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* NotInFrontOfTheKid: In "Health Kicked", Luna and Sam seductively quip about "Luna-cising", only for Lori to remind them there are children present.
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The fanfic was originally posted on Website/FanFictionDotNet, but ended up being taken down after nearly 2000 reviews. It was subsequently reposted on ''Website/DeviantArt'' before the author's account got deactivated (although Chapters 1-129 are still readable there.) The fanfic has been reposted on {{Website/Wattpad}}, {{Platform/Wattpad}}, only to get deleted there, too. Now it's reposted on ''Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn''; you can read this fanfic (starting from Chapter 130) [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/3628831 here]].
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** "Suite and Sour" explains that the reason Rita didn't stop Ruth from bossing the Loud siblings around was because she didn't know due to being busy talking with her the whole time, and that the reason Luna and Lily got grounded alongside their siblings was because Luna took over a band and had them change the music not realising it was a wedding and Lily wandered off and caused chaos as her siblings tried to search for her. It also reveals that the Loud parents really were just SkinnyDipping and not [[TwoPersonPoolParty anything worse]], not that this wasn't gross enough to their kids when they found out.
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* BrainBleach: The kids all have this reaction (besides feeling like their efforts in making their own spa were AllForNothing) when watching "Suite and Sour" and finding out the ''real'' reason they got kicked out of the suite: their parents went skinny-dipping.
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* BrainBleach: The kids all have this reaction reaction, namely they wish they hadn't seen it, Lincoln passes out, Lucy tries to exorcise it from her mind, and most of them throw up (besides feeling like their efforts in making their own spa were AllForNothing) when watching "Suite and Sour" and finding out the ''real'' reason they got kicked out of the suite: their parents went skinny-dipping.
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* ContinuityNod: Quite a lot of it.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Downplayed. The fanfiction is rated Teen, and occasional profanity and mentions of dark themes are employed. This is mitigated, however, as the focus is on the characters learning from their past mistakes.
* DeadpanSnarker: Lincoln employs [[TookALevelInCynic increasingly]] snarky responses to watching his sisters messing up and interfering with his life.
* DeadpanSnarker: Lincoln employs [[TookALevelInCynic increasingly]] snarky responses to watching his sisters messing up and interfering with his life.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: DarkFic: Downplayed. The fanfiction is rated Teen, and occasional profanity and mentions of dark themes are employed. This is mitigated, however, as the focus is on the characters learning from their past mistakes.
*DeadpanSnarker: DeadpanSnarker:
** Lincoln employs [[TookALevelInCynic increasingly]] snarky responses to watching his sisters messing up and interfering with his life.
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** Lincoln employs [[TookALevelInCynic increasingly]] snarky responses to watching his sisters messing up and interfering with his life.
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** Hector and Carl wouldn't stoop to Flip's level of swindling.
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** Hector and Carl Carl, despite being greedy and in the latter's case, a ConMan, wouldn't stoop to Flip's level of swindling.
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** Even Lana is really disgusted upon finding out that Lisa installed cameras in the bathroom.
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** Even Lana [[ThePigPen Lana]] is really disgusted upon finding out that Lisa installed cameras in the bathroom.
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* {{Facepalm}}: When Leni, on the screen or in the room, says something stupid, this tends to be the collective reaction.
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* {{Facepalm}}: When Leni, on the screen or in the room, says something stupid, this the other characters putting their palms to their faces tends to be the collective reaction.
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** In "Head Poet's Anxiety", when onscreen!Luan tells Lucy about having thick skin, an unamused Lincoln wonders where that thick skin was when he brought up hers and the other sisters' critics, mentioning the events of "The Taunting Hour".
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** In "Head Poet's Anxiety", when onscreen!Luan onscreen Luan tells Lucy about having thick skin, an unamused Lincoln wonders where that thick skin was when he brought up hers and the other sisters' critics, mentioning the events of "The Taunting Hour".
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** The Loud siblings sure like burping.
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** The Loud siblings sure like burping. During the meal breaks, of all the Louds, Lincoln, Lynn, Lana, and Luna burp loudly the most. Luan also burps in ''Last Meal Before Bed'' and Lola lets out her biggest burp from ''Come Sale Away'' in ''Pizza Time''.
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** During the meal breaks, of all the Louds, Lincoln, Lynn, Lana, and Luna burp loudly the most. Of all the non-Louds, Sid burps a few times as well.
