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* IKnowMaddenKombat: Dyllan states that he learned to dodge, weave, and get back up after a fall due to being on the school lacrosse team.
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* AffectionateNickname: Dyllan calls Sasha "Sashie" as a pet name.



* SilverSpoonTroublemaker: Flaps, the son of the salamanders' Chief Nightoum, is introduced taking all the fish Dyllan and Tint caught, pompously saying that Dyllan should know who he is because everyone does, and threatening him with stronger magic than Dyllan does. Dyllan is disheartened that Amphibia ''also'' has bullies just like on Earth.

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* SilverSpoonTroublemaker: Flaps, the son of the salamanders' Chief Nightoum, is introduced taking all the fish Dyllan and Tint caught, pompously saying that Dyllan should know who he is because everyone does, and threatening him with stronger magic than Dyllan does.currently has. Dyllan is disheartened that Amphibia ''also'' has bullies just like on Earth.
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* IceCreamKoan: Cronaxx has a habit of dropping these when he wants to impart a lesson into the protagonists.
--> Those who remain in the dark, fail to see the light.

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The fanfic is a retelling of ''Amphibia'' starring Darrel Loyalität, a thirteen-year-old boy who gets transported to Amphibia alongside the main trio via the Calamity Box. Dyllan ends up with a group of Salamander wizards who teach him magic via the Eternal Staff.

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The fanfic is a retelling of ''Amphibia'' starring Darrel Loyalität, a thirteen-year-old boy who gets transported to Amphibia alongside the main trio via the Calamity Box. Dyllan He ends up with a group of Salamander wizards who teach him magic via the Eternal Staff.



* DelicateAndSickly: Darrel's mother is this, due to her stage 3 pancreatic cancer. She's the main reason Darrel wants to return home so badly.

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* DelicateAndSickly: Darrel's mother is this, due to her stage 3 pancreatic cancer. She's the main reason Darrel wants to return home so badly. It’s even more apparent in the rewrite, with her having difficulty walking, being pale, and coughing frequently.



* EasilyForgiven: Despite knowing that Darrel lied about Hop Pop burying the music box, and later hiding his suspension that Sasha had some big plans for the group. Anne is usually quick to forgive Darrel for his dishonesty despite chewing Hop Pop and Sasha out for their betrayals just mere moments prior.

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* EasilyForgiven: Despite knowing that Darrel lied about Hop Pop burying the music box, and later hiding his suspension that Sasha had some big plans for the group. group, Anne is usually quick to forgive Darrel for his dishonesty despite chewing Hop Pop and Sasha out for their own betrayals just mere moments prior.


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* KidsHateVegetables: Darrel is thirteen and loathes vegetables; he apparently needs to tell himself "Hakuna Matata" before he can bring himself to eat any.


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* ShoutOut:
** To WesternAnimation/TheLionKing1994; Darrel declares "Hakuna Matata" before taking a bite of a springtail omelette, then declares it "Crunchy yet satisfying."
** [[spoiler: Cronaxx’s]] last words are the same as [[spoiler: Nuka’s]] in WesternAnimation/TheLionKingIISimbasPride.

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* InformedAttribute: In the first chapter, Darrel is said to be kind, caring, but also shy and nervous around others. However, he is shown to have no problem in socializing. He is also prone to anger many times when someone wrongs him, such as yelling at the Calamity Trio for their wrongdoings many times.

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In the first chapter, Darrel is said to be kind, caring, but also shy and nervous around others. However, he is shown to have no problem in socializing. He is also prone to anger many times when someone wrongs him, such as yelling at the Calamity Trio for their wrongdoings many times.times.
** Also in the first chapter, Darrel is said to be a popular video-editor on par with professionals with many subscribers, to the point where when he uploads a new video the other kids at school immediately stop to watch. We never get to see said videos so it's anyone's guess what the quality actually is.



* PlayingWithFire: Tint is specifically a Fire Salamander, which translates to having fire powers in Amphibia. However, Tint shows this power more readily than other salamanders due to being trained as a mage.



