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This fic is part of a series; you can also read ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/18863593 from bruises flowers grow]]'' and ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/19691065/chapters/46611298 orange skies]]'', both set in the same continuity.
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* POVSequel: Acts as a sequel to ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/18863593 from bruises flowers grow]]'' and is set in the same continuity, and there are actually a couple of scenes where both Rinea and Celica are present that are lifted word-for-word from the former.
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* EleventhHourRanger: Alm and his companions join Celica for the final battle against Duma.
** Celica is able to outfox Jedah, gets her own version of the Falchion, and is clearly a hero in her own right instead of playing second fiddle to Alm.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: When the author said she was making the story "100% gayer," she wasn't ''kidding.'' Celica and Mae are the main couple of the story, and the epilogue implies or states marriages between Forsyth and Python, Leon and Valbar (though Leon was already gay in the source material), and Faye and an unnamed woman (another fic by the same author reveals it to be Silque). Throughout the story, Est also needles Palla about her relationship with the Whitewings' commander, Princess Minerva.
* AdaptedOut: Mila's Turnwheel, since it serves little to no narrative purpose, and [[spoiler:''Echoes''' version of Prince Conrad]].
* AgeLift: Saber is a few years younger than his game counterpart.
* AdaptedOut: Mila's Turnwheel, since it serves little to no narrative purpose, and [[spoiler:''Echoes''' version of Prince Conrad]].
* AgeLift: Saber is a few years younger than his game counterpart.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: When the author said she was making the story "100% gayer," she wasn't ''kidding.'' Celica and Mae are the main couple of the story, and the epilogue implies or states marriages between Forsyth and Python, Leon and Valbar (though Leon was already gay in the source material), and Faye and an unnamed woman (another fic by in the same author continuity reveals it to be Silque). Throughout the story, Est also needles Palla about her relationship with the Whitewings' commander, Princess Minerva.
* AdaptedOut: Mila's Turnwheel, since it serves little to no narrative purpose, and[[spoiler:''Echoes''' [[spoiler:the ''Echoes''' version of Prince Conrad]].
* AgeLift: Saber isa few six years younger than his game counterpart.counterpart [[spoiler:and seven years older than canon Conrad]].
* AdaptedOut: Mila's Turnwheel, since it serves little to no narrative purpose, and
* AgeLift: Saber is
* DarkIsNotEvil: In Sonya's epilogue, it's mentioned that the witches under her command are pretty much harmless.
* DeathByAdaptation: Conrad is killed in the fire, and Saber assumes his duties in the storyline. [[spoiler:Subverted when it turns out that Saber ''is'' Conrad.]]
* DeathByAdaptation: Conrad is killed in the fire, and Saber assumes his duties in the storyline. [[spoiler:Subverted when it turns out that Saber ''is'' Conrad.]]
* ExperiencedProtagonist: Palla's [[VideoGame/FireEmblemShadowDragonAndTheBladeOfLight previous battles with the dragonkin]] are brought up right before the final showdown with Duma.
** [[spoiler:He admits to having a little sister who he hasn't seen in a while, thinks he's dead, and resembles Celica.]]
* HeroOfAnotherStory: Alm is having his own adventure facing Rudolf and the Rigelian Empire, but it takes place almost entirely offscreen.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Sage Halcyon is [[spoiler:not just a father figure, but a blood grandfather to Conrad; his mother Bryony was Halcyon's eldest daughter]].
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: RelatedInTheAdaptation:
** Sage Halcyon is [[spoiler:not just a father figure, but a blood grandfather to Conrad; his mother Bryony was Halcyon's eldestdaughter]].daughter]].
** [[spoiler:Saber is {{composite|Character}}d with Conrad, and is thus her biological older brother.]]
** Sage Halcyon is [[spoiler:not just a father figure, but a blood grandfather to Conrad; his mother Bryony was Halcyon's eldest
** [[spoiler:Saber is {{composite|Character}}d with Conrad, and is thus her biological older brother.]]
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* ThatManIsDead: Saber has long since abandoned his previous life as [[spoiler:Prince Conrad]].
