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* WhamEpisode: The Storm Trilogy, acting as the mid-volume finale of Volume 3. Through three chapters it is revealed that [[spoiler: Licorice has successfully infiltrated New Beacon and stolen the Relic of Choice, the Initiates now have access to all four relics, much of the city of Vale is now ruined, and Verse loses his only link to his mother.]]
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* WhamEpisode: Several.
** Chapter 13 shows the existence of the [[BigBadEnsemble Jericho Initiates]].
** Chapter 15 shows that [[KillEmAll all of the cast of RWBY proper have died in the war prior to the story.]]
** Chapter 20 reveals that Verse is [[spoiler: a Faunus]] and that he comes from a village that was destroyed. It also [[spoiler: introduces a mysterious character named Centani, and shows that Verse can speak top his deceased sister Sky. These may be linked, as they happen at nearly the same time.]]
** The Volume 2 finale, where resident AlphaBitch Diamond [[spoiler: has a [[HeelFaceTurn change of heart]] and turns against the Underground. This in turn allows most of them to be either killed or imprisoned. Except for Cobalt.]]
**The Storm Trilogy, acting as the mid-volume finale of Volume 3. Through three chapters it is revealed that [[spoiler: Licorice has successfully infiltrated New Beacon and stolen the Relic of Choice, the Initiates now have access to all four relics, much of the city of Vale is now ruined, and Verse loses his only link to his mother.]]
** Chapter 13 shows the existence of the [[BigBadEnsemble Jericho Initiates]].
** Chapter 15 shows that [[KillEmAll all of the cast of RWBY proper have died in the war prior to the story.]]
** Chapter 20 reveals that Verse is [[spoiler: a Faunus]] and that he comes from a village that was destroyed. It also [[spoiler: introduces a mysterious character named Centani, and shows that Verse can speak top his deceased sister Sky. These may be linked, as they happen at nearly the same time.]]
** The Volume 2 finale, where resident AlphaBitch Diamond [[spoiler: has a [[HeelFaceTurn change of heart]] and turns against the Underground. This in turn allows most of them to be either killed or imprisoned. Except for Cobalt.]]
**The Storm Trilogy, acting as the mid-volume finale of Volume 3. Through three chapters it is revealed that [[spoiler: Licorice has successfully infiltrated New Beacon and stolen the Relic of Choice, the Initiates now have access to all four relics, much of the city of Vale is now ruined, and Verse loses his only link to his mother.]]
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** Chapter 61 follows it up immensely. First, the audience learn s the extent of [[spoiler: Hibiscus's injuries. She's been permanently deafened and missing her hand. ]] Then, Team CRNS [[spoiler: pulls a ScrewThisImOuttaHere, leaving behind the life of huntresses forever.]] Next, Verse shows that he's been working on repairing his cloak and a new design is revealed. Lastly, [[spoiler: Qara kills Licorice after [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness she brings the relic of Choice, ]] leaving the Initiates and pitting himself against Baki.]]
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** Chapter 61 follows it up immensely. First, the audience learn s learns the extent of [[spoiler: Hibiscus's injuries. She's been permanently deafened and missing her hand. ]] Then, Team CRNS [[spoiler: pulls a ScrewThisImOuttaHere, leaving behind the life of huntresses forever.]] Next, Verse shows that he's been working on repairing his cloak and a new design is revealed. Lastly, Lastly, [[spoiler: Qara kills Licorice after [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness she brings the relic of Choice, ]] leaving the Initiates and pitting himself against Baki.]]
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** Chapter 61 follows it up immensely. First, the audience learn s the extent of [[spoiler; Hibiscus's injuries. She's been permanently deafened and missing her hand. ]] Then, Team CRNS [[spoiler: pulls a ScrewThisImOuttaHere, leaving behind the life of huntresses forever.]] Next, Verse skies that he's been working on repairing his cloak and a new design is revealed. Lastly, [[spoiler: Qara kills Licorice after [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness she brings the relic of Choice, ]] leaving the Initiates and pitting himself against Baki.]]
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** Chapter 61 follows it up immensely. First, the audience learn s the extent of [[spoiler; [[spoiler: Hibiscus's injuries. She's been permanently deafened and missing her hand. ]] Then, Team CRNS [[spoiler: pulls a ScrewThisImOuttaHere, leaving behind the life of huntresses forever.]] Next, Verse skies shows that he's been working on repairing his cloak and a new design is revealed. Lastly, revealed. Lastly, [[spoiler: Qara kills Licorice after [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness she brings the relic of Choice, ]] leaving the Initiates and pitting himself against Baki.]]
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-->" Once humanity was united against a common foe, they grew stronger. But it is important that as a species, they do not become complacent. Something is stirring in the air, and those who would fight for the dark are beginning to reemerge. If humanity is to survive the storm that’s headed their way, they’ll need to do so together. But heed my words. They were able to claim victory over the queen, but they will bow before a king. He is biding his time in the dark, waiting to deliver the final blow."
