: One, truly making progress is rarely straightforward and often times involves needing to make compromises in order to ensure any degree of meaningful progress is made, even if it means that it can't fit everyone who's hurting. The second and more prominent issue that when revolution turns into outright war, it's oftentimes the most vulnerable (the minorities marginalized, in this case the poor, the Faunus, the people of Mantle, etc.) who are most likely to be harmed, because the state has a powerful army that would not hesitate to exterminate them without a second thought, and progress would be set back completely, if not wiped out completely.
* AwesomeButImpractical: During a sparring match with a petra gigas, Petra Gigas, May uses her [[spoiler:doppler [[spoiler:Doppler powers to turn the grimm goop on the ground into a massive claw to kill it with. As Salem points out, while this is very impressive, it would've been more practical to simply take control of the geist itself, since the arm trick takes a lot of energy and requires a supply of raw grimm]].
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** Once May [[spoiler:reveals herself to the world, a ''lot'' of characters are faced with this realization. Those of her old team that didn't know, even Cinder, are surprised but realize that it makes sense in hindsight.

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** Once May [[spoiler:reveals herself to the world, a ''lot'' of characters are faced with this realization. Those of her old team that didn't know, even Cinder, are surprised but realize that it makes sense in hindsight.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler:May and Pyrrha being soul bonded]] is foreshadowed heavily, starting from the first fight between May and Qrow; When May overtaxes her maiden powers, she sees flashes of green light, just like [[spoiler:the lighting in Amber's vault]]. During the fight on top of Beacon tower, May gets pain in her heel, [[spoiler:where Pyrrha just took an arrow]]. When Pyrrha receives a [[spoiler:gift from Ironwood, her immediate reaction is anger and resentment]]. Finally, May and Pyrrha's [[spoilre:auras both seem to decrease randomly, almost like if they had been in a fight, which is handily explained when it turns out that their auras are linked]].

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* {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler:May and Pyrrha being soul bonded]] is foreshadowed heavily, starting from the first fight between May and Qrow; When May overtaxes her maiden powers, she sees flashes of green light, just like [[spoiler:the lighting in Amber's vault]]. During the fight on top of Beacon tower, May gets pain in her heel, [[spoiler:where Pyrrha just took an arrow]]. When Pyrrha receives a [[spoiler:gift from Ironwood, her immediate reaction is anger and resentment]]. Finally, May and Pyrrha's [[spoilre:auras [[spoiler:auras both seem to decrease randomly, almost like if they had been in a fight, which is handily explained when it turns out that their auras are linked]].

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* MeaningfulEcho: When she wakes up after [[spoiler:the fall of beacon, May says "Fuck you, Nikos. I should’ve had it all, and you should’ve never been part of this", echoing two sepparate lines from Cinder in the show; ""You're just not worthy of such power. But I am..." and "And you... should never have been born"]].

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When she wakes up after [[spoiler:the fall of beacon, May says "Fuck you, Nikos. I should’ve had it all, and you should’ve never been part of this", echoing two sepparate lines from Cinder in the show; ""You're just not worthy of such power. But I am..." and "And you... should never have been born"]].born"]].
** When May sees Jaune at Haven, she internally asks "who was he, again?", echoing how Cinder asked Jaune the same question when they met at Haven in the show.

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* InMediasRes: Chapter 20 starts with May in an Argus prison cell, before flashing back to show how she got there.



* NightmareSequence: May suffers one in chapter 16, which combines all of her traumas into one. She's in Marigold Manor, without a weapon or aura. The lighting is like it was in Cerberus, and she's being chased by a grimm that sounds like a mix of a normal grimm and a chainsaw (Juni Syntrichia's weapon) and can burrow underground to get closer to her (Juni's semblance). When it finally comes face to face with her, it looks like an unnaturally thin and lanky human with her own face with red eyes and bloody fangs. [[spoiler:Just like the Doppler]].

