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* AdaptationalBadass: Orca has '''all''' powers of whales and dolphins in this fic such as echolocation, electro- and magnetoreception and MakeMeWannaShout - power (one of dolphins' way to hunt).
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* AdaptationalBadass: Orca has '''all''' powers of whales and dolphins in this fic such as echolocation, electro- and magnetoreception and MakeMeWannaShout - power (one of dolphins' way to hunt).magnetoreception.
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* TooDumbToLive: Beebop and Rocksteady (or at least, the thugs they were before they took on those identities) cheered and high-fived when they heard they were chosen because they were the most "expendable."
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* TooDumbToLive: Beebop Bebop and Rocksteady (or at least, the thugs they were before they took on those identities) cheered and high-fived when they heard they were chosen because they were the most "expendable."
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* VillainousBsod: One of the Silicon Dragons, Danny. Poor guy had the misfortune of being one of Mimikyu’s victims. By the time he’s found by the authorities, he’s a complete wreck driven insane by ptsd and hiding in a dumpster.
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* VillainousBsod: VillainousBSOD: One of the Silicon Dragons, Danny. Poor guy had the misfortune of being one of Mimikyu’s victims. By the time he’s found by the authorities, he’s a complete wreck driven insane by ptsd [=PTSD=] and hiding in a dumpster.
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* VillainousBsod: One of the Silicon Dragons, Danny. Poor guy had the misfortune of being one of Mimikyu’s victims. By the time he’s found by the authorities, he’s a complete wreck driven insane by ptsd and hiding in a dumpster.
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* GiverOfLameNames: Averted.
** Giovanni is accused of this at his party when he describes what his new drugs do, and are named. He defends it by saying that "Super Potion" and "Burn Heal" might not be the most scientific of names, but they tell exactly what it's supposed to do. Also, unbeknownst to all but a few, he didn't name them.
** Mahmoud defends himself to Pele when she accuses him of giving Magcargo a name that combines "Magma" and "Escargot." Specifically, he points out that ''he'' didn't come up with said name.
** Giovanni is accused of this at his party when he describes what his new drugs do, and are named. He defends it by saying that "Super Potion" and "Burn Heal" might not be the most scientific of names, but they tell exactly what it's supposed to do. Also, unbeknownst to all but a few, he didn't name them.
** Mahmoud defends himself to Pele when she accuses him of giving Magcargo a name that combines "Magma" and "Escargot." Specifically, he points out that ''he'' didn't come up with said name.
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* ProperlyParanoid: Mahmoud takes his privacy and security very seriously, relying on teleportation and telepathy to dissuade others from following him into his base of operations. He does state that it's because he's in the DC Universe and therefore that level of paranoia is needed if he doesn't want things bursting in on him when he's not aware, but Aquaman verbally compares him to Batman when he hears about the loops Kahu jumps through.
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* AdaptationalSuperpowerChange: When Slugma evolves, due to her getting a gift from Pele and native conditions of Earth-16, she evolves into a Magcargo that looks significantly different from typical Magcargo. Giovanni and Mahmoud identify it as a regional form.
* BothSidesHaveAPoint: Giovanni, when talking about why he hired Orca, points out that yes, her treatment turned her into an Orca[=/=]human hybrid, which is not a desirable trait (in theory, anyway). However, it turned her into an Orca[=/=]human hybrid that is no longer paralyzed from the waist down, which is why he's hiring her to help her get the funding and equipment she needs to cure people of injuries without those side effects.
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* CutLexLuthorACheck: Giovanni has this motivation. He figures the best way to get power on Earth 16 is through money, and lots of it. He does so through apparently legitimate means given how he doesn't view the risk of getting tangled with superheroes worth it. He's started making Potions from the Pokemon world and selling them to hospitals, with him announcing that he was also making other Pokemon cures at a gala on his yacht- such as Super Potions, Burn Heals, and more.
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* CutLexLuthorACheck: Giovanni has this motivation. He figures the best way to get power on Earth 16 is through money, and lots of it. He does so through apparently legitimate means given how he doesn't view the risk of getting tangled with superheroes worth it. He's started making Potions from the Pokemon world and selling them to hospitals, with him announcing that he was also making other Pokemon cures at a gala on his yacht- such as Super Potions, Burn Heals, and more. In addition, he's funding other medical treatments, such as sponsoring Orca's experiments to help cure spinal problems.
