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Megas of Mars is a ''WesternAnimation/MegasXLR''/''Anime/MobileSuitGundamIronBloodedOrphans'' crossover by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5531592/Warmachine375 Warmachine375]].
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Megas of Mars is a ''WesternAnimation/MegasXLR''/''Anime/MobileSuitGundamIronBloodedOrphans'' crossover by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5531592/Warmachine375 Warmachine375]].
Creator/Warmachine375.
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*** When Orga Itsuka stated that it's time to let's get down to business, Jamie cheeky asks if it's "to defeat the Huns".
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*** When Orga Itsuka stated that it's time to let's get down to business, Jamie cheeky cheekily asks if it's "to defeat the Huns".
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** Gundam Barbatos is set up to this as [[spoiler: Coop used Hashmal's remains after crushing its head earlier to upgrade the recently reactivated Gundam Frame into its ''Lupus Rex'' form.]]
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** Gundam Barbatos is set up to be this as [[spoiler: Coop used Hashmal's remains after crushing its head earlier to upgrade the recently reactivated Gundam Frame into its ''Lupus Rex'' form.]]
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** There are some of this from ''WesternAnimation/Mulan'':
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** There are some of this from ''WesternAnimation/Mulan'':''WesternAnimation/{{Mulan}}'':
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** "Nope, none of that. Shame on you.", said Coop after he [[spoiler: quickly dispatched Hashmal]] is from ''WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged''.
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** "Nope, none of that. Shame on you.", said by Coop after he [[spoiler: quickly dispatched Hashmal]] is from ''WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged''.
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" EntertaininglyWrong: The Alaya-Vijnana users in Tekkadan assume that Kiva Andru is similarly like them due to her Earth Coalition implants that allow her to control her personal mech, the CMDR-KA, and the group of remote controlled mechs.
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** Gundam Barbatos is set up to this as [[spoiler: Coop used Hashmal's remains after crushing its head earlier to upgrade the recently reactivated Gundam Frame into its ''Lupus Rex'' form.]]
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" EntertaininglyWrong: The Alaya-Vijnana users in Tekkadan assume that Kiva Andru is similarly like them due to her Earth Coalition implants that allow her to control her personal mech, the CMDR-KA, and the group of remote controlled mechs.
** On the other hand, Fumitan Admoss suspects Kiva Andru to be either a Gjallarhorn undercover agent or a runaway test subject of an experimental Alaya-Vijnana project.
** On the other hand, Fumitan Admoss suspects Kiva Andru to be either a Gjallarhorn undercover agent or a runaway test subject of an experimental Alaya-Vijnana project.
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** Jamie's surname Vashti is from ''MobileSuitGundam00'', shared with Ian Vashti and his family.
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** Jamie's surname Vashti is from ''MobileSuitGundam00'', ''Anime/MobileSuitGundam00'', shared with Ian Vashti and his family.
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* AdaptationalBadass:
** In Megas XLR show, Jamie is TheLoad who often hangs around next to Coop. Here, he is the pilot of the repurposed R.E.C.R. mech with its reprogrammed A.I. as his Haro companion. In Chapter 3, he is able to hold his own against Coop pushing back Megas and trading powerful blows with him in a sparring match.
** In Megas XLR show, Jamie is TheLoad who often hangs around next to Coop. Here, he is the pilot of the repurposed R.E.C.R. mech with its reprogrammed A.I. as his Haro companion. In Chapter 3, he is able to hold his own against Coop pushing back Megas and trading powerful blows with him in a sparring match.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: Jamie's surname is revealed to be Vashti.
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** Jamie's surname Vashti is from ''MobileSuitGundam00'', shared with Ian Vashti and his family.
** "Nope, none of that. Shame on you.", said Coop after he [[spoiler: quickly dispatched Hashmal]] is from ''WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged''.
** There are some of this from ''WesternAnimation/Mulan'':
*** When Orga Itsuka stated that it's time to let's get down to business, Jamie cheeky asks if it's "to defeat the Huns".
*** "I'm gonna hit you so hard it will make your ancestors dizzy!", said by Jamie during a sparring practice with Coop in their respective mechs .