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May suffers one in chapter 16, which combines all of her traumas into one. She's in Marigold Manor, without a weapon or aura. The lighting is like it was in Cerberus, and she's being chased by a grimm that sounds like a mix of a normal grimm and a chainsaw (Juni Syntrichia's weapon) and can burrow underground to get closer to her (Juni's semblance). When it finally comes face to face with her, it looks like an unnaturally thin and lanky human with her own face with red eyes and bloody fangs. [[spoiler:Just like the Doppler]].Doppler]].
** Chapter 20 opens on one from Pyrrha's side, where she meets May at the road where she stole half the maiden powers. Both are frozen and unable to move as Grimm close in, and Pyrrha watches as May's humanity is stripped away.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: When Emerald suggests that maybe not everyone in Atlas is purely evil and deserve to die, May gets furious and angrily rants at her until she realizes that the poor girl is terrified and is gripped with remorse, apologizing. Emerald accepts her apology, but warns her that if May does that again she will leave, which May accepts.
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* PainfulTransformation: May's [[spoiler:slow transformation into a grimm-human hybrid is extremely painful whenever it jumps a step. Her horns force their way out of her skull in a way that's described as similar to a literally splitting headache, her jaw feels like it's being ripped off when she grows fangs, and her blood feels like it's been replaced by ice water]].

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* OldFriendNewGender: Downplayed since May was out when they last met, but Roman fails to recognize her when they meet again four years later, since she has fully transitioned since then. He only recalls who she is when Neo reminds him.

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** Once May [[spoiler:reveals herself to the world, a ''lot'' of characters are faced with this realization. Those of her old team that didn't know, even Cinder, are surprised but realize that it makes sense in hindsight.
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* LivingEmotionalCrutch: Discussed. After [[spoiler:learning that May is responsible for the Fall of Beacon, and is in some kind of cult, Robyn points out that at this point May would have to rely entirely on whoever is manipulating her for emotional support, since literally everyone else hates her]].
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* ShutUpHannibal: During their confrontation, May accuses [[spoiler:Cinder of having killed Amarillo in revenge and lied to herself to justify it. Cinder shoots back that those accusations are pretty rich coming from the woman who caused the Fall of Beacon and works for Salem]].
-->'''Cinder:''' At least when I got my payback I didn’t leave a river of blood.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler:May and Pyrrha being soul bonded]] is foreshadowed heavily, starting from the first fight between May and Qrow; When May overtaxes her maiden powers, she sees flashes of green light, just like [[spoiler:the lighting in Amber's vault]]. During the fight on top of Beacon tower, May gets pain in her heel, [[spoiler:where Pyrrha just took an arrow]]. When Pyrrha receives a [[spoiler:gift from Ironwood, her immediate reaction is anger and resentment]]. Finally, May and Pyrrha's [[spoilre:auras both seem to decrease randomly, almost like if they had been in a fight, which is handily explained when it turns out that their auras are linked]].
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* SinsOfOurFathers: The Fall of Beacon causes Atlas' already bad transphobia to flare up, to the point where any trans atlesian are treated as the next international terrorist.
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** In chapter 18, May learns that [[spoiler:Atlas experimented on her semblance to develop a way to counter it, and Cinder can see her even when she's invisible as a result]].

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* FunWithAcronyms: As per tradition. May's fake team when infiltrating beacon is DENM (Denim, May's fake name is Daisy Shepherd). May and Emerald also mention the previous winners of the Vytal tournament, teams VLHL ([[Myth/NorseMythology Valhalla]]) and SPHR (Sapphire).

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As per tradition. May's fake team when infiltrating beacon is DENM (Denim, May's fake name is Daisy Shepherd). May and Emerald also mention the previous winners of the Vytal tournament, teams VLHL ([[Myth/NorseMythology Valhalla]]) and SPHR (Sapphire).(Sapphire).
** When Ruby and team JNPR go on their treck across Mistral, they settle on the team name PLANR (Planar). Other suggestions include RRNNJ (Orange), which Jaune considered too confusing, and RRAVN (Raven), which Ruby objected to because of her stepmom.

