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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Cookie QT/Cynthia (later {{Retcon}}ned to Courtney), Lincoln even thought Cookie was her actual name.
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* ACupAngst: Lynn takes it hard when she found out Maggie is actually a little younger than her despite having the physique of someone Luna's age. When she finds out the girl is her brother's age despite also having the build of someone older, Lynn has a small mental breakdown.
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* ACupAngst: Lynn takes it hard when she found out discovers that Maggie is actually a little younger than her despite having the physique of someone Luna's age. When she finds out the girl is her brother's age despite also having the build of someone older, Lynn has a small mental breakdown.
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* ACupAngst: Lynn took it hard when she found out Maggie was actually a little younger than her despite having the physique of someone Luna's age. When she finds out the girl is her brother's age despite also having the build of someone older, Lynn has a small mental breakdown.
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* ACupAngst: Lynn took takes it hard when she found out Maggie was is actually a little younger than her despite having the physique of someone Luna's age. When she finds out the girl is her brother's age despite also having the build of someone older, Lynn has a small mental breakdown.
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* AgeLift: Haiku is attending the 5th grade with Lincoln in this fic; canon would later revealed that she (and the rest of the Morticians Club) attend the 3rd grade with Lucy.
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* AgeLift: Haiku is attending the 5th grade with Lincoln in this fic; canon would later revealed reveal that she (and the rest of the Morticians Club) attend the 3rd grade with Lucy.
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* AscendedExtra: Numerous characters such as the Qts, Maggie, Haiku, Hugh, Nikki, Stella, Albert, Myrtle, and the Yates have been given prominent roles and focus throughout the story
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* AscendedExtra: Numerous characters such as the Qts, Maggie, Haiku, Hugh, Nikki, Stella, Albert, Myrtle, and the Yates have been given prominent roles and focus throughout the storystory.
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** Let's add the entire Loud family for No such luck especially Lynn Jr. and Rita.
* BadFuture: The future is implied to be one of the extremely low resources. Food is [[FutureFoodIsArtificial heavily processed]] and relationships are chosen for you for the sake of maintaining genetic diversity rather than romantic compatibility and you're lucky if you can make it work.
* BadFuture: The future is implied to be one of the extremely low resources. Food is [[FutureFoodIsArtificial heavily processed]] and relationships are chosen for you for the sake of maintaining genetic diversity rather than romantic compatibility and you're lucky if you can make it work.
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** Let's add the entire Loud family for No such luck "No Such Luck", especially Lynn Jr. and Rita.
* BadFuture: The future is implied to be one ofthe extremely low resources. Food is [[FutureFoodIsArtificial heavily processed]] and relationships are chosen for you for the sake of maintaining genetic diversity rather than romantic compatibility and you're lucky if you can make it work.
* BadFuture: The future is implied to be one of
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** Lincoln accidentally pushed it when asking about female Space Marines. The entire store almost attacked at him but Hugh replied that Lincoln was new to the franchise.
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** Lincoln accidentally pushed pushes it when asking about female Space Marines. The entire store almost attacked attacks at him but Hugh replied explains that Lincoln was is new to the franchise.
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* CunningLinguist: Stella is fluent in English, Filipino, Chinese and a little bit of Spanish.
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* CunningLinguist: Stella is fluent in English, Filipino, Chinese Chinese, and a little bit of Spanish.
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* TakeThat: Throughout the store, there are numerous swipes at the infamous ''No Such Luck'' episode, with several of the Loud siblings bringing up how their relationship with Lincoln is still rebuilding. One of Rita's cousins furiously asks her [[WhatWereYouThinking what she was thinking]] for doing that to her own son.
* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Lincoln's reaction when he started to train with Panda QT/Serena & Karate QT/Alexandria.
* ThroughHisStomach: Stella's grandmother made a whole buffet of Chinese cuisine in order to help Stella win over Lincoln.
* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Lincoln's reaction when he started to train with Panda QT/Serena & Karate QT/Alexandria.
* ThroughHisStomach: Stella's grandmother made a whole buffet of Chinese cuisine in order to help Stella win over Lincoln.
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* TakeThat: Throughout the store, story, there are numerous swipes at the infamous ''No "No Such Luck'' Luck" episode, with several of the Loud siblings bringing up how their relationship with Lincoln is still rebuilding. One of Rita's cousins furiously asks her [[WhatWereYouThinking what she was thinking]] for doing that to her own son.
* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Lincoln's reaction when hestarted starts to train with Panda QT/Serena & Karate QT/Alexandria.
* ThroughHisStomach: Stella's grandmothermade makes a whole buffet of Chinese cuisine in order to help Stella win over Lincoln.
* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Lincoln's reaction when he
* ThroughHisStomach: Stella's grandmother
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* TookALevelInBadass: The Loud parents' attempt to make their children more "well-rounded" actually pays off to an extent. Putting Lincoln in a parkour class did actually get him in shape and make him skilled enough that he could keep up with Girl Jordan in dodgeball. He later starts martial arts/MMA training and while he's a long way away from being able to beat grown adults let alone experienced combatants in a fight. It's acknowledged that he ''will' someday, and is currently capable of not being curb stomped by other kids his age that also train.
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* TookALevelInBadass: The Loud parents' attempt to make their children more "well-rounded" actually pays off to an extent. Putting Lincoln in a parkour class did actually get him in shape and make him skilled enough that he could keep up with Girl Jordan in dodgeball. He later starts martial arts/MMA training and training; while he's a long way away from being able to beat grown adults let alone experienced combatants in a fight. It's fight, it's acknowledged that he ''will' someday, and he is currently capable of not being curb stomped by other kids his age that also train.