** Luan burps in ''Last Meal Before Bed''.
** Lola lets out her biggest burp from ''Come Sale Away'' in ''Pizza Time''
** Luan burps in ''Last Meal Before Bed''.
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** During the meal breaks, of all the Louds, Lincoln, Lynn, Lana, and Luna burp loudly the most. Of all the non-Louds, Sid burps a few times during the meal breaks as well.
** Luan burps in ''Last Meal Before Bed''.
** Lola lets out her biggest burp from ''Come Sale Away'' in ''Pizza Time''well.
** Luan burps in ''Last Meal Before Bed''.
** Lola lets out her biggest burp from ''Come Sale Away'' in ''Pizza Time''
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* HorrifyingTheHorror: Even Lola and the Junior Morticians' Club members get unsettled by Lincoln's nightmare in ''A Tale of Two Tables''.
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* HorrifyingTheHorror: Even Lola [[BrattyHalfPint Lola]] and the Junior Morticians' Club members get unsettled by Lincoln's nightmare in ''A Tale of Two Tables''.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:Lynn feels this way after their friends sever ties with them at the end of ''No Such Luck Part 2''.]]
* MyGreatestFailure: The Louds consider the events of "No Such Luck" as this.
* MyGreatestFailure: The Louds consider the events of "No Such Luck" as this.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:Lynn feels this way wracked with guilt after their friends sever ties with them at the end of ''No Such Luck Part 2''.]]
* %%* MyGreatestFailure: The Louds consider the events of "No Such Luck" as this.
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* {{Main/Omniglot}}:
** Lincoln is revealed to have mastered these languages besides English: German, Dutch, French, Spanish, Chinese, Thai, and Korean.
** Lori has also mastered Spanish.
*** Lincoln and Lori were taught Spanish by the Casagrandes (mainly Rosa) so they could connect with them more.
** Lincoln is revealed to have mastered these languages besides English: German, Dutch, French, Spanish, Chinese, Thai, and Korean.
** Lori has also mastered Spanish.
*** Lincoln and Lori were taught Spanish by the Casagrandes (mainly Rosa) so they could connect with them more.
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* {{Main/Omniglot}}:
**{{Omniglot}}: Lincoln is revealed to have mastered these languages besides English: German, Dutch, French, Spanish, Chinese, Thai, and Korean.
** Lori has also mastered Spanish.
*** Lincoln and Lori were taught Spanish by the Casagrandes (mainly Rosa) so they could connect with them more.Korean.
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** Lori has also mastered Spanish.
*** Lincoln and Lori were taught Spanish by the Casagrandes (mainly Rosa) so they could connect with them more.
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--> '''Fic!Lincoln:''' "Ugh! Lynn and her superstitions! As long as she thinks I'm bad luck, I'm doomed."
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--> '''Fic!Lincoln:''' '''Onscreen Lincoln:''' "Ugh! Lynn and her superstitions! As long as she thinks I'm bad luck, I'm doomed."
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* SheCleansUpNicely: The cast, even Lola herself, thinks this about Lana in "Toads and Tiaras".
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* TemptingFate: In ''Last Meal Before Bed'', Rita wonders out loud what Season 2 has to offer. Oh Rita, you have no idea…
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* TemptingFate: In ''Last Meal Before Bed'', Rita wonders out loud what Season 2 has to offer. Oh Rita, you have no idea…idea…[[note]]Season 2 contains the infamous episodes "Brawl in the Family" and "No Such Luck"[[/note]]
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* YouMonster: [[spoiler:In ''No Such Luck Part 2'', some deliver this to the Louds that aren't Lincoln and Lily.]]
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** In "Room With A Feud", Lincoln tells Ronnie Anne that Lisa thankfully came up with a cure for his brain at the time, but he remained bald for a month. Luckily they still had plenty of leftover wigs that no one knew the difference.