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* DecompositeCharacter: There are ''two'' Valentian Falchions--the Earth Falchion and the War Falchion.
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* AdaptationalBadass: [[spoiler:Rinea, who guides Alm's party through the basement of Rigel Castle and knows enough white magic to help in the battle against Duma.]]
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* AdaptationalBadass: AdaptationalBadass:
** Conrad's mother, Lady Bryony, teaches swordplay to both Conrad and Celica, and is also among the few characters who actually acknowledges that Mila and Duma are two halves of a whole, that people need compassion ''and'' strength. In ''Echoes'', she's just an unnamed noblewoman.
** [[spoiler:Rinea, who guides Alm's party through the basement of Rigel Castle and knows enough white magic to help in the battle against Duma.]]
** Conrad's mother, Lady Bryony, teaches swordplay to both Conrad and Celica, and is also among the few characters who actually acknowledges that Mila and Duma are two halves of a whole, that people need compassion ''and'' strength. In ''Echoes'', she's just an unnamed noblewoman.
** [[spoiler:Rinea, who guides Alm's party through the basement of Rigel Castle and knows enough white magic to help in the battle against Duma.]]
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Her status as Mila's champion gives Celica prophetic dreams from Mila, though she can [[LaserGuidedAmnesia never fully remember them when she wakes up]], leaving her with vague premonitions.
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* KingIncognito: Celica, of course, who by birth is Princess Anthiese, [[spoiler:and also Saber, aka Prince Conrad]].
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* ISurrenderSuckers: The crux of Celica's plan against Jedah. [[spoiler:As in the game, she ascends to the top floor of the Tower of Duma alone to meet with Jedah, pledges herself to Duma...and as Jedah reaches for her, she buries Beloved Zofia in his side.]]
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* ISurrenderSuckers: The crux of Celica's plan against Jedah. [[spoiler:As in the game, she ascends to the top floor of the Tower of Duma alone to meet with Jedah, pledges herself to Duma...and as Jedah reaches for her, she buries Beloved Zofia in his side.]]
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* AgeLift: Saber is a few years younger than his game counterpart.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/19406260 phoenixflame]]'' by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/elinciacrimea/pseuds/elinciacrimea elinciacrimea]] is a FixFic of Celica's route of ''[[VideoGame/FireEmblemGaiden Fire Emblem Echoes: Shadows of Valentia]]. It reimagines key elements of the story and goes further in-depth into different characters while maintaining the general thrust of the original plot.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/19406260 phoenixflame]]'' by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/elinciacrimea/pseuds/elinciacrimea elinciacrimea]] is a FixFic of Celica's route of ''[[VideoGame/FireEmblemGaiden Fire Emblem Echoes: Shadows of Valentia]].Valentia]]''. It reimagines key elements of the story and goes further in-depth into different characters while maintaining the general thrust of the original plot.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: When the author said she was making the story "100% gayer," she wasn't ''kidding.'' Celica and Mae are the main couple of the story, and the epilogue implies or states marriages between Forsyth and Python, Leon and Valbar (though Leon was already gay in the source material), and Faye and an unnamed woman (another fic by the same author reveals it to be Silque). Throughout the story, Est also needles Palla about her relationship with the Whitewings' commander, Princess Minerva.
