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** After Jenna is given her own guardian fairy by the Great Deku Tree, Mido is the only one who points out that there's no reason for her to have one. [[JerkassHasAPoint He has a completely legitimate point there]], since Jenna is not a Kokiri.[[note]]The justification is also rather flimsy; Jenna's fairy is supposed to protect her should Ganondorf return, but the game shows that Ganondorf is far more powerful than Link's own guardian fairy, who was useless in the fight against him. In the DistantFinale story ''Mother Goddess'', Ganondorf finally does return (somehow), and sure enough, the fairies are powerless against him.[[/note]] Of course, Saria instantly gets all up in Mido's business for this, yelling at him for having the gall to suggest that Jenna doesn't deserve every little thing she is given.
** Throughout the story, it's told that griffins don't trust people. However, the only ones to actually display any mistrust, a pair of guards, are subsequently yelled at for goofing off on the job. Even though it's a guard's ''job'' to be suspicious.
** Throughout the story, it's told that griffins don't trust people. However, the only ones to actually display any mistrust, a pair of guards, are subsequently yelled at for goofing off on the job. Even though it's a guard's ''job'' to be suspicious.
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** After Jenna is given her own guardian fairy by the Great Deku Tree, Mido is the only one who points out that there's no reason for her to have one. [[JerkassHasAPoint He has a completely legitimate point there]], since Jenna is not a Kokiri.[[note]]The justification is also rather flimsy; Jenna's Jenna gets a fairy is simply because Link used to have one, and they're supposed to protect her them should Ganondorf return, but return. But the game shows that Ganondorf is far more powerful than Link's own guardian fairy, who was useless in the fight against him. In the DistantFinale story ''Mother Goddess'', Ganondorf finally does return (somehow), and sure enough, the fairies are powerless against him.[[/note]] Of course, Saria instantly gets all up in Mido's business for this, yelling at him for having the gall to suggest pointing out that Link and Jenna doesn't deserve every little thing she is given.
are adults and non-Kokiri.
** Throughout the story, it's told that griffins don't trust people. However, the only ones to actually display any mistrust, a pair of guards, are subsequently yelled at for goofing off on thejob. Even job, even though it's a guard's ''job'' to be suspicious.
** Throughout the story, it's told that griffins don't trust people. However, the only ones to actually display any mistrust, a pair of guards, are subsequently yelled at for goofing off on the
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* ElementalPowers: Jenna discovers she has these.
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* ElementalPowers: Jenna discovers she has these. Interestingly, the Silverlite race is suggested to only have one power each, but Jenna was born with two ''and'' inherited both of her parents' powers.
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** Jenna is ''constantly'' forgetting that she can control the elements and thus dispose of most enemies in no time flat. Or rather, she remembers only after everyone else has been incapacitated and she's been cornered, or she'll remember it outside of a battle so she can use it as a reason why she's not a DamselInDistress, but every other time, she just forgets. It makes scenes that are supposed to be tense actually more stupid than they already were.
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** Jenna is ''constantly'' forgetting that she can control the elements and thus dispose of most enemies in no time flat. Or rather, she remembers only after everyone else has been incapacitated and she's been cornered, or she'll remember it outside of a battle so she can use it as a reason why she's not a DamselInDistress, but every other time, she just forgets. It This makes certain scenes that are supposed to lose any sense of tension, as the reader doesn't worry if Jenna will be tense actually more stupid than they already were.alright, but keeps asking why she doesn't just bust out her powers.
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->''"Dreams come in many forms. Some good, some bad, some very realistic, even ones that [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment feels very real]]."''
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->''"Dreams come in many forms. Some good, some bad, some very realistic, even ones that [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment feels very real]].real."''
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* {{Catchphrase}}: 80% of Dalamar's dialogue is a request for expediency. "We must make haste!" is his most common.
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* CharacterCatchphrase: 80% of Dalamar's dialogue is a request for expediency. "We must make haste!" is his most common.
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A PPC mission to this fic exists. Jenna has been dealt with.
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If those aren't enough to quell your interest, there is also a reenactment in ''VideoGame/TheSims2'', part one of which can be found [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F9z2rLuD0ss/ here]]. Also recommended is this [[http://zelda-queen.livejournal.com/18688.html sporking]]. Two more interesting sporks are [[http://thepdohf.blogspot.com/2012/08/a-nightmare-on-hyrule-field-part-1-get.html here]] and [[https://celestiallapras.livejournal.com/15073.html here]].
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If those aren't enough to quell your interest, there is also a reenactment in ''VideoGame/TheSims2'', part one of which can be found [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F9z2rLuD0ss/ here]]. Also recommended is this [[http://zelda-queen.livejournal.com/18688.html sporking]]. Two more interesting sporks are [[http://thepdohf.blogspot.com/2012/08/a-nightmare-on-hyrule-field-part-1-get.html here]] and [[https://celestiallapras.livejournal.com/15073.html here]]. There is also a mission to this fic by the WebOriginal/ProtectorsOfThePlotContinuum, found [[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-hbT8L1HuI_qVVY_aqIi9e0eD6erAFKkBVh05hD5gHM here]].
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The author [[CutShort never actually finished the story]], but it lives on in the memories of many traumatized and amused ''Zelda'' fans. The story, plus a shrine to the author herself, can be found [[http://linksqueen.tripod.com/ here]]. You can also hear an incomplete DramaticReading [[https://www.youtube.com/user/RenegadeTimeLady here]]. In February 2021, mutant museum[[note]]formerly manwithoutabody[[/note]], who did the very first DramaticReading (some of which is still available on [=archive.org=], but is no longer available on [=YouTube=]), began a remake, which is being re-uploaded (with the sex scenes cut out) [[https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLNGVCw_DBevTeNU2Kh-0kI90wozys3ldV here]] after his original channel was terminated, presumably due to the story's explicit content.