* RougeAnglesOfSatin: A recurring error is "heron" being "herring," particularly when several newts describe seeing a strange creature in the woods (Darrel) that has "the strength of a herring!" A common belief among readers is that the author must have misheard "heron" in the show and thought they were saying the latter instead.

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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: A recurring error is "heron" being "herring," particularly when several newts salamanders describe seeing a strange creature in the woods (Darrel) that has "the strength of a herring!" A common belief among readers is that the author must have misheard "heron" in the show and thought they were saying the latter instead.
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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: A recurring error is "heron" being "herring," particularly when several newts describe seeing a strange creature in the woods (Darrel) that has "the strength of a herring!" A common belief among readers is that the author must have misheard "heron" in the show and thought they were saying the latter instead.
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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: In the original, Darrel was well-liked at school, a popular video editor, and had a wonderful relationship with his family. Here, there’s friction between himself and his stepfather, and Dyllan is frequently bullied at school, the Calamity Trio being his only friends.
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* SatelliteCharacter: Pretty much all of Admiral's OCs fall into this trope. In both his art and his fiction, Darrel and his Salamanders are almost always seen with Anne and the Plantars and Darrel Loyalität is almost always with Anne in every crucial moment (Sprig even lampshades this in Chapter 63). They're often just doing whatever they are doing, while also forcing his OCs in every scene, even when it isn't necessary for them to be there, such as Darrel using Calamity Powers whenever Anne does (even though he's already a powerful wizard), and he and occasionally Tint are often edited into scenes just meant for Anne and Sprig. Tint; when not with Darrel, is often with Sprig, and often gets into the same hijinks and situations with him. Such as both being held hostage by Andrias and nearly gets dropped to their deaths, and later the two become superheroes together. Plus, Cronaxx during Season 1 and 2 is sometimes seen with Hop Pop, and gets stabbed along with Marcy. Subverted though, cause unlike Marcy, who survives her injuries, Cronnax [[KilledOffForReal really does die]].
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* DramaticIront: Sarah and Matthew agree they need to tell Dyllan something important about her illness, implied to be that her time is shorter than they anticipated, and Matthew leaves a voice message for Dyllan to come straight home instead of attending Anne’s party. Dyllan, however, cuts off the message before he hears the whole thing, leaving him completely unaware of the intended conversation.

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* DramaticIront: DramaticIrony: Sarah and Matthew agree they need to tell Dyllan something important about her illness, implied to be that her time is shorter than they anticipated, and Matthew leaves a voice message for Dyllan to come straight home instead of attending Anne’s party. Dyllan, however, cuts off the message before he hears the whole thing, leaving him completely unaware of the intended conversation.

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* PaperDestructionOfAnger: Upon receiving the voicemail from his father, Dyllan walked off into an alley and began destroying trash in a teary rage.

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* DramaticIront: Sarah and Matthew agree they need to tell Dyllan something important about her illness, implied to be that her time is shorter than they anticipated, and Matthew leaves a voice message for Dyllan to come straight home instead of attending Anne’s party. Dyllan, however, cuts off the message before he hears the whole thing, leaving him completely unaware of the intended conversation.
* IncurableCoughOfDeath: Dyllan’s mother suffers from this, as an indication of her worsening illness.
* MaliciousMisnaming: Maggie calls Anne "Boobchuy" and Dyllan "Loselität."
* NewParentNomenclatureProblem: Dyllan calls Matthew by his name, refusing to view him as his dad.
* PaperDestructionOfAnger: Upon receiving the voicemail from his father, stepfather, Dyllan walked off into an alley and began destroying trash in a teary rage.
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* MentorArchetype: Cronaxx serves as this to Darrel and Tint, teaching them about magic and frequently dropping phrases of wisdom that pertain.

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* MentorArchetype: Cronaxx serves as this to Darrel and Tint, teaching them about magic and frequently dropping phrases of wisdom that pertain.pertain to the theme of the chapter.

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* AdaptationalNameChange: Darrel was renamed to Darrell, then Dyllan. This was done to avoid self-insert allegations.

