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** The fic borrows several traits from ''Fanfic/PonyPOVSeries'', including Changelings being adverse to lemons, Twinkleshine having LightEmUp powers, and Lemon Hearts having powers over all things lemon.
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* BringMyBrownPants: When Mindwipe is finally cornered, Starlight Glimmer is disgusted when she looks down and sees a puddle form under him.
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** [[spoiler:Marshmallow is a complicated case, as while she is the closest any of the Marionettes come to being a KillerRobot, she's only doing what Masquerade ordered her to do. Played straight with the other attempts to create a Marionette like her, as they all went insane due to tampering with their central programming and apparently as a result of having weaponry being built into them. To prevent that from happening to Marshmallow, she was built so she could only feel happiness, as well as having deliberately more simplistic mindset and mental capacity, like that of a child]].

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** [[spoiler:Marshmallow is a complicated case, as while she is the closest any of the Marionettes come to being a KillerRobot, she's only doing what Masquerade ordered her to do. Played straight with the other attempts to create a Marionette like her, as they all went insane due to tampering with their central programming and apparently as a result of having weaponry being built into them. To prevent that from happening to Marshmallow, she was built so she could only feel happiness, as well as having deliberately more simplistic mindset and mental capacity, like that of a child]].child, so she couldn't think too hard about what she was doing]].



** Masquerade is so strong that the two ponies directly above fighting her together still can't just beat her by themselves, though part of that is essentially minimized PoweredArmor. [[spoiler:It takes Spitfire, who herself is an example, joining the fight to actually make it ''even'' and for Masquerade to start taking any serious damage.]]

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** Masquerade is so strong that the two ponies directly above fighting her together still can't just beat her by themselves, though part of that is essentially minimized PoweredArmor.PoweredArmor in the form of hydraulics under her suit linked to a mana engine. [[spoiler:It takes Spitfire, who herself is an example, joining the fight to actually make it ''even'' and for Masquerade to start taking any serious damage.]]



* FantasticRacism: [[spoiler:Some of the "monsters" the Stallions capture are genuinely dangerous and a threat to ponies (one even calmly saying that he'll kill them all when asked what he'll do if they let him out), but plenty more are simply threats to the Stallions IgnoranceIsBliss attitude]].

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* FantasticRacism: [[spoiler:Some of the "monsters" the Stallions capture are genuinely dangerous and a threat to ponies (one even calmly saying that he'll kill them all when asked what he'll do if they the heroes let him out), but plenty more are simply threats to the Stallions IgnoranceIsBliss attitude]].attitude, like Thorax]].



* FlatCharacter: [[spoiler:Rainbow lampshades this with Well-To-Do, saying that him being an android makes sense in hindsight because he wanted to destroy the environment for no real reason like a [[WesternAnimation/CaptainPlanetAndThePlaneteers Captain Equus]] villain. Apparently it was more to humble the deer than to teach the Mane Six AnAesop, so the Agents who handled that never gave him a very detailed personality]].

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* FlatCharacter: [[spoiler:Rainbow lampshades this with Well-To-Do, saying that him being an android makes sense in hindsight because he wanted to destroy the environment for no real reason like a [[WesternAnimation/CaptainPlanetAndThePlaneteers Captain Equus]] villain. Apparently it was more to humble the deer than to teach the Mane Six AnAesop, so the Agents who handled that never gave him a very detailed personality]].personality. Even after being freed from the control of the Stallions, he is still quite greedy]].



* {{Hypocrite}}: The Stallions in Black [[spoiler:have 'protect Equestria' as their mission statement, but not only have they [[KnightTemplar taken it so far as to become a threat themselves]], they place their own continued secrecy as the highest priority and thus allow threats they easily could have helped with or stopped go unchallenged if it'd mean exposing themselves in anyway, while also [[IgnoranceIsBliss keeping the public ignorant of very real threats that have gotten ponies hurt or killed]]. WordOfGod has compared them to the Pharisees, being [[MoralMyopia so self-righteous they're blind to their own wrongdoing]] while [[ObstructiveBureaucrat following a literal interpretation of their rules rather than the actual spirit of them]].]]
* IdiotBall: [[spoiler:Invoked: the Stallions in Black made Twilight stupidly stick to arbitrary rules that made no sense in context when dealing with Longhorn and his crew the first time to prevent her from CuttingTheKnot of their lesson.]]