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* BatmanGambit: The crux of the entire fanfic is Celica not falling for Jedah's manipulations and returning the favor in kind. [[spoiler:Celica knows that Jedah is watching every move she makes...and she also knows that he thinks so little of her comrades that he won't even bother watching them. So she writes down a vague set of instructions for Mae, telling her to concoct a diversion and an ambush with the rest of the army without letting Celica know anything about it. Upon fighting their way through Duma Tower, Celica goes to the top floor by herself and pretends to give herself up. Jedah, certain of his victory, has none of his magical wards up, allowing Celica to stab him with Beloved Zofia. As he reels from that, Mae arrives in time to blast him with lightning--a diversion allowing Celica to hit him with a point-blank [[FantasticNuke Ragnarok]]. In the aftermath of the blast, he flees downstairs...right where the rest of the army is waiting. The plan isn't enough to do him in--he summons Hestia and Marla to cover his escape to the basement--but it puts him on the run, and he isn't able to fully recover from his wounds, giving Celica a leg up in their final confrontation the next day. And it's the only time Sonya has ever seen her father truly afraid.]]
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* BatmanGambit: The crux of the entire fanfic is Celica ultimately not falling for Jedah's manipulations and returning the favor in kind. [[spoiler:Celica knows that Jedah is watching every move she makes...and she also knows that he thinks so little of her comrades that he won't even bother watching them. So she writes down a vague set of instructions for Mae, telling her to concoct a diversion and an ambush with the rest of the army without letting Celica know anything about it. Upon fighting their way through Duma Tower, Celica goes to the top floor by herself and pretends to give herself up. Jedah, certain of his victory, has none of his magical wards up, allowing Celica to stab him with Beloved Zofia. As he reels from that, Mae arrives in time to blast him with lightning--a diversion allowing Celica to hit him with a point-blank [[FantasticNuke Ragnarok]]. In the aftermath of the blast, he flees downstairs...right where the rest of the army is waiting. The plan isn't enough to do him in--he summons Hestia and Marla to cover his escape to the basement--but it puts him on the run, and he isn't able to fully recover from his wounds, giving Celica a leg up in their final confrontation the next day. And it's the only time Sonya has ever seen her father truly afraid.]]
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* ISurrenderSuckers: The crux of Celica's plan against Jedah. As in the game, she ascends to the top floor of the Tower of Duma alone to meet with Jedah, pledges herself to Duma...and as Jedah reaches for her, she buries Beloved Zofia in his side.
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* ISurrenderSuckers: The crux of Celica's plan against Jedah. As [[spoiler:As in the game, she ascends to the top floor of the Tower of Duma alone to meet with Jedah, pledges herself to Duma...and as Jedah reaches for her, she buries Beloved Zofia in his side.]]
* AMinorKidroduction: The story starts with Celica and Conrad growing up in their villa, then covers the fire, Mycen taking Celica to Ram Village, Mycen taking Celica ''away'' from Ram Village, and then Celica's time at Novis Monastery. It all takes up the first two chapters of the fic, leaving the main plot of ''Echoes'' to begin in chapter three.
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* ShipTease: Est frequently needles Palla about her relationship with their commander ([[VideoGame/FireEmblemArchanea Princess Minerva of Macedon]]).
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* LikeBrotherAndSister: Alm and Celica, rather than their original romantic relationship. However, this doesn't stop them from ruling the united kingdom of Valentia together.
* RedBaron:
** Celica is given the moniker of Phoenix Queen in the epilogue.
** Sonya's epilogue moniker is changed from Vengeful Mage to Witch-healer.
** Celica is given the moniker of Phoenix Queen in the epilogue.
** Sonya's epilogue moniker is changed from Vengeful Mage to Witch-healer.
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** Sonya and Deen both survive Celica's campaign against Grieth, where in the original game you had to kill one of them.
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** Sonya and Deen both survive Celica's campaign against Grieth, Grieth and join her army, where in the original game you had to kill one of them.them. Additionally, Sonya in the epilogue is ''successful'' in finding a cure for the witches, where ''Echoes'' implies she becomes one herself in the end.
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* TearsOfJoy: In the epilogue, it's said that Queen Celica wept at the news that Sonya found a cure for the witches.