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Darrel was renamed to Darrell, then Dyllan. This was done to avoid self-insert allegations.allegations.
** Matthew, Amelia, and Jane change surnames from Loyalität to Sampson to justify them being Dyllan's stepfamily.
** [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed]] for Sarah as she combines her surname with Matthew's.

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* AdaptationalKarma: In the show, Mayor Toadstool gets away relatively scot-free for hiding the town's tax. In the fanfic, however, [[spoiler:Darrel starts a small fire on his head]]. Also Hop Pop gets off scot-free for turning his grandchildren into mushroom zombies in the show. But in the fanfic, [[spoiler: Cronaxx punishes him to do all of Tint's chores and Tint casts a smoke spell on his clothes as a prank]].

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In the show, Mayor Toadstool gets away relatively scot-free for hiding the town's tax. In the fanfic, however, [[spoiler:Darrel starts a small fire on his head]]. Also
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Hop Pop gets off scot-free for turning his grandchildren into mushroom zombies in the show. But in the fanfic, [[spoiler: Cronaxx punishes him to do all of Tint's chores and Tint casts a smoke spell on his clothes as a prank]].



--> '''Darrel ''': If something happens to her and I'm not there, I could never forgive myself!

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--> '''Darrel ''': '''Darrel''': If something happens to her and I'm not there, I could never forgive myself!


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* MentorArchetype: Cronaxx serves as this to Darrel and Tint, teaching them about magic and frequently dropping phrases of wisdom that pertain.
* MentorOccupationalHazard: [[spoiler: Cronaxx is impaled alongside Marcy in the fic’s version of True Colors. Unlike Marcy, his wound is ultimately fatal.]]


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* SpiritAdvisor: [[spoiler: After he is killed by Andrias, Cronaxx appears as a ghost to continue guiding Darrel and Tint to the very end.]]

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* PaperDestructionOfAnger: Upon recieving the voicemail from his father, Dyllan walked off into an alley and began destroying trash in a teary rage.

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* PaperDestructionOfAnger: Upon recieving receiving the voicemail from his father, Dyllan walked off into an alley and began destroying trash in a teary rage.rage.
* RageBreakingPoint: Dyllan crosses this when Flaps bullies him a second time and eventually calls him a freak and that he's "nothing." Dyllan flies into a rage at this, pinning Flaps down and punching him in the face. It takes Tint throwing a bucket of water over the both of them to make the fight stop.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Chief Nightoum; despite his son using his relationship to bully others, the chief himself has no such interest in doing so, and when he sees that Dyllan and Flaps got into a physical fight, he's angry that Flaps bullied Dyllan and Tint ''first.'' He takes Flaps home after a scolding, and has no interest in punishing Dyllan and Tint for simply defending themselves.
*SdrawkcabName: The magical staff Dyllan uses in the rewrite is called The Staff of Lerrad. Or, "Darrel" backwards.
* SilverSpoonTroublemaker: Flaps, the son of the salamanders' Chief Nightoum, is introduced taking all the fish Dyllan and Tint caught, pompously saying that Dyllan should know who he is because everyone does, and threatening him with stronger magic than Dyllan does. Dyllan is disheartened that Amphibia ''also'' has bullies just like on Earth.


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* WishUponAShootingStar: Dyllan wishes on a shooting star to go back home, remembering his mother told him stars could grant wishes. Needless to say, it doesn't work - this is only in chapter three, after all.
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* AmicableExes: In the past, Cronaxx and Leif used to be a couple before they decided they were BetterAsFriends. It’s casually stated that she learned to use invisible ink during said courtship, and only started using it yo communicate with Andrias after she and Cronaxx broke up.

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* AmicableExes: In the past, Cronaxx and Leif used to be a couple before they decided they were BetterAsFriends. It’s casually stated that she learned to use invisible ink during said courtship, and only started using it yo to communicate with Andrias after she and Cronaxx broke up.
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* AmicableExes: In the past, Cronaxx and Leif used to be a couple before they decided they were BetterAsFriends. It’s casually stated that she learned to use invisible ink during said courtship, and only started using it yo communicate with Andrias after she and Cronaxx broke up.