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* {{Hypocrite}}: The Stallions in Black [[spoiler:have 'protect Equestria' as their mission statement, but not only have they [[KnightTemplar taken it so far as to become a threat themselves]], they place their own continued secrecy as the highest priority and thus allow threats they easily could have helped with or stopped go unchallenged if it'd mean exposing themselves in anyway, not even informing anyone else, including Celestia, about them, while also [[IgnoranceIsBliss keeping the public ignorant of very real threats that have gotten ponies hurt or killed]]. WordOfGod has compared them to the Pharisees, being [[MoralMyopia so self-righteous they're blind to their own wrongdoing]] while [[ObstructiveBureaucrat following a literal interpretation of their rules rather than the actual spirit of them]].]]
* IdiotBall: [[spoiler:Invoked: the Stallions in Black made Twilight stupidly stick to arbitrary rules that made no sense in context when dealing with Longhorn and his crew the first time to prevent her from CuttingTheKnot of their lesson.lesson about dealing with an enemy that dealt inside the law.]]
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** [[spoiler:Even the Generation 4 Marionettes, for all their improvements, have a major flaw: they overheat very easily and must drink cold fluids to compensate. This problem was fixed with the Generation 5 models and Twilight upgrades Trixie and Lightning Dust with a similar fix.]]
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* BenevolentConspiracy: Many of the Stallions in Black ''think'' they're this. Others view themselves as a NecessaryEvil, while others [[PsychoForHire simply don't give a darn and are in it for the power.]] [[spoiler:Ironically, they were originally one of these when Celestia founded them, but slowly fell into becoming HeWhoeFightsMonsters.]]


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* PsychoForHire: While most of the Stallions are KnightTemplar and WellIntentionedExtremist types, some ''are'' just in it for the power and authority it gives them over others. [[spoiler:Thunderhoof in particular is this.]]
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* YankTheDogsChain: [[spoiler:One of the plans the Stallions had for Trixie was to make her an alicorn... specifically to provide Twilight with a suitable challenge that she would still be able to defeat. Trixie does not appreciate that she would have been set up specifically to be defeated, nor that they would trivialize the act of alicorn ascension into just making another speed bump. She still accepts the upgrade, since she'll be able to put it to better use now.]]
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* ClonesArePeopleToo: [[spoiler:The clones created by Queen Majesty's Foal Making Mirror are no less alive than anyone else, nor seen as less than alive. Derpy accidentally creates a colt clone of herself she names Derby Hooves who she adopts as her son, and it's implied Dinky was created the same way. Jet Set and Upper Crust create a daughter named Gold Mine from it as well, as being Marionettes they can't reproduce naturally. It's also heavily implied Masquerade was a clone of her mother created the same way, and Trixie's opinion is it changes nothing.]]
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* ThePlotReaper: [[spoiler:''Invoked''. The Stallions in Black desired to use the Siege Arc to put the Marionettes who'd diverged from their programming in a position where they could dispose of them so they wouldn't continue to be a problem in their plans to enforce fate.]]
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* ForgotAboutHisPowers: [[spoiler:Twilight and Sunset forget that they can fly when they're in a cramped elevator in Moirai]].

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* ForgotAboutHisPowers: [[spoiler:Twilight and Sunset forget that they can fly when they're in a cramped elevator in Moirai]].Moirai, even though Lightning Dust was up on the ceiling]].
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* BrokenFaceplate: [[spoiler:Trixie manages to shatter part of the visor of Masquerade's [[PoweredArmor Puppeteer armor]] at the same time Masquerade shatters her eye lens. This actually becomes a problem for Masquerade, as she now has to block attacks the visor would've previously protected her from.]]
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* OmniscientMoralityLicense: [[spoiler:The Stallions, believing that they are carrying out the desires of fate, act like this. In their minds, anything from keeping Gypsy captive for years, creating sentient androids to be used as antagonists for the heroes to face in the name of making them better heroes, reprogramming or destroying said androids if they start to develop past the personalities they were programmed with or become a threat to their plans, manipulating memories in the belief that IgnoranceIsBliss, and being so obsessed with their own continued secrecy that they won't involve themselves in an issue if there's a chance they could be exposed, giving no warning to anyone else, allowing many events that could have been mitigated or stopped altogether to proceed, or letting monsters run around Equestria for years for the same reasons, which ''has'' gotten ponies hurt or killed]].

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* OmniscientMoralityLicense: [[spoiler:The Stallions, believing that they are carrying out the desires of fate, act like this. In their minds, anything from keeping Gypsy captive for years, creating sentient androids to be used as antagonists for the heroes to face in the name of making them better heroes, reprogramming or destroying said androids if they start to develop past the personalities they were programmed with or become a threat to their plans, manipulating memories in the belief that IgnoranceIsBliss, and being so obsessed with their own continued secrecy that they won't involve themselves in an issue if there's a chance they could be exposed, giving no warning to anyone else, allowing many events that could have been mitigated or stopped altogether to proceed, or letting monsters run around Equestria for years for the same reasons, which ''has'' gotten ponies hurt or killed]].killed, is acceptable as long as the fates they are trying to bring about are achieved]].

