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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14127692/1/One-Piece-Prelude-Roger-and-Xebec One Piece Prelude-Roger and Xebec]] is an ongoing AlternateUniverseFic fanfic that serves as both a prequel to [[Fanfic/OnePieceOLDWORLD One Piece OLD WORLD]] but also a {{Prequel}} detailing the lives of [[GreaterScopeParagon Gol D. Roger]] and [[GreaterScopeVillain Rocks D. Xebec]].
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14127692/1/One-Piece-Prelude-Roger-and-Xebec One Piece Prelude-Roger and Xebec]] is an ongoing AlternateUniverseFic fanfic for [[Manga/OnePiece One Piece]] that serves as both a prequel to [[Fanfic/OnePieceOLDWORLD One Piece OLD WORLD]] but also a {{Prequel}} detailing the lives of [[GreaterScopeParagon Gol D. Roger]] and [[GreaterScopeVillain Rocks D. Xebec]].
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** AgeLift: Chameleone is implied to be around the same age as most male pirates during the current timeline, but in this iteration of the story, he is made to have met Roger when he was a young man. [[DeathByAdaptation Unfortunately, he doesn't live long enough to last into the present in this version]].
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** The Privateers exist as a predecessor to the Warlord system- being seven pirates that serve the World Government in order to ward off other pirates as well as possessing a powerful swordsman as one of their stronger members but this is where their similarities end. The Warlords are infamous for their TeethClenchedTeamwork with not only the Government but each other as well- [[HatedByAll being hated by the public including other pirates]], most being evil to varying degrees with [[TokenGoodTeammate with one good exception]] and barely attend their duties beyond the bare minimum with an appearance of two or more members being a rare occasion. In contrast, the Privateers not only work together but often call on the assistance of others if they feel like they can't handle it on their own, often supervise major Government projects with [[VillainWithGoodPublicity the members being well-regarded by the public in spite of some being unsavory]] and [[MoralityKitchenSink the members range from benign to morally grey to bad to outright evil]].
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** The Privateers exist as a predecessor to the Warlord system- being seven pirates that serve the World Government in order to ward off other pirates as well as possessing a powerful swordsman as one of their stronger members but this is where their similarities end. The Warlords are infamous for their TeethClenchedTeamwork with not only the Government but each other as well- [[HatedByAll being hated by the public including other pirates]], most being evil to varying degrees with [[TokenGoodTeammate with one good exception]] and barely attend their duties beyond the bare minimum with an appearance of two or more members being a rare occasion. In contrast, the Privateers are not only more commonly known to work together but often actively call on the assistance of others of their own volition if they feel the individual member feels like they can't handle it on their own, often supervise major Government projects with [[VillainWithGoodPublicity the members being well-regarded by the public in spite of some being unsavory]] unsavory behind the scenes]] and [[MoralityKitchenSink the members range from benign to morally grey to bad to outright evil]].evil in terms fo morality]].
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* DoomedByCanon: No matter how much Xebec succeeds, he will ultimately lose at God Valley according to reports and is presumably killed when it's wiped off the map.
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* DoomedByCanon: No matter how much Xebec succeeds, he will ultimately lose at God Valley according to reports reports, and is presumably killed when it's wiped off the map.map.
* {{Foil}}: Several over the course of the story.
** The Privateers exist as a predecessor to the Warlord system- being seven pirates that serve the World Government in order to ward off other pirates as well as possessing a powerful swordsman as one of their stronger members but this is where their similarities end. The Warlords are infamous for their TeethClenchedTeamwork with not only the Government but each other as well- [[HatedByAll being hated by the public including other pirates]], most being evil to varying degrees with [[TokenGoodTeammate with one good exception]] and barely attend their duties beyond the bare minimum with an appearance of two or more members being a rare occasion. In contrast, the Privateers not only work together but often call on the assistance of others if they feel like they can't handle it on their own, often supervise major Government projects with [[VillainWithGoodPublicity the members being well-regarded by the public in spite of some being unsavory]] and [[MoralityKitchenSink the members range from benign to morally grey to bad to outright evil]].
* {{Foil}}: Several over the course of the story.
** The Privateers exist as a predecessor to the Warlord system- being seven pirates that serve the World Government in order to ward off other pirates as well as possessing a powerful swordsman as one of their stronger members but this is where their similarities end. The Warlords are infamous for their TeethClenchedTeamwork with not only the Government but each other as well- [[HatedByAll being hated by the public including other pirates]], most being evil to varying degrees with [[TokenGoodTeammate with one good exception]] and barely attend their duties beyond the bare minimum with an appearance of two or more members being a rare occasion. In contrast, the Privateers not only work together but often call on the assistance of others if they feel like they can't handle it on their own, often supervise major Government projects with [[VillainWithGoodPublicity the members being well-regarded by the public in spite of some being unsavory]] and [[MoralityKitchenSink the members range from benign to morally grey to bad to outright evil]].
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** Zeff, a seemingly normal pirate with no connection to the greater world outside of Sanji, is written be Xebec's childhood friend and fellow crewmate as a member of the Rocks Pirates- serving as a GenerationalXerox as a cook who fights by cooking.
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** Zeff, a seemingly normal pirate with no connection to the greater world outside of Sanji, is written be Xebec's childhood friend and fellow crewmate as a member of the Rocks Pirates- serving as a GenerationalXerox GenerationXerox as a cook who fights by cooking.
