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->Jaune had always wanted to go to a school to learn to battle the creatures of Grimm. But as a boy with no huntsmen training, no huntsmen knowledge, and no huntsmen transcripts, he had absolutely no chance of getting into a school like that legally. After scouring the darkest corners of the [=CCTNet=], he finally found a lead. A place called Grimm Academy.
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Jaune had always wanted to go to a school to learn to battle the creatures of Grimm. But as a boy with no huntsmen training, no huntsmen knowledge, and no huntsmen transcripts, he had absolutely no chance of getting into a school like that legally. After scouring the darkest corners of the [=CCTNet=], he finally found a lead. A place called Grimm Academy.
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* HornAttack: Horn fencing consists of two opponents clashing their horns against each other over and over until one submits. Since none of the hybrids seem to have reinforced skulls, it causes a lot of pain and dizziness.
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* RealityEnsues:
** Horn fencing consists of two opponents clashing their horns against each other over and over until one submits. Since none of the hybrids seem to have reinforced skulls, it causes a lot of pain and dizziness.
** Because the hybrids are encouraged to fight and kill each other, the class dwindles from a few dozen to six in only a couple months.
** Combat among the hybrids is almost always to the death. When they fight in official spars, they end up losing due to unfamiliarity with rules like ring outs.
** Combat spars also require both combatants to have their aura up. Since Weiss hadn't unlocked hers yet, Glynda refuses to let her fight.
** [[spoiler: Winter recognizes "Wren Slate" as Weiss almost immediately, as does Qrow with Ruby and Yang. They remember what their missing family members looked like.]]
** Horn fencing consists of two opponents clashing their horns against each other over and over until one submits. Since none of the hybrids seem to have reinforced skulls, it causes a lot of pain and dizziness.
** Because the hybrids are encouraged to fight and kill each other, the class dwindles from a few dozen to six in only a couple months.
** Combat among the hybrids is almost always to the death. When they fight in official spars, they end up losing due to unfamiliarity with rules like ring outs.
** Combat spars also require both combatants to have their aura up. Since Weiss hadn't unlocked hers yet, Glynda refuses to let her fight.
** [[spoiler: Winter recognizes "Wren Slate" as Weiss almost immediately, as does Qrow with Ruby and Yang. They remember what their missing family members looked like.]]
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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:In canon, Salem had some redeeming qualities that prevent her from being too evil. Here, she kidnapped many children and turned them into Grimm hybrids, corrupting them as her minions. She also keeps Summer Rose alive as captive and tortures her with her grimmified daughter Ruby.]]
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Sun to Blake. She's a NightmareFetishist, he's ThePollyanna.
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* [[invoked]]AccidentalInnuendo: After Weiss realizes Winter is her sister, the two of them go out to lunch together and Weiss suggests they bone, to Winter's horror and mortification. What Weiss meant was sharing the bone marrow in their steaks and she's equally disgusted and mortified when she realizes what Winter thought she meant.
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* GodzillaThreshold: Qrow [[spoiler:threatening to tell Taiyang that Yang and Ruby are still alive (which would almost certainly break up his new family with Raven) makes her so desperate that she willingly reveals herself as the Spring Maiden to threaten him into submission]].
* InternalReveal:
** When Qrow decides to confront Jaune directly, he and Winter finally learn about [[spoiler:what happened to Yang, Ruby, and Weiss, Summer Rose's current status as a prisoner, and the existence of Grimm Academy]].
** [[spoiler:Qrow ends up explaining all of this to Raven in an attempt to get her to open a portal to Summer, at which point she threatens him with the Spring Maiden powers and outs herself in the process]].
** When Qrow decides to confront Jaune directly, he and Winter finally learn about [[spoiler:what happened to Yang, Ruby, and Weiss, Summer Rose's current status as a prisoner, and the existence of Grimm Academy]].
** [[spoiler:Qrow ends up explaining all of this to Raven in an attempt to get her to open a portal to Summer, at which point she threatens him with the Spring Maiden powers and outs herself in the process]].
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* ThePowerOfLove vs ThePowerOfHate: A big conflict with Ruby. Salem's plan relies on the latter, but Ruby has come to believe more in the former.
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* ThePowerOfLove vs ThePowerOfHate: A big conflict with Ruby. Salem's plan relies on the latter, but Ruby has come Jaune's attempts to believe more in return the former.hybrids to their human states revolves around the former. [[spoiler:Ruby herself comes to agree with the power of love as time goes on, openly questioning Salem's plan]].
