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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27885739/chapters/68281384 Puyo Puyo 8]]'' is a PseudocanonicalFic meant to continue the main ''VideoGame/PuyoPuyo'' storyline that was left alone after ''VideoGame/PuyoPuyo7'', created by [=EvenBrighterMarle=] and [=CometZangoose=].
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27885739/chapters/68281384 Puyo Puyo 8]]'' is a PseudocanonicalFic meant to continue the main ''VideoGame/PuyoPuyo'' storyline that was left alone after ''VideoGame/PuyoPuyo7'', created by [=EvenBrighterMarle=] and [=CometZangoose=].
[=CometZangoose=] and hosted on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn.
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Schezo [[spoiler:hiding the Record of Sealing under a rock]] is what allows [[spoiler:Aya the demon]] to kickstart the plot. [[spoiler: Klug]] calls him out ''very hard'' for this.
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Schezo [[spoiler:hiding the Record of Sealing under a rock]] is what allows [[spoiler:Aya the demon]] to kickstart the plot. [[spoiler: Klug]] calls him out ''very hard'' for this.this.
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*AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: Dapper Bones and Penglai, who are unrelated in the original and likely haven't even met, are implied to be this, with Dapper Bones nearly namedropping him as his long lost lover.
*BittersweetEnding: ''Tetris Returns'', while more sweet than bitter, has this. Ar is defeated, Jennifer [[spoiler: gets together with Ess, becomes a member of the Tetra Crew,]] and gets some people to forgive her, and Ex is finally reunited with his wife after over a decade of her absence. However, not only does Jennifer still have some detractors, but [[spoiler:she has to leave this dimension to join the Tetra Crew, leaving her brother behind]]. Plus, Ess has still not accepted Ex and Emma as her true parents, and the Tetra Crew has to leave again. Compared to the mostly happy ending the original fic had, it's quite a bit sad.
*BrickJoke: Lemres asks Moon Snail if he wants ice cream, as he interprets Moon's LoveAtFirstSight feeling for something else. It's only at the very end of the story that he remembers his promise, and the two go out for ice cream.
*TheChewToy: Schezo, who gets chased around by Cookie in one stage, and in another, [[spoiler:Klug knocks him out]].
*BrickJoke: Lemres asks Moon Snail if he wants ice cream, as he interprets Moon's LoveAtFirstSight feeling for something else. It's only at the very end of the story that he remembers his promise, and the two go out for ice cream.
*TheChewToy: Schezo, who gets chased around by Cookie in one stage, and in another, [[spoiler:Klug knocks him out]].
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* TheBusCameBack: Several characters who have been absent from later games return in these games, including Panotty, Minotaur, Dapper Bones, and Baldanders.
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*TheStinger: The ending to the original fic features [[spoiler:Ar talking about his plans he enacts in the sequel fic]].
* TheBusCameBack: Several characters who have been absent from later games return in these games, including Panotty, Minotaur, Dapper Bones, andBaldanders.Baldanders.
*UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Schezo [[spoiler:hiding the Record of Sealing under a rock]] is what allows [[spoiler:Aya the demon]] to kickstart the plot. [[spoiler: Klug]] calls him out ''very hard'' for this.
* TheBusCameBack: Several characters who have been absent from later games return in these games, including Panotty, Minotaur, Dapper Bones, and
*UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Schezo [[spoiler:hiding the Record of Sealing under a rock]] is what allows [[spoiler:Aya the demon]] to kickstart the plot. [[spoiler: Klug]] calls him out ''very hard'' for this.
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* AscendedExtra: Otomo was initially just a supporting NPC for Ocean Prince in Fever 2 and 20th Anniversary. In Puyo Puyo 8, he finally becomes a playable character, and gets his own bonus story, where he’s developed as a character beyond just being Ocean Prince’s butler.
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* AscendedExtra: Otomo was initially just a supporting NPC for Ocean Prince in Fever 2 and 20th Anniversary. In Puyo Puyo 8, he finally becomes a playable character, and gets his own bonus story, where he’s is developed as a character beyond just being Ocean Prince’s Prince's butler.
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** Moon Snail’s VERY FIRST interaction with Lemres is failing to speak to him properly because of his crush on him.