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* PutOnABus: At the start of Volume 4, team CRNS returns top their home to care for Hibiscus, swearing off the lifestyle of huntresses and [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere wanting no part of the war they're fighting.]]
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The story currently has three volumes of twenty chapters, and a fourth has behind as of April 9, 2018. The story can also be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12452809/1/Second-Generation on Fanfiction.net]]. The author has gone on record to state that the main version is the one on the RWBY Amino.
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The story currently has three volumes of twenty chapters, and a fourth has behind begun as of April 9, 2018. The story can also be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12452809/1/Second-Generation on Fanfiction.net]]. The author has gone on record to state that the main version is the one on the RWBY Amino.
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'''The war will be mine to win, just sit and wait. My time is at hand.'''
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The story currently has three volumes of twenty chapters, and a fourth is set to begin in has behind as of April 9, 2018. The story can also be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12452809/1/Second-Generation on Fanfiction.net]]. The author has gone on record to state that the main version is the one on the RWBY Amino.
* BigBadDuumvirate: As of Volume 4, this has been established with Qara and Baki. [[spoiler: both have two relics, and it appears that Qara dad left the Initiates, leaving the two caught in a game of Cat-and-mouse.]]
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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: In his first appearance, [[spoiler: Baki]] has a messenger sent to his death by trapping him in a room full of [[BearsAreBadNews Ursae]] who tear him to shreds.
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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: In his first appearance, [[spoiler: Baki]] has a messenger sent to his death by trapping him in a room full of [[BearsAreBadNews Ursae]] who tear him to shreds. The same later happens to [[spoiler: Licorice]] in the first chapter of volume 4.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Bright hair isn't uncommon. One simple example is Lyla, whose hair is a bright purple.
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler: Qara kills Licorice after she succeeds in bringing him the relic of Choice.]]
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler: Qara kills Licorice after she succeeds in bringing him the relic of Choice.]]
-->'''[[spoiler:Qara:]]''' [[spoiler: You can take heed in knowing that you did your part, child.]]
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* * MaskOfSanity: This is shown to be how [[spoiler: Licorice's]] semblance works. Her aura gradually corrects her mind, making her appear and act less crazy. As she loses aura, she undergoes SanitySlippage and shows more of her true AxCrazy side.
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* PhysicalGod: [[spoiler: Centrism and Jericho are Remnant's gods odd Light and Darkness, respectively.]]
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[[http://aminoapps.com/page/rwby/9025472/second-generation RWBY: Second Generation]] is an OriginalCharacter fanfiction by [[http://aminoapps.com/p/d7zv80 Verse_Warden]] about an alternate future for the world of Remnant. Set thirty years after the fall of Beacon and five years after the War of Salem, the story follows eight students enrolled in New Beacon. While there, they all get caught in a massive pileup of conspiracies of both a political and mystical nature.
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[[http://aminoapps.com/page/rwby/9025472/second-generation RWBY: Second Generation]] is an OriginalCharacter fanfiction by [[http://aminoapps.com/p/d7zv80 Verse_Warden]] about an alternate future for the world of Remnant. Set thirty years after the fall of Beacon and five years after the War of Salem, itself twenty-five years after the Fall of Beacon, the story follows eight four students enrolled in the rebuilt New Beacon. While there, they all get caught in a massive pileup of conspiracies of both a political and mystical nature.
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[[http://aminoapps.com/page/rwby/9025472/second-generation RWBY: Second Generation]] is an OriginalCharacter fanfiction by [[http://aminoapps.com/p/d7zv80 VerseWarden]] about an alternate future for the world of Remnant. Set thirty years after the fall of Beacon and five years after the War of Salem, the story follows eight students enrolled in New Beacon. While there, they all get caught in a massive pileup of conspiracies of both a political and mystical nature.
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[[http://aminoapps.com/page/rwby/9025472/second-generation RWBY: Second Generation]] is an OriginalCharacter fanfiction by [[http://aminoapps.com/p/d7zv80 VerseWarden]] Verse_Warden]] about an alternate future for the world of Remnant. Set thirty years after the fall of Beacon and five years after the War of Salem, the story follows eight students enrolled in New Beacon. While there, they all get caught in a massive pileup of conspiracies of both a political and mystical nature.
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-->" Once humanity was united against a common foe, they grew stronger. But it is important that as a species, they do not become complacent. Something is stirring in the air, and those who would fight for the dark are beginning to reemerge. If humanity is to survive the storm that’s headed their way, they’ll need to do so together. But heed my words. They were able to claim victory over the queen, but they will bow before a king. He is biding his time in the dark, waiting to deliver the final blow."
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12452809/1/Second-Generation RWBY: Second Generation]] is an OriginalCharacter fanfiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/9093647/VerseWarden VerseWarden]] about an alternate future for the world of Remnant. Set twenty-five years after the fall of Beacon and five years after the War of Salem, the story follows eight students enrolled in New Beacon. While there, they all get caught in a massive pileup of conspiracies of both a political and mystical nature.