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* ComfortingTheWidow: This was probably not Raven's intention when she visited Taiyang shortly after Summer's death, but it's what happened, and not long afterwards the two were back together again.
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* DramaticIrony: After seeing Ruby and Yang for the first time, [[spoiler:Qrow thinks that there's no way that Raven would lie about Yang's death to his face. As the audience already knows, however, not only is that exactly what she did, but she actually had a fair reason to]].
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* ForWantOfANail: Ruby and Yang were captured in this story because when Yang took Ruby on her escapade to find her mother, Qrow didn't save her in time.
* FromACertainPointOfView: In the past, after Raven discovered what had happened to Yang, she chose to lie to Qrow and say that she and Ruby had died because, from her perspective and for all intents and purposes, she really ''was'' dead, and trying to claim otherwise would've only hurt everyone more.
* FromACertainPointOfView: In the past, after Raven discovered what had happened to Yang, she chose to lie to Qrow and say that she and Ruby had died because, from her perspective and for all intents and purposes, she really ''was'' dead, and trying to claim otherwise would've only hurt everyone more.
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* BadassNormal: Sorta. Weiss is the only Grimm hybrid to not have her Aura unlocked. [[spoiler: Winter unlocks it for her later.]]
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* BadassNormal: Sorta. Weiss is the only Grimm hybrid to not have her Aura unlocked. [[spoiler: Winter [[spoiler:Winter unlocks it for her later.]]
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* BelligerentSexualTension: Weiss with Jaune, although it's mostly one-sided. She also thinks that [[spoiler: Mercury and Emerald]]'s arguing is this, much to their horror.
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* BelligerentSexualTension: Weiss with Jaune, although it's mostly one-sided. She also thinks that [[spoiler: Mercury [[spoiler:Mercury and Emerald]]'s arguing is this, much to their horror.
* CerebusSyndrome: While the story was never completely lighthearted, there was still plenty of BlackComedy to go around among the genuinely funny and heartwarming moments. Once the set shifts to Beacon Academy, however, almost all of these funny moments disappear completely and the story becomes a straight drama.
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* DefusingTheTykeBomb: Jaune's reason for staying at Grimm Academy. [[spoiler: Ruby eventually joins him.]]
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* DeathByAdaptation: Team CRDL and Team BRNZ, or at least their Grimm Hybrid forms, are killed during their time at Grimm Academy. Adam Taurus is also killed before the beginning of the story.
* DefusingTheTykeBomb: Jaune's reason for staying at Grimm Academy.[[spoiler: Ruby [[spoiler:Ruby eventually joins him.]]
* DefusingTheTykeBomb: Jaune's reason for staying at Grimm Academy.
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* DieOrFly: Jaune is left in the middle of the Grimmlands to either make it back to the academy or die fighting the Grimm.
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* DieOrFly: Jaune is left in the middle of the Grimmlands to either make it back to the academy or die fighting the Grimm. Thanks to him unlocking his Aura on the way, he manages to make it back alive.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Cardin feels some measure of respect towards Jaune after he killed the abomination made from Sky and Dove's corpses.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: EvenEvilHasLovedOnes:
** Cardin feels some measure of respect towards Jaune after he killed the abomination made from Sky and Dove'scorpses.corpses.
** Blake still remembers Adam fondly due to his attempt to save her life [[spoiler:and she reveals when she uses her Aura that she didn't want to kill him in the first place]].
** Cardin feels some measure of respect towards Jaune after he killed the abomination made from Sky and Dove's
** Blake still remembers Adam fondly due to his attempt to save her life [[spoiler:and she reveals when she uses her Aura that she didn't want to kill him in the first place]].
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* EyeScream: [[spoiler: Summer Rose's eyes were removed and she wears a blindfold at all times.]]
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* EyeScream: [[spoiler: Summer [[spoiler:Summer Rose's eyes were removed and she wears a blindfold at all times.]]
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* HumanoidAbomination: Everyone except Jaune and the teachers ([[spoiler: and Mercury and Emerald]]), but Blake especially, due to how her Grimmification went wrong.
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* HumanoidAbomination: Everyone except Jaune and the teachers ([[spoiler: and ([[spoiler:and Mercury and Emerald]]), but Blake especially, due to how her Grimmification went wrong.
