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* RecursiveFanfiction: The characters from [[spoiler:the fangame ''VideoGame/StoryOfTheBlanks'']] play a major role in the plot.
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* [[TragicMonster Tragic Monsters]]: Thorne turns [[spoiler:Spike and the Cutie Mark Crusaders into [[BodyHorror hideous]] mind-controlled monsters, essentially just to torture both them and the Mane Six]].
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* [[TragicMonster Tragic Monsters]]: Thorne turns [[spoiler:Spike and the Cutie Mark Crusaders Crusaders]] into [[BodyHorror hideous]] mind-controlled monsters, essentially just to torture both them and the [[spoiler:the Mane Six]].
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* AppropriateAnimalAttire: John is a bit mystified when Rarity goes behind a screen to take off her fluffy nightgown.
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-->'''John:''' I wondered me why she felt the need to have privacy to undress but not to walk around naked as the day she’d been born...
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* SummonEverymanHero: How John gets to Equestria. The Mane 6 performed a summoning ritual with the Elements of Harmony, and he's what turned up. Admittedly he strains the "everyman" part a bit, since he has previous experience fighting dark magic, but on the other hand he's pretty folksy and sees himself as a musician first and foremost.
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* ButNowIMustGo: [[spoiler:Shortly after Thorne is defeated, the magic that brought John to Equestria in the first place kicks in again and pulls him back to Earth. ]]
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* NarniaTime: Thorne taunts John with this possibility, saying that even if the Equestrians do manage to send John home again, there's no guarantee they'll return him to the correct ''time''. John worries over this, and can't imagine how he'll cope if he arrives home after everyone he loves is dead and gone. [[spoiler:When he ''does'' get home, he's only been gone a week.]]
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* SealedEvilInACan: [[spoiler:Discord, the story implicitly taking place between the Season Two Opener and "Keep Calm And Flutter On"]]
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** [[spoiler:Discord, the story implicitly taking place between the Season Two Opener and "Keep Calm And FlutterOn"]]On"]]
** The ''Letters of Cold Fire'' while it is sealed in the enchanted safe. Though even this is not enough to overcome the book's ClingyMacGuffin nature, which means the ''entire safe'' moves around if the book feels it is in the wrong place.
** [[spoiler:Discord, the story implicitly taking place between the Season Two Opener and "Keep Calm And Flutter
** The ''Letters of Cold Fire'' while it is sealed in the enchanted safe. Though even this is not enough to overcome the book's ClingyMacGuffin nature, which means the ''entire safe'' moves around if the book feels it is in the wrong place.
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* ColdIron: Zecora's staff is made of cold-worked iron and ash wood, which gives it some extra ''oomph'' against Thorne's minions.
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** When Thorne first shows up on Twilight's doorstep, he pointedly asks if "I and all I bring with me" may enter. Twilight says yes. John later explains to her that this probably gave Thorne power (or ''more'' power, anyway) to do evil things to her. Twilight is skeptical, as the entire concept of evil asking permission is foreign to Equestrian magic.
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** When Thorne first shows up on Twilight's doorstep, he pointedly asks if "I and all I bring with me" may enter. Twilight says yes. John later explains to her that this probably gave Thorne power (or perhaps just ''more'' power, anyway) power) to do evil things to her. Twilight is skeptical, as the entire concept of evil asking permission is foreign to Equestrian magic.
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* BaldOfEvil: Thorne is ''unnaturally'' bald; he's so completely hairless that he doesn't even have eyebrows or eyelashes.
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** When Thorne first shows up on Twilight's doorstep, he pointedly asks if "I and all I bring with me" may enter. Twilight says yes. John later explains to her that this probably gave Thorne power (or ''more'' power, anyway) to do evil things to her. Twilight is skeptical, as the entire concept of evil asking permission is foreign to Equestrian magic.
** Later, Ruby needs permission to enter Zecora's house because of the ward John put up.
** When Thorne first shows up on Twilight's doorstep, he pointedly asks if "I and all I bring with me" may enter. Twilight says yes. John later explains to her that this probably gave Thorne power (or ''more'' power, anyway) to do evil things to her. Twilight is skeptical, as the entire concept of evil asking permission is foreign to Equestrian magic.