** Jamie's surname Vashti is from ''MobileSuitGundam00'', shared with Ian Vashti and his family.
** "Nope, none of that. Shame on you.", said Coop after he [[spoiler: quickly dispatched Hashmal]] is from ''WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged''.
** There are some of this from ''WesternAnimation/Mulan'':
*** When Orga Itsuka stated that it's time to let's get down to business, Jamie cheeky asks if it's "to defeat the Huns".
*** "I'm gonna hit you so hard it will make your ancestors dizzy!", said by Jamie during a sparring practice with Coop in their respective mechs .
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* Adaptational Wimp: [[spoiler: In contrast to the rampaging genocide machine it is in canon, Hashmal is dispatched by Coop within minutes of waking up.]]
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* Adaptational Wimp: AdaptationalWimp: [[spoiler: In contrast to the rampaging genocide machine it is in canon, Hashmal is dispatched by Coop within minutes of waking up.]]
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* DroppedABridgeOnHim: [[spoiler: Hashmal suffers an unceremonious end by Coop just when it had awakened from its 300 year long slumber and was about to rampage on Mars. Only for Megas to grab its head and crushed it. Now Coop used Hashmal's remains to upgrade Gundam Barbatos.]]
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* Adaptational Wimp: [[spoiler: In contrast to the rampaging genocide machine it is in canon, Hashmal is dispatched by Coop within minutes of waking up.]]
* DroppedABridgeOnHim: [[spoiler: Hashmal suffers an unceremonious end by Coop just when it had awakened from its 300 year long slumber and was about to rampage on Mars. Only for Megas to grab its head andcrushed crush it. Now Coop used Hashmal's remains to upgrade Gundam Barbatos.]]
* DroppedABridgeOnHim: [[spoiler: Hashmal suffers an unceremonious end by Coop just when it had awakened from its 300 year long slumber and was about to rampage on Mars. Only for Megas to grab its head and
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: [[spoiler: Using the remains of Hashmal he had dispatched, Coop upgraded Barbatos from its First Form ''straight up to Barbatos Lupus Rex''.]]
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Biscuit Griffon suggests that they should ask Megas Force to use their portal system to get them to Earth. But Orga Itsuka refuses, stating not only that Tekkadan had to do it themselves and not rely too much on Coop's generosity in upgrading their forces, Gjallarhorn would take notice and try to seize the technology that can send their troops anywhere in the Solar System within short notice.
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Biscuit Griffon suggests that they should ask Megas Force to use their portal system to get them to Earth. Earth without problems. But Orga Itsuka refuses, stating not only that [[ThisIsSomethingHesGotToDoHimself Tekkadan had to do it themselves themselves]] and not rely too much on Coop's generosity in after he helped upgrading their forces, Gjallarhorn would take notice and try to seize the technology that can send their troops anywhere in the Solar System within short notice.notice.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Crank Zent became the new head of Gjallarhorn Mars Branch after [[AssholeVictim Coral Conrad]] was killed by a stray missile of Coop, and didn't have to die in a duel with Mikazuki.
* TemptingFate: Coral Conrad was impatient from waiting after giving Crank Zent orders to wipe out Tekkadan and take Kudelia Aina Bernstein, complaining that he's gonna explode. Cue to the missile hitting the Gjallarhorn Mars Branch's space station where he's at.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Crank Zent became the new head of Gjallarhorn Mars Branch after [[AssholeVictim Coral Conrad]] was killed by a stray missile of Coop, and didn't have to die in a duel with Mikazuki.
* TemptingFate: Coral Conrad was impatient from waiting after giving Crank Zent orders to wipe out Tekkadan and take Kudelia Aina Bernstein, complaining that he's gonna explode. Cue to the missile hitting the Gjallarhorn Mars Branch's space station where he's at.
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Megas of Mars is a ''WesternAnimation/MegasXLR''/''MobileSuitGundamIronBloodedOrphans'' crossover by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5531592/Warmachine375 Warmachine375]].
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Megas of Mars is a ''WesternAnimation/MegasXLR''/''MobileSuitGundamIronBloodedOrphans'' ''WesternAnimation/MegasXLR''/''Anime/MobileSuitGundamIronBloodedOrphans'' crossover by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5531592/Warmachine375 Warmachine375]].