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** In "Yes Man", [[spoiler:Lincoln's sisters felt guilty about preventing him from getting his SMOOCH tickets and pulled him aside in the backyard and tried to give him the money, only for Lincoln to refuse and let them keep it as he thought they earned it their way. Also revealed is how they got the concert for Lincoln set up. Lana helped the girls pick out the supplies from the hardware store for the stage, Luna did the lighting, and Leni and Lola worked on the the outfits. Mr.Grouse was not bothered by the noises as the Louds let him know and he wore the Noise-B-Gone earbuds. It is further elaborated on the reason why Lincoln did not notice any of this going on was that Rita and Lynn Sr. took him to Dairyland as a distraction and to cheer him up. And after that they went to the comic shop to get some new issues of Ace Savvy comics. Lincoln was so invested in them that he never noticed the stage in front of the house. And Rita was the one who slipped the V.I.B note under the door.]]
** In "Fool's Paradise", It's revealed that Luan caught up to Vanzilla by sneaking behind the trees after the family dropped her off and when they stopped at a gas station to refill, she snuck under the van and strapped herself to the underbody. The Louds also lost a ton of money from having to buy the land for the fake clown camp as well as rigging up the motel with the pranks but Lisa's grant money from New Guinea and Czeckloslovakia helped shoulder the losses. And when Rita found out Lynn Sr. played a part Luan's prank, she made him sleep on the couch for a whole week.
** In "Fool's Paradise", It's revealed that Luan caught up to Vanzilla by sneaking behind the trees after the family dropped her off and when they stopped at a gas station to refill, she snuck under the van and strapped herself to the underbody. The Louds also lost a ton of money from having to buy the land for the fake clown camp as well as rigging up the motel with the pranks but Lisa's grant money from New Guinea and Czeckloslovakia helped shoulder the losses. And when Rita found out Lynn Sr. played a part Luan's prank, she made him sleep on the couch for a whole week.
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** In "Yes Man", [[spoiler:Lincoln's sisters felt guilty about preventing him from getting his SMOOCH tickets and pulled him aside in the backyard and tried to give him the money, only for Lincoln to refuse and let them keep it as he thought they earned it their way. Also revealed is how they got the concert for Lincoln set up. Lana helped the girls pick out the supplies from the hardware store for the stage, Luna did the lighting, and Leni and Lola worked on the the outfits. Mr. Grouse was not bothered by the noises as the Louds let him know and he wore the Noise-B-Gone earbuds. It is further elaborated on the reason why Lincoln did not notice any of this going on was that Rita and Lynn Sr. took him to Dairyland as a distraction and to cheer him up. And after that they went to the comic shop to get some new issues of Ace Savvy comics. Lincoln was so invested in them that he never noticed the stage in front of the house. And Rita was the one who slipped the V.I.B note under the door.]]
** In "Fool's Paradise", It's revealed that Luan caught up to Vanzilla by sneaking behind the trees after the family dropped her off and when they stopped at a gas station to refill, she snuck under the van and strapped herself to the underbody. The Louds also lost a ton of money from having to buy the land for the fake clown camp as well as rigging up the motel with the pranks but Lisa's grant money from New Guinea andCzeckloslovakia Czechoslovakia helped shoulder the losses. And when Rita found out Lynn Sr. played a part Luan's prank, she made him sleep on the couch for a whole week.
** In "Fool's Paradise", It's revealed that Luan caught up to Vanzilla by sneaking behind the trees after the family dropped her off and when they stopped at a gas station to refill, she snuck under the van and strapped herself to the underbody. The Louds also lost a ton of money from having to buy the land for the fake clown camp as well as rigging up the motel with the pranks but Lisa's grant money from New Guinea and
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* BilingualBackfire: In ''The Loudest Mission: Relative Chaos'' some people, particulary Carl and CJ tend to tease the relationship of Lincoln and Ronnie Anne in not only English, but Spanish as well, however unbeknowst to the majority of the audience Lincoln has revealed himself to able to speak in Spanish and easily roast Carl in the process.
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* BilingualBackfire: In ''The Loudest Mission: Relative Chaos'' some people, particulary particularly Carl and CJ tend to tease the relationship of Lincoln and Ronnie Anne in not only English, but Spanish as well, however unbeknowst unbeknownst to the majority of the audience Lincoln has revealed himself to able to speak in Spanish and easily roast Carl in the process.
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** The events of "No Such Luck" are mentioned throughout the fic, but outside Joe and the Louds themselves, only Clyde, Ronnie Anne, Bobby, and Mr. Grouse seem to know what's going on. And when Chapter 76 finally came out...
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* TemptingFate: In ''Last Meal Before Bed'', Rita wonders out loud what Season 2 has to offer. Oh Rita, you have no idea...
