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* DontCreateAMartyr: [[spoiler:Nagato warns Minato that killing Yahiko will only create a figurehead for his followers. If alive, [[CantKillYouStillNeedYou Nagato can keep control over what his friend says and try to quell the anger in Rain]]]].
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Written by Ser Serendipity the author known for producing well regarded Naruto Re-Write/fanfic ''Not Sick'' and the crossover story https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/Myrmridon Obito-Sensei can be read here at [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10151225/1/Obito-Sensei Fanfiction.net]], here at [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/obito-sensei-naruto-au.856521/ Spacebattles.com]]and here at [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/obito-sensei-a-sakura-centric-naruto-au.67785/ Sufficient Velocity.com]]

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Written by Ser Serendipity the author known for producing well regarded Naruto Re-Write/fanfic ''Not Sick'' and the crossover story https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/Myrmridon ''{{Fanfic/Myrmridon}}'', Obito-Sensei can be read here at [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10151225/1/Obito-Sensei Fanfiction.net]], here at [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/obito-sensei-naruto-au.856521/ Spacebattles.com]]and com]] and here at [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/obito-sensei-a-sakura-centric-naruto-au.67785/ Sufficient Velocity.SufficientVelocity.com]]
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Katasuke Touno, a character from ''Naruto'''s SequelSeries ''{{Manga/Boruto}}'', is introduced in this story set well before ''Boruto's'' time period.
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* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: [[spoiler:Orochimaru]] attempts to invoke this by telling Sasuke and Rin that he has knowledge too valuable for Konoha, including immortality and how to create [[spoiler:the Rinnegan]]. The two think it over before deciding [[NoManShouldHaveThisPower such power is too dangerous for anyone]], and decide [[SubvertedTrope their enemy is not worth sparing]], albeit [[spoiler:[[AFateWorseThanDeath with Orochimaru turned into a tree rather than killed given that his body is immortal]]]].
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* CrazyEnoughToWork: In chapter 77, [[spoiler:Sakura tells Minato, Jiraiya, Obito, and Naruto about her plan to go to the Land of Frost and help Rain defeat Cloud in hopes of ending the coming war. When Naruto offers to join her and suggests Sasuke would tag along, [[EurekaMoment he realizes they can meet with Konan and tell her how Yagiko went behind her and Nagato's back to invade Konoha]]. While it is pointed out the Rain nin in Frost may kill Team 7, it's also pointed out that Naruto and Sakura had fought for Rain against Cloud before, as did Sasuke who was recognized as a Jonin. The plan might have risks, but it can be a possible solution to end the conflict between Konoha and Rain once Yagiko is taken down]].
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* MythologyGag: Chapter 77 has Kushina staying in the old spiral house from her younger years in ''The Whorl Within The Spiral'' after [[spoiler:the Rain invasion damages the seal holding back Kurama]].
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* InstantlyProvenWrong: In chapter 75, Jiraiya sends a toad to call for Minato for permission [[spoiler:to interrogate Madara for information about the Rinnegan that he inserted into Nagato]]. Obito points out that Minato is probably busy [[spoiler:cleaning up the fallout from Rain's invasion]], and immediately Minato teleports right in front of them. Obito {{Facepalm}} out of the absurdity of the timing.


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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Jiraiya sees himself as this after [[spoiler:Rain's invasion of Konoha]]. He taught Yahiko and the other Akatsuki founders about Ninjutsu as well as the idealism of Ninjutsu, [[spoiler:which they now seek to enforce after getting devasted by Cloud's Tail Beast Canon]]. Obito argues that everyone who committed atrocities always justifies it with their ideology and that Jiraiya shouldn't blame himself for [[spoiler:Rain's actions]], but Jiraiya points out that every action, whether benevolent or cruel, will always have a source.
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Years ago, Jiraiya taught Yahiko, Nagato, and Konan so they could not only protect themselves in Rain but also use their powers for good through Ninshu. The three of them became the Akatsuki, then took over the Nation of Ratin to create a political power that threatened the other Hidden Villages. Due to this, Jiraiya became a pariah in Konoha, focusing on his spy network outside.

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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Years ago, Jiraiya taught Yahiko, Nagato, and Konan so they could not only protect themselves in Rain but also use their powers for good through Ninshu. The three of them became the Akatsuki, then took over the Nation of Ratin Rain to create a political power that threatened the other Hidden Villages. Due to this, Jiraiya became a pariah in Konoha, focusing on his spy network outside.
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* PyrrhicVictory: Chapter 74 describes [[spoiler:Konoha stopping the Rain invasion]] as this. [[spoiler:Even though Minato's arrival ended the war, along with Rain suffering from the death of three S-class Rain nin and over 800 nin overall plus the loss of the Sanbi, Konoha lost ''over two-thousand'' ninjas, thrice as many ninjas dead and twice as many civilians killed]].