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* BatmanGambit: The crux of the entire fanfic is Celica not falling for Jedah's manipulations and returning the favor in kind. [[spoiler:Celica knows that Jedah is watching every move she makes...and she also knows that he thinks so little of her comrades that he won't even bother watching them. So she writes down a vague set of instructions for Mae, telling her to concoct a diversion and an ambush with the rest of the army without letting Celica know anything about it. Upon fighting their way through Duma Tower, Celica goes to the top floor by herself and pretends to give herself up. Jedah, certain of his victory, has none of his magical wards up, allowing Celica to stab him with Beloved Zofia. As he reels from that, Mae arrives in time to blast him with lightning--a diversion allowing Celica to hit him with a point-blank [[FantasticNuke Ragnarok]]. In the aftermath of the blast, he flees downstairs...right where the rest of the army is waiting. The plan isn't enough to do him in--he summons Hestia and Marla to cover his escape to the basement--but it puts him on the run, and he isn't able to fully recover from his wounds, giving Celica a leg up in their final confrontation in the basement the next day. And it's the only time Sonya has ever seen her father truly afraid.]]
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* BatmanGambit: The crux of the entire fanfic is Celica not falling for Jedah's manipulations and returning the favor in kind. [[spoiler:Celica knows that Jedah is watching every move she makes...and she also knows that he thinks so little of her comrades that he won't even bother watching them. So she writes down a vague set of instructions for Mae, telling her to concoct a diversion and an ambush with the rest of the army without letting Celica know anything about it. Upon fighting their way through Duma Tower, Celica goes to the top floor by herself and pretends to give herself up. Jedah, certain of his victory, has none of his magical wards up, allowing Celica to stab him with Beloved Zofia. As he reels from that, Mae arrives in time to blast him with lightning--a diversion allowing Celica to hit him with a point-blank [[FantasticNuke Ragnarok]]. In the aftermath of the blast, he flees downstairs...right where the rest of the army is waiting. The plan isn't enough to do him in--he summons Hestia and Marla to cover his escape to the basement--but it puts him on the run, and he isn't able to fully recover from his wounds, giving Celica a leg up in their final confrontation in the basement the next day. And it's the only time Sonya has ever seen her father truly afraid.]]
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* ContinuityNod: The Whitewing sisters often mention their commander in passing, and share their knowledge of fighting manaketes as Celica and Alm's combined army prepares to battle Duma.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: The author sows plenty of hints regarding [[spoiler:Saber's true identity as Prince Conrad]]:
** [[spoiler:His StunnedSilence reaction to Celica offering him Beloved Zofia as payment for his mercenary service.]]
** [[spoiler:He admits to being Rigelian; Conrad's mother Bryony was a Rigelian priestess of the Duma Faithful.]]
** [[spoiler:He's able to identify Ragnarok, the sacred spell of Mila.]]
** [[spoiler:He warns Celica of the burden that accepting the crown will bring.]]
** [[spoiler:Crucially, he takes over Conrad's key appearances in the game's original story--protecting her from the Cantors outside Zofia Castle, and saving her in the rockslide.]]
* {{Foreshadowing}}: The author sows plenty of hints regarding [[spoiler:Saber's true identity as Prince Conrad]]:
** [[spoiler:His StunnedSilence reaction to Celica offering him Beloved Zofia as payment for his mercenary service.]]
** [[spoiler:He admits to being Rigelian; Conrad's mother Bryony was a Rigelian priestess of the Duma Faithful.]]
** [[spoiler:He's able to identify Ragnarok, the sacred spell of Mila.]]
** [[spoiler:He warns Celica of the burden that accepting the crown will bring.]]
** [[spoiler:Crucially, he takes over Conrad's key appearances in the game's original story--protecting her from the Cantors outside Zofia Castle, and saving her in the rockslide.]]
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* ObliviousToLove: When Mae attempts to confess her feelings to Celica, Celica thinks that Mae is telling her that she's in love with ''Boey''.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Sage Halcyon is [[spoiler:not just a father figure, but a blood grandfather to Conrad; his mother Bryony was Halcyon's eldest daughter]].
