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* {{Anyone Can Die}}: [[spoiler: Molly Weasley, Remus Lupin, Aberforth Dumbledore.]]
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* {{Anyone Can Die}}: [[spoiler: Molly Weasley, Remus Lupin, Aberforth Dumbledore.]]Lupin]].
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* {{Anyone Can Die}}: [[spoiler:Poor Molly Weasely]]
**[[spoiler: And Lupin]].Molly Weasley, Remus Lupin, Aberforth Dumbledore.]]
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* {{Cry Into Chest}}: Snape and Hermione during the end of Chapter 34.
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* [[WhamEpisode Wham Chapter]]: Chapter 31: And So It Begins ends with [[spoiler: The Minister of Magic being assassinated, Voldemort installing a puppet Minister, and the news that Aurors are being sent to Hogwarts]]. Hogwarts]].
** Chapter 34: Blitzkrieg: [[spoiler: Voldemort infiltrates the Ministry and launches an assault against Order members and anyone else in his way, claiming they are Death Eaters. Arthur and Molly are taken to Azkaban; the rest of the Weasleys barely escape. Lupin is killed.]]
** Chapter 34: Blitzkrieg: [[spoiler: Voldemort infiltrates the Ministry and launches an assault against Order members and anyone else in his way, claiming they are Death Eaters. Arthur and Molly are taken to Azkaban; the rest of the Weasleys barely escape. Lupin is killed.]]
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* {{Significant Anagram}}: Devrom Dollort
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** Grey vs. Grey and Black: Dumbledore even says that many of Voldemort's followers follow him based on old loyalties and fear. The Order and many of the other protagonists are biased when it comes to any house but Gryffindor and [[spoiler: Harry is using dark magic]]. Not even the central characters are safe with Snape [[AntiHero being]] [[DarkIsNotEvil well]] [[TheCynic Snape]] and Hermione being a [[spoiler:SpannerInTheWorks]] to her own side.
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** Grey vs. Grey and Black: Dumbledore even says that many of Voldemort's followers follow him based on old loyalties and fear. The Order and many of the other protagonists are biased when it comes to any house but Gryffindor and [[spoiler: Harry is using dark magic]]. Not even the central characters are safe with Snape [[AntiHero being]] [[DarkIsNotEvil well]] [[TheCynic Snape]] and Hermione being a [[spoiler:SpannerInTheWorks]] to her own side.
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** Grey vs. Grey and Black: Dumbledore even says that many of Voldemort's followers follow him based on old loyalties and fear. The Order and many of the other protagonists are biased when it comes to any house but Gryffindor and [[spoiler: Harry is using dark magic]]. Not even the central characters are safe with Snape [[AntiHero being]] [[DarkIsNotEvil well]] [[TheCynic Snape]] and Hermione being a [[spoiler:SpannerInTheWorks]] to her own side.
** Grey vs. Grey and Black: Dumbledore even says that many of Voldemort's followers follow him based on old loyalties and fear. The Order and many of the other protagonists are biased when it comes to any house but Gryffindor and [[spoiler: Harry is using dark magic]]. Not even the central characters are safe with Snape [[AntiHero being]] [[DarkIsNotEvil well]] [[TheCynic Snape]] and Hermione being a [[spoiler:SpannerInTheWorks]] to her own side.
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* {{Well Intentioned Extremist}}: [[spoiler: Harry turns to practicing dark magic, believing it is the only way he will be able to defeat Voldemort]].
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* {{Love Epiphany}}: [[spoiler: The end of chapter 28, for Hermione.]]
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* {{Punctuated For Emphasis}}: Reset. The. Board.
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* {{Hoist By His Own Petard}}: Said verbatim by [[spoiler:Alverez when Dumbledore is angry at Hermione for 'acting like a Gryffindor']].
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* {{Chekhovs Armoury}}: The baby book. [[ChekhovsArmy The House-elves]],[[ChekhovsBoomerang The linking charms books]], [[ChekhovsGunman Healer Alverez]] . . . (there's more, I just know it)
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* {{Chekhovs Armoury}}: The baby book. [[ChekhovsArmy The House-elves]],[[ChekhovsBoomerang The linking charms books]], [[ChekhovsGunman Healer Alverez]] . . . (there's more, I just know it)Alverez]]
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* {{Alliterative Name}}: Arrosa Alverez
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* {{Did I Just Say That Out Loud}}: During her [[PowerStrainBlackout magic depletion]], Hermione tells Snape he has lovely eyelashes. She is horrified the next day.
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*{{Empathic Environment}}: It's storming when [[spoiler: Snape is found gravely wounded]].
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** Situational Irony: Hermione's [[spoiler: plan of getting the House-Elves to help protect members of the Order ends up earning her her own House-elves.]] She is mortified.
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** Situational Irony: Hermione's [[spoiler: plan of getting the House-Elves to help protect members of the Order ends up earning her her own House-elves.]] She is mortified.House-elves and then Snape ends up almost being killed because of it]].
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* {{Dramatic Irony}}: Crops up a lot in regards to S.N.O.R.T.
--> Snape: Children are always so sure that others are interested in their little lives and secrets. As if a seventeen year old girl had secrets that I'd be interested in.
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** {{Dramatic Irony}}: Crops up a lot in regards to S.N.O.R.T.
--> Snape: Children are always so sure that others are interested in their little lives and secrets. As if a seventeen year old girl had secrets that I'd be interested in.
** Situational Irony: Hermione's [[spoiler: plan of getting the House-Elves to help protect members of the Order ends up earning her her own House-elves.]] She is mortified.
** {{Dramatic Irony}}: Crops up a lot in regards to S.N.O.R.T.
--> Snape: Children are always so sure that others are interested in their little lives and secrets. As if a seventeen year old girl had secrets that I'd be interested in.
** Situational Irony: Hermione's [[spoiler: plan of getting the House-Elves to help protect members of the Order ends up earning her her own House-elves.]] She is mortified.
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* {{Never Live It Down}}: {{In-universe}}, Hermione and S.P.E.W.
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--> Snape: Children are always so sure that others are interested in their little lives and secrets. As if a seventeen year old girl had secrets that I'd be interested in.