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* PyrrhicVictory: Chapter 74 describes [[spoiler:Konoha stopping the Rain invasion]] as this. [[spoiler:Even though Minato's arrival ended the war, along with Rain suffering from the death of three S-class Rain nin and over 800 nin overall plus the loss of the Sanbi, Konoha lost ''over two-thousand'' ninjas, with thrice as many ninjas dead injured and twice as many civilians killed]].

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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Years ago, Jiraiya taught Yahiko, Nagato, and Konan so they could not only protect themselves in Rain but also use their powers for good through Ninshu. The three of them became the Akatsuki, then took over the Nation of Rain to create a political power that threatened the other Hidden Villages. Due to this, Jiraiya became a pariah in Konoha, focusing on his spy network outside.

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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Years ago, Jiraiya taught Yahiko, Nagato, and Konan so they could not only protect themselves in Rain but also use their powers for good through Ninshu. The three of them became the Akatsuki, then took over the Nation of Rain Ratin to create a political power that threatened the other Hidden Villages. Due to this, Jiraiya became a pariah in Konoha, focusing on his spy network outside.


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*** Having a more stable childhood also gives Sasuke a better chance at forming relationships outside of his team, such as ShipTease and eventually a first date with [[spoiler:Hinata]].



** Hiruzen Sarutobi in canon died [[HeroicSacrifice sacrificing his soul to the Shinigami to seal the souls of the First and Second Hokage and greatly injure Orochimaru]], while in the story [[spoiler:he dies in the process of defeating Sasori]].



* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Years ago, Jiraiya taught Yahiko, Nagato, and Konan so they could not only protect themselves in Rain but also use their powers for good through Ninshu. The three of them became the Akatsuki, then took over the Nation of Rain to create a political power that threatens the other Hidden Villages. Due to this, Jiraiya became a pariah in Konoha, focusing on his spy network outside.

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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Years ago, Jiraiya taught Yahiko, Nagato, and Konan so they could not only protect themselves in Rain but also use their powers for good through Ninshu. The three of them became the Akatsuki, then took over the Nation of Rain to create a political power that threatens threatened the other Hidden Villages. Due to this, Jiraiya became a pariah in Konoha, focusing on his spy network outside.


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* OneManArmy: In chapter 72, Minato Namikaze demonstrates why he has a "flee on sight" designation [[spoiler:when he first [[BigDamnHero kills all 42 enemy shinobi that had surrounded Sasuke and Hinata in a single minute]], then slaughtered hundred of rain shinobi with ruthless precision ''and'' pin down the Sanbi with giant toad summons, ultimately ending the invasion in ''minutes'']].
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* AdaptationalUpbringingChange:
** Sasuke's mother Mikoto, along with other Uchihas, survived the massacre by Itachi. Though Sasuke still wants to avenge his clan, he's a lot more mentally adjusted and more willing to socialize.
** While in canon Naruto was an orphan, here his parents survived and he was raised in a happy household, giving Naruto greater social and shinobi skills and never became a prankster [[AttentionWhore desiring attention]] from village that shun him or wanting to become Hokage and earn the people respect. However, his lack of status as either an orphan or a Jinchuriki means he isn't able to connect to enemies like Gaara.
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* HeWhoFightsMonsters: [[spoiler:Following the Tail Beast Cannon attack on the Amegakure, the Akatsuki founders start to fall to the same evil that plagued the Land of Rain in their childhood. Konan takes some of the Akatsuki to fight the Hidden Cloud within the Land of Frost, just as their own country was used as a theater of war. Meanwhile, Yahiko goes behind her and Nagato's backs to preemptively destroy the Hidden Leaf through a surprise invasion]].
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* ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated: [[spoiler:Haku, who was thought to have died from the Tailed Beast Canon Cloud fired onto Rain, is revealed to be alive in chapter 68 when he comes to Konoha and asked Sakura to return to rain]].

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* ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated: [[spoiler:Haku, who was thought to have died from the Tailed Beast Canon Cannon Cloud fired onto Rain, is revealed to be alive in chapter 68 when he comes to Konoha and asked Sakura to return to rain]].



* WeaponOfMassDestruction: [[spoiler:The Hidden Cloud had forced Katasuke Touno to use his Chakra Projector technology into making a Tailed Beast Canon, which would channel the power of a Tailed Beast into a concentrated attack. Katasuke estimates that its range is enough to fire across the world and hit itself. And to demonstrate such power, they picked the Hidden Rain as their first target]].

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* WeaponOfMassDestruction: [[spoiler:The Hidden Cloud had forced Katasuke Touno to use his Chakra Projector technology into making a Tailed Beast Canon, Cannon, which would channel the power of a Tailed Beast into a concentrated attack. Katasuke estimates that its range is enough to fire across the world and hit itself. And to demonstrate such power, they picked the Hidden Rain as their first target]].
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** Obviously, Obito never undergoes his FaceHeelTurn, meaning that the attack by the Nine Tails never takes place; Kushina and Minato are both very much alive, and Kushi remains the Nine-Tails’ Jinchuriki instead of Naruto. Rin is alive as well, since Obito saved her with the Kamui, rather than the incomplete-Chidori.