** Later, Ruby needs permission to enter Zecora's house because of the ward John put up.
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** [[spoiler:Princess Celestia, when Thorne tries to presume on her good nature after he has attacked Equestria and ''murdered'' ponies. Do not hurt her little ponies! And do not assume that an [[TimeAbyss ancient]] [[PhysicalGoddess Alicorn]] [[RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething ruling]] [[BadassPrincess Princess]] is foolish or weak!]]
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** [[spoiler:Princess Celestia, when Thorne tries to presume on her good nature after he has attacked Equestria and ''murdered'' ponies. Do not hurt her little ponies! And do not assume that an [[TimeAbyss ancient]] [[PhysicalGoddess Alicorn]] [[RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething ruling]] [[BadassPrincess Princess]] Princess is foolish or weak!]]
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** Twilight Sparkle, when she [[spoiler:thinks that Thorne's attack has killed Rarity]]. You get to see why she is known as one of the strongest mages in Equestria. This is even more BadAss when one considers that this is ''pre''-Alicorn Twilight!
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** Twilight Sparkle, when she [[spoiler:thinks that Thorne's attack has killed Rarity]]. You get to see why she is known as one of the strongest mages in Equestria. This is even more BadAss badass when one considers that this is ''pre''-Alicorn Twilight!
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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: [[spoiler:The ''Letters of Cold Fire'' contains a spell to summon Discord from his imprisonment]]. The names it invokes include Melkor (Creator/JRRTolkien's GodOfEvil, aka "Morgoth"); Arioch (one of Creator/MichaelMoorcock's greater [[GodOfEvil Chaos Lords]]); Grogar (the demonic ruler of Tambelon in the G1 MyLittlePony series); Iblis (Muslim name for the Devil); Jadis (the [[EvilSorceress White Witch]] from CSLewis' [[Literature/TheChroniclesOfNarnia Chronicles of Narnia]]); Leviathan (both a Biblical beast and the BigBad of Creator/CliveBarker's ''Franchise/{{Hellraiser}}'' series; Sombra (the Shadow Unicorn King who oppressed the Crystal Empire in MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic's Season 3 Opener; Tirek (the demon-centaur from the first MyLittlePony movie); and Tash (the GodOfEvil from CSLewis' [[Literature/TheChroniclesOfNarnia Chronicles of Narnia]]). You just ''know'' that a spell invoking beings like that [[SarcasmMode isn't going to be about pulling flowers out of a top hat]].
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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: [[spoiler:The ''Letters of Cold Fire'' contains a spell to summon Discord from his imprisonment]]. The names it invokes include Melkor (Creator/JRRTolkien's GodOfEvil, aka "Morgoth"); Arioch (one of Creator/MichaelMoorcock's greater [[GodOfEvil Chaos Lords]]); Grogar (the demonic ruler of Tambelon in the G1 MyLittlePony series); Iblis (Muslim name for the Devil); Jadis (the [[EvilSorceress White Witch]] from CSLewis' Creator/CSLewis' [[Literature/TheChroniclesOfNarnia Chronicles of Narnia]]); Leviathan (both a Biblical beast and the BigBad of Creator/CliveBarker's ''Franchise/{{Hellraiser}}'' series; Sombra (the Shadow Unicorn King who oppressed the Crystal Empire in MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic's Season 3 Opener; Tirek (the demon-centaur from the first MyLittlePony movie); and Tash (the GodOfEvil from CSLewis' Creator/CSLewis' [[Literature/TheChroniclesOfNarnia Chronicles of Narnia]]). You just ''know'' that a spell invoking beings like that [[SarcasmMode isn't going to be about pulling flowers out of a top hat]].
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* OutsideContextVillain: [[spoiler:Thorne]] is this for the story. His [[BlackMagic powers]] are alien to the usual kind of magic practiced in Equestria. [[EvilOverlord His goals are all too familiar, though.]]
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* OutsideContextVillain: OutsideContextProblem: [[spoiler:Thorne]] is this for the story. His [[BlackMagic powers]] are alien to the usual kind of magic practiced in Equestria. [[EvilOverlord His goals are all too familiar, though.]]