** The exact same thing happens with Jennifer towards Ess. As soon as she greets her, she blurts out that she thinks she’s cute.
** The exact same thing happens with Jennifer towards Ess. As soon as she greets her, she blurts out that she thinks she’s cute.
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** Moon Snail’s Snail's VERY FIRST interaction with Lemres is failing to speak to him properly because of his crush on him.
** The exact same thing happens with Jennifer towards Ess. As soon as she greets her, she blurts out that she thinksshe’s she's cute.
** The exact same thing happens with Jennifer towards Ess. As soon as she greets her, she blurts out that she thinks
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* ReformedButRejected: Despite Jennifer's reformation, it's made ''very'' clear that most of Primp Town despises her, despite her actions being the result of being BrainwashedAndCrazy.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27885739/chapters/68281384 Puyo Puyo 8]]'' is a PseudocanonicalFic meant to continue the main ''VideoGame/PuyoPuyo'' storyline that was left alone after ''VideoGame/PuyoPuyo7'', created by [=EvenBrighterMarle=] and [=CometZangoose=].
Two new characters who hail from [[VideoGame/PuyoPuyoQuest Pwurp Island]] set out to Primp Town to find the legendary Moon Stone. Unfortunately, one (Jennifer) finds a book containing a villain who brainwashes her from within, leaving the other (Moon Snail) to save her with the help from the cast of Puyo Puyo.
The series also has [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/28549182/chapters/69961062 a sequel]] called ''Tetris Returns'', starring Jennifer. A week after the first story, she tries to make up to everyone after what she's done under the main villain's control, but finds herself mocked and harassed by everyone she meets, up until the [[VideoGame/PuyoPuyoTetris S. S. Tetra]] crashes into Suzuran once again, now with a new villain in town who seeks to defeat Tee and take the title of Tetris King.
!! This fanfic contains examples of:
*AscendedExtra: Otomo was initially just a supporting NPC for Ocean Prince in Fever 2 and 20th Anniversary. In Puyo Puyo 8, he finally becomes a playable character, and gets his own bonus story, where he’s developed as a character beyond just being Ocean Prince’s butler.
*BigBad: [[spoiler:Aya]] in ''8'', Ar Tate in ''Tetris Returns''.
*DemotedToExtra: The main protagonists in Puyo Puyo 8 all appear in Tetris Returns, but they have more minor roles in it. Moon Snail has the best presence out of them, but he’s still nowhere near as prominent.
*FoeRomanceSubtext: Even though Ar and Ex broke up even before they became enemies, they’re still flirtatious towards each other to this very day. Mostly on Ar’s side, but Ex has a couple of instances. [[spoiler:Ar even kisses Ex while brainwashing him in 14T - 10!]]
*GroupHug: Ringo, MS, and Jennifer have one at the end of 10-10.
*HeroicBSOD: Jennifer has one at the end of Act 11T, where Ar [[spoiler:brainwashes Moon Snail, the only person who trusted her]]. She has two other ones in 12T-7 and 13T-5, when she [[spoiler:fails to unbrainwash Moon Snail and he demeans her for it]].
*IFellForHours: [[spoiler:After Emma fell into a tear she unknowingly made, she fell for several hours. The only reason she survived was because she grabbed onto a branch a few minutes before impact, resetting her velocity.]]
*LoveAtFirstSight:
**Moon Snail’s VERY FIRST interaction with Lemres is failing to speak to him properly because of his crush on him.
**The exact same thing happens with Jennifer towards Ess. As soon as she greets her, she blurts out that she thinks she’s cute.
*MaliciousMisnaming: Jennifer got very nasty nicknames from parts of the cast in Tetris Returns, including “Mean kitty” from Amitie, “Crazy cat lady” from Klug, “Bugeater” from Sig, and “Fatebreaker” from Feli.
*PunnyName: Ar, whose name is a pun on the R pentamino.
*ShoutOut:
**When [[TheFashionista Dapper Bones]] makes fun of Moon Snail for wearing shorts, he responds by saying "[[VideoGame/PokemonRedandBlue They're comfy and easy to wear!]]"
