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** Pyrrha's parents aren't winning any Parents of the Year award anytime soon : to uphold their high social status, they had no problem sending Pyrrha to Signal Academy against her will.
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** Pyrrha's parents aren't winning any Parents of the Year award anytime soon : soon: to uphold their high social status, they had no problem sending Pyrrha to Signal Academy against her will.
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** {{Averted}} with extreme prejudice regarding Jacques : if anything, he's even worse than in canon.
** {{Averted}} with the Madame as well, who's even worse : not only she was as horrible to her adopted daughter Cinder as she was in canon, but she also sold her two biological daughters in Mistral's underground prostitution trade.
** {{Averted}} with the Madame as well, who's even worse : not only she was as horrible to her adopted daughter Cinder as she was in canon, but she also sold her two biological daughters in Mistral's underground prostitution trade.
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** {{Averted}} with extreme prejudice regarding Jacques : Jacques: if anything, he's even worse than in canon.
** {{Averted}} with the Madame as well, who's evenworse : worse: not only she was as horrible to her adopted daughter Cinder as she was in canon, but she also sold her two biological daughters in Mistral's underground prostitution trade.
** {{Averted}} with the Madame as well, who's even
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** {{Averted}} with Lie Ren's parents Li and An Ren as well : they're still GoodParents and their intent to lock up their sociopathic son is completely justified.
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** {{Averted}} with Lie Ren's parents Li and An Ren as well : well: they're still GoodParents and their intent to lock up their sociopathic son is completely justified.
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* EvilVsEvil: By the end of the first four prologues, three evil parties are opposed (with LaResistance being a fourth, heroic party) : the White Fang, Lord Ozpin and Ruby "The Reaper" Rose. While Ruby ends up joining Ozpin later on, neither party is under the illusion that this alliance is anything but temporary.
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* EvilVsEvil: By the end of the first four prologues, three evil parties are opposed (with LaResistance being a fourth, heroic party) : party): the White Fang, Lord Ozpin and Ruby "The Reaper" Rose. While Ruby ends up joining Ozpin later on, neither party is under the illusion that this alliance is anything but temporary.
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** While she did die in the first prologue, when compared to her canon self, Summer Rose lived much longer : while canon Summer died when Ruby was a toddler, that version of Summer lived to see Ruby become a teenager. And kill her as well.
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** While she did die in the first prologue, when compared to her canon self, Summer Rose lived much longer : longer: while canon Summer died when Ruby was a toddler, that version of Summer lived to see Ruby become a teenager. And kill her as well.
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** Ruby is noticeably empty and despondent after not killing for weeks (aside from two people) and only recovers from it after coming up with an idea : working with Lord Ozpin.
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** Ruby is noticeably empty and despondent after not killing for weeks (aside from two people) and only recovers from it after coming up with an idea : idea: working with Lord Ozpin.
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* {{Yandere}}: Nora Valkyrie is absolutely obsessed with Lie Ren, the latter of which can't stand her.
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* {{Yandere}}: Nora Valkyrie is absolutely obsessed with Lie Ren, the latter of which can't stand her.her.
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* CarryABigStick: Nora Valkyrie’s signature weapon is a massive hammer.
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* DropTheHammer: Nora Valkyrie’s signature weapon is a massive hammer.
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* VillainHasAPoint: As AxCrazy as Ren is, he isn't wrong when he noted that the panic and fear in Kuroyuri provoked by Lord Ozpin's arrival would attract Grimm. In fact, it's an understatement : a Nuckelavee attacked Kuroyuri soon after.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch:
** Qrow killed Raven for having deserted Lord Ozpin's side. Given that Raven was [[AbusiveParents an abusive mother]] to Yang, she'll hardly be missed.
** Speaking of which, Raven's desertion would be bad... If it wasn't [[BigBad Lord Ozpin]] she deserted.
** Qrow killed Raven for having deserted Lord Ozpin's side. Given that Raven was [[AbusiveParents an abusive mother]] to Yang, she'll hardly be missed.
** Speaking of which, Raven's desertion would be bad... If it wasn't [[BigBad Lord Ozpin]] she deserted.
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* EyesAreUnbreakable: {{Downplayed|Trope}}, as her eyes did take damage, but when Ruby slices above Yang's nose, the narration notes that the latter's eyes fell to the ground, "white orbs with lilac irises", as if getting a scythe blade slashed across simply dislodged them.
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** Qrow may have attempted to rape Pyrrha and is loyal to Lord Ozpin, but he also genuinely cared about Summer and Taiyang because they were the only ones who treated him like a human being and [[KinslayingIsASpecialKindOfEvil swore to kill Ruby for slaughtering them]].
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* KinslayingIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Qrow has no problem with rape and murder. Killing one's own parents like Ruby did, however, is beyond the pale for him. Especially since Qrow genuinely cared about said parents.
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** The Madame sold her two biological daughters in Mistral's underground prostitution trade and abused her adoptive daughter Cinder the same way she did in canon.