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* ChildSoldier:
** [[spoiler:Masquerade is a grown up one, having been raised from birth to be what she is. Spoiled Rich (then Spoiled Milk) was disturbed by the idea. Masquerade's mother also implies that this is family tradition.]]
** [[spoiler:Miss Marshmallow was designed to have a very child-like mind so she wouldn't think too hard about the things she'd be ordered to do. Bright Future even says she's more or less a child.]]



* FinalBattle: [[spoiler:Alicorn mode]] Trixie vs Director Masquerade [[spoiler:wearing [[PoweredArmor the Puppeteer armor]].]]



** [[spoiler:The Puppeteer, a suit of PoweredArmor based off the Marionette concept and intended to fight Celestia if she went rogue, is a dangerous, unfinished prototype that puts a large amount of strain on the user. Masquerade only pulls it out as a last resort and admits the strain combined with her pre-existing injures should have caused her to black out by now. In other aspects, it lacks mobility and limits Masquerade's movements, and the {{BFS}} is too large to be effectively used inside the base]].

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** [[spoiler:The Puppeteer, a suit of PoweredArmor based off the Marionette concept and intended to fight Celestia if she went rogue, is a dangerous, unfinished prototype that puts a large amount of strain on the user. Masquerade only pulls it out as a last resort and admits the strain combined with her pre-existing injures should have caused her to black out by now. In other aspects, it lacks mobility and limits Masquerade's movements, and the {{BFS}} is too large to be effectively used inside the base]].base. After its destroyed, Masquerade is left barely able to stand and with a cracked horn due to a combination of injuries sustained in the fight and the sheer strain it put on her.]].



** It turns out that [[spoiler:Masquerade's mother raised her to be the way she is and never gave her any choice in the matter, making her this trope to her daughter.]]

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** It turns out that [[spoiler:Masquerade's mother raised her to be the way she is and never gave her any choice in the matter, making her this trope to her daughter. Of course, it's also implied that her mother was in turn raised to be how ''she'' was by ''her'' mother, and so on and so forth, meaning whoever started the cycle (if anyone) is the ''true'' GreaterScopeVillain.]]


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* RuleOfCool: [[spoiler:Bright Future mentions this is half of the reason Trixie has a TransformationSequence into her Alicorn form, the other half being it's faster than building a separate body for her to be transplanted in.]]


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* SenseLossSadness: [[spoiler:In Marshmallow's flashback, Masquerade is shown to be distraught that she's slowly losing her emotions. She even rips the legs off a spider and kills it, not out of sadism, but because she remembers feeling bad about killing one before and was trying to see if she would now. She's saddened to find that no, she can't anymore.]]

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* CompositeCharacter: [[spoiler:Nurse Redheart in this universe is a combination of her canon self and [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyTales Sweetheart]].]]



** [[spoiler:The Generation 2 Marionettes are [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyTales Ace and Teddy.]] The rest of the Mane 7 are mentioned, though with Nurse Redheart taking Sweetheart's place (according to WordOfGod this is because Redheart's design seems to be based off Sweetheart.]]

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** [[spoiler:The Generation 2 Marionettes are [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyTales Ace and Teddy.]] The rest of the Mane 7 are mentioned, though with Nurse Redheart taking Sweetheart's place (according to WordOfGod this is because Redheart's design seems to be based off Sweetheart.Sweetheart). Bright Eyes and Patch appear in the epilogue with the newly upgraded Ace.]]



* PlotRelevantAgeUp: [[spoiler:During the epilogue, Ace and Teddy are upgraded from Generation 2 Marionettes to Generation 5 Marionettes, with their new bodies being young adults instead of 16 year olds.]]



* ReallyWasBornYesterday: [[spoiler:The robotic Radiant Hope (referred to in text as Mecha Radiant) acts like a five year old filly. When questioned about it, Bright Future points out that due to not receiving her programming, she really ''is'' basically a five year old and she was literally just put in her body. It's noted that they should probably get her a new body better befitting her physical age.]]

