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* BigBad: [[spoiler: Nightmare Phobia, Luna's EnemyWithout.]]
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* BigBad: [[spoiler: Nightmare Phobia, Luna's EnemyWithout.]] Not only is she the mane antagonist of the story [[spoiler:she was responsible for many of the events of the show by increasing the fears of various ponies, including the mane six.]]
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* FutureMeScaresMe: Discord sees [[BadFuture Dark World!Discord]] in the Truth and his genuinely horrified, resulting in him realizing what a monster he himself had become.
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* FutureMeScaresMe: Discord sees [[BadFuture Dark World!Discord]] in the Truth and his genuinely horrified, [[HeelRealization resulting in him realizing what a monster monster]] he himself had become.
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* DespairEventHorizon: Discord very nearly crosses this when he sees the Dark World ruled by another version of himself. He is pulled back by [[spoiler: Twilight Tragedy who begins her own HeelFaceTurn.]]
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* TheAgeless: Discord, Celestia and Luna.
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* TheAgeless: Discord, Celestia and Luna.
* AxCrazy: [[spoiler: Nightmare Phobia]], all the way.
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* EldritchAbomination: Between her physical appearance and the fact that she exists solely in the collective subconscious of ponykind, the BigBad definitely qualifies.
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* EldritchAbomination: Between her physical appearance and the fact that she exists solely in the collective subconscious of ponykind, the BigBad [[spoiler: Nightmare Phobia]] definitely qualifies.
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* EnemyWithout: The BigBad is one to [[spoiler:Luna -- she's Nightmare Moon's essence granted life of its own, calling herself Nightmare Phobia.]]
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: The BigBad fails to understand how ponies are able to reject their fear (thus freeing them from her control.
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: The BigBad fails to understand how ponies are able to reject their fear (thus freeing them from her control.
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* EmotionEater: [[spoiler: Nightmare Phobia]] feeds on the fears of ponies, while at the same time is able to increase said fears in order to manipulate them.
* EnemyWithout: The BigBad is one to [[spoiler:Luna -- she's Nightmare Moon's essence granted life of itsown, calling herself Nightmare Phobia.own.]]
* EvilCannotComprehendGood:The BigBad [[spoiler: Nightmare Phobia]] fails to understand how ponies are able to reject their fear (thus freeing them from her control.control).
* EnemyWithout: The BigBad is one to [[spoiler:Luna -- she's Nightmare Moon's essence granted life of its
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* ThisCannotBe: One of the worlds Celestia sees in the Truth is [[{{Satan}} Morning Star]] nearly defeating the Mane Six, only for them to tap into the Fire of Friendship and destroy him. Naturally, this is his response and last words.
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* YearInsideHourOutside: Time inside the limbo that is Discord's prison, time moves much more slowly than it does in the real world. An exact amount of time isn't given, however.
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* YearInsideHourOutside: Time inside the limbo that is Discord's prison, time moves much more slowly than it does in the real world. An exact amount of time isn't given, however.however.
* YourWorstNightmare: [[spoiler: Nightmare Phobia]] is able to enter a pony's dreams and cast them into their worst nightmare. [[spoiler: This is how she almost drives Fluttershy to suicide.]]
* YourWorstNightmare: [[spoiler: Nightmare Phobia]] is able to enter a pony's dreams and cast them into their worst nightmare. [[spoiler: This is how she almost drives Fluttershy to suicide.]]
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* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:Fluttercruel breaks down crying after being forced to reveal her true form to Fluttershy to scare her out of the nightmare the BigBad put her in, ruining Fluttercruel's only chance to get to know her mother.]]
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* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:Fluttercruel breaks down crying after being forced to reveal her true form to Fluttershy to scare her out of the nightmare the BigBad Nightmare Phobia put her in, ruining Fluttercruel's only chance to get to know her mother.]]
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* TheDarkSideWillMakeYouForget: [[spoiler: The BigBad becomes more insane over time and loses most of her memories.]]
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* TheDarkSideWillMakeYouForget: [[spoiler: The BigBad Nightmare Phobia becomes more insane over time and loses most of her memories.]]
* EldritchAbomination: Between her physical appearance and the fact that she exists solely in the collective subconscious of ponykind, the BigBad definitely qualifies.
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* EnemyWithout: The BigBad is one to [[spoiler:Luna, she names herself Nightmare Phobia.]]