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The story currently has three volumes of twenty chapters, and a fourth is set to begin in April 2018. The full story can be read with illustration [[http://aminoapps.com/page/rwby/9025472/second-generation here.]] Despite running on fanfiction.net, the author has gone on record to state that the main version is the one on the RWBY Amino.
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The story currently has three volumes of twenty chapters, and a fourth is set to begin in April 2018. The full story can also be read with illustration [[http://aminoapps.com/page/rwby/9025472/second-generation here.]] Despite running on [[https://www.fanfiction.net, the net/s/12452809/1/Second-Generation on Fanfiction.net]]. The author has gone on record to state that the main version is the one on the RWBY Amino.
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* WesternTerrorists: In his attack on New Beacon, Cobalt acts as this, throwing bombs and grenades everywhere. He also [[spoiler blows himself up with a suicide vest in an attempt to pull a TakingYouWithMe.]]
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* WesternTerrorists: In his attack on New Beacon, Cobalt acts as this, throwing bombs and grenades everywhere. He also [[spoiler [[spoiler: blows himself up with a suicide vest in an attempt to pull a TakingYouWithMe.]]
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Noir. Despite [[CastingAShadow his]] [[LivingShadow semblance]], his overall black and grey color scheme, and his past, he's a good guy who's fighting to protect the innocent and [[TheAtoner make up for his crimes.]]
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* DarkIsEvil: All of the Jericho Initiates use the color black in their design, and their names all reflect black in some way. Plus, when combined, the names of '''B'''aki, '''L'''icorice, '''A'''nai, and '''Q'''ara forms team '''BLAQ''' by the series team dynamics. Then there’s [[spoiler: Jericho, the actual God of Darkness who seems to be behind them.]]
** DarkIsNotEvil: Noir. Despite [[CastingAShadow his]] [[LivingShadow semblance]], his overall black and grey color scheme, and his past, he's a good guy who's fighting to protect the innocent and [[TheAtoner make up for his crimes.]]
** DarkIsNotEvil: Noir. Despite [[CastingAShadow his]] [[LivingShadow semblance]], his overall black and grey color scheme, and his past, he's a good guy who's fighting to protect the innocent and [[TheAtoner make up for his crimes.]]
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The story currently has two three volumes of twenty chapters, and a third has begun as of November 6, 2017.fourth is set to begin in April 2018. The full story can be read with illustration [[http://aminoapps.com/page/rwby/9025472/second-generation here.]] Despite running on fanfiction.net, the author has gone on record to state that the main version is the one on the RWBY Amino.
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* TheStinger: Each Volume finale has had one so far.
** Volume one had [[spoiler: Verse’s dream with Centani.]]
** Volume two had [[spoiler: Qara disintegrating Anai and Baki stealing her relic.]]
** Volume three showed [[spoiler: Centani and his brother [[DarkIsEvil Jericho]] watching over the world of Remnant, commenting about their “Champions.”]]
** Volume one had [[spoiler: Verse’s dream with Centani.]]
** Volume two had [[spoiler: Qara disintegrating Anai and Baki stealing her relic.]]
** Volume three showed [[spoiler: Centani and his brother [[DarkIsEvil Jericho]] watching over the world of Remnant, commenting about their “Champions.”]]
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** Chapter 60 has Cobalt run a full attack on New Beacon, causing damage and severely injuring [[spoiler: Hibiscus]] before finally dying himself. TheStinger reveals that [[spoiler: Verse meeting Centani wasn’t just a dream, and that he is the God of Light. In addition, Jericho, the god of darkness is shown to exist. Both gods have chosen “Champions” to represent them, with Verse representing Centani and the Initiates representing Jericho.]]
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* AllJustADream: Verse's encounter with Centani. [[spoiler: [[AmbiguousSituation Or was it?]] ]]
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* AnArmAndALeg: Twice in the volume 3 finale. [[spoiler: The first is Cobalt, who has his leg chopped off when Orion gets the drop on him. The second is Hibiscus, who has her hand burnt off in Cobalt’s [[TakingYouWithMe Explosion]]. ]]
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** At the end of the second volume, [[spoiler: Cobalt]] ran away, seemingly unscathed. By chapter 56, he’s shown [[spoiler: buying a plane ticket to Vale to settle a score with Verse.]]
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* AffectionateNickname: Team CRNS usually refers to [[CheerfulChild Hibiscus]] as “Bun.”
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** While not technicallly a battle, per se, the race between Lyla and Verse in chapter 56 ends with one, with [[spoiler: Lyla]] coming out on top. At the end of the day, [[spoiler: She]] can fly circles around [[spoiler: him]] with ease.
** While not technicallly a battle, per se, the race between Lyla and Verse in chapter 56 ends with one, with [[spoiler: Lyla]] coming out on top. At the end of the day, [[spoiler: She]] can fly circles around [[spoiler: him]] with ease.
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