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Has been completed as of October 2014. An attempt at a sequel, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/221212/empress-of-harmony Empress of Harmony]]'', but never made it past one chapter.
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Has been completed as of October 2014. An attempt at a sequel, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/221212/empress-of-harmony Empress of Harmony]]'', Harmony]]'' was made, but never made it past one chapter.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: As of chapter 10, the story seems to be headed this way. [[FromBadToWorse No,]] ''[[FromBadToWorse really]]''. [[spoiler:What seemingly started out as a simple gorefic in the vein of ''Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}}'' is now revealed to be a story about Twilight Sparkle trying to TakeOverTheWorld (or rather, the ''universe'') and commit genocide on any living thing without the capacity for the Elements of Harmony.]] The worst part of that is [[spoiler: she ''denies'' that her plan is morally wrong and refers to it as "cleansing" and [[UtopiaJustifiesTheMeans being for the good of harmony]]]].
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* DarkerAndEdgier: As of chapter 10, the story seems to be headed this way. [[FromBadToWorse No,]] ''[[FromBadToWorse really]]''. [[spoiler:What seemingly started out as a simple gorefic in the vein of ''Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}}'' ''Fanfic/CupcakesSergeantSprinkles'' is now revealed to be a story about Twilight Sparkle trying to TakeOverTheWorld (or rather, the ''universe'') and commit genocide on any living thing without the capacity for the Elements of Harmony.]] The worst part of that is [[spoiler: she ''denies'' that her plan is morally wrong and refers to it as "cleansing" and [[UtopiaJustifiesTheMeans being for the good of harmony]]]].
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* DarkFic: The whole. Entire. THING. As said by one person on dA, it "makes Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}} look like [[Series/BarneyAndfriends Barney]]".
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* DarkFic: The whole. Entire. THING. As said by one person on dA, it "makes Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}} Fanfic/{{Cupcakes|SergeantSprinkles}} look like [[Series/BarneyAndfriends Barney]]".Series/{{Barney|AndFriends}}".
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* ShoutOut: During Rainbow Dash's {{Mind Rape}} torture, [[spoiler: the story slightly mentions both ''FanFic/RainbowFactory'' and ''FanFic/{{Cupcakes}}'', two other well-known gorefics. While Cupcakes is only slightly alluded to with Pinkie in one of Rainbow's MindRape visions threatening to hack her wings off, the Rainbow Factory mention is quite blatant... and it makes everything much worse]].
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* ShoutOut: During Rainbow Dash's {{Mind Rape}} torture, [[spoiler: the story slightly mentions both ''FanFic/RainbowFactory'' and ''FanFic/{{Cupcakes}}'', ''Fanfic/CupcakesSergeantSprinkles'', two other well-known gorefics. While Cupcakes is only slightly alluded to with Pinkie in one of Rainbow's MindRape visions threatening to hack her wings off, the Rainbow Factory mention is quite blatant... and it makes everything much worse]].
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* BadDreams: Twilight begins suffering from them after killing [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]], beginning the cycle of communicating with her other victims as they're killed.
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* PlaguedByNightmares: Twilight begins suffering from them after killing [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]], beginning the cycle of communicating with her other victims as they're killed.
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Has been completed as of October 2014. The Sequel, Empress of Harmony, can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/221212/empress-of-harmony here]], and has a trope page of its own [[FanFic/EmpressOfHarmony here]].
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Has been completed as of October 2014. The Sequel, Empress of Harmony, can be read [[http://www.An attempt at a sequel, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/221212/empress-of-harmony here]], and has a trope page Empress of its own [[FanFic/EmpressOfHarmony here]].
Harmony]]'', but never made it past one chapter.
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Also has a series of text-based Blog/AskAPony blogs: [[http://askempresstwilight.tumblr.com/ Twilight herself]] (done by the author), [[http://askharmonysstudents.tumblr.com/ some of Twilight's followers]] (deleted), [[http://askthepath.tumblr.com/ some of Twilight's opposers]], and [[http://askbrokenandeadfluttershy.tumblr.com/ Fluttershy]] (deleted). Be warned, though they are AU to the main fic, it takes place after Chapter 12, so expect MAJOR spoilers if you haven't gotten to that point.
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Also has had a series of text-based Blog/AskAPony blogs: [[http://askempresstwilight.tumblr.com/ Twilight herself]] (done by the author), author, no longer active), [[http://askharmonysstudents.tumblr.com/ some of Twilight's followers]] (deleted), [[http://askthepath.tumblr.com/ some of Twilight's opposers]], opposers]] (inactive), and [[http://askbrokenandeadfluttershy.tumblr.com/ Fluttershy]] (deleted). Be warned, though they are AU to the main fic, it takes place after Chapter 12, so expect MAJOR spoilers if you haven't gotten to that point.
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* BreakTheCutie: WordOfGod says that Fluttershy gets the worst of Twilight's experiments because her Element is the hardest to break. Also, for a more meta reason, because Fluttershy getting hurt is generally considered [[LogicalWeakness the fandom's collective weakness]].
