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Some time after saving the world yet again, Junior Agent Razputin Aquato is sent by Agent Hollis Forsythe on his first official mission as a Psychonaut. His mission- to investigate suspicious psychic activity in the nearby Faraway Town. It's been in the backlog for 4 years and Hollis figures it shouldn't be too difficult. Just go, discover the source, maybe help out some poor tormented mind, and leave.
[[ASimplePlan But what seems to be a simple mission goes wrong]] when the subject- one young Basil- turns out to have much more turmoil in his mind than anyone anticipated. After calling for backup, Raz and his friends find themselves in the middle of Basil and his best friend Sunny's darkest secrets and have to help them fight their inner demons.
[[ASimplePlan But what seems to be a simple mission goes wrong]] when the subject- one young Basil- turns out to have much more turmoil in his mind than anyone anticipated. After calling for backup, Raz and his friends find themselves in the middle of Basil and his best friend Sunny's darkest secrets and have to help them fight their inner demons.
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Some time after saving the world yet again, Junior Agent Razputin Aquato is sent by Agent Hollis Forsythe on his first official mission as a Psychonaut. His mission- mission — to investigate suspicious psychic activity in the nearby Faraway Town. It's been in the backlog for 4 years and Hollis figures it shouldn't be too difficult. Just go, discover the source, maybe help out some poor tormented mind, and leave.
[[ASimplePlan But what seems to be a simple mission goes wrong]] when thesubject- subject — one young Basil- Basil — turns out to have much more turmoil in his mind than anyone anticipated. After calling for backup, Raz and his friends find themselves in the middle of Basil and his best friend Sunny's darkest secrets and have to help them fight their inner demons.
[[ASimplePlan But what seems to be a simple mission goes wrong]] when the
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* AllJustADream: The odd events that Raz experiences in much of the first chapter- such as the Faraway citizens being unusually hostile- turns out to be because he is already in Basil's mind and somehow lost his memory of entering it.
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* AllJustADream: The odd events that Raz experiences in much of the first chapter- chapter — such as the Faraway citizens being unusually hostile- hostile — turns out to be because he is already in Basil's mind and somehow lost his memory of entering it.
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* GodzillaThreshold: The mental state of Basil is so broken that Sasha, Hollis, and Oleander legitimately consider wiping out his memories entirely to keep him from [[DrivenToSuicide killing himself]]- or worse, [[PowerIncontinence going completely out of control]] and endangering all of Faraway Town.
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* GodzillaThreshold: The mental state of Basil is so broken that Sasha, Hollis, and Oleander legitimately consider wiping out his memories entirely to keep him from [[DrivenToSuicide killing himself]]- himself]] — or worse, [[PowerIncontinence going completely out of control]] and endangering all of Faraway Town.
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* SpiritAdvisor: [[spoiler:Mari turns out to be this rather than a figment of Headspace- her spirit somehow manifested there and has been trying to save Sunny from his grief ever since.]]
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* SpiritAdvisor: [[spoiler:Mari turns out to be this rather than a figment of Headspace- Headspace — her spirit somehow manifested there and has been trying to save Sunny from his grief ever since.]]