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* NormalFishInATinyPond: Pokemon world medicine is laughably, hilariously overpowered compared to the state of the art drugs of Earth-16, which is why Giovanni goes into the medical field to make his fortune.
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* SupermanStaysOutOfGotham: Part of the reason why Hawaiian authorities want superheroes to stay away from Hawaii is that they both draw in other super-beings, but also because the Silicon Dragons will escalate to meet the threats lobbed against them- if League-level heroes started showing up, the Dragons would get ''far'' too dangerous for law enforcement to handle. It's why Mahmoud asks that Aquaman and Aqualad not stick around to fight the Dragons, since they would escalate from the force needed to fight a "D-Grade" hero (in Mahmoud's own words) to fight an A-grade one.
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* TooDumbToLive: Beebop and Rocksteady (or at least, the thugs they were before they took on those identities) cheered and high-fived when they heard they were chosen because they were the most "expendable."
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* VillainWithGoodPublicity: Giovanni seems to have built up a good reputation ever since he got trapped in the DC universe, with Deadshot becoming one of these as a hired aid of Giovanni. Lex Luthor and Mercy Graves also are this, attending one of Giovanni's parties alongside Mahmoud, Batman, and Amanda Waller.
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* VillainWithGoodPublicity: VillainWithGoodPublicity:
** Giovanni seems to have built up a good reputation ever since he got trapped in the DC universe, with Deadshot becoming one of these as a hired aid of Giovanni. Lex Luthor and Mercy Graves also are this, attending one of Giovanni's parties alongside Mahmoud, Batman, and AmandaWaller.Waller.
** Giovanni also averts this, surprisingly enough, as he's not popular with the native Hawaiians.
** Giovanni seems to have built up a good reputation ever since he got trapped in the DC universe, with Deadshot becoming one of these as a hired aid of Giovanni. Lex Luthor and Mercy Graves also are this, attending one of Giovanni's parties alongside Mahmoud, Batman, and Amanda
** Giovanni also averts this, surprisingly enough, as he's not popular with the native Hawaiians.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: {{Invoked|Trope}}. Knowing that the Orca in the main DC universe is a ''Comicbook/{{Nightwing}}'' villainess, Mahmoud takes Grace under his wing after her transformation, to give her a chance to avoid that fate.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: AdaptationalHeroism:
** {{Invoked|Trope}}. Knowing that the Orca in the main DC universe is a ''Comicbook/{{Nightwing}}'' villainess, Mahmoud takes Grace under his wing after her transformation, to give her a chance to avoid thatfate. fate.
** Clock King, a major enemy of Green Arrow, is a [[HeelFaceTurn reformed supervillain]] in this reality, having retired from villainy before his first appearance in the fic.
** {{Invoked|Trope}}. Knowing that the Orca in the main DC universe is a ''Comicbook/{{Nightwing}}'' villainess, Mahmoud takes Grace under his wing after her transformation, to give her a chance to avoid that
** Clock King, a major enemy of Green Arrow, is a [[HeelFaceTurn reformed supervillain]] in this reality, having retired from villainy before his first appearance in the fic.
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* AdaptationalJerkass:
** In comparison to the Adorable Murderbeasts incarnation, Mahmoud is much colder and quicker to anger than his pre-reboot version.
** Again in comparison to her pre-reboot Adorable Murderbeasts version, where she was a member of the Team and a love interest for Mahmoud, Pele is truer to her traditional mythologies here, being colder, angrier, and willing to threaten terrible fates on people who displease her.
** In comparison to the Adorable Murderbeasts incarnation, Mahmoud is much colder and quicker to anger than his pre-reboot version.
** Again in comparison to her pre-reboot Adorable Murderbeasts version, where she was a member of the Team and a love interest for Mahmoud, Pele is truer to her traditional mythologies here, being colder, angrier, and willing to threaten terrible fates on people who displease her.
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* AdaptationOriginConnection: Doctor Death, partnered with Lady Dragon and the Silicon Dragons, is the one who mutates Bebop and Rocksteady into their animal forms.
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* AdaptationOriginConnection: AdaptationOriginConnection:
** Doctor Death, partnered with Lady Dragon and the Silicon Dragons, is the one who mutates Bebop and Rocksteady into their animalforms.forms.