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The author [[CutShort never actually finished the story]], but it lives on in the memories of many traumatized and amused ''Zelda'' fans. The story, plus a shrine to the author herself, can be found [[http://linksqueen.tripod.com/ here]]. You can also hear an incomplete DramaticReading [[https://www.youtube.com/user/RenegadeTimeLady here]]. In February 2021, mutant museum[[note]]formerly manwithoutabody[[/note]], who did the very first DramaticReading (some of which is still available on [=archive.org=], but is no longer available on [=YouTube=]), began a remake, which is being was re-uploaded (with the sex scenes cut out) in a playlist over [[https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLNGVCw_DBevTeNU2Kh-0kI90wozys3ldV here]] after his original channel was terminated, presumably due to the story's explicit content.
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** After Jenna is given her own guardian fairy by the Great Deku Tree, Mido is the only one who points out that there's no reason for her to have one. [[JerkassHasAPoint He has a completely legitimate point there]], since Jenna is not a Kokiri.[[note]]The justification is also rather flimsy; Jenna's fairy is supposed to protect her should Ganondorf return, but the game shows that Ganondorf is far more powerful than Link's own guardian fairy, who was useless in the fight against him. In the DistantCoda story ''Mother Goddess'', Ganondorf finally does return (somehow), and sure enough, the fairies are powerless against him.[[/note]] Of course, Saria instantly gets all up in Mido's business for this, yelling at him for having the gall to suggest that Jenna doesn't deserve every little thing she is given.
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** After Jenna is given her own guardian fairy by the Great Deku Tree, Mido is the only one who points out that there's no reason for her to have one. [[JerkassHasAPoint He has a completely legitimate point there]], since Jenna is not a Kokiri.[[note]]The justification is also rather flimsy; Jenna's fairy is supposed to protect her should Ganondorf return, but the game shows that Ganondorf is far more powerful than Link's own guardian fairy, who was useless in the fight against him. In the DistantCoda DistantFinale story ''Mother Goddess'', Ganondorf finally does return (somehow), and sure enough, the fairies are powerless against him.[[/note]] Of course, Saria instantly gets all up in Mido's business for this, yelling at him for having the gall to suggest that Jenna doesn't deserve every little thing she is given.
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** Another conflict is set up towards the end, involving Jenna and Link getting in the thick of a brewing war amongst CanonForeigner countries. It reaches its climax when a huge bat-like creature attacks them at night and they opt to run away to Hyrule Castle instead of fighting. The story ends that same chapter and we're LeftHanging.
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** Another conflict is set up towards In the end, involving Jenna and Link final few chapters, a more conventional fantasy adventure narrative does start to form, with Hyrule getting in the thick of pulled into a brewing war amongst between CanonForeigner countries. It reaches its climax when a huge bat-like creature attacks them at night and they opt to run away to Hyrule Castle instead of fighting. The countries, but the story ends that same chapter stops there and we're LeftHanging.
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* InformedFlaw: As mention above, we're constantly told that the Griffins don't trust anybody. However the only time this is actually shown is by a pair of royal guards (whose job would require them to not trust everybody) who are promptly chewed out for doing so.
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* InformedFlaw: As mention mentioned above, we're constantly told that the Griffins don't trust anybody. However However, aside from a few vague mutterings of distrust from griffins in the crowd, the only time this is actually shown is by a pair of royal guards (whose job would require them to not trust everybody) who are promptly chewed out for doing so.
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* ItsAllAboutMe: Jenna, of course, especially when Hyrule goes to war and the only thought on her mind is how it will affect [[ProtagonistCenteredMorality ''her''.]]
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* ItsAllAboutMe: Jenna, of course, especially when Hyrule goes to war and the only thought on her mind is how it will affect [[ProtagonistCenteredMorality ''her''.]]''[[ProtagonistCenteredMorality her.]]''
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* PinkGirlBlueBoy: Link has Navi, who is colored blue, and Jenna gets a new fairy named Lilly, which is coloured pink.
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* PinkGirlBlueBoy: Link has Navi, who is colored blue, and Jenna gets a new fairy named Lilly, which is coloured pink. The jewelry they are given by the monks after the Bonding Ceremony is likewise colour-coded.
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** When the batlike creature takes off to chase Link and Jenna, it "[becomes] air born"
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** When the batlike creature takes off to chase Link and Jenna, it "[becomes] air born"born".
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** The use of the word "youngling" is generally understood to be a reference to the ''Franchise/StarWars'' prequels, which use that word a lot.
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** The use of the word "youngling" is generally understood to be a reference to the ''Franchise/StarWars'' prequels, which use that word a lot. It's generally assumed that Jen thought this was a more common term than it was.
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** Even though Jenna is determined to outshine Link in every capacity, she's still utterly devoted to him in a very anti-feminist way.
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** Even though Jenna is determined to outshine Link in every capacity, she's still utterly devoted to him in a very anti-feminist way. When they're addressing the Griffin Council, for example, she lets him do all the talking.
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** And according to Jenna, Zelda can only take the throne if she's ''married'' (despite the fact that Zelda has been canonically shown ruling Hyrule by herself without spouse or parents in the majority of the games), something Jenna is certain she will never do. No wonder, because Jenna took Link first.
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** And according to Jenna, Zelda can only take the throne if she's ''married'' (despite - despite the fact that Zelda has been canonically shown ruling Hyrule by herself without spouse or parents in the majority of the games), something Jenna is certain she will never do. No wonder, because Jenna took Link first.games.