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You can read it on Fanfiction.net [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/8773108/chapters/20110753 here]] or on Archive of our own [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12263014/1/Platonic here]].
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You can read it on Fanfiction.net [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/8773108/chapters/20110753 here]] or on Archive of our own [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12263014/1/Platonic here]] or on Archive of our own [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/8773108/chapters/20110753 here]].
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* NoseBleed: Lincoln receives one after [[spoiler: Luna tried to seduce him with very innuendo filled rock music and soda she sprayed over her body]]. However, he isn’t [[spoiler: sexual aroused by his sister Luna by this. A very detailed explanation is given why Lincoln got a nosebleed, having more to do with bodily functions and hormones who are difficult to control for a boy on the fringe of puberty and nothing with incestuous emotions, which Lincoln doesn’t have for Luna.]]
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* NoseBleed: Lincoln receives gets one after [[spoiler: Luna tried to seduce him with very innuendo filled rock music and soda she sprayed over her body]]. However, he isn’t [[spoiler: sexual aroused by his sister Luna by this. A very detailed explanation is given why Lincoln got a nosebleed, having more to do with bodily functions and hormones who are difficult to control for a boy on the fringe of puberty and nothing with incestuous emotions, which Lincoln doesn’t have for Luna.]]
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* NoseBleed: Lincoln receives one after [[spoiler: Luna tried to seduce him with very innuendo filled rock music and soda she sprayed over her body]]. However, he isn’t [[spoiler: sexual aroused by his sister Luna by this. A very detailed explanation is given why Lincoln got a nosebleed, having more to do with bodily functions and hormones who are difficult to control for a boy on the fringe of puberty and nothing with incestuous emotions, which Lincoln doesn’t have for Luna.]]
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* PuttingTheMedicInComedic: In Chapter 7 Luan disguises herself as several doctors from different media (more about that under ShoutOut) and impersonates them before Lincoln to give him a good show after [[spoiler: Luna tried to seduce Lincoln with music and soda in chapter 6 resulting in massive blood-loss through his nose]]. He isn't really impressed and rather annoyed by Luan’s impersonations.
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''Platonic'' is a [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse Loud House]] fanfic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5435517/Hatoralo Hatoralo]] and [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/Mama_Aniki/pseuds/Mama_Aniki Mama_Aniki]]. It started on December 6th, 2016 and it's still ongoing to this day.
Lincoln Loud always wished to get a bit more attention in a family of eleven children. But when his wish is granted, he soon has to discover, that you rather be careful what you wish for.
Coming home he encountered a Home filled with sisters who were more affectionate and nice to him than usual, even the meaner ones.
He enjoys her friendly and helpful demanor a lot but is it as good as it seems?
Lincoln Loud always wished to get a bit more attention in a family of eleven children. But when his wish is granted, he soon has to discover, that you rather be careful what you wish for.
Coming home he encountered a Home filled with sisters who were more affectionate and nice to him than usual, even the meaner ones.
He enjoys her friendly and helpful demanor a lot but is it as good as it seems?
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''Platonic'' is a [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse Loud House]] fanfic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5435517/Hatoralo Hatoralo]] and [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/Mama_Aniki/pseuds/Mama_Aniki Mama_Aniki]]. It started on December 6th, 2016 and it's still is ongoing to this day.
as of December 2017.
Lincoln Loud always wished to get a bit more attention in a family of eleven children. But when his wish is granted, he soonhas to discover, discovers that you rather he should be careful what you wish he wishes for.
Coming home heencountered encounters a Home house filled with sisters who were are more affectionate and nice to him than usual, even the meaner ones.
He enjoysher their friendly and helpful demanor a lot - but is it all as good as it seems?
Lincoln Loud always wished to get a bit more attention in a family of eleven children. But when his wish is granted, he soon
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* {{Deconstruction}}: [[spoiler: Of Loudcest in particular and Incest in general. Just because one sibling loves another doesn't mean they would reciprocate immediately or be into that idea at all. Lincoln is horrified by the fact that his older sisters are in romantic love with him.]]
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* ChaseScene: The entirety of Chapter 13 is a single big one with Lola and Lana in the princess car chasing two goons in a black ride-on toy car who kidnapped Lincoln at a unwanted election rally organized by the twins.
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* GoodTimesMontage: Lincoln has one in Chapter 2, accompanied with the Lyrics of Music/WeirdAlYankovic's song "This is the Life" where he is spoiled by his sisters while Lisa observes them out of different hiding spots and wears different costumes.
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** Luan's imitations of a [[Series/{{House}} grumpy]][[Series/{{Scrubs}} doctor]], a [[WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}} humanoid crustacean doctor]] and an [[Series/{{StarTrekEnterprise}} animal-obsessed doctor]].
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** Luan's imitations of a [[Series/{{House}} grumpy]][[Series/{{Scrubs}} grumpy]] [[Series/{{Scrubs}} doctor]], a [[WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}} humanoid crustacean doctor]] and an [[Series/{{StarTrekEnterprise}} animal-obsessed doctor]].
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** Luan's imitations of a [[Series/{{Scrubs}} grumpy doctor]], a [[WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}} humanoid crustacean doctor]] and an [[Series/{{StarTrekEnterprise}} animal-obsessed doctor]].