* KillItThroughItsStomach: During his trek through the Grimmlands, Jaune gets SwallowedWhole by a King Taijitu, unlocks his Aura while inside the snake's stomach, and cuts his way out with Crocea Mors.
* KnightOfCerebus: Any time Salem appears or is mentioned, the story goes into its darkest and most serious moments with absolutely zero levity.
* KnightOfCerebus: Any time Salem appears or is mentioned, the story goes into its darkest and most serious moments with absolutely zero levity.
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** [[spoiler: Ruby finds out that Jaune's human. She keeps his secret.]]
** SecretSecretKeeper: [[spoiler: Blake knew since the beginning, but didn't divulge her knowledge until later.]]
** SecretSecretKeeper: [[spoiler: Blake knew since the beginning, but didn't divulge her knowledge until later.]]
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** [[spoiler: Ruby [[spoiler:Ruby finds out that Jaune's human. She keeps his secret. Jaune also tells Weiss that he's human after she gets her Aura unlocked.]]
** [[spoiler:After Winter sees Weiss's Grimm form and hears Salem's name, Qrow tells her about who Salem is]].
* SecretSecretKeeper: [[spoiler: Blake knew about Jaune's humanity since the beginning, but didn't divulge her knowledge until later.]]
** [[spoiler:After Winter sees Weiss's Grimm form and hears Salem's name, Qrow tells her about who Salem is]].
* SecretSecretKeeper: [[spoiler: Blake knew about Jaune's humanity since the beginning, but didn't divulge her knowledge until later.]]
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** Winter gives a modified version of [[Film/{{Taken}} Bryan Mills]] warning speech to Jaune about breaking Weiss's heart.
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** Winter gives a modified version of the classic [[Film/{{Taken}} Bryan Mills]] warning speech to Jaune about breaking Weiss's heart.heart (it includes everything but the final line).
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* YouLookLikeYouveSeenAGhost: Yang says so to Qrow during his substitute class.
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* YouLookLikeYouveSeenAGhost: Yang says so this word-for-word to Qrow during his substitute class.class. She's clearly invoking this trope because [[spoiler:she knows who he is and realizes that he recognizes her]].
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: After [[spoiler:Weiss gets her Aura unlocked, she goes on a small rampage against two students that she tries to claim don't matter because they're humans. In response, Jaune reveals to her that he's a human and asks her a very hard hitting question]]:
--> '''Jaune''': [[spoiler:If my life matters, then theirs do too. But if their lives don't matter to you, then mine doesn't either. Which is it, Weiss?]]
--> '''Jaune''': [[spoiler:If my life matters, then theirs do too. But if their lives don't matter to you, then mine doesn't either. Which is it, Weiss?]]
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* AndIMustScream: Several times, the Grimm Hybrids show emotions they can't explain, such as Ruby crying when [[spoiler:Summer talks to her]] and Blake screaming that she [[spoiler:didn't want to kill Adam when testing her aura]]. Jaune quickly realizes that their human selves are still present inside their minds but they're locked away from the hybridization process.
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* EyeScream: [[spoiler: Summer Rose's eyes were removed.]]
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* EyeScream: [[spoiler: Summer Rose's eyes were removed.removed and she wears a blindfold at all times.]]
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* GroinAttack: Yang apparently did this to Cardin after he started harassing her.
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* GroinAttack: Yang apparently did this to Cardin after he started harassing her. After seeing the results himself, Jaune takes a moment to wonder how he can still pee.
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* BadIsGoodAndGoodIsBad: Part of the hybrid's BlueAndOrangeMorality: they revel in negative feelings while positive thoughts are repulsive, which is why the positive-thinking Ruby was ostracized by the other hybrids.
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* BadIsGoodAndGoodIsBad: Part of the hybrid's hybrids' BlueAndOrangeMorality: they revel in negative feelings while positive thoughts are repulsive, which is why the positive-thinking Ruby was ostracized by the other hybrids.
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** [[spoiler: Winter recognizes "Wren Slate" as Weiss almost immediately, as does Qrow with Ruby and Yang. They remember what their missing family members looked like.]]
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** In general, awakening Aura is this for hybrids, as they have to experience all their suppressed humanity all at once. Ruby manages to slip through, but when Blake turns her Aura on she breaks down sobbing, and [[spoiler: Weiss goes completely berserk after Winter unlocks her Aura]].
