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Might HAVE, not might OF.
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* IWasBeatenByAGirl: In one chapter of ''Red Jewel Diaries'', Vivio and Corona rescue Rio from some mobsters. It's mentioned that their therapy sessions lasted far longer than their prison sentences. Although, given [[WorldOfActionGirls the world they live in]], it might of had more to do with the fact that they were nine years old.
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* IWasBeatenByAGirl: In one chapter of ''Red Jewel Diaries'', Vivio and Corona rescue Rio from some mobsters. It's mentioned that their therapy sessions lasted far longer than their prison sentences. Although, given [[WorldOfActionGirls the world they live in]], it might of have had more to do with the fact that they were nine years old.
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An Axe To Grind is no longer a trope
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* AnAxeToGrind: Jail, against all of magic and the society it powers.
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* {{Fangirl}}: Arisa and mecha. And how!
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* {{Fangirl}}: Arisa and mecha. And how!
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* FromBadToWorse: [[spoiler: In chapter 17, Relic Bombs go off on Mid-Childa, denying the entire planet of magic.]] The author mentions the trope by name (well, [[RenamedTropes the old name]]).
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* FromBadToWorse: [[spoiler: In chapter 17, Relic Bombs go off on Mid-Childa, denying the entire planet of magic.]] The author mentions the trope by name (well, [[RenamedTropes [[Administrivia/FormerTropeNamer the old name]]).
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* IWantGrandkids: Amy suspects that Lindy went a bit further than most aspiring grandmothers would by swapping her birth control with sugar pills.
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* IWantGrandkids: IWantGrandkids:
** Amy suspects that Lindy went a bit further than most aspiring grandmothers would by swapping her birth control with sugarpills.pills.
** Nanoha's parents indirectly implied this in a letter in ''Through a Mirror, Darkly''. Sure, they already had Vivio to dote on, but they wanted somebody to carry on the family bloodline. And if your wondering why they didn't pester her older brother and sister instead, Kyouya and Shinobu couldn't have kids ([[spoiler:since Shinobu is a vampire]]) and Miyuki didn't have anybody. Nanoha was married to Yuuno (and Fate) and shouldn't have any problems having a kid.
** Amy suspects that Lindy went a bit further than most aspiring grandmothers would by swapping her birth control with sugar
** Nanoha's parents indirectly implied this in a letter in ''Through a Mirror, Darkly''. Sure, they already had Vivio to dote on, but they wanted somebody to carry on the family bloodline. And if your wondering why they didn't pester her older brother and sister instead, Kyouya and Shinobu couldn't have kids ([[spoiler:since Shinobu is a vampire]]) and Miyuki didn't have anybody. Nanoha was married to Yuuno (and Fate) and shouldn't have any problems having a kid.
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* TheMagicGoesAway: Jail's ultimate plan.
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* TheMagicGoesAway: Jail's ultimate plan. [[spoiler: While he does succeed in his plan, the effects turn out to be temporary.]]
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* NoHuggingNoKissing: Averted. The one thing that keeps the story from being truly OriginalFlavor is the fact that this no longer applies.
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* NoHuggingNoKissing: Averted. The one thing One of the things that keeps the story from being truly OriginalFlavor is the fact that this no longer applies.applies.
* PalsWithJesus: Used as the punchline to a scene when an evangelical member of the Saint Church tries to get Lutecia to turn to religion.
-->'''Lutecia:''' ''(To her mother)'' I think someone was trying to set me up with [[CloneJesus Vivio]].
* PalsWithJesus: Used as the punchline to a scene when an evangelical member of the Saint Church tries to get Lutecia to turn to religion.
-->'''Lutecia:''' ''(To her mother)'' I think someone was trying to set me up with [[CloneJesus Vivio]].
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* MeetTheInLaws: The first story ends with Nanoha revealing the fact that she's in a polygamous relationship and that she has a daughter to her parents. Momoko faints from the shock.
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A ''MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha'' fanfic written by Kaijo, who set out to write an action/adventure {{Continuation}} off the end of ''Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha'' Season 3. The author wanted to see the lives of the cast continue into a whole new adventure that ties together past and present elements while keeping the OriginalFlavor.
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A ''MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha'' ''Franchise/MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha'' fanfic written by Kaijo, who set out to write an action/adventure {{Continuation}} off the end of ''Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha'' Season 3. The author wanted to see the lives of the cast continue into a whole new adventure that ties together past and present elements while keeping the OriginalFlavor.