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A ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''/Creator/ManlyWadeWellman {{Crossover}} fanfiction in which [[Literature/SilverJohn Wellman's most famous character]] is summoned to Equestria to fight against [[EvilSorcerer Rowley Thorne]], a human wizard from John's world. Thorne has been brought to Equestria by an old enemy of the Mane Six and Celestia, who seeks his aid in [[SealedEvilInACan freeing himself from imprisonment]]. When the first attempt almost works, the Mane Six decide to summon some help in dealing with their strange enemy and end up with... [[Literature/SilverJohn a hillbilly with a silver-strung guitar]]? The story is notable for its excellent use of canon characters and well-crafted world-building regarding both continuities.
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A ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''/Creator/ManlyWadeWellman ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''[=/=]Creator/ManlyWadeWellman {{Crossover}} fanfiction in which [[Literature/SilverJohn Wellman's most famous character]] is summoned to Equestria to fight against [[EvilSorcerer Rowley Thorne]], a human wizard from John's world. Thorne has been brought to Equestria by an old enemy of the Mane Six and Celestia, who seeks his aid in [[SealedEvilInACan freeing himself from imprisonment]]. When the first attempt almost works, the Mane Six decide to summon some help in dealing with their strange enemy and end up with... [[Literature/SilverJohn a hillbilly with a silver-strung guitar]]? The story is notable for its excellent use of canon characters and well-crafted world-building regarding both continuities.
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* ContinuityNod: To many {{Literature/SilverJohn}} stories, and several other stories by ManlyWadeWellman.
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* ContinuityNod: To many {{Literature/SilverJohn}} stories, and several other stories by ManlyWadeWellman.Creator/ManlyWadeWellman.
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* TheLostWoods: The Everfree Forest. Between the usual monsters and [[spoiler:the Sunny Town undead]], it's not a place even John cares to wander -- especially at night.
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* TheLostWoods: The Everfree Forest. Between the usual monsters and [[spoiler:the Sunny Town undead]], it's not a place even John cares to wander through -- especially at night.
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* [AGodAmI: [spoiler:Thorne's ultimate plan is to use the power of the ''Letters of Cold Fire'' to transform himself into a [[MadGod Nightmare]] [[PhysicalGod Alicorn]] [[LargeAndInCharge stallion]] and become the [[EvilOverlord tyrant]] of as much of Equestria as he can hold against Discord, with the hope of ruling the whole world. Thorne temporarily achieves the first part of this goal]].
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* [AGodAmI: [spoiler:Thorne's AGodAmI: [[spoiler:Thorne's ultimate plan is to use the power of the ''Letters of Cold Fire'' to transform himself into a [[MadGod Nightmare]] [[PhysicalGod Alicorn]] [[LargeAndInCharge stallion]] and become the [[EvilOverlord tyrant]] of as much of Equestria as he can hold against Discord, with the hope of ruling the whole world. Thorne temporarily achieves the first part of this goal]].
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* [[spoiler:AGodAmI: Thorne's ultimate plan is to use the power of the ''Letters of Cold Fire'' to transform himself into a [[MadGod Nightmare]] [[PhysicalGod Alicorn]] [[LargeAndInCharge stallion]] and become the [[EvilOverlord tyrant]] of as much of Equestria as he can hold against Discord, with the hope of ruling the whole world. Thorne temporarily achieves the first part of this goal]].
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* [[spoiler:AGodAmI: Thorne's [AGodAmI: [spoiler:Thorne's ultimate plan is to use the power of the ''Letters of Cold Fire'' to transform himself into a [[MadGod Nightmare]] [[PhysicalGod Alicorn]] [[LargeAndInCharge stallion]] and become the [[EvilOverlord tyrant]] of as much of Equestria as he can hold against Discord, with the hope of ruling the whole world. Thorne temporarily achieves the first part of this goal]].
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** Thorne and [[spoiler:the Sunny Town undead, as in their [[StoryOfTheBlanks original appearance]]]] are only too willing to kill Apple Bloom and [[spoiler:make her one of them]]. John shows up just in time to save her.
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** Thorne and [[spoiler:the Sunny Town undead, as in their [[StoryOfTheBlanks [[VideoGame/StoryOfTheBlanks original appearance]]]] are only too willing to kill Apple Bloom and [[spoiler:make her one of them]]. John shows up just in time to save her.