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* BadassNormal: Sorta. Weiss is the only Grimm hybrid to not have her Aura unlocked.
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* BadassNormal: Sorta. Weiss is the only Grimm hybrid to not have her Aura unlocked. [[spoiler: Winter unlocks it for her later.]]
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* AffectionateNickname: Jaune dubs Weiss 'Snow Angel' when flirting with her for Cinder's class, and later gives Ruby the nickname 'Cookie Monster' after she enjoys the cookies he gave her.
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* KnowNothingKnowItAll: Weiss, for all of her posturing, really knows next to nothing about human customs. Jaune even points it out in his narration.
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* KnowNothingKnowItAll: Weiss, for all of her posturing, really knows next to nothing about human customs. Jaune even points it out in his narration.narration, actually calling her a 'KnowNothingKnowItAll' several times.
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* ARareSentence: After Cinder declares "There is to be no public fornication at the dance." Neo is both incredulous that such a sentence was said and even more so that it needed to be said.
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* ARareSentence: After Cinder declares "There is to be no public fornication at the dance." Neo is both incredulous that such a sentence was said and even more so that it Cinder needed to be said.say it.
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* GoMadFromTheRevelation: Awakening a Grimm hybrid's Aura forces them to confront everything they've done, causing many to temporarily go insane.
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* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: When Cinder threatens to kill Jaune, Ruby and Weiss proceed to glare and snarl at her while attempting to surround her. Even Blake comes out the shadows and wraps her tentacle around Cinder's neck.
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* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: Except for Ruby, hybrids tend to have brief but violent bouts of insanity when first awakening their Aura.
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* BadassCreed: Winter gives one about how a Schnee has to be perfect when [[spoiler:unlocking Weiss' Aura]].
-->'''Winter:''' To be perfect is to achieve immortality. Perfection is a burden to be sought out, to be fought for and cherished, for others and never for ourselves. Through the weight of legacy, we must strive forever more to be perfect, and with our legacy achieve for the good of all. This is what it means to be a Schnee.
-->'''Winter:''' To be perfect is to achieve immortality. Perfection is a burden to be sought out, to be fought for and cherished, for others and never for ourselves. Through the weight of legacy, we must strive forever more to be perfect, and with our legacy achieve for the good of all. This is what it means to be a Schnee.
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* UnskilledButStrong: Yang, Ruby, and Weiss all qualify compared to canon. They're all far stronger but rely more on their physical ability. Yang and Ruby don't even know what their Semblances are while Weiss hasn't unlocked hers due to not having her Aura unlocked yet.
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* EpicFail: Sun tries to become a goth to impress Blake, even dyeing his hair and tail black. It just annoys her even more.
* {{Polyamory}}: Jaune ends up in a relationship with Weiss, Ruby, and sorta Blake.
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** To ''Film/RevengeOfTheSith''.
** To ''Film/RevengeOfTheSith''.
** Winter gives a modified version of [[Film/{{Taken}} Bryan Mills]] warning speech to Jaune about breaking Weiss's heart.
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* TragicMonster: All of the Grimm Hybrids were just children turned into monsters by Salem. [[TheDreaded Blake]] is the oldest and the only one with Aura, and when she turns it on, Jaune is surprised to find that she immediately breaks down sobbing in horror at all the things her Grimm self did. Grimm!Blake later refers to that state as the real her, and equates it to Jaune seeing her naked.
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* TragicMonster: All of the Grimm Hybrids were just children turned into monsters by Salem. [[TheDreaded Blake]] is was the oldest when she was turned and the only one with Aura, and when she turns it on, Jaune is surprised to find that she immediately breaks down sobbing in horror at all the things her Grimm self did. Grimm!Blake later refers to that state as the real her, and equates it to Jaune seeing her naked.
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* ARareSentence: After Cinder declares "There is to be no public fornication at the dance." Neo is both incredulous that such a sentence was said and even more so that it needed to be said.
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* YouKillItYouBoughtIt: Yang has a shotgun she took off a Huntsman. She and others mistake Jaune's Crocea Mors as a similar trophy.
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* YouKillItYouBoughtIt: Yang has a shotgun she took off a Huntsman. She and others mistake Jaune's Crocea Mors as a similar trophy.trophy.
* YouLookLikeYouveSeenAGhost: Yang says so to Qrow during his substitute class.
* YouLookLikeYouveSeenAGhost: Yang says so to Qrow during his substitute class.
