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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13189759/1/Mayura-Mayhem Mayura Mayhem]] is an AlternateUniverseFic made by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/80745/RockSunner RockSunner]], Creator/{{RockSunner}}, for ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug''. Part of the [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/994671 Smart Adversaries AU]] for Miraculous Ladybug on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]], in which Ladybug villains make smarter decisions. The series has a [[Fanfic/SmartAdversariesAU tropes page here]].
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* SignificantWardrobeShift: This story explains why Volpina's costume was orange and white, not red like the others. [[spoiler:It was a special akuma just for her that left her with more of a mind of her own. It turned out to be a mistake for Hawk Moth.]]
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* HostageForMcGuffin: Lila does this [[spoiler:using herself as the fake hostage of her own snake monster in an attempt to get Ladybug's Miraculous. It fails when Ladybug uses ice water to slow down the creature and rescue Lila.]]
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* HostageForMcGuffin: Lila does this [[spoiler:using herself as the fake hostage of her own snake monster in an attempt to get Ladybug's Miraculous. It fails when Ladybug uses ice water to slow down the creature and rescue (drenched) Lila.]]
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* HostageForMcGuffin: Lila attempts this [[spoiler:using herself as the fake hostage of her own snake monster in an attempt to get Ladybug's Miraculous. It fails when Ladybug uses ice water to slow down the creature and rescue Lila.]]
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* HostageForMcGuffin: Lila attempts does this [[spoiler:using herself as the fake hostage of her own snake monster in an attempt to get Ladybug's Miraculous. It fails when Ladybug uses ice water to slow down the creature and rescue Lila.]]
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* HostageForMcGuffin: Lila attempts this [[spoiler:using herself as the fake hostage of her own snake monster in an attempt to get Ladybug's Miraculous. It fails when Ladybug uses ice water to slow down the creature and rescue Lila.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Lila inadvertently tips off her identity as Mayura, but Marinette is framed as a bullying attention seeker. Adrien will become closer to Marinette because he wants to help her, but Marinette has lost all of her other friends. Lila has some physical consequences from abusing her Miraculous (see LaserGuidedKarma below).]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Lila inadvertently tips off her identity as Mayura, but Marinette is framed as a bullying attention seeker. Adrien will become closer to Marinette because he wants to help her, but Marinette has lost all of her other friends. Lila has some physical consequences suffers from abusing actual tinnitus and a sprained wrist due to her Miraculous (see LaserGuidedKarma below).abuse of the Peacock Miraculous.]]
* MadeOutToBeAJerkass: [[spoiler:Lila successfully makes Marinette look like a two-faced bitch by framing her for an akuma attack.]]
* TheMasqueradeWillKillYourDatingLife: It will kill [[spoiler: Marinette's friendship life in this case. She secures her secret identity at the cost of losing her reputation as a good friend.]]
* TheMasqueradeWillKillYourDatingLife: It will kill [[spoiler: Marinette's friendship life in this case. She secures her secret identity at the cost of losing her reputation as a good friend.]]
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* TheMasqueradeWillKillYourDatingLife: It will kill [[spoiler: Marinette's friendship life in this case. She secures her secret identity at the cost of losing her reputation as a good friend.]]
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* TheMasqueradeWillKillYourDatingLife: It will kill [[spoiler: Marinette's friendship life in this case. She secures her secret identity at the cost of losing her reputation as a good friend.]]
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* TakingUpTheMantle: Lila gets to [[spoiler:become Mayura, after defeating Nathalie.]]
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* TakingUpTheMantle: Lila gets to [[spoiler:become Mayura, after defeating Nathalie.]]
* TheUnmasking: [[spoiler:Mayura's identity is exposed to Marinette when her attack fits too perfectly with Lila's goals. It is implied that Ladybug will force Lila to reveal what she knows about Hawk Moth, too.]]
* TheUnmasking: [[spoiler:Mayura's identity is exposed to Marinette when her attack fits too perfectly with Lila's goals. It is implied that Ladybug will force Lila to reveal what she knows about Hawk Moth, too.]]
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This is a multi-chapter six-chapter work and it is still in progress.now complete.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Lila inadvertently tips off her identity as Mayura, but Marinette is framed as a bullying attention seeker. Adrien will become closer to Marinette because he wants to help her, but Marinette has lost all of her other friends. Lila has some physical consequences from abusing her Miraculous (see LaserGuidedKarma below).]]
