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4th Dec '12 3:29:47 PM mlsmithca

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It Got Worse is now From Bad To Worse; these don't read like examples.

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2nd Dec '12 11:19:55 AM ChaoticNovelist

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removing the praise. This is the main page, not the review page

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It's a story that, while having a few scattered humorous moments here and there, is primarily an action/adventure story with hidden plots in the style of season 3, but without all the filler training. Also includes a fair bit of romantic feelings. Somehow he manages to bring in each character, giving them all a chance to shine; and that's a rare accomplishment for a series that has so many. Can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5455943/1/Magical_Girl_Lyrical_Nanoha_Crisis here]].

There's a continuation in ''Red Jewel Diaries'' that works more like an OVA series, having a mix of different themes for each chapter, and focusing on a few different characters each chapter. Humor, detective drama, romance, action/adventure... all the good stuff from before, but more focused and improved. You can find it [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5575373/1/Red_Jewel_Diaries here]]. A seperate {{Lemon}} chapter where Nanoha, Fate, and Yunno consumate their relationship can be found [[http://mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_st.php/165149 here]].

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26th Nov '12 4:10:10 PM Stratadrake

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Excited Episode Title renamed by TRS.

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21st Aug '12 12:09:37 PM Valiona

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23rd Apr '12 10:39:22 AM moderator lu127

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I Got Better sinkhole removed.

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15th Jun '11 3:26:59 PM CorahsUncle

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15th Jun '11 3:17:28 PM Feinoha

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Moving to YMMV page.

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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Arisa and Suzuka in their [[spoiler: magical mecha]] helping to take down one of the above giants.
** Caro, confronts her tribe, then allows herself to be branded by a red-hot poker in order to strengthen her abilities.
** Nanoha, Fate, and Yuuno in their final fight, not mention their method of entry into the city before that!
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Arisa and Suzuka in their [[spoiler: magical mecha.]]
--> '''Suzuka''': We've, uh, kinda taken the golem for a test drive
--> '''Arisa''': (''gleefully'') And it's handling great!
** Not to mention Hayate's momentary reflection on fashion...
--> '''Hayate''': Plus, being from Earth, I can't help but share Arisa's enthusiasm for mecha. Maybe I should redesign your armor, Signum...
** Also, Momoko's reaction when Nanoha [[spoiler: announces that she has a boyfriend, a girlfriend, and a daughter!]]
* CrowningMomentofHeartwarming: Vivio's decision to [[spoiler: fuse herself with a relic]] in a bid to help her hurt mother.
** Fate giving herself up to Jail to save Erio and Caro.
** Fate to Yuuno, after he gives her his "birthday gift."
** The last part of "Heritage," where Lindy reassures Fate that she knows where she belongs now, prompting Fate to express her love and gratitude toward her adoptive family.

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18th May '11 5:12:19 PM Killomatic

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16th May '11 11:28:53 PM Micah

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