* ThereIsAnother: Besides Clyde, Ronnie Anne, Bobby, and Mr. Grouse, there is a fifth person not in the audience who knows about the 'luck' incident. That person is revealed to be [[spoiler: Flip.]]
* ThereIsAnother: Besides Clyde, Ronnie Anne, Bobby, and Mr. Grouse, there is a fifth person not in the audience who knows about the 'luck' incident. That person is revealed to be [[spoiler: Flip.]]
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* TemptingFate: In ''Last Meal Before Bed'', Rita wonders out loud what Season 2 has to offer. Oh Rita, you have no idea...
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* ThereIsAnother: Besides Clyde, Ronnie Anne, Bobby, and Mr. Grouse, there is a fifthperson person, not in the audience audience, who knows about the 'luck' incident. That person is revealed to be [[spoiler: Flip.]]
* ThereIsAnother: Besides Clyde, Ronnie Anne, Bobby, and Mr. Grouse, there is a fifth
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* TranquilFury: In ''Cereal Offender'', while she doesn’t raise her voice, Rita is very angry at her daughters when he finds out that ''they'' were the real reason the family was banned from the grocery store and not ''Lincoln'' like she had assumed.
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* TranquilFury: In ''Cereal Offender'', while she doesn’t raise her voice, Rita is very angry at her daughters when he she finds out that ''they'' were the real reason the family was banned from the grocery store and not ''Lincoln'' like she had assumed.
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* TranquilFury: In ''Cereal Offender'', while she doesn’t raise her voice, Rita is very angry at her daughters when he finds out that ''they'' were the real reason the family was banned from the grocery store and not ''Lincoln'' like she had assumed.
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The fanfic was originally posted on Website/FanFictionDotNet, but ended up being taken down after nearly 2000 reviews. It was subsequently reposted on ''Website/DeviantArt'' before the author's account got deactivated. The fanfic has been reposted on {{Website/Wattpad}}, only to get deleted there, too. Now it's reposted on ''Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn''; you can read this fanfic [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/3628831 here]].
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The fanfic was originally posted on Website/FanFictionDotNet, but ended up being taken down after nearly 2000 reviews. It was subsequently reposted on ''Website/DeviantArt'' before the author's account got deactivated. deactivated (although Chapters 1-129 are still readable there.) The fanfic has been reposted on {{Website/Wattpad}}, only to get deleted there, too. Now it's reposted on ''Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn''; you can read this fanfic (starting from Chapter 130) [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/3628831 here]].
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** "Not a Loud" made plenty of others think that the Louds had disowned Lincoln again.
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** The events of "No Such Luck" are mentioned throughout the fic, but outside Joe and the Louds themselves, only Clyde, Ronnie Anne, Bobby, and Mr. Grouse seem to know what's going on. And when episode Chapter 76 finally came out...
* OfficialCouple: [[spoiler:Lincoln and Ronnie Anne]] as of "Relative Chaos".
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** Lincoln is revealed to have mastered these languages next to English: German, Dutch, French, Spanish, Chinese and Thai.
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* TakeThatKiss: Lynn gives one to Lincoln during their match in episode 58.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: There are plenty in this fic to go around, and the "No Such Luck"-related chapters are no exception. But, one given not to nor from the Louds (directly) is from "No Such Luck Part 1", where Maria and Carlos give one to Rosa for still thinking that Lincoln was bad luck even after he admitted he was lying.
--> '''Fic!Lincoln:''' "Ugh! Lynn and her superstitions! As long as she thinks I'm bad luck, I'm doomed."
--> '''Joey:''' “More like as long as everyone believes this load of crap.”
--> '''Rosa:''' “Well maybe cleansing his aura could help.”
--> '''Maria:''' “[[RageBreakingPoint Alright, that’s it!]] Mom, Carlos and I were gonna wait until after the episode is over. But now it looks like we have to talk ''now''.”
--> '''Rosa:''' “Aye! What’s gotten into you two?”
--> '''Maria:''' “Mom, look, I know you believe in superstitions and all of that stuff, especially since your idol is Ernesto Estrella.”
--> '''Carlos:''' “But this here is ''beyond'' unacceptable. You saw yourself that Lincoln faked being bad luck so he could get out of his sisters’ activities so he could have a long-deserved break. There was no bad luck to begin with.”
