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''Obsession'' by Blackjack Gabbiani is a long-running (since 2001!) ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' fanfic centering around the life of Jirarudan, the antagonist of {{Anime/Pokemon 2000}}. Updates sporadically. [[https://forums.serebii.net/threads/obsession-ongoing-pg-13-overall.126628/ Read it here!]]
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''Obsession'' by Blackjack Gabbiani is a long-running (since 2001!) 2006!) ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' fanfic centering around the life of Jirarudan, the antagonist of {{Anime/Pokemon 2000}}. Updates sporadically. [[https://forums.serebii.net/threads/obsession-ongoing-pg-13-overall.126628/ Read it here!]]
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''Obsession'' by Blackjack Gabbiani is a long-running (since 2001!) ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' fanfic centering around the life of Jirarudan, the antagonist of {{Anime/Pokemon 2000}}. Updates sporadically. [[http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?126628-Obsession-(ongoing-PG-13-overall) Read it here!]]
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''Obsession'' by Blackjack Gabbiani is a long-running (since 2001!) ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' fanfic centering around the life of Jirarudan, the antagonist of {{Anime/Pokemon 2000}}. Updates sporadically. [[http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?126628-Obsession-(ongoing-PG-13-overall) [[https://forums.serebii.net/threads/obsession-ongoing-pg-13-overall.126628/ Read it here!]]
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* EpicFail: Anyone who's seen the movie knows that Jirarudan is headed for this.
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* GentlemanAndAScholar: Veronica and Jirarudan. Wavers between this and WickedCultured.
* GoingToSeeTheElephant: Veronica drags Jirarudan on an adventure in Viridian City for this reason.
* GoingToSeeTheElephant: Veronica drags Jirarudan on an adventure in Viridian City for this reason.
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* LikeASonToMe: Jirarudan and Veronica to Asaph.
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* MissingMom: Gloria dies in the first chapter.
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* ParentalSubstitute: Asaph, for both Jirarudan and Veronica.
* ParentWithNewParamour: Type 1 with Corbin and Helen.
* RealPlaceBackground: With no real-world equivalent for the town of Seafoam, the author bases it on Seaside, Oregon.
* ParentWithNewParamour: Type 1 with Corbin and Helen.
* RealPlaceBackground: With no real-world equivalent for the town of Seafoam, the author bases it on Seaside, Oregon.
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* TheCollector: And how! The fic is essentially the story of how Jirarudan came to embody this trope.
* TragicKeepsake: Gloria's ruby ring.
* TragicKeepsake: Gloria's ruby ring.
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* WalkingSpoiler: There's a reason that Lucrezia's son isn't called by name in these entries...
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* WickedCultured: Deep breath now--Asaph, Jirarudan, Veronica, Lucrezia, and her son.
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Not to be mistaken with the [[Film/{{Obsession}} film]] of the [[NamesTheSame same name]].
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* AmbiguousDisorder: Jirarudan is written as autistic, although it's never said outright.
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* MikeNelsonDestroyerOfWorlds: Jirarudan becomes this in canon.
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* OneSteveLimit: Technically, as the chapter that first mentioned the Tonio exhibit was written BEFORE [[Anime/PokemonTheRiseOfDarkrai a canon character named Tonio]] appeared. However, despite existing in the same canon, Tonio doesn't appear in this story.
%%* OverlordJr: Lucrezia's son.
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* ParentWithNewParamour: Type 1 with Corbin and Helen
* OneSteveLimit: Technically, as the chapter that first mentioned the Tonio exhibit was written BEFORE [[Anime/PokemonTheRiseOfDarkrai a canon character named Tonio]] appeared. However, despite existing in the same canon, Tonio doesn't appear in this story.
* OverlordJr: Lucrezia's son
* OneSteveLimit: Technically, as the chapter that first mentioned the Tonio exhibit was written BEFORE [[Anime/PokemonTheRiseOfDarkrai a canon character named Tonio]] appeared. However, despite existing in the same canon, Tonio doesn't appear in this story.
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* ParentWithNewParamour: Type 1 with Corbin and Helen
* OneSteveLimit: Technically, as the chapter that first mentioned the Tonio exhibit was written BEFORE [[Anime/PokemonTheRiseOfDarkrai a canon character named Tonio]] appeared. However, despite existing in the same canon, Tonio doesn't appear in this story.
* OverlordJr: Lucrezia's sonHelen.