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* EnemyWithout: The BigBad is one to [[spoiler:Luna, she names [[spoiler:Luna -- she's Nightmare Moon's essence granted life of its own, calling herself Nightmare Phobia.]]]]
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: The BigBad fails to understand how ponies are able to reject their fear (thus freeing them from her control.
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: The BigBad fails to understand how ponies are able to reject their fear (thus freeing them from her control.
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* GoodParents: {{Good Parent|s}}: Discord towards Fluttercruel.
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* IronicEcho: "A weighty choice is yours to make, the right selection or a big mistake", this time said by Discord [[spoiler:to himself when having to choose between letting the BigBad kill Fluttershy and risking Fluttercruel's life to save her.]]
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* IronicEcho: "A weighty choice is yours to make, the right selection or a big mistake", this time said by Discord [[spoiler:to himself when having to choose between letting the BigBad Nightmare Phobia kill Fluttershy and risking Fluttercruel's life to save her.]]
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* VillainEpisode: Most of the third part of Luna and Celestia: Unwanted Half is written out of the perspective of the BigBad
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* VillainEpisode: Most of the third part of Luna ''Luna and Celestia: Unwanted Half Half'' is written out of the perspective of the BigBad
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* TheDarkSideWillMakeYouForget: [[spoiler: The BigBad becomes more insane over time and loses most of her memories.]]
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* BigBad: [[spoiler: Nightmare Phobia, Luna's EnemyWithout.]]
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* TheAgeless: Discord, Celestia and Luna.
* TheChessmaster: Discord, Celestia and [[spoiler: Nightmare Phobia]]
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* TheChessmaster: Discord, Celestia and [[spoiler: Nightmare Phobia]]
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* Enemy Without: The BigBad is one to [[spoiler:Luna, she names herself Nightmare Phobia.]]
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* Enemy Without: EnemyWithout: The BigBad is one to [[spoiler:Luna, she names herself Nightmare Phobia.]]
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* Enemy Without: The BigBad is one to [[spoiler:Luna, she names herself Nightmare Phobia.]]
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* AllTheMyriadWays: it turns out that Truth exists in this universe too. Coincidentally, looking into it caused Celestia to be out for 12 days, and caused Discord to turn good!
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* AllTheMyriadWays: it turns out that Truth exists in this universe too. Coincidentally, looking into it caused Celestia to be out for 12 days, two weeks, and caused Discord to turn good!start changing.
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* ''[[http://itsfrompeople.deviantart.com/#/d5j63am Luna and Celestia: Unwanted Half]]'': A three part story that tells all about what Luna, Celestia and Nightmare Moon are like in this universe. Provides some handy {{Foreshadowing}} to discord's story, as well as reveal the true identity of the story's BigBad.
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* ''[[http://itsfrompeople.deviantart.com/#/d5j63am Luna and Celestia: Unwanted Half]]'': A three part story that tells all about what Luna, Celestia and Nightmare Moon are like in this universe. Provides some handy {{Foreshadowing}} to discord's Discord's story, as well as reveal the true identity of the story's BigBad.
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* ''[[http://itsfrompeople.deviantart.com/#/d5j63am Luna and Celestia: Unwanted Half]]'': A three part story that tells all about what Luna, Celestia and Nightmare Moon are like in this universe. Provides some handy {{Foreshadowing}} to discord's story, as well as reveal the true identity of the story's BigBad.
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* AllTheMyriadWays: it turns out that Truth exists in this universe too. Coincidentally, looking into it caused Celestia to be out for 12 days, and caused Discord to turn good!
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* CrossThrough: Discord's viewing of Dark World eventually happened in the main series, as did Liarjack's viewing of this world happen in this one.
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* IronicEcho: "A weighty choice is yours to make, the right selection or a big mistake", this time said by Discord [[spoiler:to himself when having to choose between letting the BigBad kill Fluttershy and risking Fluttercruel's life to save her.]]
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* SealedEvilInACan: Discord starts off as this, but gradually turns into SealedGoodInACan after his HeelFaceTurn.
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* SealedEvilInACan: Discord starts off as this, but gradually turns into SealedGoodInACan after his HeelFaceTurn.HeelFaceTurn.
* YearInsideHourOutside: Time inside the limbo that is Discord's prison, time moves much more slowly than it does in the real world. An exact amount of time isn't given, however.
* YearInsideHourOutside: Time inside the limbo that is Discord's prison, time moves much more slowly than it does in the real world. An exact amount of time isn't given, however.