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** {{Averted}} with the Madame as well, who's even worse : not only she was as horrible to her adopted daughter Cinder as she was in canon, but she also sold her two biological daughters in Mistral's underground prostitution trade.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: while she did die in the first prologue, when compared to her canon self, Summer Rose lived much longer : while canon Summer died when Ruby was a toddler, that version of Summer lived to see Ruby become a teenager. And kill her as well.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: while SparedByTheAdaptation:
** While she did die in the first prologue, when compared to her canon self, Summer Rose lived much longer : while canon Summer died when Ruby was a toddler, that version of Summer lived to see Ruby become a teenager. And kill her as well.
** The Madame is still alive, as far as we know.
** While she did die in the first prologue, when compared to her canon self, Summer Rose lived much longer : while canon Summer died when Ruby was a toddler, that version of Summer lived to see Ruby become a teenager. And kill her as well.
** The Madame is still alive, as far as we know.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Qrow killed Raven for having deserted Lord Ozpin's side. Given that Raven was [[AbusiveParents an abusive mother]] to Yang, she'll hardly be missed.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: KickTheSonOfABitch:
** Qrow killed Raven for having deserted Lord Ozpin's side. Given that Raven was [[AbusiveParents an abusive mother]] to Yang, she'll hardly bemissed.missed.
** Speaking of which, Raven's desertion would be bad... If it wasn't [[BigBad Lord Ozpin]] she deserted.
** Qrow killed Raven for having deserted Lord Ozpin's side. Given that Raven was [[AbusiveParents an abusive mother]] to Yang, she'll hardly be
** Speaking of which, Raven's desertion would be bad... If it wasn't [[BigBad Lord Ozpin]] she deserted.
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** "Little Miss" Malachite was killed after Lord Ozpin sent Huntsmen and Huntresses to kill every member of the Crown, which included her.
** Team NDGO assassinated Lisa Lavender for Lord Ozpin.
** Ruby slaughtered Team NDGO to test her new Grimm-controlling powers.
** Team NDGO assassinated Lisa Lavender for Lord Ozpin.
** Ruby slaughtered Team NDGO to test her new Grimm-controlling powers.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Jaune and Pyrrha may be Hunters working for Lord Ozpin, but they genuinely care about each other.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: EvenEvilHasLovedOnes:
** While she's fully committed to violent actions against humanity and any Faunus not member of the White Fang, Blake is genuinely loyal to her men and the Faunus she freed from the Schnee Dust Company. She applied this treatment to Adam as well prior to his defection to the Resistance.
** Jaune and Pyrrha may be Hunters working for Lord Ozpin, but they genuinely care about each other.
** While she's fully committed to violent actions against humanity and any Faunus not member of the White Fang, Blake is genuinely loyal to her men and the Faunus she freed from the Schnee Dust Company. She applied this treatment to Adam as well prior to his defection to the Resistance.
** Jaune and Pyrrha may be Hunters working for Lord Ozpin, but they genuinely care about each other.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: While she's a crazed {{Yandere}} working for Lord Ozpin, Nora dislikes child trafficking.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: EvenEvilHasStandards:
** While she's a crazed {{Yandere}} working for Lord Ozpin, Nora dislikes childtrafficking.trafficking.
** Jaune and Pyrrha, while loyal to Lord Ozpin and expressing fear and disgust towards Yang, still pity her condition.
** While she's a crazed {{Yandere}} working for Lord Ozpin, Nora dislikes child
** Jaune and Pyrrha, while loyal to Lord Ozpin and expressing fear and disgust towards Yang, still pity her condition.
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** Pietro Polendina was executed shortly after Arthur Watts escaped.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Penny had no relation to Glynda Goodwitch in canon while P.E.N.N.Y. was created by Glynda in the fanfic.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Penny had no relation to Glynda Goodwitch in canon while P.E.N.N.Y. was created by Glynda in the fanfic. However, Pietro still participated in its creation.
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* UnrelatedInTheAdaptation: P.E.N.N.Y. was created by Glynda Goodwitch with some help from James Ironwood, not Pietro Polendina.
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* FakingTheDead: Lionheart became a master of this trope, faking the deaths of several people imprisoned in his Haven Penitentiary, which includes Arthur Watts's. While some deaths actually happened in order to keep up appearances, most of the "deceased" are actually producing Dust and weaponry for Lord Ozpin's forces.
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* FakingTheDead: Lionheart became a master of this trope, faking the deaths of several people imprisoned in his Haven Penitentiary, which includes Arthur Watts's. While some deaths actually happened in order to keep up appearances, most of the "deceased" are actually sheltered by Lionheart, producing Dust and weaponry for Lord Ozpin's forces.
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* FakingTheDead: Lionheart became a master of this trope, faking the deaths of several people imprisoned in his Haven Penitentiary, which includes Arthur Watts's. While some deaths actually happened in order to keep up appearances, most of the "deceased" are actually producing Dust and weaponry for Lord Ozpin's forces.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Despite Salem and Ozpin's positions as BigBad and BigGood being switched, Lionheart still ends up pretending to support Ozpin while actually working for Salem.