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Absurdly Youthful Mother has been made into a supertrope. Wicks will be moved to subtropes where appropriate.
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* AbsurdlyYouthfulParent: [[spoiler: Alicia's father was an aged up clone of Clyde Haralown. At most he was three when she was born.]]
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* SupernaturallyYoungParent: [[spoiler: Alicia's father was an aged up clone of Clyde Haralown. At most he was three when she was born.]]
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Quattro stabs Jail and Uno in the back when she performs her HeelFaceTurn. Precia and the Kyouya and Miyuki clones die when Al-Hazard is destroyed.]]
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Quattro stabs Jail and Uno in the back when she performs her HeelFaceTurn. Precia and the Kyouya and Miyuki clones die when Al-Hazard is destroyed.]] Two of the Admirals sacrifice their lives during the Al-Hazard invasion]]
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* UndyingLoyalty: Over the course of the story, Auris develops this for Hayate (even though she outranks her by the end). In that respect she's kind of a hybrid of her father and the Wolkenritter, someone who's willing to do [[WellIntentionedExtremist morally questionable acts]] to see Hayate's idealistic dream come to fruition.
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* AbsurdlyYouthfulParent: [[spoiler: Alicia's father was an aged up clone of Clyde Haralown. At most he was three when she was born.]]
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* IWantGrandkids: Lindy went a bit further than most aspiring grandmothers would by swapping Amy's birth control with sugar pills.
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* IWantGrandkids: Amy suspects that Lindy went a bit further than most aspiring grandmothers would by swapping Amy's her birth control with sugar pills.
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* NoHuggingNoKissing: Averted. The one thing that keeps the story from being truly OriginalFlavor is the fact that this no longer applies.
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* IWantGrandkids: Lindy went a bit further than most aspiring grandmothers would by swapping Amy's birth control with sugar pills.
* IWasBeatenByAGirl: In one chapter of ''Red Jewel Diaries'', Vivio and Corona rescue Rio from some mobsters. It's mentioned that their therapy sessions lasted far longer than their prison sentences. Although, given [[WorldOfActionGirls the world they live in]], it might of had more to do with the fact that they were nine years old.
* IWasBeatenByAGirl: In one chapter of ''Red Jewel Diaries'', Vivio and Corona rescue Rio from some mobsters. It's mentioned that their therapy sessions lasted far longer than their prison sentences. Although, given [[WorldOfActionGirls the world they live in]], it might of had more to do with the fact that they were nine years old.
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* IWasBeatenByAGirl: In one chapter of ''Red Jewel Diaries'', Vivio and Corona rescue Rio from some mobsters. It's mentioned that their therapy sessions lasted far longer than their prison sentences. Although, given [[WorldOfActionGirls the world they live in]], it might of had more to do with the fact that they were nine years old.
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* IWasBeatenByAGirl: In one chapter of ''Red Jewel Diaries'', Vivio and Corona rescue Rio from some mobsters. It's mentioned that their therapy sessions lasted far longer than their prison sentences.
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* IWasBeatenByAGirl: In one chapter of ''Red Jewel Diaries'', Vivio and Corona rescue Rio from some mobsters. It's mentioned that their therapy sessions lasted far longer than their prison sentences. Although, given [[WorldOfActionGirls the world they live in]], it might of had more to do with the fact that they were nine years old.
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* IWasBeatenByAGirl: In one chapter of ''Red Jewel Diaries'', Vivio and Corona rescue Rio from some mobsters. It's mentioned that their therapy sessions lasted far longer than their prison sentences.
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* AbsurdlyYouthfulParent: [[spoiler:
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* BetterToDieThanBeKilled [[spoiler:Racquel poisons herself after meeting with Fate, before she can arrest her]]
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* BetterToDieThanBeKilled [[spoiler:Racquel poisons herself after meeting with Fate, before she can arrest her]]her.]]
* IGaveMyWord: Precia takes the identity of Alicia's father to her grave. [[spoiler: He was an aged up clone of Clyde Harlaown who made her promise that the real one would never find out.]]
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** [[spoiler: Although a [=DNA=] test at the end reveals that he's lying and her father is most likely Clyde Harlaown.]]
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** [[spoiler: Although a [=DNA=] test at the end reveals that he's lying and her father is most likely Clyde Harlaown.Harlaown. More specifically, an aged up clone of him.]]