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* ClingyMacGuffin: Thorne's 'gift' to Twilight Sparkle, the ''Letters of Cold Fire'', proves very difficult to get rid of. [[spoiler:Not even Princess Celestia can rid her of it.]] Thankfully John knows precisely how to rid her of it. [[FromBadToWorse That's when Thorne decides to stop playing games.]]
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A ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''/Creator/ManlyWadeWellman {{Crossover}} fanfiction in which [[Literature/SilverJohn Wellman's most famous character]] is summoned to Equestria to fight against [[EvilSorceror Rowley Thorne]], a human wizard from John's world. Thorne has been brought to Equestria by an old enemy of the Mane Six and Celestia, who seeks his aid in [[SealedEvilInACan freeing himself from imprisonment]]. When the first attempt almost works, the Mane Six decide to summon some help in dealing with their strange enemy and end up with... [[Literature/SilverJohn a hillbilly with a silver-strung guitar]]? The story is notable for its excellent use of canon characters and well-crafted world-building regarding both continuities.
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A ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''/Creator/ManlyWadeWellman {{Crossover}} fanfiction in which [[Literature/SilverJohn Wellman's most famous character]] is summoned to Equestria to fight against [[EvilSorceror [[EvilSorcerer Rowley Thorne]], a human wizard from John's world. Thorne has been brought to Equestria by an old enemy of the Mane Six and Celestia, who seeks his aid in [[SealedEvilInACan freeing himself from imprisonment]]. When the first attempt almost works, the Mane Six decide to summon some help in dealing with their strange enemy and end up with... [[Literature/SilverJohn a hillbilly with a silver-strung guitar]]? The story is notable for its excellent use of canon characters and well-crafted world-building regarding both continuities.
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* BigBad: Rowley Thorne, an EvilSorceror who has been brought to Equestria by [[spoiler:Discord]].
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* NoHonorAmongThieves: Thorne and [[spoiler:Discord]] are each planning to betray the other once the Princesses have been defeated. What's more, they both know that the ''other'' knows it too. This bothers neither of them: it's just the way things are between an EvilSorceror and his [[spoiler:[[MadGod insane]] [[ChaosIsEvil chaotic]] patron]].
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* NoHonorAmongThieves: Thorne and [[spoiler:Discord]] are each planning to betray the other once the Princesses have been defeated. What's more, they both know that the ''other'' knows it too. This bothers neither of them: it's just the way things are between an EvilSorceror EvilSorcerer and his [[spoiler:[[MadGod insane]] [[ChaosIsEvil chaotic]] patron]].
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A ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''/Creator/ManlyWadeWellman {{Crossover}} fanfiction in which [[Literature/SilverJohn Wellman's most famous character]] is summoned to Equestria to fight against [[EvilSorceror Rowley Thorne]], a human wizard from John's world. Thorne has been brought to Equestria by an old enemy of the Mane Six and Celestia, [[spoiler:Discord]], who seeks his aid in [[SealedEvilInACan freeing himself from imprisonment]]. When the first attempt almost works, the Mane Six decide to summon some help in dealing with their strange enemy and end up with... [[Literature/SilverJohn a hillbilly with a silver-strung guitar]]? The story is notable for its excellent use of canon characters and well-crafted world-building regarding both continuities.
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* ShoutOut: At one point Twilight sees Pinkie Pie talking to [[Series/DrWho a brown stallion with an hourglass cutie mark]]. He asks if she's sure they don't need his help, only for Pinkie to respond that no, they're okay, and besides [[BreakingTheFourthWall this is a different crossover entirely]].
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* ShoutOut: At one point Twilight sees Pinkie Pie talking to [[Series/DrWho [[Series/DoctorWho a brown stallion with an hourglass cutie mark]]. He asks if she's sure they don't need his help, only for Pinkie to respond that no, they're okay, and besides [[BreakingTheFourthWall this is a different crossover entirely]].
