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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/pyroclasm-young-justice-si.664558 Pyroclasm]]'' is a is a [[{{Main/SelfInsertFic}} Self-Insert]] ''WesternAnimation/YoungJustice2010'' fanfic written by [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/members/fulcon.311752 Fulcon]], and posted on [[{{Website/SpacebattlesDotCom}} Spacebattles]], featuring the titular character (otherwise known as Michael Winter) being recruited by Batman and Green Arrow as a member of [[Characters/YoungJustice2010TheTeam The Team]].
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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/pyroclasm-young-justice-si.664558 Pyroclasm]]'' is a is a [[{{Main/SelfInsertFic}} Self-Insert]] ''WesternAnimation/YoungJustice2010'' fanfic written by [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/members/fulcon.311752 Fulcon]], and posted on [[{{Website/SpacebattlesDotCom}} Spacebattles]], featuring the titular character (otherwise known as Michael Winter) being recruited by Batman and Green Arrow as a member of [[Characters/YoungJustice2010TheTeam The Team]].
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Added a missing word to the Bad Powers Bad People example. "Horror Hunger one" too "Horror Hunger on one".
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* BadPowersBadPeople: [[spoiler: Invoked by Klarion when giving powers as mentioned in the entry below, as he makes their powers as dangerous as he possibly can and inflicting HorrorHunger one of them to ensure she uses her powers for evil.]]
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* BadPowersBadPeople: [[spoiler: Invoked by Klarion when giving powers as mentioned in the entry below, as he makes their powers as dangerous as he possibly can and inflicting HorrorHunger on one of them to ensure she uses her powers for evil.]]
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* NeverBeHurtAgain: The main reason Michael chose fire as his power was for fire’s [[FirePurifies purification]] properties, which ensure that he’ll never die from cancer like his past self.
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* PastLifeMemories: Pyroclasm retains the memories of his past life but they’ve rapidly begun to fade by the time the story starts.
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* CrimeOfSelfDefense: Michael incinerated Victor Zsass when he tried to kill one of his neighbors. It was ruled justified by the courts, but Michael constantly recieves hate mail and death threats from criminal activist groups and jerks.
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* CrimeOfSelfDefense: Michael incinerated Victor Zsass when he Victor tried to kill one of his neighbors. It was ruled justified by the courts, but Michael constantly recieves receives hate mail and death threats from criminal activist groups and jerks.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: M'Gann doesn't tell Wally that she's not interested in him because the telepathic nature of martians means that directly telling someone that you're not interested is considered rude. Wally for his part just assumes she's playing hard to get and his constant attempts at wooing her served as one of the main sources of tension between him and Michael.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: M'Gann doesn't tell Wally that she's not interested in him because the telepathic nature of martians means that directly telling someone that you're not interested is considered rude. Wally for his part just assumes she's playing hard to get and his constant attempts at wooing her served serve as one of the main sources of tension between him and Michael.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Pyroclasm managed to snag multiple power-ups in quick succession during the break when the team was forced to go to ground.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Pyroclasm managed to snag multiple power-ups in quick succession during the break when the team was forced to go to ground.ground, such as [[spoiler:Nabu helping him gain much more control of his fire]].
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* PoorCommunicationKills: M'Gann doesn't tell Wally that she's not interested in him because the telepathic nature of martians means that directly telling someone that you're not interested is considered rude. Wally for his part just assumes she's playing hard to get and his constant attempts at wooing her served as one of the main sources of tension between him and Michael.
