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* HatesRichPeople: Cinder '''hates''' the rich elite of Atlas for [[AbsuviveParents obvious]] [[MadeASlave reasons]]. She immediately despises Weiss the second she meets her.
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* HatesRichPeople: Cinder '''hates''' the rich elite of Atlas for [[AbsuviveParents [[AbusiveParents obvious]] [[MadeASlave reasons]]. She immediately despises Weiss the second she meets her.
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* HatesRichPeople: Cinder '''hates''' the rich elite of Atlas for [[AbsuviveParents obvious]] [[MadeASlave reasons]]. She immediately despises Weiss the second she meets her.
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* SacrificedBasicSkillForAwesomeTraining: Cinder is an incredibly skilled fighter with years of training, but her skills in other and knowledge in other areas being almost nonexistent to the point of being partially illiterate. However most of this is due to being MadeASlave by her “family” who obviously never saw the need to give her any sort of education and her only interaction outside of that was being trained by Rhodes.
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* EasilyForgiven: Averted. Cinder does NOT forgive Amarill for the abuse she inflicted despite Amarill's apology. Her coworker is also openly disgusted with her when she confesses what she did to Cinder. In the sequel its stated that she's made multiple attempts to contact Cinder only to get rebuffed.
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* EasilyForgiven: Averted. Cinder does NOT forgive Amarill for the abuse she inflicted despite Amarill's apology.apology, ripping into her for years of abuse and bluntly telling Amarill that she wanted to kill her multiple times. Her coworker is also openly disgusted with her when she confesses what she did to Cinder. In the sequel its stated that she's made multiple attempts to contact Cinder only to get rebuffed.
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* HowTheMightyHaveFallen: Cinder's stepsister goes from living the high life to being forced to engage in prostitution just to survive.
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* HowTheMightyHaveFallen: Cinder's stepsister Amarill goes from living the high life to being forced to engage in prostitution just to survive.survive. She herself bitterly admits that she deserves it for what she's done.
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* SecretlySelfish: While Amarill DOES genuinely regret what she did to Cinder, it's marred by the fact that she mostly wants to feel better about herself.
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* RageBreakingPoint: Interestingly, what makes Cinder lash out at Amarill is when she attempts to apologize for the abuse; Cinder is deeply angered that Amarill thinks a simple apology will undo years of torture and abuse.
* SecretlySelfish: While Amarill DOES genuinely regret what she did to Cinder, it's marred by the fact that she mostly wants to feel better about herself. That said there are hints she's trying to be a better person.
* SecretlySelfish: While Amarill DOES genuinely regret what she did to Cinder, it's marred by the fact that she mostly wants to feel better about herself. That said there are hints she's trying to be a better person.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Cinder absolutely rips into Amarill for everything that happened when Amarill tries to apologize. She also gives one to Rhodes, pointing out that he could have done more to help her while she was at the Glass Unicorn.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Cinder absolutely rips into Amarill for everything that happened when Amarill she tries to apologize.apologize, calling her out for all the horrible things she'd done to her. She also gives one to Rhodes, pointing out that he could have done more to help her while she was at the Glass Unicorn.
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* TraumaButton: Cinder has a massive panic attack when Amarill approaches her years later.
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* TheAtoner: Amarill is trying to be this. It's marred by the fact that while she does regret her actions she's primarily focused on relieving her own guilt. While she's willing to put herself in danger for Cinder's sake, it also pushes her to enter situations she has next to no chance of escaping with her life, something Cinder calls her out on.
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* TheAtoner: Amarill is trying to be this. It's marred by the fact that while she does regret her actions she's primarily focused on relieving her own guilt. While she's willing to put herself in danger for Cinder's sake, it also pushes her to enter situations she has next to no realistic chance of either helping out or escaping with her life, something Cinder calls her out on.
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* TheAtoner: Amarill is trying to be this. It's marred by the fact that while she does regret her actions she's primarily focused on relieving her own guilt.
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* TheAtoner: Amarill is trying to be this. It's marred by the fact that while she does regret her actions she's primarily focused on relieving her own guilt. While she's willing to put herself in danger for Cinder's sake, it also pushes her to enter situations she has next to no chance of escaping with her life, something Cinder calls her out on.
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* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Cinder, Amarill and Adam have to work together in order to save Blake and a small child, but it's made clear that they barely tolerate each other, except for [[TheAtoner Amarill towards Cinder]].
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What if young Cinder Fall didn't snap that night? What if she had stayed the course, endured, dedicated - and left her abusers behind in search of freedom, power, and control that the life of a huntress can bring her? And so much more she never knew held any importance in life - things like friendship, love, true compassion and care - and the simple pleasures denied her in life?
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!!''Midnight Divergence'' contains examples of:
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* WhatYouAreInTheDark: Cinder sees her stepsister being chased by a Beowulf. Despite hating her and realizing that no one would ever know if she abandoned her, Cinder still saves Amarill because that's what a huntress does.
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* WhatYouAreInTheDark: Cinder sees her stepsister Amarill being chased by a Beowulf. Despite hating her and realizing that no one would ever know if she abandoned her, Cinder still saves Amarill her because that's what a huntress does.
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It makes it much more clear. Saying it's a RWBY fanfic in the first sentence.