--> '''Maria:''' “As well as to the fact, they all kicked Lincoln, an 11-year-old minor, out of their house like he was some sort of parasite all because they believed in paranoid beliefs started up by Lynn Jr. Nothing justifies doing that to someone, a child no less.”
--> '''Rosa:''' “Well… I guess you are right…”
--> '''Carlos:''' “This should also be an eye opener for us as well, especially you Mama.”
--> '''Rosa:''' “¿Que?”
--> '''Carlos:''' “Remember what went down several months back when Estrella said Great Lakes City was cursed? And when things started going berserk at the Loud House when we stayed there?”
--> '''Maria:''' “You thought that we were the bad luck wherever we went and we should go right to the forest to live there so we wouldn't cause any harm to anyone else.”
--> '''Carlos:''' “But think about it this way Mom. What if Ernesto or some horoscope told you that one of your own family members is bad luck, causing a dark aura over our home? Would you deliberately kick them out of our building, or even the city no less?”
--> '''Rosa:''' “No! No, I would never do such a thing! That would be muy horrible!”
--> '''Maria:''' “[[ArmorPiercingQuestion Then how would what we saw on screen be any different than that scenario?]]”
--> '''Rosa:''' “It… it wouldn’t… Madre mia, I was a fool to believe-”
--> '''Maria:''' “It’s ok for you to still enjoy stuff like horoscopes or whatever Ernesto has to offer.”
--> '''Carlos:''' “As long as it doesn't interfere with your life, especially with your loved ones.”
--> '''Rosa:''' “Aye, you’re right.”
--> '''Fic!Lincoln:''' "Ugh! Lynn and her superstitions! As long as she thinks I'm bad luck, I'm doomed."
--> '''Joey:''' “More like as long as everyone believes this load of crap.”
--> '''Rosa:''' “Well maybe cleansing his aura could help.”
--> '''Maria:''' “[[RageBreakingPoint Alright, that’s it!]] Mom, Carlos and I were gonna wait until after the episode is over. But now it looks like we have to talk ''now''.”
--> '''Rosa:''' “Aye! What’s gotten into you two?”
--> '''Maria:''' “Mom, look, I know you believe in superstitions and all of that stuff, especially since your idol is Ernesto Estrella.”
--> '''Carlos:''' “But this here is ''beyond'' unacceptable. You saw yourself that Lincoln faked being bad luck so he could get out of his sisters’ activities so he could have a long-deserved break. There was no bad luck to begin with.”
--> '''Maria:''' “As well as to the fact, they all kicked Lincoln, an 11-year-old minor, out of their house like he was some sort of parasite all because they believed in paranoid beliefs started up by Lynn Jr. Nothing justifies doing that to someone, a child no less.”
--> '''Rosa:''' “Well… I guess you are right…”
--> '''Carlos:''' “This should also be an eye opener for us as well, especially you Mama.”
--> '''Rosa:''' “¿Que?”
--> '''Carlos:''' “Remember what went down several months back when Estrella said Great Lakes City was cursed? And when things started going berserk at the Loud House when we stayed there?”
--> '''Maria:''' “You thought that we were the bad luck wherever we went and we should go right to the forest to live there so we wouldn't cause any harm to anyone else.”
--> '''Carlos:''' “But think about it this way Mom. What if Ernesto or some horoscope told you that one of your own family members is bad luck, causing a dark aura over our home? Would you deliberately kick them out of our building, or even the city no less?”
--> '''Rosa:''' “No! No, I would never do such a thing! That would be muy horrible!”
--> '''Maria:''' “[[ArmorPiercingQuestion Then how would what we saw on screen be any different than that scenario?]]”
--> '''Rosa:''' “It… it wouldn’t… Madre mia, I was a fool to believe-”
--> '''Maria:''' “It’s ok for you to still enjoy stuff like horoscopes or whatever Ernesto has to offer.”
--> '''Carlos:''' “As long as it doesn't interfere with your life, especially with your loved ones.”
--> '''Rosa:''' “Aye, you’re right.”
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: The events of "No Such Luck" are mentioned throughout the fic, but outside Joe and the Louds themselves, only Clyde, Ronnie Anne, Bobby, and Mr. Grouse seem to know what's going on. And when episode 76 finally came out...