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** Luan's imitations of a [[Series/{{Scrubs}} grumpy [[Series/{{House}} grumpy]][[Series/{{Scrubs}} doctor]], a [[WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}} humanoid crustacean doctor]] and an [[Series/{{StarTrekEnterprise}} animal-obsessed doctor]].
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* OpenDoorOpening: This is how the story starts, with Lincoln opening the door to his home and the plot starting there.
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** [[Franchise/{{Terminator}} "Come with me if you want to live."]]
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** [[Franchise/{{Terminator}} "Come with me if you want to live.avoid detention."]]
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* ScoobyDoobyDoors: Happens in Chapter 10 as [[spoiler: the lovecrazed sisters]] hunt Lincoln through the house, described in a slightly surreal way.
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* ScoobyDoobyDoors: Happens in Chapter 10 as [[spoiler: the lovecrazed sisters]] hunt Lincoln through the house, described in a slightly surreal way.way.
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**Luan's imitations of a [[Series/{{Scrubs}} grumpy doctor]], a [[WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}} humanoid crustacean doctor]] and an [[Series/{{StarTrekEnterprise}} animal-obsessed doctor]].
**While all the [[spoiler: incestuous insanity]] is happening, Rita and Lynn Sr. are on a [[spoiler: dentist conference in a town called [[WesternAnimation/{{PhineasAndFerb}} Danville]]. ]]
** [[Franchise/{{Terminator}} "Come with me if you want to live."]]
** [[Franchise/{{BackToTheFuture}} "COMPOST?! I HATE COMPOST!"]]
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**Luan's imitations of a [[Series/{{Scrubs}} grumpy doctor]], a [[WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}} humanoid crustacean doctor]] and an [[Series/{{StarTrekEnterprise}} animal-obsessed doctor]].
**While all the [[spoiler: incestuous insanity]] is happening, Rita and Lynn Sr. are on a [[spoiler: dentist conference in a town called [[WesternAnimation/{{PhineasAndFerb}} Danville]]. ]]
** [[Franchise/{{Terminator}} "Come with me if you want to live."]]
** [[Franchise/{{BackToTheFuture}} "COMPOST?! I HATE COMPOST!"]]
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* HypnoPendulum: [[spoiler: Lola]] tries to hypnotize [[spoiler: Lincoln]] with a pocket watch while dressed up similar like the [[Franchise/{{Batman}} Mad Hatter]].
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* PleasePutSomeClothesOn: Again, Walt wants that from Lincoln.
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* NakedPeopleAreFunny: At one point Lincoln runs naked into Lisa's room because of some crazy behavior. Walt, the bird strongly dissaproves.
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* NakedPeopleAreFunny: At one point Lincoln runs naked into Lisa's room because of some crazy behavior. stuff happening. Walt, the bird strongly dissaproves.dissaproves because Lincoln doesn't wear anything.
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* NakedPeopleAreFunny: At one point Lincoln runs naked into Lisa's room because of some crazy behavior. Walt, the bird strongly dissaproves.
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* ScoobyDoobyDoors: Happens in Chapter 10 as [[spoiler: the lovecrazed sisters]] hunt Lincoln through the house, described in a slightly surreal way.
* ScoobyDoobyDoors: Happens in Chapter 10 as [[spoiler: the lovecrazed sisters]] hunt Lincoln through the house, described in a slightly surreal way.
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Coming home he encountered a Home filled with sisters who were more affectionate and nice to him than usual, even the meaner ones.
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[[caption-width-right:350: A loving family.]]
[[caption-width-right:350: A loving family.]]
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You can read it [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/8773108/chapters/20110753 here]] or [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12263014/1/Platonic here]].
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You can read it on Fanfiction.net [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/8773108/chapters/20110753 here]] or on Archive of our own [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12263014/1/Platonic here]].
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''Platonic'' is a [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse Loud House]] fanfic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5435517/Hatoralo Hatoralo]] and [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/Mama_Aniki/pseuds/Mama_Aniki Mama_Aniki]. It started on December 6th, 2016 and it's still ongoing to this day.
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''Platonic'' is a [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse Loud House]] fanfic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5435517/Hatoralo Hatoralo]] and [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/Mama_Aniki/pseuds/Mama_Aniki Mama_Aniki].Mama_Aniki]]. It started on December 6th, 2016 and it's still ongoing to this day.
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''Platonic'' is a [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse Loud House]] fanfic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5435517/Hatoralo Hatoralo]] and MamaAniki. It started on December 6th, 2016 and it's still ongoing to this day.
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''Platonic'' is a [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse Loud House]] fanfic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5435517/Hatoralo Hatoralo]] and MamaAniki.[[http://archiveofourown.org/users/Mama_Aniki/pseuds/Mama_Aniki Mama_Aniki]. It started on December 6th, 2016 and it's still ongoing to this day.
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Lincoln Loud always wished to get a bit more attention in a family of eleven children. But when his wish is granted, he soon has to discover, that you rather be careful what you wish for.
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''Platonic'' is a [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse Loud House]] fanfic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5435517/Hatoralo Hatoralo]] and MamaAniki. It started on December 6th, 2016 and it's still ongoing to this day.
Lincoln Loud always wished to get a bit more attention in a family of eleven children. But when his wish is granted, he soon has to discover, that you rather be careful what you wish for.
Lincoln Loud always wished to get a bit more attention in a family of eleven children. But when his wish is granted, he soon has to discover, that you rather be careful what you wish for.