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* ReallyWasBornYesterday: [[spoiler:The robotic Radiant Hope (referred to in text as Mecha Radiant) acts like a five year old filly. When questioned about it, Bright Future points out that due to not receiving her programming, she really ''is'' basically a five year old and she was literally just put in her body. It's noted that they should probably get her a new body better befitting her physical age.age, which happens during the epilogue.]]
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** [[spoiler:Marshmallow is a complicated case, as while she is the closest any of the Marionettes come to being a KillerRobot, she's only doing what Masquerade ordered her to do. Played straight with the other attempts to create a Marionette like her, as they all went insane due to tampering with their central programming and apparently as a result of having weaponry being built into them. To prevent that from happening to Marshmallow, she was built so she could only feel happiness, as well as having deliberately more simplistic mindset, like that of a child]].

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** [[spoiler:Marshmallow is a complicated case, as while she is the closest any of the Marionettes come to being a KillerRobot, she's only doing what Masquerade ordered her to do. Played straight with the other attempts to create a Marionette like her, as they all went insane due to tampering with their central programming and apparently as a result of having weaponry being built into them. To prevent that from happening to Marshmallow, she was built so she could only feel happiness, as well as having deliberately more simplistic mindset, mindset and mental capacity, like that of a child]].

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* AlasPoorVillain: [[spoiler:Miss Marshmallow's death is accompanied with a flashback showing just how she ''got'' how she is and [[ChildSoldier what she truly is.]]]]



** One of Trixie's goals is to be able to return to her cart, which she's quite upset to have to abandon again to escape the Stallions in Black.
** [[spoiler:Teddy and Ace both ultimately want to get back to their loved ones who they haven't seen in over a decade, being stuck in the Stallion's basement.]]

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** One of Trixie's goals is to be able to return to her cart, which she's quite upset to have to abandon again to escape the Stallions in Black. \n [[spoiler:The final scene of the story is her in her cart just enjoying being home.]]
** [[spoiler:Teddy and Ace both ultimately want to get back to their loved ones who they haven't seen in over a decade, being stuck in the Stallion's basement. Both succeed in the end.]]
** [[spoiler:Gypsy is this as well, having been abducted as a filly and not seen her home or loved ones in over a decade. She is last seen being reunited with them upon returning home.
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* SuperMode: [[spoiler:The Mane Six's Rainbow Power and Sunset's Daydream Shimmer forms are both activated in the final act to stop Moirai from falling into the ground wrong.]]

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* BigLittleBrother: [[spoiler:Iron Will, Trail Cutter, and Well-To-Do are all ''much'' bigger than Trixie, Teddy, and Ace. However, they're also relatively new Marionettes, making them the 'little brothers'.]]



* EyeScream: [[spoiler:Lightning Dust's eye gets destroyed in the impact with the train tunnel, revealing her optic underneath it.]]

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* ImNotDoingThatAgain: [[spoiler:Trixie comments this after destroying Masquerade's [[PoweredArmor Puppeteer armor]] with a DeathOrGloryAttack that left her mana engine so drained she can barely move and momentarily forgets she [[AnArmAndALeg now only has three legs]].]]


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* {{Irony}}: [[spoiler:Trail Cutter was originally intended to antagonize Fluttershy. She's the first friend he makes after being activated who's not a Marionette.]]


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** [[spoiler:After the fall of the Stallions, Bright Future has a ''lot'' more trouble getting parts to make new Marionettes, even with Celestia's help. Trixie ultimately refuses to be repaired just so Ace, Teddy, and Mecha Radiant Hope can get new bodies first.]]

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** [[spoiler:Trixie and Masquerade end up in a WaveMotionGun version of this with Trixie's [[DeathOrGloryAttack Roar of the Four Beasts]] vs the Puppeteer's [[ChestBlaster Eclipse Cannon]]. Masquerade starts to win, but Trixie never intended to win, only hold out until the timed explosive rune she'd planted on the Puppeteer's back to go off and disable Masquerade's beam.]]



** Trixie, being a showmare, tends to resort to any tactics she can in a fight. [[spoiler:Such as forcing Riptide into exposing herself by threatening to fire a lightning bolt into the water she's in, which would have possibly have hit Bright Future (who Riptide is protecting). It was a bluff (as doing so would hurt the Marionettes as well, something Trixie decidedly doesn't want), but Trixie put on a good enough act even her allies were fooled.]]

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** Trixie, being a showmare, tends to resort to any tactics she can in a fight. [[spoiler:Such as forcing Riptide into exposing herself by threatening to fire a lightning bolt into the water she's in, which would have possibly have hit Bright Future (who Riptide is protecting). It was a bluff (as doing so would hurt the Marionettes as well, something Trixie decidedly doesn't want), but Trixie put on a good enough act even her allies were fooled.]]]] Playing dirty is how she manages to compensate for the difference in power and skill between her and Masquerade in the FinalBattle.