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** The events of "No Such Luck" are mentioned throughout the fic, but outside Joe and the Louds themselves, only Clyde, Ronnie Anne, Bobby, and Mr. Grouse seem to know what's going on. And when episode 76 finally cameout...out...
** In "Head Poet's Anxiety", when onscreen!Luan tells Lucy about having thick skin, an unamused Lincoln wonders where that thick skin was when he brought up hers and the other sisters' critics, mentioning the events of "The Taunting Hour".
** The events of "No Such Luck" are mentioned throughout the fic, but outside Joe and the Louds themselves, only Clyde, Ronnie Anne, Bobby, and Mr. Grouse seem to know what's going on. And when episode 76 finally came
** In "Head Poet's Anxiety", when onscreen!Luan tells Lucy about having thick skin, an unamused Lincoln wonders where that thick skin was when he brought up hers and the other sisters' critics, mentioning the events of "The Taunting Hour".
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Lincoln vehemently declares he won't let ''anyone'' mess with his younger sisters, especially Lucy and Lily due to their sensitiveness. He even shakes his fist at the junior Mortician's Club when it looks like they're about to make fun of Lucy.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Lincoln vehemently declares he won't let ''anyone'' mess with his younger sisters, especially Lucy and Lily due to their sensitiveness. He even shakes his fist at the junior Mortician's Junior Morticians' Club when it looks like they're about to make fun of Lucy.
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* HorrifyingTheHorror: Even Lola and the junior Mortician's Club members get unsettled by Lincoln's nightmare in ''A Tale of Two Tables''.
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* HorrifyingTheHorror: Even Lola and the junior Mortician's Junior Morticians' Club members get unsettled by Lincoln's nightmare in ''A Tale of Two Tables''.
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*** [[spoiler: Lucy: The Mortician's Club scorn her, telling her that while they enjoy dark stuff, what she did was just cold-blooded, and also tell her that if she isn't portrayed in a better light, she's out of the club and their lives. In addition, Rocky tells her that he thought she was cool, [[WhamLine but now ponders if he was wrong]].]]
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*** [[spoiler: Lucy: The Mortician's Morticians' Club scorn her, telling her that while they enjoy dark stuff, what she did was just cold-blooded, and also tell her that if she isn't portrayed in a better light, she's out of the club and their lives. In addition, Rocky tells her that he thought she was cool, [[WhamLine but now ponders if he was wrong]].]]
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* CoversAlwaysLie: Some of the title cards suggests events that never happened in the episode. For example:
** "Come Sale Away" made Rita think that Lincoln got his ear pierced, and made Rosa think Lincoln was being sold.
** "Raw Deal" made everyone but the Louds think that Lincoln died in the episode.
** "The Old and the Restless" made Ronnie Anne think that Lisa turned Lincoln into an old man.
** "Come Sale Away" made Rita think that Lincoln got his ear pierced, and made Rosa think Lincoln was being sold.
** "Raw Deal" made everyone but the Louds think that Lincoln died in the episode.
** "The Old and the Restless" made Ronnie Anne think that Lisa turned Lincoln into an old man.
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** In "ARGGH You For Real", when Lincoln teams up with Hunter to fake the haunting in the cemetery house to restore Clyde's faith in the series, it is revealed that Clyde knew Lincoln and Hunter were faking it but played along with it because he was touched by the efforts Hunter went to make it up to him. The day after they told the truth to each other and accepted that ARGGH! is just for the props but they still enjoy the special effects that come out of said show.
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** In "ARGGH "ARGGH! You For Real", Real?", when Lincoln teams up with Hunter to fake the haunting in the cemetery house to restore Clyde's faith in the series, it is revealed that Clyde knew Lincoln and Hunter were faking it but played along with it because he was touched by the efforts Hunter went to make it up to him. The day after they told the truth to each other and accepted that ARGGH! is just for the props but they still enjoy the special effects that come out of said show.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: The events of "No Such Luck" are mentioned throughout the fic, but outside Joe and the Louds themselves, only Clyde, Ronnie Anne, Bobby, and Mr. Grouse seem to know what's going on. And when episode 77 finally came out...
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: The events of "No Such Luck" are mentioned throughout the fic, but outside Joe and the Louds themselves, only Clyde, Ronnie Anne, Bobby, and Mr. Grouse seem to know what's going on. And when episode 77 76 finally came out...
