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*** Chapter 12 references Fluttershy getting a dragon to leave a mountain from [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E7Dragonshy "Dragonshy"]]:
----> During the dragon migration I met a big guy with a touch of equiphobia. And he was this huge, fierce type! What brought it on was apparently a pegasus landed on his snout, stomped up the length of it, right up to his face, and almost touched him on the eyeball with her muzzle! Then she told him off for smoking in his sleep. The poor guy had to do the migration for a vacation to get over it enough to get back to his nap!"\\
"That's... very interesting," said Fluttershy.
----> During the dragon migration I met a big guy with a touch of equiphobia. And he was this huge, fierce type! What brought it on was apparently a pegasus landed on his snout, stomped up the length of it, right up to his face, and almost touched him on the eyeball with her muzzle! Then she told him off for smoking in his sleep. The poor guy had to do the migration for a vacation to get over it enough to get back to his nap!"\\
"That's... very interesting," said Fluttershy.
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* OutOfCharacterIsSeriousBusiness: In ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/358383/1/the-quality-of-mercy/quite-a-strain Quality of Mercy]]'', when Quizzical is trying to irritate people, everyone she meets that doesn't understand what's going on is worried about her seemingly out-of-nowhere antagonism.
Spike hurried home to the library to find a parchment and a quill. He had to send a letter.
Spike hurried home to the library to find a parchment and a quill. He had to send a letter.
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* OutOfCharacterIsSeriousBusiness: In ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/358383/1/the-quality-of-mercy/quite-a-strain Quality of Mercy]]'', when Quizzical is trying to irritate people, everyone she meets that doesn't understand what's going on is worried about her seemingly out-of-nowhere antagonism.
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--> Spike hurried home to the library to find a parchment and a quill. He had to send a letter.
--> Spike hurried home to the library to find a parchment and a quill. He had to send a letter.
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* TalkingWithSigns: Quizzical Greystone And The Basements Of Doom'': "Getting Deeper": Quizzical sends a message back to Ponyville by teleporting book titles to form a message via acrostic, which Spike receives:
--> "I am sending a message back to Ponyville." Quiz's horn began to glow. This time it wasn't sickly green, but her normal beige aura. "It is outside the range of the Notes spell, but if I execute several teleport object spells between the shelves and my desk...." She trailed off as she began to concentrate on the magic.\\
[...]\\
He sat down to wait for something to happen. Spike only then saw the tower of books stacked on Quiz's desk.
--> "I am sending a message back to Ponyville." Quiz's horn began to glow. This time it wasn't sickly green, but her normal beige aura. "It is outside the range of the Notes spell, but if I execute several teleport object spells between the shelves and my desk...." She trailed off as she began to concentrate on the magic.\\
[...]\\
He sat down to wait for something to happen. Spike only then saw the tower of books stacked on Quiz's desk.
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** ''A Little Fixer-Upper'': "[[Film/MyFairLady the rain in Spain stays mainly on the plain]]."
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** ''A Little Fixer-Upper'': Fixer-Upper'':
*** To ''Film/MysteryMen'', which is apparently a comic book in this universe, possibly relating to the movie was based off the ''ComicBook/FlamingCarrot'' comics: Sphinx's line: "When you can balance a tack hammer on your head, you will head off your foes with a balanced attack.":
----> "Just feel the beat, Quiz," said Sweetie Belle, handing her something. "And balance this on your head."\\
"A tack hammer?"\\
"'If you can balance a tack hammer you will have a balanced attack,'" recited Sweetie Belle.
*** "[[Film/MyFairLady the rain in Spain stays mainly on the plain]]."
*** To ''Film/MysteryMen'', which is apparently a comic book in this universe, possibly relating to the movie was based off the ''ComicBook/FlamingCarrot'' comics: Sphinx's line: "When you can balance a tack hammer on your head, you will head off your foes with a balanced attack.":
----> "Just feel the beat, Quiz," said Sweetie Belle, handing her something. "And balance this on your head."\\
"A tack hammer?"\\
"'If you can balance a tack hammer you will have a balanced attack,'" recited Sweetie Belle.
*** "[[Film/MyFairLady the rain in Spain stays mainly on the plain]]."
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* {{Mesodiplosis}}: Apple Bloom's instructions on painting involve talking about how to breathe with "through your" Mesodiplosis:
-->"Remember to sweep the brush up and down," said Apple Bloom. "And breath[e], in through your mouth, out through your nose."
-->"Remember to sweep the brush up and down," said Apple Bloom. "And breath[e], in through your mouth, out through your nose."
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/68414/quizzical Quizzical]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fan fiction written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/JMac JMac]].
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