** Averted InUniverse with Grace and the Atlanteans. Part of the reason Aquaman and Aqualad show up in Hawaii initially is because they heard rumors of an Orca-Atlantean swimming in the waters around the islands from the local wildlife, and wanted to see if such was true. While Grace ''did'' use data on Atlanteans with animal-forms as part of her research, she's purely from human science.
** Doctor Death, partnered with Lady Dragon and the Silicon Dragons, is the one who mutates Bebop and Rocksteady into their animal
** Averted InUniverse with Grace and the Atlanteans. Part of the reason Aquaman and Aqualad show up in Hawaii initially is because they heard rumors of an Orca-Atlantean swimming in the waters around the islands from the local wildlife, and wanted to see if such was true. While Grace ''did'' use data on Atlanteans with animal-forms as part of her research, she's purely from human science.
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* BrownNote: Mahmoud has a mild one to seeing Mimikyu's true appearance. He tries not to let it show. Mimikyu appreciates that Mahmoud still cares for her despite being afraid of her true form.
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* BrownNote: Mahmoud has a mild one to seeing Mimikyu's true appearance. He tries not to let it show. Mimikyu appreciates that Mahmoud still cares for her despite being afraid of her true form. She also has this effect on virtually anyone who sees her true form, as multiple criminals can attest to (once they stop gibbering in fear).
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* PersonOfMassConstruction: Gurdurr is the bruiser of the team, making use of his fighting moves and his steel girder to fight and deal a lot of damage.
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* PersonOfMassConstruction: Gurdurr is the bruiser of the team, making use of his fighting moves and his steel girder to fight and deal a lot of damage. It's noted that this is odd for Gurdurr to be like this one; the Gurdurr in this story actually does like building and construction, whereas most Gurdurr tend towards more destructive natures.
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** The Silicon Dragons deliberately invoke this via their code of honor. They limit themselves to the level of force that their opponent brings out- against regular police, their thugs might be armed with standard pistols and knives, while [=SWAT=] or army forces might get them to break out body armor and assault rifles. Bringing in metahumans and extranormal forces, though, will likewise get them to bring in other metahumans and extranormal forces specifically to deal with the threat. One concern that Kahu has about Aquaman interfering is that the Silicon Dragons would upgrade to face Aquaman, member of the Justice League and known A-Grade threat to criminals, while Kahu is, in his own words, a D-Grade superhero.
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* BrownNote: Mahmoud has a mild one to seeing Mimikyu's true appearance. He tries not to let it show..
* CutLexLuthorACheck: Giovanni has this motivation. He figures the best way to get power on Earth 16 is through money, and lots of it. He does so through apparently legitimate means given how he doesn't view the risk of getting tangled with superheroes worth it. He's started making Potions from the Pokemon world and selling them to hospitals, with evidence that he has scientists working on other such cures, such as Burn Heals and Full Revives.
* CutLexLuthorACheck: Giovanni has this motivation. He figures the best way to get power on Earth 16 is through money, and lots of it. He does so through apparently legitimate means given how he doesn't view the risk of getting tangled with superheroes worth it. He's started making Potions from the Pokemon world and selling them to hospitals, with evidence that he has scientists working on other such cures, such as Burn Heals and Full Revives.
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* BrownNote: Mahmoud has a mild one to seeing Mimikyu's true appearance. He tries not to let it show..
show. Mimikyu appreciates that Mahmoud still cares for her despite being afraid of her true form.
* CutLexLuthorACheck: Giovanni has this motivation. He figures the best way to get power on Earth 16 is through money, and lots of it. He does so through apparently legitimate means given how he doesn't view the risk of getting tangled with superheroes worth it. He's started making Potions from the Pokemon world and selling them to hospitals, withevidence him announcing that he has scientists working on was also making other such cures, Pokemon cures at a gala on his yacht- such as Super Potions, Burn Heals Heals, and Full Revives.more.
* CutLexLuthorACheck: Giovanni has this motivation. He figures the best way to get power on Earth 16 is through money, and lots of it. He does so through apparently legitimate means given how he doesn't view the risk of getting tangled with superheroes worth it. He's started making Potions from the Pokemon world and selling them to hospitals, with
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* WeirdnessMagnet: Why Sam doesn't want vigilantes or superheroes running around Hawaii, ultimately, is because Superheroes draw in weirdness. Case in point, since Kahu started operating in the islands, not only have the Silicon Dragons dramatically upgunned themselves, but multiple other powered individuals started showing up, such as Orca, Smiley, Bebop, Rocksteady, and Killer Frost.