* DeathOrGloryAttack: [[spoiler:The move Trixie uses to destroy the Puppeteer upon realizing she simply can't deal enough damage to it with her normal attacks to take it out before Masquerade's much stronger attacks do her in. Not only does the set up require expert timing, the Roar of the Four Beasts is so powerful it nearly completely drains her mana engine and leaves her barely able to move afterwards.]]

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* DeathOrGloryAttack: [[spoiler:The move Trixie uses to destroy the Puppeteer upon realizing she simply can't deal enough damage to it with her normal attacks to take it out before Masquerade's much stronger attacks do her in. Not only does the set up require expert timing, the Roar of the Four Beasts is so powerful it nearly completely drains her mana engine and leaves her barely able to move afterwards. Trixie outright admits if she'd got one thing wrong, she'd be scrap metal.]]

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* AttackItsWeakPoint: [[spoiler:Trixie realizes, thanks to a tip from [[{{Seers}} Gypsy]], that [[PoweredArmor the Puppeteer]] is a Generation 5 Marionette and that it has to overclock its cooling system for its WaveMotionGun to compensate. She proceeds to target and shatter the magic crystal acting as its cooling system, disabling said WaveMotionGun (at least until Masquerade overrides the safeties) and causing Masquerade to visibly overheat inside from the heat output.]]



* DeathOrGloryAttack: [[spoiler:The move Trixie uses to destroy the Puppeteer upon realizing she simply can't deal enough damage to it with her normal attacks to take it out before Masquerade's much stronger attacks do her in. Not only does the set up require expert timing, the Roar of the Four Beasts is so powerful it nearly completely drains her mana engine and leaves her barely able to move afterwards.]]



** [[spoiler:Miss Marshmallow uses the prototype mana engine as her power source. While providing a ''huge'' amount of power (enough to power her weapons), it has ''worse'' heating issues than the normal version, to the point that in her 'all weapons deployed' mode, her mana engine is exposed and protected by an energy field just to compensate.]]



* WaveMotionGun: [[spoiler:The Puppeteer has one in its chest that blows a hole clear through Moirai with one shot. However, it has considerable charge up time, allowing Trixie to dodge it.]]

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** [[spoiler:The Roar of the Four Beasts, a spell Trixie learned from the eastern magic she studied, is basically one of these in the form of a giant golden aura dragon.
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** [[spoiler:Subverted with Masquerade. Twilight ''expects'' she'll be this when Marshmallow dies, but Masquerade is ''actually'' that emotionless. Trixie feels pity for her upon realizing ''why'' that is the case.]]

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** [[spoiler:Subverted with Masquerade. Twilight Trixie ''expects'' she'll be this when Marshmallow dies, but Masquerade is ''actually'' that emotionless. Trixie feels pity for her upon realizing ''why'' that is the case.]]
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** [[spoiler:Marshmallow is a complicated case, as while she is the closest any of the Marionettes come to being a KillerRobot, she's only doing what Masquerade ordered her to do. Played straight with the other attempts to create a Marionette like her, as they all went insane due to tampering with their central programming and apparently as a result of having weaponry being built into them. To prevent that from happening to Marshmallow, she was built so she could only feel happiness, as well as having deliberately limited brainpower]].

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** [[spoiler:Marshmallow is a complicated case, as while she is the closest any of the Marionettes come to being a KillerRobot, she's only doing what Masquerade ordered her to do. Played straight with the other attempts to create a Marionette like her, as they all went insane due to tampering with their central programming and apparently as a result of having weaponry being built into them. To prevent that from happening to Marshmallow, she was built so she could only feel happiness, as well as having deliberately limited brainpower]].more simplistic mindset, like that of a child]].

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* AndroidsArePeopleToo: After finding out [[spoiler:Trixie is a robot]], the Mane Six debate about this, and thanks to Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy conclude that she is sapient and has feelings. Twilight Sparkle later says that by Equestrian law, constructs that display sapience are to be treated just like anypony else.

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* AndroidsArePeopleToo: After finding out [[spoiler:Trixie is a robot]], the Mane Six debate about this, and thanks to Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy conclude that she is sapient and has feelings. Twilight Sparkle later says that by Equestrian law, constructs that display sapience are to be treated just like anypony else. [[spoiler:Miss Marshmallow's demise is treated with the same weight and sorrow as anyone deserves, to the point she was given a funeral some time after the final battle.]]



* CombatBreakdown: [[spoiler:The fight between Trixie and Masquerade starts with Trixie as a 'mecha Alicorn' and Masquerade in a powerful, Alicorn-based PoweredArmor. After a long fight, Trixie is badly damaged and drains her Mana Engine in her final attack to destroy the Puppeteer, badly injuring Masquerade (more so than she originally was) in the process. At this point, their fight devolves into two exhausted, wounded ponies throwing punches at one another while barely able to stand until Masquerade finally goes down and can't get back up.]]



* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Miss Marshmallow dies when her own final attack if contained in a forcefield and destroys her.]]



* SympathyForTheDevil: [[spoiler:The heroes ultimately feel sorry for Masquerade and Miss Marshmallow upon realizing they're just as much victims of S.M.I.L.E. as everypony else. Trixie even admits after beating Masquerade she can't be angry with her knowing this.]]



* TragicVillain: [[spoiler:It's all but directly stated that Masquerade was create from the foal-making mirror by her mother for the sole purpose of inheriting the leadership of the Stallions, given no choice at all in the matter, and brainwashed into being completely emotionless]].

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** [[spoiler:Miss Marshmallow is a specially made Marionette who was built with a very child-like mind missing most of her emotions. She was ''made'' to be incapable of [[ObliviouslyEvil comprehending her actions were wrong]] and ultimately dies for Masquerade, who due to the reasons she's this trope genuinely can't feel anything for her.]]

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* ArtifactOfDoom: [[spoiler:After the battle, A.K. Yearling goes through the Stallion's artifacts to sort out any of these]].

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* ArtifactOfDoom: [[spoiler:After the battle, A.K. Yearling goes through the Stallion's artifacts to sort out any of these]].these. As it turns out they ''did'' find and contain a number of genuinely dangerous things]].



* DeusExitMachina: Fluttershy mentions she tried to ask for Discord's assistance with the situation, but she discovered he had just left on a fishing trip with the Smooze in another dimension.

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* DeusExitMachina: Fluttershy mentions she tried to ask for Discord's assistance with the situation, but she discovered he had just left on a fishing trip with the Smooze in another dimension. [[spoiler:He eventually shows up to help Starlight track down and deal with Mindwipe.]]



** [[spoiler:The Stallions got the identities of the Element Bearers other than Rainbow Dash, Twilight, and Fluttershy ''completely'' wrong, resulting in them running around like idiots trying to get the 'correct' Bearers all to fight Nightmare Moon (and even before that, had made assumptions like Gilda being Kindness). You think that would've clued them in on Gypsy telling the truth, but ''no''. Gypsy later reveals that this guess wasn't exactly ''wrong''.]]

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** [[spoiler:The Stallions got the identities of the Element Bearers other than Rainbow Dash, Twilight, and Fluttershy ''completely'' wrong, resulting in them running around like idiots trying to get the 'correct' Bearers all to fight Nightmare Moon (and even before that, had made assumptions like Gilda being Kindness). You think that would've clued them in on Gypsy telling the truth, but ''no''. Gypsy later reveals that this guess wasn't exactly ''wrong''.''wrong'', much to the Gifted Unicorns' (Moon Dancer, Lemon Hearts, Minuette, and Lyra, who could easily have been alternate Bearers had things been different) shock.]]



* FantasticRacism: [[spoiler:Some of the "monsters" the Stallions capture are genuinely dangerous and a threat to ponies (one even calmly saying that he'll kill them all when asked what he'll do if he lets them out), but plenty more are simply threats to the Stallions IgnoranceIsBliss attitude]].

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* FantasticRacism: [[spoiler:Some of the "monsters" the Stallions capture are genuinely dangerous and a threat to ponies (one even calmly saying that he'll kill them all when asked what he'll do if he lets them they let him out), but plenty more are simply threats to the Stallions IgnoranceIsBliss attitude]].



* IdiotBall: [[spoiler:Invoked: the Stallions in Black made Twilight stupidly stick to arbitrary rules that made no sense in context when dealing with Longhorn and his crew the first time to prevent her from CuttingTheKnot of their lesson.]]



* ItsPersonalWithTheDragon: Starlight develops a particular hatred for Mindwipe upon learning [[spoiler:he erased or altered the memories of Teddy and Ace's friends to make them forget about them, something she has a particular loathing for given her own past of having Sunburst ripped away from her. She even teams up with Discord after the Stallions are beaten to hunt down and ensure he won't be able to harm anyone else.]]



* NotSoStoic: Cover Story loses his shit when [[spoiler:he finds out he is a robot.]]

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Cover Story loses his shit when [[spoiler:he finds out he is a robot.]]
** [[spoiler:Subverted with Masquerade. Twilight ''expects'' she'll be this when Marshmallow dies, but Masquerade is ''actually'' that emotionless. Trixie feels pity for her upon realizing ''why'' that is the case.
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* PosthumousCharacter: Masquerade's mother and predecessor is long dead before the story starts [[spoiler:but [[GreaterScopeVillain is responsible for a great deal of what happens.]]]]