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** Obviously, Obito never undergoes his FaceHeelTurn, meaning that the attack by the Nine Tails never takes place; Kushina and Minato are both very much alive, and Kushi Kushina remains the Nine-Tails’ Jinchuriki instead of Naruto. Rin is alive as well, since Obito saved her with the Kamui, rather than the incomplete-Chidori.
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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: [[spoiler:After Obito learns about the Hidden Cloud's [[WeaponOfMassDestruction Tailed Beast Canon]], he rushes back to the Leaf with Katasuke Touno to warn Minato to prepare for the attack, who takes Katasuke for further information about the weapon. Afterwards, Kushina brings up to Obito that the Cloud is too cautious about Minato's strength to confront him immediently, and that they would want to demonstrate and test their newest weapon first. To do that they'll need to target a nation with few allies and no one would be bother about... like the Nation of Rain where Team 7 is stationed]].

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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: [[spoiler:After Obito learns about the Hidden Cloud's [[WeaponOfMassDestruction Tailed Beast Canon]], Cannon]], he rushes back to the Leaf with Katasuke Touno to warn Minato to prepare for the attack, who takes Katasuke for further information about the weapon. Afterwards, Kushina brings up to Obito that the Cloud is too cautious about Minato's strength to confront him immediently, and that they would want to demonstrate and test their newest weapon first. To do that they'll need to target a nation with few allies and no one would be bother about... like the Nation of Rain where Team 7 is stationed]].
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* OffWithHisHead: [[spoiler:Kushina finishes off Kimimaro Kaguya by ripping off his head. Double Subverted as Kimimaro [[LosingHisHead is still alive and starts to rebuild his body from the neck down]], but Kushina crushes his skull between her hands]].

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But this is ''not'' the world you know; Kakashi's death and Obito's return to Konoha have created ripples upon ripples, resulting in a ''vastly'' different setting, with new challenges.

Obito-Sensei can be read here at [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10151225/1/Obito-Sensei Fanfiction.net]], here at [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/obito-sensei-naruto-au.856521/ Spacebattles.com]]and here at [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/obito-sensei-a-sakura-centric-naruto-au.67785/ Sufficient Velocity.com]]

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But this is ''not'' the world you know; Kakashi's death and Obito's return to Konoha have created ripples upon ripples, resulting in a ''vastly'' different setting, with new challenges.

challenges. Or: Obito surviving wrecks everything, in twenty steps or less.

Described by the writer as taking considerable inspiration in themes, character arcs and plot devices from ''Manga/AttackOnTitan'' and ''Manga/VinlandSaga'' the project explores the social and cultural underpinnings of the Naruto setting the the violence based state of affairs that drive the Shinobi World and how one world's heroes can be another world's villains and vice versa.

Written by Ser Serendipity the author known for producing well regarded Naruto Re-Write/fanfic ''Not Sick'' and the crossover story https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/Myrmridon
Obito-Sensei can be read here at [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10151225/1/Obito-Sensei Fanfiction.net]], here at [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/obito-sensei-naruto-au.856521/ Spacebattles.com]]and here at [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/obito-sensei-a-sakura-centric-naruto-au.67785/ Sufficient Velocity.com]]
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** [[spoiler:Haku dies gears after his canon death after Tenten cuts him down from throat to hip]].

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* WhatTheHellHero: In chapter 72, Jiraiya is furious at his former student Yahiko [[spoiler:when he finds out the latter used the negotiation meeting between him and Minato as a distraction while some of his forces invade Konoha]].



* WhatTheHellHero: In chapter 72, Jiraiya is furious at his former student Yahiko [[spoiler_when he finds out the latter used the negotiation meeting between him and Minato as a distraction while some of his forces invade Konoha]]_

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* WhatTheHellHero: In chapter 72, Jiraiya is furious at his former student Yahiko [[spoiler:when he finds out the latter used the negotiation meeting between him and Minato as a distraction while some of his forces invade Konoha]].
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* ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated: [[spoiler:Haku, who was thought to have died from the Tailed Beast Canon Cloud fired onto Rain, is revealed to be alive in chapter 68 when he comes to Konoha and asked Sakura to return to rain]].
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* HowTheMightyHaveFallen: Boy, was Madara Uchiha especially hit with this here. The ninja who was capable of fighting Hashirama to a standstill along with being able to fight off an entire army, the Five Kage and the whole known world ''by himself'' and becoming the Ten Tails Jinchuriki in canon...was reduced to an Edo Tensei zombie to be used for Orochimaru's experiments, trapped in his old age unaware of the world around him and in immense pain.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Played with. On one hand, Obito not becoming Tobi means many people that should've died in canon still live with Naruto and Sasuke having happier childhoods due to lacking the issues that have plagued them thanks to Obito/Tobi attacking the Hidden Leaf. On the ''other'' hand, the story doesn't shy away the horrors of the Ninja System with even the Hidden Leaf having a few skeletons in the closet.

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