* OneSteveLimit: Technically, as the chapter that first mentioned the Tonio exhibit was written BEFORE [[Anime/PokemonTheRiseOfDarkrai a canon character named Tonio]] appeared. However, despite existing in the same canon, Tonio doesn't appear in this story.
* OverlordJr: Lucrezia's son
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Not to be mistaken with the [[Film/{{Obsession}} film]] of the [[NamesTheSame same name]].
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** Veronica is named for voice actress VeronicaTaylor, known for playing Ash, May, and Delia, among other Pokémon characters.
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** Veronica is named for voice actress VeronicaTaylor, Creator/VeronicaTaylor, known for playing Ash, May, and Delia, among other Pokémon characters.
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''Obsession'' by Blackjack Gabbiani is a long-running (since 2001!) {{Pokemon}} ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' fanfic centering around the life of Jirarudan, the antagonist of {{Anime/Pokemon 2000}}. Updates sporadically. [[http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?126628-Obsession-(ongoing-PG-13-overall) Read it here!]]
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** The young painter Madame Remi, referenced as a great artist known for her realism, is an expy of Relm Arrowny from FinalFantasyVI. Likewise, the painting of the old wizard is Strago Magus.
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** The young painter Madame Remi, referenced as a great artist known for her realism, is an expy of Relm Arrowny from FinalFantasyVI.''VideoGame/FinalFantasyVI''. Likewise, the painting of the old wizard is Strago Magus.
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** Most of Asaph's house staff have names related to their jobs (Igasho the chauffeur is "wanderer", Kuri the chef is "chestnut", Concord the wine steward is a type of grape, etc)
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* ConspicuousConsumption: Tierney and Franklin, far more than even the opulent Asaph.
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* NotWithThemForTheMoney: Helen doesn't care that Corbin is rich. Though it's aided by that CORBIN doesn't care that Corbin is rich.
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* LargeHam: The Omanyte on display at the museum loves entertaining the crowd
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* LonelyRichKid: Veronica.
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* NouveauRiche: Tierney and Franklin are every bit new money and want Veronica to have all the trappings of wealth, or their idea of what that means.
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* OneSteveLimit: Technically, as the chapter that first mentioned the Tonio exhibit was written BEFORE [[Anime/PokemonTheRiseOfDarkrai a canon character named Tonio]] appeared. However, despite existing in the same canon, Tonio doesn't appear in this story.
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** The clothes that Tierney designed for Jirarudan are vaguely described, but based on [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Blue_Boy The Blue Boy]]. Likewise, Tierney's outfit for Veronica is a Pokémon version of [[{{Anime/DigimonAdventure}} Mimi Tachikawa]]'s pink dress.
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* LargeHam: The Omanyte on display at the museum loves entertaining the crowd
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* MikeNelsonDestroyerOfWorlds: Jirarudan becomes this in canon.
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* WalkingSpoiler: There's a reason that Lucrezia's son isn't called by name in these entries...
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* GentlemanAndAScholar: Veronica and Jirarudan. Wavers between this and WickedCultured.
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* WhiteCollarCrime: Lucrezia's son sells out his mother after an argument by giving an insider trading tip to Jirarudan and Veronica, thus starting their fortunes.
* WickedCultured: Deep breath now--Asaph, Jirarudan, Veronica, Lucrezia, and her son.
* WickedCultured: Deep breath now--Asaph, Jirarudan, Veronica, Lucrezia, and her son.
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* EpicFail: Anyone who's seen the movie knows that Jirarudan is headed for this.
* GoingToSeeTheElephant: Veronica drags Jirarudan on an adventure in Viridian City for this reason.
** Lucrezia is so named to invoke the idea of the Borgias.
* OverlordJr: Lucrezia's son
** Veronica is named for voice actress VeronicaTaylor, known for playing Ash, May, and Delia, among other Pokémon characters.
* TheCollector: And how! The fic is essentially the story of how Jirarudan came to embody this trope.
* TragicKeepsake: Gloria's ruby ring.
* TragicKeepsake: Gloria's ruby ring.
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* {{Yakuza}}: Lucrezia and her son run basically the Pokémon world version of this
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* LikeASonToMe: Jirarudan and Veronica to Asaph.
* LikeFatherLikeSon: Corbin and Jirarudan are both geniuses who tend to shut out the outside world, are fascinated by science, especially the physics of flight, and gravitate towards beautiful things.