**Ess mentions that [[WebVideo/RealTimeFanDub the moon never had the cheese she wanted]] when Raffina threatens to kick her to the moon and back.
**Ringo suggests Moon Snail [[VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog2 uses his tail like a propeller to fly]], mistaking it for two tails.
*SingleTargetSexuality: Feli to Lemres, as per usual. This puts her on bad terms with Moon Snail on the offset, as [[GreenEyedMonster he also has a crush on Lemres]].
*TheBusCameBack: Several characters who have been absent from later games return in these games, including Panotty, Minotaur, Dapper Bones, and Baldanders.
Two new characters who hail from [[VideoGame/PuyoPuyoQuest Pwurp Island]] set out to Primp Town to find the legendary Moon Stone. Unfortunately, one (Jennifer) finds a book containing a villain who brainwashes her from within, leaving the other (Moon Snail) to save her with the help from the cast of Puyo Puyo.
The series also has [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/28549182/chapters/69961062 a sequel]] called ''Tetris Returns'', starring Jennifer. A week after the first story, she tries to make up to everyone after what she's done under the main villain's control, but finds herself mocked and harassed by everyone she meets, up until the [[VideoGame/PuyoPuyoTetris S. S. Tetra]] crashes into Suzuran once again, now with a new villain in town who seeks to defeat Tee and take the title of Tetris King.
!! This fanfic contains examples of:
*AscendedExtra: Otomo was initially just a supporting NPC for Ocean Prince in Fever 2 and 20th Anniversary. In Puyo Puyo 8, he finally becomes a playable character, and gets his own bonus story, where he’s developed as a character beyond just being Ocean Prince’s butler.
*BigBad: [[spoiler:Aya]] in ''8'', Ar Tate in ''Tetris Returns''.
*DemotedToExtra: The main protagonists in Puyo Puyo 8 all appear in Tetris Returns, but they have more minor roles in it. Moon Snail has the best presence out of them, but he’s still nowhere near as prominent.
*FoeRomanceSubtext: Even though Ar and Ex broke up even before they became enemies, they’re still flirtatious towards each other to this very day. Mostly on Ar’s side, but Ex has a couple of instances. [[spoiler:Ar even kisses Ex while brainwashing him in 14T - 10!]]
*GroupHug: Ringo, MS, and Jennifer have one at the end of 10-10.
*HeroicBSOD: Jennifer has one at the end of Act 11T, where Ar [[spoiler:brainwashes Moon Snail, the only person who trusted her]]. She has two other ones in 12T-7 and 13T-5, when she [[spoiler:fails to unbrainwash Moon Snail and he demeans her for it]].
*IFellForHours: [[spoiler:After Emma fell into a tear she unknowingly made, she fell for several hours. The only reason she survived was because she grabbed onto a branch a few minutes before impact, resetting her velocity.]]
*LoveAtFirstSight:
**Moon Snail’s VERY FIRST interaction with Lemres is failing to speak to him properly because of his crush on him.
**The exact same thing happens with Jennifer towards Ess. As soon as she greets her, she blurts out that she thinks she’s cute.
*MaliciousMisnaming: Jennifer got very nasty nicknames from parts of the cast in Tetris Returns, including “Mean kitty” from Amitie, “Crazy cat lady” from Klug, “Bugeater” from Sig, and “Fatebreaker” from Feli.
*PunnyName: Ar, whose name is a pun on the R pentamino.
*ShoutOut:
**When [[TheFashionista Dapper Bones]] makes fun of Moon Snail for wearing shorts, he responds by saying "[[VideoGame/PokemonRedandBlue They're comfy and easy to wear!]]"
**Ess mentions that [[WebVideo/RealTimeFanDub the moon never had the cheese she wanted]] when Raffina threatens to kick her to the moon and back.
**Ringo suggests Moon Snail [[VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog2 uses his tail like a propeller to fly]], mistaking it for two tails.
*SingleTargetSexuality: Feli to Lemres, as per usual. This puts her on bad terms with Moon Snail on the offset, as [[GreenEyedMonster he also has a crush on Lemres]].
*TheBusCameBack: Several characters who have been absent from later games return in these games, including Panotty, Minotaur, Dapper Bones, and Baldanders.
