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For ease of reference, the protagonist of [=UtH=] is called ''the youth'' while FA's protagonist is called by the creator-given nickname ''the stranger.''
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For ease of reference, the protagonist of [=UtH=] is called ''the youth'' while FA's protagonist is called by the creator-given nickname ''the stranger.''
'' (Later, Stranger is called [[MeaningfulName Benui]].)
%%* MeaningfulName: The alias Stranger picks, then adopts is *Benui,* which comes from *Begnuih,* which means *gentle* in Hymmnos.
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* ShoutOut: ...to Exalted, Ar Tonelico, other Hollow Knight fanfiction and Vampire the Masquerade: Bloodlines.
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* ShoutOut: ...to Exalted, Ar Tonelico, other Hollow Knight fanfiction and Vampire the Masquerade: Bloodlines. Hymmnos songs play a much larger role for Stranger/Benui's magic.
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* SugarAndIcePersonality: While outwardly shy and a bit standoffish, the stranger shows small acts of kindness, like thanking a kingsmould that is supposed to be mindless for their service and telling them ey're proud of them or comforting Ogrim by seeing his worth and loyalty, even if he's young and naive.
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* SugarAndIcePersonality: While outwardly shy and a bit standoffish, the stranger shows small acts of kindness, like thanking a kingsmould that is supposed to be mindless for their service and telling them ey're proud of them or comforting Ogrim by seeing his worth and loyalty, even if he's young and naive.naive.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Just because they're of the darkness, doesn't mean the Lord of Shades is evil. It's fairly apparent they're the one who gave the protagonists their second chance at life.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Just because they're of the darkness, doesn't mean the Lord of Shades is evil. It's fairly apparent they're the one who gave the protagonists their second chance at life. Interestingly, the Lord of Shades doesn't answer the Stranger when ey ask if they're a god.
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* GrandpaGod: Unn tells the Stranger to call her 'granny.'