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* HealingHands: Joe's powers ensure that no one will get eyesight damage from watching the episodes. [[spoiler:He also heals Clyde's slash wound after the Harvester is defeated.]]
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* HealingHands: Joe's powers ensure that no one will get eyesight damage from watching the episodes. [[spoiler:He also heals Clyde's slash wound and Paula's leg after the Harvester is defeated.]]
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: The Bratty Kid in "Cereal Offender" is related to Carol Pingrey as her little brother named Connor Pingrey. This is a clear reference to the fanfic ''Fanfic/WhatIsAPersonWorth''. Also, the goth girl named Cassy in "Funny Business" is her little sister.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: The Bratty Kid in "Cereal Offender" is related to Carol Pingrey as her little brother named Connor Pingrey. This is a clear reference to the fanfic ''Fanfic/WhatIsAPersonWorth''. Also, the goth girl named Cassy in "Funny Business" is her Carol's little sister.
* SayMyName: It's harder to find a chapter where someone ''doesn't'' yell someone else's name in anger at least once.
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* ShipperOnDeck: ''All'' (''maybe'' Rusty, Zach, and Liam) the kids and teens in the audience (as well as Rosa) ship Lincoln/Ronnie Anne, especially the Loud sisters, Carlota, Sid, and Nikki.
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* ShipperOnDeck: ''All'' (''maybe'' except Rusty, Zach, and Liam) the kids and teens in the audience (as well as Rosa) ship Lincoln/Ronnie Anne, especially the Loud sisters, Carlota, Sid, and Nikki.
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* WhatIf: Joe sometimes tells the cast about fanfics of some of the episodes to show them how bad things could have gone. For example: "What if one of Luan's pranks nearly got Lincoln killed?" or "What if things at the Sadie Hawkins dance didn't work out in the end?"
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* WhatIf: Joe sometimes tells the cast about fanfics of some of the episodes to show them how bad things could have gone. For example: "What if one of Luan's pranks nearly got Lincoln killed?" or [[Fanfic/ANightToForget "What if things at the Sadie Hawkins dance didn't work out in the end?"end?"]]
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* GreenEyedMonster: Averted (except for Ronnie Anne and Bobby) in "Study Muffin", as the other sisters hadn't met their significant others yet.
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* GreenEyedMonster: Averted (except for Ronnie Anne and Bobby) in "Study Muffin", as the other sisters hadn't met their significant others yet.
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* HealingHands: Joe's powers ensure that no one will get eyesight damage from watching the episodes.
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* HealingHands: Joe's powers ensure that no one will get eyesight damage from watching the episodes. [[spoiler:He also heals Clyde's slash wound after the Harvester is defeated.]]
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* ImagineSpotting: Justified, as all of the events of an episode are shown on the screen. When the characters' thoughts and secrets are laid bare for the whole cast to see, a backlash is all but inevitable. Joe even enforces this in "The Price of Admission" when Lincoln begs him not to reveal what happened at the cinema.
--> '''Joe:''' (through a note) "Sorry, can't help you."
--> '''Joe:''' (through a note) "Sorry, can't help you."
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* WhatIf: Joe sometimes tells the cast about fanfics of some of the episodes to show them how bad things could have gone. For example: "What if one of Luan's pranks nearly got Lincoln killed?" or "What if things at the Sadie Hawkins dance didn't work out in the end?"
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* Facepalm: When Leni, on the screen or in the room, says something stupid, this tends to be the collective reaction.
* Foreshadowing: The events of "No Such Luck" are mentioned throughout the fic, but outside Joe and the Louds themselves, only Clyde, Ronnie Anne, Bobby, and Mr. Grouse seem to know what's going on. And when episode 77 finally came out...
* Foreshadowing: The events of "No Such Luck" are mentioned throughout the fic, but outside Joe and the Louds themselves, only Clyde, Ronnie Anne, Bobby, and Mr. Grouse seem to know what's going on. And when episode 77 finally came out...
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* Facepalm: {{Facepalm}}: When Leni, on the screen or in the room, says something stupid, this tends to be the collective reaction.
*Foreshadowing: {{Foreshadowing}}: The events of "No Such Luck" are mentioned throughout the fic, but outside Joe and the Louds themselves, only Clyde, Ronnie Anne, Bobby, and Mr. Grouse seem to know what's going on. And when episode 77 finally came out...
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