[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13767656/1/Midnight-Divergence Midnight]] [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/28038327/chapters/68688816 Divergence]] is a RWBY fan fiction by [=AlmaArachnidFriendEmpress=].
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13767656/1/Midnight-Divergence Midnight]] [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/28038327/chapters/68688816 Divergence]] is a fan fiction by [=AlmaArachnidFriendEmpress=] detailing an alternate universe where Cinder did not snap and murder her stepfamily, before going on to become a Huntress.
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* EasilyForgiven: Averted. Cinder does NOT forgive Amarill for the abuse she inflicted despite Amarill's apology. Her coworker is also openly disgusted with her when she confesses what she did to Cinder. In the sequel its stated that she's made multiple attempts to contact Cinder only to get rebuffed.
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* RealityEnsues: Cinder does NOT forgive Amarill for the abuse she inflicted despite Amarill's apology. Her coworker is also openly disgusted with her when she confesses what she did to Cinder. In the sequel its stated that she's made multiple attempts to contact Cinder only to get rebuffed.
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* AbusiveParents: The Madame. Not only did she treat Cinder like garbage she also threw her biological daughter out of the house and onto the streets simply for saying that MAYBE they shouldn't just get another slave to replace Cinder.
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* TheAtoner: Amarill is trying to be this. It's marred by the fact that while she does regret her actions there is a selfish desire to feel better.
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* TheAtoner: Amarill is trying to be this. It's marred by the fact that while she does regret her actions there is a selfish desire to feel better.she's primarily focused on relieving her own guilt.
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* HowTheMightyHaveFallen: Cinder's stepsister goes from living the high life to being forced to engage in prostitution just to survive.
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* SecretlySelfish: While Amarill DOES genuinely regret what she did to Cinder, it's marred by the fact that she mostly wants to feel better about herself.
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* TookALevelInKindness: While still somewhat selfish, Amarill has come to realize that her abuse of Cinder was wrong and wants to make amends.
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* Irony: Cinder and Pyrrha become a couple in this story.
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* Irony: {{Irony}}: Cinder and Pyrrha become a couple in this story.
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What if young Cinder Fall didn't snap that night? What if she had stayed the course, endured, dedicated - and left her abusers behind in search of freedom, power, and control that the life of a huntress can bring her? And so much more she never knew held any importance in life - things like friendship, love, true compassion and care - and the simple pleasures denied her in life?
A fan fiction by AlmaArachnidFriendEmpress detailing an alternate universe where Cinder did not snap and murder her stepfamily, before going on to become a Huntress.
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* AscendedExtra: One of Cinder's stepsisters (Amarill) reappears trying to make amends with Cinder.
* TheAtoner: Amarill is trying to be this. It's marred by the fact that while she does regret her actions there is a selfish desire to feel better.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Cinder's childhood in an orphanage and her abuse at the hands of the Madame.
* FallenPrincess: Amarill was thrown out of the house by her mother after suggesting that maybe they shouldn't get another slave to replace Cinder. It gets to the point where she's forced to resort to prostitution in order to survive.
* Irony: Cinder and Pyrrha become a couple in this story.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Amarill freaks out when she sees Cinder's broadcast.
* RealityEnsues: Cinder does NOT forgive Amarill for the abuse she inflicted despite Amarill's apology. Her coworker is also openly disgusted with her when she confesses what she did to Cinder. In the sequel its stated that she's made multiple attempts to contact Cinder only to get rebuffed.
* SociopathicHero: While Cinder is not evil, she's downright ruthless at times.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Cinder absolutely rips into Amarill for everything that happened when Amarill tries to apologize. She also gives one to Rhodes, pointing out that he could have done more to help her while she was at the Glass Unicorn.
* WhatYouAreInTheDark: Cinder sees her stepsister being chased by a Beowulf. Despite hating her and realizing that no one would ever know if she abandoned her, Cinder still saves Amarill because that's what a huntress does.
A fan fiction by AlmaArachnidFriendEmpress detailing an alternate universe where Cinder did not snap and murder her stepfamily, before going on to become a Huntress.
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* AscendedExtra: One of Cinder's stepsisters (Amarill) reappears trying to make amends with Cinder.
* TheAtoner: Amarill is trying to be this. It's marred by the fact that while she does regret her actions there is a selfish desire to feel better.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Cinder's childhood in an orphanage and her abuse at the hands of the Madame.
* FallenPrincess: Amarill was thrown out of the house by her mother after suggesting that maybe they shouldn't get another slave to replace Cinder. It gets to the point where she's forced to resort to prostitution in order to survive.
* Irony: Cinder and Pyrrha become a couple in this story.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Amarill freaks out when she sees Cinder's broadcast.
* RealityEnsues: Cinder does NOT forgive Amarill for the abuse she inflicted despite Amarill's apology. Her coworker is also openly disgusted with her when she confesses what she did to Cinder. In the sequel its stated that she's made multiple attempts to contact Cinder only to get rebuffed.
* SociopathicHero: While Cinder is not evil, she's downright ruthless at times.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Cinder absolutely rips into Amarill for everything that happened when Amarill tries to apologize. She also gives one to Rhodes, pointing out that he could have done more to help her while she was at the Glass Unicorn.
* WhatYouAreInTheDark: Cinder sees her stepsister being chased by a Beowulf. Despite hating her and realizing that no one would ever know if she abandoned her, Cinder still saves Amarill because that's what a huntress does.