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* BattleInTheRain: [[spoiler:May and Cinder's long-awaited reunion]] in chapter 18 takes place in a ruined town in Anima during a rainstorm. For extra drama points, one of the combatants is revealed in a flash of lightning. The rain is actually a hindrance to May, who's semblance is less effective when someone can see the outline where the rain enters her bubble. [[spoiler:Not that it matters, since Cinder can see her anyway]].



* DangerousForbiddenTechnique: The night before [[spoiler:the Fall of Beacon and during the Fall itself, May several times push her maiden powers far beyond what they would usually be capable of, though each time she experiences pain and nausea. The long-term consequences of this are yet to become clear]].

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* DangerousForbiddenTechnique: The night before [[spoiler:the Fall of Beacon DangerousForbiddenTechnique:
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and [[spoiler:Pyrrha]] can overtax their maiden powers, but doing so causes them abnormal exhaustion and even cause them to hallucinate. [[spoiler:It's eventually revealed that when they do this they are drawing on each ''others''' maiden powers]].
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during her fight with [[spoiler:Cinder, May gets desperate enough to cross the Fall itself, May several times push GodzillaThreshold and draw on her maiden powers far beyond what they would usually be capable of, though each time she experiences pain and nausea. The long-term consequences of this are yet to become clear]].grimm possession, turning her into a violently savage grimm-human hybrid]].


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* ExtraLongEpisode: Chapter 18 clocks in at over 18 400 words, making it the longest single chapter in the entire continuity, and the longest chapter Asheskies has ever written according to her author's notes. Roughly a third of that consists of [[spoiler:May and Cinder's fight]].


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* PsychicLink: More like a psychic ''chain'';
** After May acquires the first half of the Maiden powers, Salem offers to create a link between them so she can reach May at any time. [[spoiler:The link is actually with the Doppler possessing May]].
** [[spoiler:May and Pyrrha, as a result of both having parts of the single Fall Maiden powers, have their auras and souls linked. In addition to occasionally and unonsciously sharing thoughts and feelings, this also means that they can draw on each others' maiden powers, though doing so exhausts them, and their auras are linked in such a way that when one goes down, the other goes down the same amount. Ozpin worries that the eventual outcome of this will be that one entirely consumes the other, or that they will merge into a single entity similar to Ozma's reincarnations]].
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* RuleOfSymbolism: Doloma, the weapon May uses while infiltrating beacon, is described as a "Poor almost-heir that died in the arena", "Usurped before it could ever grow", and "Good riddance". Which can be accurately described as May's view on herself as she was back in Atlas.
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* BreakHisHeartToSaveHim: Pyrrha denies her feelings for Jaune in part because she knows that [[sopiler:as fall maiden]], she will always be in danger, and doesn't want to drag Jaune into that with her.
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* AwkwardSilenceEntrance: Lil' miss Malachite demands that May tell her name as insurance. The entire bar falls silent when May pulls of her hood and reveals that she's May Marigold.


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* FiveSecondForeshadowing: When May receives a letter asking for a reunion, she initially assumes it's from the dead Juni Syntrichia. Then the letter uses military time (Eighteen-hundred hours), revealing even before she hears the signature that it's from [[spoiler:Cinder Rhodes]].


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* InformationBroker: Like in the show, Lil' Miss Malachite is a mistrali crime lord who runs an extensive spynetwork across Mistral and beyond. May goes to her to get information about Vernal and the Branwen tribe, though Malachite also passes along a message [[spoiler:from Cinder, asking for a reunion]].
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* CityNoir: Mantle and Mistral Below both have a reputation as cities of constant rain. May notes that it's a misnomer, but not entirely inaccurate; Mistral Below is in a dark ravine along the coast, making it rain more than normal there and the darkness makes the rain feel more oppressive, while Mantle's poor heating grid means that snow only melts into rain, compared to Atlas, which is completely climate controlled.

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