* ScrewDestiny: Starlight is not a fan of fate, as she links it to Cutie Marks and some people being more favored than others. It's a big reason she opposed the Stallions even before turning good. [[spoiler:She considers bringing this up to Gypsy (the Seer of the Tree of Harmony), but decides against it given everything Gypsy had been through.]]
* ScrewThisImOutOfHere:
** [[spoiler:Mindwipe decides to abandon the Stallions and run for it when he gets caught by Bon Bon, Lyra, and Starlight. Starlight, however, teams up with Discord to make sure he doesn't get away.]]
** [[spoiler:One of Chrysalis' spies in the Stallions decides to run for it when it becomes apparent the Stallions are going to fall.]]



* VillainousFriendship: Cover Story and Gear Shift are the villains, but seem to genuinely care about one another as friends. When the two get separated fighting the Mane Six, Gear Shift promises Cover Story he'll come back to pick him up and makes a number of attempts at it during his fight with Rainbow Dash, and Cover Story tries to escape to help Gear Shift when he finds out Lightning Dust has joined her [[spoiler:only being stopped upon realizing [[TomatoInTheMirror he's a Marionette as well.]]]]

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Cover Story and Gear Shift are the villains, but seem to genuinely care about one another as friends. When the two get separated fighting the Mane Six, Gear Shift promises Cover Story he'll come back to pick him up and makes a number of attempts at it during his fight with Rainbow Dash, and Cover Story tries to escape to help Gear Shift when he finds out Lightning Dust has joined her [[spoiler:only being stopped upon realizing [[TomatoInTheMirror he's a Marionette as well.]]]]]]]]
** [[spoiler:Masquerade and Marshmallow are this to a degree, as at least ''once'' they had a mutual friendship with one another. Marshmallow still ''decidedly'' is Masquerade's friend, but Masquerade's too mentally damaged to feel ''anything'' anymore.]]
* VillainousValor: [[spoiler:Even when it becomes apparent they're going to lose, the Stallions fight until they're completely defeated. Taken UpToEleven with Masquerade, who continues to fight until her body simply can't continue and she has more broken bones than intact ones, even after the Puppeteer has been destroyed.]]


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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Invoked InUniverse by [[spoiler:Gypsy, who points out that the Stallions' view of fate fails to account for this: the Gifted Unicorns, Gilda, Surprise, and others could ''truly'' have become the Bearers of Harmony, but choices by all involved resulted in the current line up.]]
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** [[spoiler:Marshmallow is a complicated case, as while she is the closest any of the Marionettes come to being a KillerRobot, she's only doing what Masquerade ordered her to do. Played straight with the other attempts to create a Marionette like her, as they all went insane due to tampering with their central programming and apparently as a result of having weaponry being built into them. To prevent that from happening to Marshmallow, she was built so she could only feel happiness]].

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** [[spoiler:Marshmallow is a complicated case, as while she is the closest any of the Marionettes come to being a KillerRobot, she's only doing what Masquerade ordered her to do. Played straight with the other attempts to create a Marionette like her, as they all went insane due to tampering with their central programming and apparently as a result of having weaponry being built into them. To prevent that from happening to Marshmallow, she was built so she could only feel happiness]].happiness, as well as having deliberately limited brainpower]].



** [[spoiler: Film/TheMask and [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaMajorasMask what appears to be Majora's Mask]] are some of the artifacts confiscated from the Stallions]].

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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/295408/marionettes Marionettes]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fic written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Godzillawolf Godzillawolf]]. It is set during Season 5, and starts between "The Mane Attraction" and "The Cutie Re-Mark", as Rainbow Dash briefly mentions the Cutie Map and that Starlight Glimmer is still at large, and the group later mentions meeting Countess Coloratura.

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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/295408/marionettes Marionettes]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fic written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Godzillawolf Godzillawolf]].Godzillawolf]] that is now complete. It is set during Season 5, and starts between "The Mane Attraction" and "The Cutie Re-Mark", as Rainbow Dash briefly mentions the Cutie Map and that Starlight Glimmer is still at large, and the group later mentions meeting Countess Coloratura.

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The story is over with a two-part update. Happy Halloween!


** [[spoiler:Marshmallow is a complicated case, as while she is the closest any of the Marionettes come to being a KillerRobot, she's only doing what Masquerade ordered her to do. Played straight with the other attempts to create a Marionette like her, as they all went insane due to tampering with their central programming and apparently as a result of having weaponry being built into them]].

