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ZCE comment-outs. Also, we do not use potholes to change what listed tropes say.
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* BadPowersBadPeople: [[EldritchAbomination The demons]] definitely qualify.
* BargainWithHeaven: Travis' ancestors did this in order to stop the [[EldritchAbomination demons from hell]]
* DarkIsEvil: [[EldritchAbomination The demons]] are prime examples of this trope.
* DealWithTheDevil: Lots of people have done this, ultimately causing mayhem ([[PlayedForDrama the serious type]], not [[PlayedForLaughs the type we're used to]]) around Coastal City.
* [[DeathOfAChild Death of a Puppy]]: Everest, along with Jake, died in Chapter 25, caused by the [[EldritchAbomination evil demons from hell]].
** Ryder was executed in Chapter 30, [[FamilyUnfriendlyDeath in a very gruesome way that will never be allowed in a PG-13 movie]].
* BargainWithHeaven: Travis' ancestors did this in order to stop the [[EldritchAbomination demons from hell]]
* DarkIsEvil: [[EldritchAbomination The demons]] are prime examples of this trope.
* DealWithTheDevil: Lots of people have done this, ultimately causing mayhem ([[PlayedForDrama the serious type]], not [[PlayedForLaughs the type we're used to]]) around Coastal City.
* [[DeathOfAChild Death of a Puppy]]: Everest, along with Jake, died in Chapter 25, caused by the [[EldritchAbomination evil demons from hell]].
** Ryder was executed in Chapter 30, [[FamilyUnfriendlyDeath in a very gruesome way that will never be allowed in a PG-13 movie]].
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** Everest and Jake die in Chapter
** Ryder
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* EldritchAbomination: The [[VideoGame/{{Bayonetta}} demons from hell]] are like this.
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* HellFire: The demons use this type of fire. Oddly, its color was never mentioned in the story ''at all''.
* [[HeroicBSoD Heroic Blue Screen of Doom]]: All of the pups (minus Everest ([[KilledOffForReal she's dead now]]), Tracker (He's with Carlos), and Rex ([[GoKartingWithBowser Having fun with dinosaurs]]) have this as Ryder was abducted by [[EldritchAbomination an evil demon]].
* HolyWater: Mentioned many times in the story.
* [[HeroicBSoD Heroic Blue Screen of Doom]]: All of the pups (minus Everest ([[KilledOffForReal she's dead now]]), Tracker (He's with Carlos), and Rex ([[GoKartingWithBowser Having fun with dinosaurs]]) have this as Ryder was abducted by [[EldritchAbomination an evil demon]].
* HolyWater: Mentioned many times in the story.
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* SinisterScythe: The demon that caused the fire in Chapter 2 had one of these, made out of burnt human flesh.
* WreathedInFlames: Same demon from Chapter 2 has this trait.
* WreathedInFlames: Same demon from Chapter 2 has this trait.
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Removing leftovers from Getting Crap Past The Radar cleanup.
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%% * GettingCrapPastThe Radar: Due to overwhelming and persistent misuse, GCPTR is on-page examples only until 01 June 2021. If you are reading this in the future, please check the trope page to make sure your example fits the current definition.
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I guess?
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* AmuletOfConcentratedAwesome: Marshall and Travis' lucky pendant - it can protect you and trap demons in TheVoid.
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* AmuletOfConcentratedAwesome: Marshall and Travis' lucky pendant - it can protect you and trap demons in TheVoid.the VoidBetweenTheWorlds.
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Obsolete name and misuse anyways.
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* {{Metropolis}}: Coastal City is a prime example of this, with skyscrapers 77 feet above the top of your head and beautiful resorts you'll never forget your stay at (assuming [[XanatosBackfire nothing bad happens]], that is).
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* {{Metropolis}}: Coastal City is a prime example of this, with skyscrapers 77 feet above the top of your head and beautiful resorts you'll never forget your stay at (assuming [[XanatosBackfire nothing bad happens]], happens, that is).
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: This fanfic contains a lot of religious references, something not normally allowed because it's disrespectful to the real-world God.
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%% * GettingCrapPastTheRadar: This fanfic contains a lot of religious references, something not normally allowed because it's disrespectful GettingCrapPastThe Radar: Due to overwhelming and persistent misuse, GCPTR is on-page examples only until 01 June 2021. If you are reading this in the real-world God.future, please check the trope page to make sure your example fits the current definition.
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** Ryder was executed in Chapter 30, [[FamilyUnfriendlyDeath in a very gruesome way]].
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** Ryder was executed in Chapter 30, [[FamilyUnfriendlyDeath in a very gruesome way]].way that will never be allowed in a PG-13 movie]].
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* AmuletOfConcentratedAwesome: Marshall and Travis' lucky pendant - it can protect you and trap demons in the void.
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* AmuletOfConcentratedAwesome: Marshall and Travis' lucky pendant - it can protect you and trap demons in the void.TheVoid.
** Ryder was executed in Chapter 30, [[FamilyUnfriendlyDeath in a very gruesome way]].
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* WreathedInFlames: Same demon from Chapter 2 has this trait.
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* WreathedInFlames: Same demon from Chapter 2 has this trait.trait.
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: This fanfic contains a lot of religious references, something not normally allowed.
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: This fanfic contains a lot of religious references, something not normally allowed.allowed because it's disrespectful to the real-world God.