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* ISurrenderSuckers: The crux of Celica's plan against Jedah. As in the game, she ascends to the top floor of the Tower of Duma alone, alone to meet with Jedah, pledges herself to Duma...and as Jedah reaches for her, she buries Beloved Zofia in his side.
* MercyKill: Every enemy witch is treated as one, particularly Marla and Hestia, Sonya's sisters.
* MercyKill: Every enemy witch is treated as one, particularly Marla and Hestia, Sonya's sisters.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/19406260 phoenixflame]]'' by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/elinciacrimea/pseuds/elinciacrimea elinciacrimea]] is a FixFic of Celica's route of ''[[VideoGame/FireEmblemGaiden Fire Emblem Echoes: Shadows of Valentia]]. It reimagines key elements of the story and goes further in-depth into different characters while maintaining the general thrust of the original plot.
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!! phoenixflame contains examples of:
* AdaptationalBadass: [[spoiler:Rinea, who guides Alm's party through the basement of Rigel Castle and knows enough white magic to help in the battle against Duma.]]
* AdaptationalHeroism: Sonya and Deen were conned into joining Grieth's slave trade, and jump at the chance to get out.
* AdaptedOut: Mila's Turnwheel, since it serves little to no narrative purpose, and [[spoiler:''Echoes''' version of Prince Conrad]].
* AndThisIsFor: Celica tells Jedah as he dies that this is for his daughters.
* BigDamnKiss: Celica plants one on Mae as she reunites with the group after killing Jedah and claiming the Earth Falchion.
* CompositeCharacter: [[spoiler:Saber is Prince Conrad in disguise]], one of the key twists of the fic.
* ISurrenderSuckers: The crux of Celica's plan against Jedah. As in the game, she ascends to the top floor of the Tower of Duma alone,
* MythologyGag: Boey's TrademarkFavoriteFood, to Mae's consternation, is raw flour--a MythologyGag to ''Echoes'', where it's one of the types of food you can feed to your units.
* SecretSecretKeeper: Saber knows from the start that Celica is Princess Anthiese. [[spoiler:He would, since he's her older brother.]]
* SparedByTheAdaptation:
** Sonya and Deen both survive Celica's campaign against Grieth, where in the original game you had to kill one of them.
** [[spoiler:Rinea survives Alm's route of the story]], detailed in a [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/18863593 prior work]] of the author's.
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!! phoenixflame contains examples of:
* AdaptationalBadass: [[spoiler:Rinea, who guides Alm's party through the basement of Rigel Castle and knows enough white magic to help in the battle against Duma.]]
* AdaptationalHeroism: Sonya and Deen were conned into joining Grieth's slave trade, and jump at the chance to get out.
* AdaptedOut: Mila's Turnwheel, since it serves little to no narrative purpose, and [[spoiler:''Echoes''' version of Prince Conrad]].
* AndThisIsFor: Celica tells Jedah as he dies that this is for his daughters.
* BigDamnKiss: Celica plants one on Mae as she reunites with the group after killing Jedah and claiming the Earth Falchion.
* CompositeCharacter: [[spoiler:Saber is Prince Conrad in disguise]], one of the key twists of the fic.
* ISurrenderSuckers: The crux of Celica's plan against Jedah. As in the game, she ascends to the top floor of the Tower of Duma alone,
* MythologyGag: Boey's TrademarkFavoriteFood, to Mae's consternation, is raw flour--a MythologyGag to ''Echoes'', where it's one of the types of food you can feed to your units.
* SecretSecretKeeper: Saber knows from the start that Celica is Princess Anthiese. [[spoiler:He would, since he's her older brother.]]
* SparedByTheAdaptation:
** Sonya and Deen both survive Celica's campaign against Grieth, where in the original game you had to kill one of them.
** [[spoiler:Rinea survives Alm's route of the story]], detailed in a [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/18863593 prior work]] of the author's.
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