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** [[spoiler:Marshmallow is a complicated case, as while she is the closest any of the Marionettes come to being a KillerRobot, she's only doing what Masquerade ordered her to do. Played straight with the other attempts to create a Marionette like her, as they all went insane due to tampering with their central programming and apparently as a result of having weaponry being built into them]].them. To prevent that from happening to Marshmallow, she was built so she could only feel happiness]].


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* AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler:Trixie looses her front right leg in her battle with Masquerade]].


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* ArtifactOfDoom: [[spoiler:After the battle, A.K. Yearling goes through the Stallion's artifacts to sort out any of these]].


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* ArtificialLimbs: [[spoiler:Trixe's front right leg was severed during her battle with Masquerade, and to make sure her siblings are repaired and upgraded first, is using a clockwork replacement in the meantime]].


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* BaitAndSwitch: [[spoiler:The emotionless Masquerade is hinted to be a Marionette and her StepfordSmiler maid is seemingly brainwashed. Turns out that it's the other way around]].


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* EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler:It takes a lot if effort and damage to Trixie, and a lot of effort from the others heroes, both Marionette and not, but the Stallions are defeated, the Marionettes freed, Gypsy returns to her family after ''years'' of captivity, and Trixie is getting the recognition she desires]].


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** [[spoiler:Despite the Marionettes being freed, the Siege arc still occurs, but with Wind Rider, Rough Diamond, and Dr. Collaberon instead of Flim and Flam, Iron Will, and Lightning Dust, the latter of which was still involved, but as a hero]].


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* NotSoOmniscientAfterAll: [[spoiler:Despite their dogma about being the chosen of fate and having access to Gypsy's visions, the Stallions are blindsided several times, in part because they interpret fate as less flexible than it really is]].


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* OpenSecret: [[spoiler:By the end, the Marionettes have not had their existence properly announced to Equestria at large, but it's not a classified secret anymore]].


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** [[spoiler: Marshmallow's activation borrows ''heavily'' from the creation of [[WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated Omega Supreme]].]]
** [[spoiler: Film/TheMask and [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaMajorasMask what appears to be Majora's Mask]] are some of the artifacts confiscated from the Stallions]].


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* SpontaneousGeneration: [[spoiler:Queen Majesty's mirror can create a child from a [[TrulySingleParent single pony regardless of gender]], and even creates a child from Jet Set and Upper Crust, two Marionettes]].


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* TrulySingleParent: [[spoiler:In addition to Dinky, Derpy gains a Pegasus colt son from the foal-making mirror she names Derby Hooves]].
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* ReallyWasBornYesterday: [[spoiler:The robotic Radiant Hope (referred to in text as Mecha Radiant) acts like a five year old filly. When questioned about it, Bright Future points out that due to not receiving her programming, she really ''is'' basically a five year old and she was literally just put in her body.]]

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* ReallyWasBornYesterday: [[spoiler:The robotic Radiant Hope (referred to in text as Mecha Radiant) acts like a five year old filly. When questioned about it, Bright Future points out that due to not receiving her programming, she really ''is'' basically a five year old and she was literally just put in her body. It's noted that they should probably get her a new body better befitting her physical age.]]
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* ReallyWasBornYesterday: [[spoiler:The robotic Radiant Hope (referred to in text as Mecha Radiant) acts like a five year old filly. When questioned about it, Bright Future points out that due to not receiving her programming, she really ''is'' basically a five year old and she was literally just put in her body.]]
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* BoxingLessonsForSuperman: [[spoiler:Trixie and Lightning Dust have natural power, and ''all'' the Marionettes Generation 3 and higher have SuperToughness and stamina. However, because they're robots, they can't physically get stronger (barring upgrades). Trixie's solution is to focus on the skill side for both of them, as there's no inbuilt limit on ''that''.]]


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* UnskilledButStrong: Starlight Glimmer comments on this, noting that due to having ''just'' become Twilight's student, she had no time to actually ''learn'' any new spells despite her sheer power.
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** [[spoiler:The Flim Flam Brothers, Iron Will, and Lightning Dust being so out of character in ''[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicIDWIssue34To37 Siege of the Crystal Empire]]'' is explained as the Stallions intentionally reprogramming them to be more villainous and commit high treason so they could all be done away with due to their repeated 'malfunctions' and Trixie was originally meant to suffer the same fate. Thankfully the heroes stop it before it can happen.]]
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* MoralSociopathy: Masquerade doesn't bat an eye when her choices and actions hurt or endanger others, and outright admits she ''can't'' form attachments or feel empathy. However, she still genuinely believes her actions are what's best for the world.

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