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* CanonImmigrant: Chameleone, a stage-show villain is made into a StarterVillain {{Mook}} for the ArcVillain, Content.
* DeathByAdaptation: Chameleone in this version of the story, is killed off by his boss after facing a much younger Roger, not living to the present timeline [[AgeLift where he'd be much older than Roger in this iteration]].
* DeathByAdaptation: Chameleone in this version of the story, is killed off by his boss after facing a much younger Roger, not living to the present timeline [[AgeLift where he'd be much older than Roger in this iteration]].
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* DoomedByCanon: No matter how much Xebec succeeds, he will ultimately lose at God Valley according to reports and is presumably killed when it's wiped off the map.
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Several over the course of the story.
** Zeff, a seemingly normal pirate with no connection to the greater world outside of Sanji, is written be Xebec's childhood friend and fellow crewmate as a member of the Rocks Pirates- serving as a GenerationalXerox as a cook who fights by cooking.
** Chameleone, a former Whitebeard Pirate, is made into a subordinate of the ArcVillain and is [[AgeLift made to be older than Roger due to meeting him as a young man]].
** AgeLift: Chameleone is implied to be around the same age as most male pirates during the current timeline, but in this iteration of the story, he is made to have met Roger when he was a young man. [[DeathByAdaptation Unfortunately, he doesn't live long enough to last into the present in this version]].
* BerserkButton: Roger doesn't like his friends insulted to the point he will engage in NoHoldsBarredBeatdown on the guy who said it.
* DoomedByCanon: No matter how much Xebec succeeds, he will ultimately lose at God Valley according to reports and is presumably killed when it's wiped off themap.map.
* YouHaveFailedMe: Chameleone is killed when his boss, Content, decides to remotely kill him off.
** Zeff, a seemingly normal pirate with no connection to the greater world outside of Sanji, is written be Xebec's childhood friend and fellow crewmate as a member of the Rocks Pirates- serving as a GenerationalXerox as a cook who fights by cooking.
** Chameleone, a former Whitebeard Pirate, is made into a subordinate of the ArcVillain and is [[AgeLift made to be older than Roger due to meeting him as a young man]].
** AgeLift: Chameleone is implied to be around the same age as most male pirates during the current timeline, but in this iteration of the story, he is made to have met Roger when he was a young man. [[DeathByAdaptation Unfortunately, he doesn't live long enough to last into the present in this version]].
* BerserkButton: Roger doesn't like his friends insulted to the point he will engage in NoHoldsBarredBeatdown on the guy who said it.
* DoomedByCanon: No matter how much Xebec succeeds, he will ultimately lose at God Valley according to reports and is presumably killed when it's wiped off the
* YouHaveFailedMe: Chameleone is killed when his boss, Content, decides to remotely kill him off.
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[[ https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14127692/1/One-Piece-Prelude-Roger-and-Xebec One Piece Prelude-Roger and Xebec]] is an ongoing AlternateUniverseFic fanfic that serves as both a prequel to [[Fanfic/OnePieceOLDWORLD One Piece OLD WORLD]] but also a {{Prequel}} detailing the lives of [[GreaterScopeParagon Gol D. Roger]] and [[GreaterScopeVillain Rocks D. Xebec]].
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[[caption-width-right:350: Roger's Past and Future]]
[[ https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14127692/1/One-Piece-Prelude-Roger-and-Xebec One Piece Prelude-Roger and Xebec]] is an ongoing AlternateUniverseFic fanfic that serves as both a prequel to [[Fanfic/OnePieceOLDWORLD One Piece OLD WORLD]] but also a {{Prequel}} detailing the lives of [[GreaterScopeParagon Gol D. Roger]] and [[GreaterScopeVillain Rocks D. Xebec]].
Due to the lack of information on Xebec in the current storyline and [[AmbiguouslyEvil that the vague and unreliable terms depicting his villainy]], Xebec is written as a more heroic character than he's implied to be- serving as a protagonist while Roger acts as a HeroAntagonist to his role.
It details their lives leading up to God Valley.
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!!''One Piece OLD WORLD'' provides examples of:
* AdaptationalHeroism: Xebec is depicted as a more heroic character than his AmbiguouslyEvil counterpart is implied to be.
* DoomedByCanon: No matter how much Xebec succeeds, he will ultimately lose at God Valley according to reports and is presumably killed when it's wiped off the map.
[[caption-width-right:350: Roger's Past and Future]]
[[ https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14127692/1/One-Piece-Prelude-Roger-and-Xebec One Piece Prelude-Roger and Xebec]] is an ongoing AlternateUniverseFic fanfic that serves as both a prequel to [[Fanfic/OnePieceOLDWORLD One Piece OLD WORLD]] but also a {{Prequel}} detailing the lives of [[GreaterScopeParagon Gol D. Roger]] and [[GreaterScopeVillain Rocks D. Xebec]].
Due to the lack of information on Xebec in the current storyline and [[AmbiguouslyEvil that the vague and unreliable terms depicting his villainy]], Xebec is written as a more heroic character than he's implied to be- serving as a protagonist while Roger acts as a HeroAntagonist to his role.
It details their lives leading up to God Valley.
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!!''One Piece OLD WORLD'' provides examples of:
* AdaptationalHeroism: Xebec is depicted as a more heroic character than his AmbiguouslyEvil counterpart is implied to be.
* DoomedByCanon: No matter how much Xebec succeeds, he will ultimately lose at God Valley according to reports and is presumably killed when it's wiped off the map.