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* BreakTheCutie: WordOfGod says It's been stated that Fluttershy gets the worst of Twilight's experiments because her Element is the hardest to break. Also, for a more meta reason, because Fluttershy getting hurt is generally considered [[LogicalWeakness the fandom's collective weakness]].
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* ANaziByAnyOtherName: [[spoiler:Twilight. After she figures out what the genetic component for the Elements of Harmony is, her plan is to commit total genocide on anything without those genes, in a matter suspiciously (and [[WordOfGod deliberately]]) similar to the Holocaust. ''On a universal level.'' And, if it exists, the '''''multiverse''''']].
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* ANaziByAnyOtherName: [[spoiler:Twilight. After she figures out what the genetic component for the Elements of Harmony is, her plan is to commit total genocide on anything without those genes, in a matter suspiciously (and [[WordOfGod deliberately]]) deliberately) similar to the Holocaust. ''On a universal level.'' And, if it exists, the '''''multiverse''''']].
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* SpiritualSuccessor: Possibly to The experiments of Twilight Sparkle. Albeit a much better written one
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* SpiritualSuccessor: Possibly to The experiments ''The Experiments of Twilight Sparkle. Albeit Sparkle'', albeit a much better written onemore thought out and darker one.
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* [[HumanResources Equine Resources]]: Twilight separates the body parts of her friends after they die to preserve their bodies as books.
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* HumanResources: Twilight separates the body parts of her friends after they die to preserve their bodies as books.
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* [[ImAHumanitarian I'm an Equinitarian]]: [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash as a result of Twilight using her MindRape techniques]].
* [[spoiler: ImmortalitySeeker]]: Twilight plans to [[spoiler: become immortal after instituting her new world order, simply because ''she's afraid her successors won't use the same methods.'']]
* [[spoiler: ImmortalitySeeker]]: Twilight plans to [[spoiler: become immortal after instituting her new world order, simply because ''she's afraid her successors won't use the same methods.'']]
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* [[ImAHumanitarian I'm an Equinitarian]]: ImAHumanitarian: [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash as a result of Twilight using her MindRape techniques]].
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* [[spoiler: MultiversalConqueror]]: [[spoiler: Twilight aspires to be this - though she'd prefer to use the word "Cleanser", as she sees her actions as being [[ForGreatJustice for the greater good]]]].
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* [[spoiler: MultiversalConqueror]]: MultiversalConqueror: [[spoiler: Twilight aspires to be this - though she'd prefer to use the word "Cleanser", as she sees her actions as being [[ForGreatJustice for the greater good]]]].
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* [[spoiler: TakeOverTheWorld]]: Twilight's Plan as of Chapter 10. [[spoiler: And it goes even further than that]].
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* [[spoiler: TakeOverTheWorld]]: TakeOverTheWorld: Twilight's Plan plan as of Chapter 10. [[spoiler: And it goes even further than that]].
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As of 2018 it's getting a ContinuityReboot due to the original being an OldShame.
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** When she [[spoiler:presents Applejack with Spike's mutilated body]], Twilight comments, [[WebVideo/BenDrowned "He's met with a terrible fate, hasn't he?"]]
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** When she [[spoiler:presents Applejack with Spike's mutilated body]], Twilight comments, [[WebVideo/BenDrowned "He's met with a terrible fate, hasn't he?"]]he?]] [[VideoGame/LunaGame It didn't have to be like this. He didn't have to die..."]]
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** When she [[spoiler:presents Applejack with Spike's mutilated body]], Twilight comments, [[WebVideo/BenDrowned "He's met with a terrible fate, hasn't he?"]]
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Also has a series of text-based Blog/AskAPony blogs: [[http://askempresstwilight.tumblr.com/ Twilight herself]] (done by the author), [[http://askharmonysstudents.tumblr.com/ some of Twilight's followers]], [[http://askthepath.tumblr.com/ some of Twilight's opposers]], and [[http://askbrokenandeadfluttershy.tumblr.com/ Fluttershy]]. Be warned, though they are AU to the main fic, it takes place after Chapter 12, so expect MAJOR spoilers if you haven't gotten to that point.
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Also has a series of text-based Blog/AskAPony blogs: [[http://askempresstwilight.tumblr.com/ Twilight herself]] (done by the author), [[http://askharmonysstudents.tumblr.com/ some of Twilight's followers]], followers]] (deleted), [[http://askthepath.tumblr.com/ some of Twilight's opposers]], and [[http://askbrokenandeadfluttershy.tumblr.com/ Fluttershy]].Fluttershy]] (deleted). Be warned, though they are AU to the main fic, it takes place after Chapter 12, so expect MAJOR spoilers if you haven't gotten to that point.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: As of chapter 10, the story seems to be headed this way. [[FromBadToWorse No,]] ''[[FromBadToWorse really]]''. [[spoiler:What seemingly started out as a simple gorefic in the vein of ''{{Cupcakes}}'' is now revealed to be a story about Twilight Sparkle trying to TakeOverTheWorld (or rather, the ''universe'') and commit genocide on any living thing without the capacity for the Elements of Harmony.]] The worst part of that is [[spoiler: she ''denies'' that her plan is morally wrong and refers to it as "cleansing" and [[UtopiaJustifiesTheMeans being for the good of harmony]]]].