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* CutLexLuthorACheck: Giovanni has this motivation. He figures the best way to get power on Earth 16 is through money, and lots of it. He does so through apparently legitimate means given how he doesn't view the risk of getting tangled with superheroes worth it.
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* CutLexLuthorACheck: Giovanni has this motivation. He figures the best way to get power on Earth 16 is through money, and lots of it. He does so through apparently legitimate means given how he doesn't view the risk of getting tangled with superheroes worth it. He's started making Potions from the Pokemon world and selling them to hospitals, with evidence that he has scientists working on other such cures, such as Burn Heals and Full Revives.
* PragmaticVillainy: How Giovanni operates. When he got to Earth-16, he realized that he was massively outclassed by the forces of Good that he decided against doing anything "Supervillainous." He's still sketchy, and it's hinted that he's charging way more for Potions than is ethical, but he knows if he tries to pull the same sort of stunts he did with Team Rainbow Rocket, it would draw the attention of the Justice League, which he can't hope to face.
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* TrappedInAnotherWorld: Mahmoud, for the second time.
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* TrappedInAnotherWorld: Mahmoud, for the second time. Giovanni, for the first time.
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* PlayingWithFire: Firefly is encountered at on point, the pyromaniacal villain being primarily fought by Slugma.
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* PlayingWithFire: Firefly is encountered at on one point, the pyromaniacal villain being primarily fought by Slugma.
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** Multiple Batman villains also turn up, with Deadshot being a hired minion of the Giovanni from ''VideoGame/PokemonUltraSunAndUltraMoon'', Firefly being fought in one mission where he is mainly forced to face off against Slugma, and Doctor Death appears as a partner for the Silicon Dragons. [[WesternAnimation/TheBatman Temblor]] also appears at one point, encountering Empress.
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** Multiple Batman villains also turn up, with Deadshot being a hired minion of the Giovanni from ''VideoGame/PokemonUltraSunAndUltraMoon'', Firefly being fought in one mission where he is mainly forced to face off against Slugma, and Doctor Death appears as a partner for the Silicon Dragons. [[WesternAnimation/TheBatman Temblor]] also appears at one point, encountering Empress.Empress and Mimikyu.
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* PatchworkFic: While the story is set in the canon of ''Young Justice (2010)'', Mahmoud and his Pokemon first land in Hawaii, allowing elements from [[ComicBook/Superboy1994 the Superboy comic]] during the time Superboy settled in Hawaii (Sam Makoa, Lady Dragon and the Silicon Dragons, Tana Moon, and Sidearm) to appear, while gradually adding in other heroes until eventually, the events of the show itself begin. Empress, a member of the original ComicBook/YoungJustice (and one of the few members ''not'' in the show), also appears (as does her father Agent Fite and his partner Agent Maad), and even Temblor, an antagonist originally created for ''WesternAnimation/TheBatman2004'', is fought at one point. Franchise/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles is also included, due to the incorporation of Bebop and Rocksteady into the story.
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* PatchworkFic: While the story is set in the canon of ''Young Justice (2010)'', Mahmoud and his Pokemon first land in Hawaii, allowing elements from [[ComicBook/Superboy1994 the Superboy comic]] during the time Superboy settled in Hawaii (Sam Makoa, Lady Dragon and the Silicon Dragons, Tana Moon, and Sidearm) to appear, while gradually adding in other heroes until eventually, the events of the show itself begin. Empress, a member of the original ComicBook/YoungJustice (and one of the few members ''not'' in the show), also appears (as does her father Agent Fite and his partner Agent Maad), and even Temblor, an antagonist originally created for ''WesternAnimation/TheBatman2004'', ''WesternAnimation/TheBatman'', is fought at one point. Franchise/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles is also included, due to the incorporation of Bebop and Rocksteady into the story.
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** Multiple Batman villains also turn up, with Deadshot being a hired minion of the Giovanni from ''VideoGame/PokemonUltraSunAndUltraMoon'', Firefly being fought in one mission where he is mainly forced to face off against Slugma, and Doctor Death appears as a partner for the Silicon Dragons. [[WesternAnimation/TheBatman2004 Temblor]] also appears at one point, encountering Empress.