* LikeFatherUnlikeSon: Despite the above, they have very little in common in personality
* MeaningfulName:
** Asaph means "collector"
** Corbin means "blackbird"
* LikeFatherLikeSon: Corbin and Jirarudan are both geniuses who tend to shut out the outside world, are fascinated by science, especially the physics of flight, and gravitate towards beautiful things.
* LikeFatherUnlikeSon: Despite the above, they have very little in common in personality
* MeaningfulName:
** Asaph means "collector"
** Corbin means "blackbird"
* ParentalSubstitute: Asaph, for both Jirarudan and Veronica.
* ParentWithNewParamour: Type 1 with Corbin and Helen
* ParentWithNewParamour: Type 1 with Corbin and Helen
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* WinningOverTheKids: Helen is one of the few people Jirarudan gets along with
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''Obsession'' by Blackjack Gabbiani is a long-running (since 2001!) {{Pokemon}} fanfic centering around the life of Jirarudan, the antagonist of {{Anime/Pokemon 2000}}. Updates sporadically.
sporadically. [[http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?126628-Obsession-(ongoing-PG-13-overall) Read it here!]]
* AmicableExes: Corbin and Gloria were on good terms after their split.
* EvenBadMenLoveTheirMamas: Jirarudan idolizes Gloria, seeing her as a literal angel.
* {{Flashback}}: The story is told by adult Jirarudan shortly after the events of the movie.
* MissingMom: Gloria dies in the first chapter.
* {{Flashback}}: The story is told by adult Jirarudan shortly after the events of the movie.
* MissingMom: Gloria dies in the first chapter.
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** When a few artists are mentioned in a go, they're usually named for the author's friends.
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** When a few artists are mentioned in a go, go in chapter 26, they're usually named for the author's friends.
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* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: Both Jirarudan and Veronica demonstrate unsettlingly adult behaviors including manipulation
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* ThisIsMyStory: From the beginning, Jirarudan presents it as the story of his downfall.
* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: Both Jirarudan and Veronica demonstrate unsettlingly adultbehaviors including manipulationbehaviors.
* UnreliableNarrator: The story is told in first person, and what Jirarudan says about his surroundings often clashes with what happens in them. This especially applies to how he perceives his father.
* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: Both Jirarudan and Veronica demonstrate unsettlingly adult
* UnreliableNarrator: The story is told in first person, and what Jirarudan says about his surroundings often clashes with what happens in them. This especially applies to how he perceives his father.
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* AmbiguousDisorder: Jirarudan is written as autistic, although it's never said outright.
* ChildProdigy: By the age of ten, Jirarudan already speaks and reads several languages and studies his father's science books for fun.
* RealPlaceBackground: With no real-world equivalent for the town of Seafoam, the author bases it on Seaside, Oregon.
** Viridian City is Portland
*** The hotel where Jirarudan and Veronica stop for tea is the [[http://www.heathmanrestaurantandbar.com/teacourt.html Heathman]]
* ShoutOut:
** The young painter Madame Remi, referenced as a great artist known for her realism, is an expy of Relm Arrowny from FinalFantasyVI. Likewise, the painting of the old wizard is Strago Magus.
** When a few artists are mentioned in a go, they're usually named for the author's friends.
** Mr Higuchi is named for the artist of the [[http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Lugia_LEGEND_(HeartGold_%26_SoulSilver_113) Lugia LEGEND card]] from the TCG.
* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: Both Jirarudan and Veronica demonstrate unsettlingly adult behaviors including manipulation
* AmbiguousDisorder: Jirarudan is written as autistic, although it's never said outright.
* ChildProdigy: By the age of ten, Jirarudan already speaks and reads several languages and studies his father's science books for fun.
* RealPlaceBackground: With no real-world equivalent for the town of Seafoam, the author bases it on Seaside, Oregon.
** Viridian City is Portland
*** The hotel where Jirarudan and Veronica stop for tea is the [[http://www.heathmanrestaurantandbar.com/teacourt.html Heathman]]
* ShoutOut:
** The young painter Madame Remi, referenced as a great artist known for her realism, is an expy of Relm Arrowny from FinalFantasyVI. Likewise, the painting of the old wizard is Strago Magus.
** When a few artists are mentioned in a go, they're usually named for the author's friends.
** Mr Higuchi is named for the artist of the [[http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Lugia_LEGEND_(HeartGold_%26_SoulSilver_113) Lugia LEGEND card]] from the TCG.
* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: Both Jirarudan and Veronica demonstrate unsettlingly adult behaviors including manipulation
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