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* DramaticReading: So far there are two on youtube. One [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ugTR7AaVUWY& here]] and an illistrated version [[here http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HewLVbU9-2I&]]
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* DramaticReading: So far there are two on youtube. One [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ugTR7AaVUWY& here]] and an illistrated illustrated version [[here http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HewLVbU9-2I&]]
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* DramaticReading: So far there are two on youtube. One [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ugTR7AaVUWY& here]]
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* DramaticReading: So far there are two on youtube. One [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ugTR7AaVUWY& here]]here]] and an illistrated version [[here http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HewLVbU9-2I&]]
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*DramaticReading: So far there are two on youtube. One [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ugTR7AaVUWY& here]]
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: Done a lot.
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: Done a lot.lot.
*BrickJoke: Oancitizen is called "Ralph Oancitizen" refferencing a mistake on his IMDB page that has since been corrected.
*BrickJoke: Oancitizen is called "Ralph Oancitizen" refferencing a mistake on his IMDB page that has since been corrected.
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* JerkSue: Lupa constantly kills people for no reason,rarly stops yelling is abusive to her boyfriend and bitches at anyone who hits on her. (accept Robert of corse.)
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* JerkSue: Lupa constantly kills people for no reason,rarly stops yelling yelling, is abusive to her boyfriend and bitches at anyone who hits on her. (accept Robert of corse.)
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* GodModeSue- Literaly appears at one point. Lupa then becomes the God Mode-Sue.
* JerkSue- Lupa constantly kills people for no reason,rarly stops yelling is abusive to her boyfriend and bitches at anyone who hits on her. (accept Robert of corse.)
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* GodModeSue- GodModeSue: Literaly appears at one point. Lupa then becomes the God Mode-Sue.
*JerkSue- JerkSue: Lupa constantly kills people for no reason,rarly stops yelling is abusive to her boyfriend and bitches at anyone who hits on her. (accept Robert of corse.)
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* OfficialCouple: Lupa and Phelous, since they're dating in real life, it makes sense.
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* OfficialCouple: Lupa and Phelous, since Phelous. Since they're dating in real life, it makes sense.
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* {{Wimpification}}: {{Phelous}}
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* BackFromTheDead: Phelous, but thats pretty comman.
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* BackFromTheDead: Phelous, {{Phelous}}, but thats pretty comman.
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* DramaticEllipsis: [[MyImmortal "It was.......Phelous!"Phelous!"]]
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*{{Sidekick}}: Phelous to Lupa, Ralph Oancitizen to Phelous, Torgo to the Master and Jesus to God.
* StalkerWithACrush: ToddInTheShadows, 90's Kid (both of those are also cannon, however), 80's Dan, Robert and possibly 70's Dude.
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*LargeHam: The Master (literaly at one point), Lupa, Phelous, the Dark One and Nostalgia Critic.
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*BigNO!: ""Nooo!" Lupa screamed while gesturing to the skye."
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*BackFromTheDead: Phelous, but thats pretty comman.
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* AntiHero: Lupa.
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* OriginalCharacter: Many, most noteably Robert. A {{SelfInsertFic Self-Insert }} MartyStu parody.
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* OriginalCharacter: Many, most noteably Robert. A [[Self-Insert SelfInsertFic ]] MartStu parody.
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*AbuseIsOkayWhenItsFemaleOnMale: Done alot with Lupa and Phelous.
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*GodModeSue- Literaly appears at one point. Lupa then becomes the God Mode-Sue.
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*SlashFic: Parodied in chapter four and chapter 7.
*OfficialCouple: Lupa and Phelous, since they're dating in real life, it makes sense.
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*RedShirt: The ninja's, Torgo, the Knights of Round, just to name a few.
*RedShirt: The ninja's, Torgo, the Knights of Round, just to name a few.
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* ''Crossover'': With DrWho.
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"Obscurus Lupa Wins the Olympics" is a parody fic by GigaBob which can be found here [[http://m.fanfiction.net/s/7465453/6/]]
Lupa wins the olympics in the first sentance. The chapters tend to parody different types of fics, such as epics, self-insert, slash, and crack just to name a few. The story itself has been gaining more popularity ever since it was mentioned by Obscurus Lupa herself on her "Simon Sez" commentary with NostagliaCritic.
Lupa wins the olympics in the first sentance. The chapters tend to parody different types of fics, such as epics, self-insert, slash, and crack just to name a few. The story itself has been gaining more popularity ever since it was mentioned by Obscurus Lupa herself on her "Simon Sez" commentary with NostagliaCritic.
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"Obscurus Lupa Wins the Olympics" is a parody fic by GigaBob Giga Bob which can be found here [[http://m.fanfiction.net/s/7465453/6/]]
Lupa wins the olympics in the first sentance. The chapters tend to parody different types of fics, such as epics, self-insert, slash, and crack just to name a few. The story itself has been gaining more popularity ever since it was mentioned by Obscurus Lupa herself on her "Simon Sez" commentary withNostagliaCritic.TheNostalgiaCritic.
Lupa wins the olympics in the first sentance. The chapters tend to parody different types of fics, such as epics, self-insert, slash, and crack just to name a few. The story itself has been gaining more popularity ever since it was mentioned by Obscurus Lupa herself on her "Simon Sez" commentary with
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Lupa wins the olympics in the first sentance. The chapters tend to parody different types of fics, such as epics, self-insert, slash, and crack just to name a few. The story itself has been gaining more popularity ever since it was mentioned by Obscurus Lupa herself on her "Simon Sez" commentary with TheNostagliaCritic.NostagliaCritic.
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"Obscurus Lupa Wins the Olympics" is a parody fic by GigaBob which can be found here [[http://m.fanfiction.net/s/7465453/6/]]
Lupa wins the olympics in the first sentance. The chapters tend to parody different types of fics, such as epics, self-insert, slash, and crack just to name a few. The story itself has been gaining more popularity ever since it was mentioned by Obscurus Lupa herself on her "Simon Sez" commentary with TheNostagliaCritic.
!!Tropes found in this fic include...
*CrackFic: Parodied.(Or at least attempted to be parodied in chapter 4, but Lupa objects)
*[[Crossover]]: With DrWho.
*FandomSpecificPlot: If you don't watch Dr. Who, you can get pretty lost at times.
*MarySue: Lupa.
*MetaFic
*OriginalCharacter: Many, most noteably Robert. A [[Self-Insert SelfInsertFic ]] MartStu parody.
*Wimpification: [[Phelous]]
Lupa wins the olympics in the first sentance. The chapters tend to parody different types of fics, such as epics, self-insert, slash, and crack just to name a few. The story itself has been gaining more popularity ever since it was mentioned by Obscurus Lupa herself on her "Simon Sez" commentary with TheNostagliaCritic.
!!Tropes found in this fic include...
*CrackFic: Parodied.(Or at least attempted to be parodied in chapter 4, but Lupa objects)
*[[Crossover]]: With DrWho.
*FandomSpecificPlot: If you don't watch Dr. Who, you can get pretty lost at times.
*MarySue: Lupa.
*MetaFic
*OriginalCharacter: Many, most noteably Robert. A [[Self-Insert SelfInsertFic ]] MartStu parody.
*Wimpification: [[Phelous]]