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* LaserGuidedKarma: Lila [[spoiler:summons a lamia as a fake akumatized Marinette and has it say that Lila's pretended disabilities of tinnitus and a sprained wrist are real. Thanks to the magic of the damaged Peacock Miraculous, it becomes true.]]
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* ArchEnemy: Lila has a day in class with Marinette [[spoiler:as in "Chameleon" but is much more dangerous because she can escalate with Mayura's powers.]]
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* ArchEnemy: In Chapter 5, Lila has a day in class with Marinette [[spoiler:as in "Chameleon" but is much more dangerous because she can escalate with Mayura's powers.]]
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* ArchEnemy: Lila has a day in class with Marinette [[spoiler:as in "Chameleon" but is much more dangerous because she can escalate with Mayura's powers.]]
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* CassandraTruth: Duusu tries to warn [[spoiler:Lila of the danger of using a damaged Miraculous, but she cuts him off by invoking the transformation.]]
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* CassandraTruth: Duusu tries to warn [[spoiler:Lila of the danger of using a damaged Miraculous, but she cuts him off by invoking the transformation.]]
* DragonWithAnAgenda: Lila has [[spoiler:different goals than Hawk Moth when she takes over as Mayura. Her fantasy is to "rule the world by his side," rather than his goal of getting his wife back.]]
* DragonWithAnAgenda: Lila has [[spoiler:different goals than Hawk Moth when she takes over as Mayura. Her fantasy is to "rule the world by his side," rather than his goal of getting his wife back.]]
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* CassandraTruth: Duusu tries DemotedToDragon: In Chapter 4, [[spoiler:Gabriel is forced to warn [[spoiler:Lila acknowledge that Lila has all of the danger of using a damaged Miraculous, but she cuts him off by invoking cards in their relationship and consent to taking orders from her for the transformation.]]
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** Lila has [[spoiler:different goals than Hawk Moth when she takes over as Mayura. Her fantasy is to "rule the world by his side," rather than his goal of getting his wife back.]]]]
** After [[spoiler:Gabriel is DemotedToDragon, he becomes this; he intends to give Lila enough rope to hang herself, either by getting her hide handed to her by the heroes or by overusing the damaged Peacock Miraculous]].
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** Lila has [[spoiler:different goals than Hawk Moth when she takes over as Mayura. Her fantasy is to "rule the world by his side," rather than his goal of getting his wife back.
** After [[spoiler:Gabriel is DemotedToDragon, he becomes this; he intends to give Lila enough rope to hang herself, either by getting her hide handed to her by the heroes or by overusing the damaged Peacock Miraculous]].
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* DragonWithAnAgenda: Lila has [[spoiler:different goals than Hawk Moth when she takes over as Mayura. Her fantasy is to "rule the world by his side," rather than his goal of getting his wife back.]]
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* OntologicalInertia: The extra villains and the damage from their attacks [[spoiler:count as "akuma damage" that is not undone by simply breaking Catalyst's akumatized object. A Miraculous Ladybug charm, however, does the trick.]]
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* OntologicalInertia: The extra villains and the damage from their attacks [[spoiler:count as "akuma damage" that is not undone by simply breaking Catalyst's akumatized object. A Miraculous Ladybug charm, however, does the trick.]]
* TakingUpTheMantle: Lila gets to [[spoiler:become Mayura, after defeating Nathalie.]]
* TakingUpTheMantle: Lila gets to [[spoiler:become Mayura, after defeating Nathalie.]]
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* CassandraTruth: Duusu tries to warn [[spoiler:Lila of the danger of using a damaged Miraculous, but she cuts him off by invoking the transformation.]]
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* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Volpina [[spoiler:loses her memory like a typical akuma victim, even though it happened in an unusual way. Because of this, she plays the rescue role as Mayura just as Nathalie did in the original, even though Volpina was responsible for getting Hawk Moth nearly defeated in the first place.]]
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* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Volpina [[spoiler:loses her memory like a typical akuma victim, even though it happened in an unusual way. Because of this, she Lila plays the rescue role as Mayura just as Nathalie did in the original, even though Volpina was responsible for getting Hawk Moth nearly defeated in the first place.]]
* OntologicalInertia: The extra villains and the damage from their attacks [[spoiler:count as "akuma damage" that is not undone by simply breaking Catalyst's akumatized object. A Miraculous Ladybug charm, however, does the trick.]]
* OntologicalInertia: The extra villains and the damage from their attacks [[spoiler:count as "akuma damage" that is not undone by simply breaking Catalyst's akumatized object. A Miraculous Ladybug charm, however, does the trick.]]