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** Multiple Batman villains also turn up, with Deadshot being a hired minion of the Giovanni from ''VideoGame/PokemonUltraSunAndUltraMoon'', Firefly being fought in one mission where he is mainly forced to face off against Slugma, and Doctor Death appears as a partner for the Silicon Dragons. [[WesternAnimation/TheBatman2004 [[WesternAnimation/TheBatman Temblor]] also appears at one point, encountering Empress.
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* PatchworkFic: While the story is set in the canon of ''Young Justice (2010)'', Mahmoud and his Pokemon first land in Hawaii, allowing elements from [[ComicBook/Superboy1994 the Superboy comic]] during the time Superboy settled in Hawaii (Sam Makoa, Lady Dragon and the Silicon Dragons, Tana Moon, and Sidearm) to appear, while gradually adding in other heroes until eventually, the events of the show itself begin. Franchise/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles is also included, due to the incorporation of Bebop and Rocksteady into the story.
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* PatchworkFic: While the story is set in the canon of ''Young Justice (2010)'', Mahmoud and his Pokemon first land in Hawaii, allowing elements from [[ComicBook/Superboy1994 the Superboy comic]] during the time Superboy settled in Hawaii (Sam Makoa, Lady Dragon and the Silicon Dragons, Tana Moon, and Sidearm) to appear, while gradually adding in other heroes until eventually, the events of the show itself begin. Empress, a member of the original ComicBook/YoungJustice (and one of the few members ''not'' in the show), also appears (as does her father Agent Fite and his partner Agent Maad), and even Temblor, an antagonist originally created for ''WesternAnimation/TheBatman2004'', is fought at one point. Franchise/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles is also included, due to the incorporation of Bebop and Rocksteady into the story.
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** Multiple Batman villains also turn up, with Deadshot being a hired minion of the Giovanni from ''VideoGame/PokemonUltraSunAndUltraMoon'', Firefly being fought in one mission where he is mainly forced to face off against Slugma, and Doctor Death appears as a partner for the Silicon Dragons.
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** Multiple Batman villains also turn up, with Deadshot being a hired minion of the Giovanni from ''VideoGame/PokemonUltraSunAndUltraMoon'', Firefly being fought in one mission where he is mainly forced to face off against Slugma, and Doctor Death appears as a partner for the Silicon Dragons. [[WesternAnimation/TheBatman2004 Temblor]] also appears at one point, encountering Empress.
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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/monsters-of-my-own-pokemon-young-justice-si.862078/ Monsters Of My Own]]'' is a Young Justice Self Insert fanfic written by [=DesertChocolate=], who also wrote ''Fanfic/{{Dial}}'' and ''Fanfic/SaiyanInBrockton'', among others.
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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/monsters-of-my-own-pokemon-young-justice-si.862078/ Monsters Of My Own]]'' is a Young Justice Self Insert fanfic ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}''/''WesternAnimation/YoungJustice2010'' SelfInsertFic written by [=DesertChocolate=], who also wrote ''Fanfic/{{Dial}}'' and ''Fanfic/SaiyanInBrockton'', among others.
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* CasualDangerDialog: To be fair, he was fighting Sidearm. And nobody thinks that Sidearm deserves respect.
* CasualDangerDialog: To be fair, he was fighting Sidearm. And nobody thinks that Sidearm deserves respect.
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* CasualDangerDialog: To be fair, he was fighting Sidearm. And nobody thinks that Sidearm deserves respect.
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* {{Expy}}: [[WordOfGod Desert Chocolate]] described Smiley as "a ghost-powered [[VideoGame/HotlineMiami Jacket]] from ''VideoGame/Payday2''.
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* {{Expy}}: [[WordOfGod Desert Chocolate]] described Smiley as "a ghost-powered [[VideoGame/HotlineMiami Jacket]] from ''VideoGame/Payday2''.''VideoGame/Payday2''".
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* VillainWithGoodPublicity: Giovanni seems to have built up a good reputation ever since he got trapped in the DC universe, with Deadshot becoming one of these as a hired aid of Giovanni. Lex Luthor and Mercy Graves also are this, attending one of Giovanni's parties alongside Mahmoud, Batman, and Amanda Waller.
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** Due to him taking part in Hawaii, he faces several Superboy villains, these beingLady Dragon and the Silicon Dragons and Sidearm.
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