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* AIIsACrapshoot: A benevolent version. While not computers, the construct ponies Discord makes to populate his and Fluttercruel's world begin to become more life-like, instead of only following simple instructions like they did before. Discord is not certain why they began to develop this way, as they never had before, but its implied Fluttercruel's presence may be causing it.
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* AIIsACrapshoot: A benevolent version. While not computers, the construct ponies Discord makes to populate his and Fluttercruel's world begin to become more life-like, instead of only following simple instructions like they did before. Discord is not certain why they began to develop this way, as they never had before, but its implied Fluttercruel's presence may be causing it. They even begin to develop beyond being simple copies, with Construct!Rarity beginning to make chaotically themed dresses on her own, seemingly without any prodding.
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* AIIsACrapshoot: A benovolent version. While not computers, the construct ponies Discord makes to populate his and Fluttercruel's world begin to become more life-like, instead of only following simple instructions like they did before. Discord is not certain why they began to develop this way, as they never had before, but its implied Fluttercruel's presence may be causing it.
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* AIIsACrapshoot: A benovolent benevolent version. While not computers, the construct ponies Discord makes to populate his and Fluttercruel's world begin to become more life-like, instead of only following simple instructions like they did before. Discord is not certain why they began to develop this way, as they never had before, but its implied Fluttercruel's presence may be causing it.it.
* AlternateUniverse: To the ''Fanfic/PonyPOVSeries'', and is part of the multiverse.
* AlternateUniverse: To the ''Fanfic/PonyPOVSeries'', and is part of the multiverse.
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* BoxingLessonsForSuperman: Discord never learned to fly without his telekinesis and learns from Fluttercruel.
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* AIIsACrapshoot: A benovolent version. While not computers, the construct ponies Discord makes to populate him and Fluttercruel's world begin to become more life-like, instead of only following simple instructions like they did before. Discord is not certain why they began to develop this way, as they never had before, but its implied Fluttercruel's presence may be causing it.
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* AIIsACrapshoot: A benovolent version. While not computers, the construct ponies Discord makes to populate him his and Fluttercruel's world begin to become more life-like, instead of only following simple instructions like they did before. Discord is not certain why they began to develop this way, as they never had before, but its implied Fluttercruel's presence may be causing it.
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* ''[[http://itsfrompeople.deviantart.com/art/Fluttercruel-Chaos-Theory-Part-1-333323336 Fluttercruel: Chaos Theory]]'': After being saved from Oblivion by her father Discord, Fluttercruel gets used to her new-found powers and bonds with her father. However, soon, an evil dwelling in the subconscious rises, and the one who formally cast Equestria into a chaotic hell and his daughter may be the only one that can stop it.
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* ''[[http://itsfrompeople.deviantart.com/art/Fluttercruel-Chaos-Theory-Part-1-333323336 Fluttercruel: Chaos Theory]]'': After being saved from Oblivion by her father Discord, Fluttercruel gets used to her new-found powers and bonds with her father. However, soon, an evil dwelling in the subconscious rises, and the one who formally cast Equestria into a chaotic hell and his daughter may be the only one ones that can stop it.
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* TheAtoner: Discord. Now that he's [[HeelRealization seen just how wrong his actions were]], he deeply regrets them.
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* MadeOfExplodium: Chaos constructs will spontaneously explode if their creator loses their focus, at least if they're inexperienced. Discord doesn't seem to have this problem anymore while Fluttercruel has it when she first starts using her newfound power.
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* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:Fluttercruel breaks down crying after being forced to reveal her true form to Fluttershy to scare her out of the nightmare the BigBad put her in, ruining Fluttercruel's only chance to get to know her mother.]]
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--> '''Discord''': [[PunctuatedPounding Get away...from her...]][[ThisIsForEmphasisYouBitch you beotch...]]
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''The Chaos Verse'' is a series of AlternateUniverse stories set in the same multiverse as the ''Fanfic/PonyPOVSeries'' written by ItsfromPeople. Stories consist of thus far:
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''The Chaos Verse'' is a series of AlternateUniverse stories set in the same multiverse as the ''Fanfic/PonyPOVSeries'' written by ItsfromPeople.[=ItsfromPeople=]. Stories consist of thus far:
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''The Chaos Verse'' is a series of AlternateUniverse stories set in the same multiverse as the ''Fanfic/PonyPOVSeries'' written by ItsfromPeople. Stories consist of thus far:
* ''[[http://itsfrompeople.deviantart.com/art/Discord-Not-one-of-a-kind-288483348 Discord: Not One Of A Kind]]'': An alternate Discord looks into the Truth and witnesses the BadFuture of Epilogue. [[HeelRealization Horrified]], he makes a choice that will change his life forever.