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* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Inverted. Volpina has [[spoiler:a crush on Hawk Moth and is not happy to learn that his wish is to bring his wife back to life.]] Played straight for [[spoiler: Catalyst]].
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* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Inverted. Volpina has [[spoiler:a crush on Hawk Moth and is not happy to learn that his wish is to bring his wife back to life.]] Played straight for [[spoiler: Catalyst]].Catalyst]].
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Volpina [[spoiler:loses her memory like a typical akuma victim, even though it happened in an unusual way. Because of this, she plays the rescue role as Mayura just as Nathalie did in the original, even though Volpina was responsible for getting Hawk Moth nearly defeated in the first place.]]
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Volpina [[spoiler:loses her memory like a typical akuma victim, even though it happened in an unusual way. Because of this, she plays the rescue role as Mayura just as Nathalie did in the original, even though Volpina was responsible for getting Hawk Moth nearly defeated in the first place.]]
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13189759/1/Mayura-Mahem Mayura Mayhem]] is an AlternateUniverseFic made by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/80745/RockSunner RockSunner]], for ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug''. Part of the [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/994671 Smart Adversaries AU]] for Miraculous Ladybug on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]], in which Ladybug villains make smarter decisions. The series has a [[Fanfic/SmartAdversariesAU tropes page here]].
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13189759/1/Mayura-Mahem net/s/13189759/1/Mayura-Mayhem Mayura Mayhem]] is an AlternateUniverseFic made by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/80745/RockSunner RockSunner]], for ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug''. Part of the [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/994671 Smart Adversaries AU]] for Miraculous Ladybug on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]], in which Ladybug villains make smarter decisions. The series has a [[Fanfic/SmartAdversariesAU tropes page here]].
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* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Inverted. Volpina has [[spoiler:a crush on Hawk Moth and is not happy to learn that his wish is to bring his wife back to life.]]
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* GreenEyedMonster: Volpina makes [[spoiler:an impulsive attack on Catalyst out of jealousy. It saves the day for Ladybug.]]
* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Inverted. Volpina has [[spoiler:a crush on Hawk Moth and is not happy to learn that his wish is to bring his wife back to life.]]]] Played straight for [[spoiler: Catalyst]].
* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Inverted. Volpina has [[spoiler:a crush on Hawk Moth and is not happy to learn that his wish is to bring his wife back to life.
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* Cliffhanger: Chapter 1 ends with [[spoiler:Chat Noir akumatized, Ladybug alone against the villains, and Volpina having a realization that Hawk Moth does not intend to include her in his future.]]
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* Cliffhanger: {{Cliffhanger}}: Chapter 1 ends with [[spoiler:Chat Noir akumatized, Ladybug alone against the villains, and Volpina having a realization that Hawk Moth does not intend to include her in his future.]]
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13189759/1/Mayura-Mahem Mayura Mayhem]] is an AlternateUniverseFic made by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/80745/RockSunner RockSunner]], for ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug''. Part of the [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/994671 Smart Adversaries AU]] for Miraculous Ladybug on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]], in which Ladybug villains make smarter decisions. The series has a [[Fanfic/SmartAdversariesAU tropes page here]].
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!!This fanfiction series contains examples of:
* AlternateUniverseFic: A WhatIf with the change that [[spoiler:Volpina casts an extra illusion to help Hawk Moth ambush Ladybug and Chat Noir from behind, leading to Chat Noir getting akumatized.]]
* Cliffhanger: Chapter 1 ends with [[spoiler:Chat Noir akumatized, Ladybug alone against the villains, and Volpina having a realization that Hawk Moth does not intend to include her in his future.]]
* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Inverted. Volpina has [[spoiler:a crush on Hawk Moth and is not happy to learn that his wish is to bring his wife back to life.]]
This is a multi-chapter work and it is still in progress.
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!!This fanfiction series contains examples of:
* AlternateUniverseFic: A WhatIf with the change that [[spoiler:Volpina casts an extra illusion to help Hawk Moth ambush Ladybug and Chat Noir from behind, leading to Chat Noir getting akumatized.]]
* Cliffhanger: Chapter 1 ends with [[spoiler:Chat Noir akumatized, Ladybug alone against the villains, and Volpina having a realization that Hawk Moth does not intend to include her in his future.]]
* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Inverted. Volpina has [[spoiler:a crush on Hawk Moth and is not happy to learn that his wish is to bring his wife back to life.]]