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A MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic / ManlyWadeWellman ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''/Creator/ManlyWadeWellman {{Crossover}} fanfiction in which [[Literature/SilverJohn Wellman's most famous character]] is summoned to Equestria to fight against [[EvilSorceror Rowley Thorne]], a human wizard from John's world. Thorne has been brought to Equestria by an old enemy of the Mane Six and Celestia, [[spoiler:Discord]], who seeks his aid in [[SealedEvilInACan freeing himself from imprisonment]]. When the first attempt almost works, the Mane Six decide to summon some help in dealing with their strange enemy and end up with... [[Literature/SilverJohn a hillbilly with a silver-strung guitar]]? The story is notable for its excellent use of canon characters and well-crafted world-building regarding both continuities.
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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: [[spoiler:The ''Letters of Cold Fire'' contains a spell to summon Discord from his imprisonment]]. The names it invokes include Melkor (Creator/JRRTolkien's GodOfEvil, aka "Morgoth"); Arioch (one of MichaelMoorcock's greater [[GodOfEvil Chaos Lords]]); Grogar (the demonic ruler of Tambelon in the G1 MyLittlePony series); Iblis (Muslim name for the Devil); Jadis (the [[EvilSorceress White Witch]] from CSLewis' [[Literature/TheChroniclesOfNarnia Chronicles of Narnia]]); Leviathan (both a Biblical beast and the BigBad of Creator/CliveBarker's ''Franchise/{{Hellraiser}}'' series; Sombra (the Shadow Unicorn King who oppressed the Crystal Empire in MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic's Season 3 Opener; Tirek (the demon-centaur from the first MyLittlePony movie); and Tash (the GodOfEvil from CSLewis' [[Literature/TheChroniclesOfNarnia Chronicles of Narnia]]). You just ''know'' that a spell invoking beings like that [[SarcasmMode isn't going to be about pulling flowers out of a top hat]].
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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: [[spoiler:The ''Letters of Cold Fire'' contains a spell to summon Discord from his imprisonment]]. The names it invokes include Melkor (Creator/JRRTolkien's GodOfEvil, aka "Morgoth"); Arioch (one of MichaelMoorcock's Creator/MichaelMoorcock's greater [[GodOfEvil Chaos Lords]]); Grogar (the demonic ruler of Tambelon in the G1 MyLittlePony series); Iblis (Muslim name for the Devil); Jadis (the [[EvilSorceress White Witch]] from CSLewis' [[Literature/TheChroniclesOfNarnia Chronicles of Narnia]]); Leviathan (both a Biblical beast and the BigBad of Creator/CliveBarker's ''Franchise/{{Hellraiser}}'' series; Sombra (the Shadow Unicorn King who oppressed the Crystal Empire in MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic's Season 3 Opener; Tirek (the demon-centaur from the first MyLittlePony movie); and Tash (the GodOfEvil from CSLewis' [[Literature/TheChroniclesOfNarnia Chronicles of Narnia]]). You just ''know'' that a spell invoking beings like that [[SarcasmMode isn't going to be about pulling flowers out of a top hat]].
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* [[spoiler:NotQuiteDead: Rarity, when she is caught by Thorne's death spell. Everyone thinks she was killed, which pushes Twilight's BerserkButton and Spike into a short HeroicBSOD. Fortunately, she is protected either by her Element, or by John's ProtectiveCharm]].
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* OutsideContextVillain: [[spoiler:Thorne]] is this for the story. His [[BlackMagic powers]] are alien to the usual kind of magic practiced in Equestria. [[EvilOverlord His goals are all too familiar, though.]]
* OutsideContextVillain: [[spoiler:Thorne]] is this for the story. His [[BlackMagic powers]] are alien to the usual kind of magic practiced in Equestria. [[EvilOverlord His goals are all too familiar, though.]]
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** Also happens to John and the Mane Six when Thorne reclaims the ''Letters of Cold Fire'' and [[Spoiler:turns the Everfree into some hellish otherworldly place.]] It's so terrifying that even the Everfree dragons abandon their hoards and flee in blind panic.
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** For a certain definition 'villain', this also happens to [[Spoiler:Lyra]] during the 'Battle of Ponyville' when a furious Twilight [[BewareTheNiceOnes almost kills her]] [[Spoiler:after Lyra seems to kill Rarity and DOES kill Captain Bastion.]] The poor mare is horrified to realize just how much damage she's unwillingly done.
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