* ''[[http://itsfrompeople.deviantart.com/art/Fluttercruel-Chaos-Theory-Part-1-333323336 Fluttercruel: Chaos Theory]]'': After being saved from Oblivion by her father Discord, Fluttercruel gets used to her new-found powers and bonds with her father. However, soon, an evil dwelling in the subconscious rises, and the one who formally cast Equestria into a chaotic hell and his daughter may be the only one that can stop it.
Officially an AlternateUniverse, this world has been referenced several times in the main timeline and manages to successfully and realistically redeem Discord.
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!!This series of fanfics contains examples of the following tropes:
* DrivenToSuicide: The BigBad tries to do this to [[spoiler:Fluttershy. Thankfully, Fluttercruel saves her.]]
* EmergencyTransformation: Fluttercruel was severely injured while in Oblivion, forcing Discord to infuse her with chaos to save her. As a result, she becomes a [[HalfHumanHybrid Half Pony Hybrid]] with simular powers to him.
* FutureMeScaresMe: Discord sees [[BadFuture Dark World!Discord]] in the Truth and his genuinely horrified, resulting in him realizing what a monster he himself had become.
* GoodParents: Discord towards Fluttercruel.
* [[HalfHumanHybrid Half Pony Hybrid]]: While she originally qualified, Fluttercruel is [[EmergencyTransformation infused with Discord's chaos, transforming her into a more literal example.]]
* HeelFaceTurn: Discord
* HeelRealization: Discord has one upon witnessing [[FutureMeScaresMe his actions in]] [[BadFuture the Dark World]] and realizing he was no different.
* KnightOfCerebus: The stories are pretty lighthearted until the BigBad shows up and tries to drive [[spoiler:Fluttershy]] to suicide.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Discord's reaction to his HeelRealization.
* PapaWolf: Discord becomes this towards Fluttercruel after adopting her.
* SealedEvilInACan: Discord starts off as this, but gradually turns into SealedGoodInACan after his HeelFaceTurn.
* ''[[http://itsfrompeople.deviantart.com/art/Discord-Not-one-of-a-kind-288483348 Discord: Not One Of A Kind]]'': An alternate Discord looks into the Truth and witnesses the BadFuture of Epilogue. [[HeelRealization Horrified]], he makes a choice that will change his life forever.
* ''[[http://itsfrompeople.deviantart.com/art/Fluttercruel-Chaos-Theory-Part-1-333323336 Fluttercruel: Chaos Theory]]'': After being saved from Oblivion by her father Discord, Fluttercruel gets used to her new-found powers and bonds with her father. However, soon, an evil dwelling in the subconscious rises, and the one who formally cast Equestria into a chaotic hell and his daughter may be the only one that can stop it.
Officially an AlternateUniverse, this world has been referenced several times in the main timeline and manages to successfully and realistically redeem Discord.
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!!This series of fanfics contains examples of the following tropes:
* DrivenToSuicide: The BigBad tries to do this to [[spoiler:Fluttershy. Thankfully, Fluttercruel saves her.]]
* EmergencyTransformation: Fluttercruel was severely injured while in Oblivion, forcing Discord to infuse her with chaos to save her. As a result, she becomes a [[HalfHumanHybrid Half Pony Hybrid]] with simular powers to him.
* FutureMeScaresMe: Discord sees [[BadFuture Dark World!Discord]] in the Truth and his genuinely horrified, resulting in him realizing what a monster he himself had become.
* GoodParents: Discord towards Fluttercruel.
* [[HalfHumanHybrid Half Pony Hybrid]]: While she originally qualified, Fluttercruel is [[EmergencyTransformation infused with Discord's chaos, transforming her into a more literal example.]]
* HeelFaceTurn: Discord
* HeelRealization: Discord has one upon witnessing [[FutureMeScaresMe his actions in]] [[BadFuture the Dark World]] and realizing he was no different.
* KnightOfCerebus: The stories are pretty lighthearted until the BigBad shows up and tries to drive [[spoiler:Fluttershy]] to suicide.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Discord's reaction to his HeelRealization.
* PapaWolf: Discord becomes this towards Fluttercruel after adopting her.
* SealedEvilInACan: Discord starts off as this, but gradually turns into SealedGoodInACan after his HeelFaceTurn.