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Megas of Mars is a ''WesternAnimation/MegasXLR''/''MobileSuitGundamIronBloodedOrphans'' crossover by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5531592/Warmachine375 Warmachine375]].
Several weeks after the events of The Dimensional War against his evil counterpart, Coop decided to give his friends Jamie and Kiva their mechs and go for a test run to Mars. Just like his old one, his new Megas had a dimensional portal which the trio ends up in another dimension where they see that Mars is colonized before finding themselves caught in the middle of conflict.
Can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14088616/1/Megas-of-Mars here]], [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/megas-of-mars-megas-xlr-gundam-ibo.116805/ here]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/44151163/chapters/111021508 here]].
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* AppropriatedAppellation: Kiva gives out the name "Megas Force" when claiming to Crank Zent and Tekkadan that they were a mercenary force. Jamie finds that it has a nice ring to it, and Coop reluctantly conceded.
* DroppedABridgeOnHim: [[spoiler: Hashmal suffers an unceremonious end by Coop just when it had awakened from its 300 year long slumber and was about to rampage on Mars. Only for Megas to grab its head and crushed it. Now Coop used Hashmal's remains to upgrade Gundam Barbatos.]]
* HeelFaceBrainwashing: This applies to the A.I. of R.E.C.R. (Reverse Engineered Collective Robot) when it was transferred into the Haro as a companion and partner of Jamie who pilots the R.E.C.R.'s body as his mech.
* OhNoNotAgain: The blonde male officers under Carta Issue's command express this when [[spoiler: Evil Coop meets her and she was enamored with him due to being blonde, strong and handsome.]]
* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Biscuit Griffon suggests that they should ask Megas Force to use their portal system to get them to Earth. But Orga Itsuka refuses, stating not only that Tekkadan had to do it themselves and not rely too much on Coop's generosity in upgrading their forces, Gjallarhorn would take notice and try to seize the technology that can send their troops anywhere in the Solar System within short notice.
* VocalDissonance: Sgt. Haro may look cute and adorable... except its voice was that of a stereotypical '50s military man, courtesy of the reprogrammed R.E.C.R.'s A.I. as lampshaded by Jamie.
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Several weeks after the events of The Dimensional War against his evil counterpart, Coop decided to give his friends Jamie and Kiva their mechs and go for a test run to Mars. Just like his old one, his new Megas had a dimensional portal which the trio ends up in another dimension where they see that Mars is colonized before finding themselves caught in the middle of conflict.
Can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14088616/1/Megas-of-Mars here]], [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/megas-of-mars-megas-xlr-gundam-ibo.116805/ here]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/44151163/chapters/111021508 here]].
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* AppropriatedAppellation: Kiva gives out the name "Megas Force" when claiming to Crank Zent and Tekkadan that they were a mercenary force. Jamie finds that it has a nice ring to it, and Coop reluctantly conceded.
* DroppedABridgeOnHim: [[spoiler: Hashmal suffers an unceremonious end by Coop just when it had awakened from its 300 year long slumber and was about to rampage on Mars. Only for Megas to grab its head and crushed it. Now Coop used Hashmal's remains to upgrade Gundam Barbatos.]]
* HeelFaceBrainwashing: This applies to the A.I. of R.E.C.R. (Reverse Engineered Collective Robot) when it was transferred into the Haro as a companion and partner of Jamie who pilots the R.E.C.R.'s body as his mech.
* OhNoNotAgain: The blonde male officers under Carta Issue's command express this when [[spoiler: Evil Coop meets her and she was enamored with him due to being blonde, strong and handsome.]]
* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Biscuit Griffon suggests that they should ask Megas Force to use their portal system to get them to Earth. But Orga Itsuka refuses, stating not only that Tekkadan had to do it themselves and not rely too much on Coop's generosity in upgrading their forces, Gjallarhorn would take notice and try to seize the technology that can send their troops anywhere in the Solar System within short notice.
* VocalDissonance: Sgt. Haro may look cute and adorable... except its voice was that of a stereotypical '50s military man, courtesy of the reprogrammed R.E.C.R.'s A.I. as lampshaded by Jamie.
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