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* DarkerAndEdgier: As of chapter 10, the story seems to be headed this way. [[FromBadToWorse No,]] ''[[FromBadToWorse really]]''. [[spoiler:What seemingly started out as a simple gorefic in the vein of ''{{Cupcakes}}'' ''Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}}'' is now revealed to be a story about Twilight Sparkle trying to TakeOverTheWorld (or rather, the ''universe'') and commit genocide on any living thing without the capacity for the Elements of Harmony.]] The worst part of that is [[spoiler: she ''denies'' that her plan is morally wrong and refers to it as "cleansing" and [[UtopiaJustifiesTheMeans being for the good of harmony]]]].
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* DarkFic: The whole. Entire. THING. As said by one person on dA, it "makes {{Cupcakes}} Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}} look like [[Series/BarneyAndfriends Barney]]".
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* [[BigShutUp Big]] "'''''[[BigShutUp SHUT UP!]]'''''": Twilight shouts this at [[IgnoredEpiphany her conscience-self]] after the insistence that what she's doing is wrong.
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* [[BigShutUp Big]] "'''''[[BigShutUp SHUT UP!]]'''''": BigShutUp: Twilight shouts this at [[IgnoredEpiphany her conscience-self]] after the insistence that what she's doing is wrong.
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* DarkFic: The whole. Entire. THING. As said by one person on dA, it "makes {{Cupcakes}} look like [[BarneyAndfriends [[Series/BarneyAndfriends Barney]]".
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Started on July 25, 2012, by Shadowed Rainbow, Pages of Harmony is a grimdark ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic and contains extremely graphic content. The story itself can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/5882/pages-of-harmony here ]], a reading is [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yWzw-htT_KY here]], and a short movie trailer can also be found [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iIw8QmE8pr8 here ]]. But BE WARNED you'd better know what you're getting into.
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Started on July 25, 2012, by Shadowed Rainbow, Pages of Harmony is a grimdark ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic and contains extremely graphic content. The story itself can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/5882/pages-of-harmony here ]], ]] or [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7696430/1/Pages-of-Harmony here]], a reading is [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yWzw-htT_KY here]], and a short movie trailer can also be found [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iIw8QmE8pr8 here ]]. But BE WARNED you'd better know what you're getting into.
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Also has a series of text-based AskAPony blogs: [[http://askempresstwilight.tumblr.com/ Twilight herself]] (done by the author), [[http://askharmonysstudents.tumblr.com/ some of Twilight's followers]], [[http://askthepath.tumblr.com/ some of Twilight's opposers]], and [[http://askbrokenandeadfluttershy.tumblr.com/ Fluttershy]]. Be warned, though they are AU to the main fic, it takes place after Chapter 12, so expect MAJOR spoilers if you haven't gotten to that point.
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Also has a series of text-based AskAPony Blog/AskAPony blogs: [[http://askempresstwilight.tumblr.com/ Twilight herself]] (done by the author), [[http://askharmonysstudents.tumblr.com/ some of Twilight's followers]], [[http://askthepath.tumblr.com/ some of Twilight's opposers]], and [[http://askbrokenandeadfluttershy.tumblr.com/ Fluttershy]]. Be warned, though they are AU to the main fic, it takes place after Chapter 12, so expect MAJOR spoilers if you haven't gotten to that point.
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* {{Gorn}}: Quite a bit of the ENTIRE fanfic up to its current point (Chapter 12 currently, ending the Extraction Arc) - in a very scientific matter. The gore always has a purpose in context however, and the meticulousness of it just makes things worse.
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* {{Gorn}}: Quite a bit of the ENTIRE fanfic up to its current point (Chapter 12 currently, ending the Extraction Arc) - in a very scientific matter.fanfic. The gore always has a purpose in context however, and the meticulousness of it just makes things worse.
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Has been completed as of October 2014. The Sequel, Empress of Harmony, can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/221212/empress-of-harmony here.]]
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here]], and has a trope page of its own [[FanFic/EmpressOfHarmony here]].
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** The sequel looks like it's going to be headed in this direction. [[spoiler:That "cleansing" for the good of harmony? ''We're going to see it all happen.'']]
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** The sequel looks like it's going to be headed in this direction.direction in comparison to its predecessor, despite the lower rating. [[spoiler:That "cleansing" for the good of harmony? ''We're going to see it all happen.'']]
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Has been completed as of October 2014. The Sequel, Empress of Harmony, can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/221212/empress-of-harmony here.]]