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The fanfic is a retelling of ''Amphibia'' starring Dyllan (formerly known as Darrel) Loyalität, a thirteen-year-old boy who gets transported to Amphibia alongside the main trio via the Calamity Box. Dyllan ends up with a group of Salamander wizards who teach him magic via the Eternal Staff.

It was completed in May 2022 after seventy-one chapters and could've been read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13779444/1/Loyalty-Among-Worlds here]]. A sequel has since been written called ''Fanfic/SorcerersOfSignalHill'', which can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14245382/1/Sorcerers-of-Signal-Hill here]]. On January 17, 2024, the story was deleted off FFN. It has been [[KeepCirculatingTheTapes archived however]] and can be found (+))[[https://loyaltyamongworlds.tiiny.site here]].
On Jaunuary 28, 2024, the rewritten version of the story was published [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14321819/1/Loyalty-Among-Worlds here]]

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The fanfic is a retelling of ''Amphibia'' starring Dyllan (formerly known as Darrel) Darrel Loyalität, a thirteen-year-old boy who gets transported to Amphibia alongside the main trio via the Calamity Box. Dyllan ends up with a group of Salamander wizards who teach him magic via the Eternal Staff.

It was completed in May 2022 after seventy-one chapters chapters, and could've can be read [[https://loyaltyamongworlds.tiiny.site here]] (the original has since been read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13779444/1/Loyalty-Among-Worlds here]].deleted from FFN). A sequel has since been written called ''Fanfic/SorcerersOfSignalHill'', which can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14245382/1/Sorcerers-of-Signal-Hill here]]. here]].

On January 17, 2024, the story was deleted off FFN. It has been [[KeepCirculatingTheTapes archived however]] and can be found (+))[[https://loyaltyamongworlds.tiiny.site here]].
On Jaunuary
28, 2024, the a rewritten version of the story was published posted, which among other things changed Darrel's name to Dyllan; it can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14321819/1/Loyalty-Among-Worlds here]]here]].
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* RobeAndWizardHat: Darrel obtains such attire as of Chapter 43, when he and the girls get their EleventhHourSuperpower. The hat bears a strong resemblance to the sorcerer's hat in WesternAnimation/{{Fantasia}}.

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* RobeAndWizardHat: Darrel obtains such attire as of Chapter 43, and again when he and the girls get their EleventhHourSuperpower.EleventhHourSuperpower in the finale. The hat bears a strong resemblance to the sorcerer's hat in WesternAnimation/{{Fantasia}}.

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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: One of Darrel's prophetic dreams is of his and Anne's own future wedding.



* RobeAndWizardHat: Darrel obtains such attire as of Chapter 43.
* OutOfCharacterMoment: There are several moments in the fanfic where the characters (namely Anne) don't act as usually do in the same situations from the canon series. In Chapter 38, Anne has just discovered that Hop Pop buried the Music Box and lied about it with Darrel knowing about it. Anne logically chews Hop-Pop out for dooming her to remain trapped in Amphibia forever, but quickly forgives Darrel not even a minute later despite that his dishonesty making him just as to blame as Hop Pop for her current situation. This happens again in Chapter 46 after Anne completely snaps and chews out Sasha for tricking everyone into helping them stage a rebellion on Newtopia, and learning that Darrel and the Salamanders knew it would happen but didn't tell anyone. While Anne was still ready to give Sasha hell for her betrayal, Darrel is still easily forgiven and she even gives him a kiss before foiling the Toad Rebellion.

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* RobeAndWizardHat: PsychicDreamsForEveryone: Darrel obtains dreams about certain canon plot points that he isn't physically around to witness, such attire as of Chapter 43.
seeing Marcy assimilated into The Core.
* OutOfCharacterMoment: There are several moments in the fanfic where the characters (namely Anne) don't act as usually do in the same situations from the canon series.
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In Chapter 38, Anne has just discovered that Hop Pop buried the Music Box and lied about it with Darrel knowing about it. Anne logically chews Hop-Pop out for dooming her to remain trapped in Amphibia forever, but quickly forgives Darrel not even a minute later despite that his dishonesty making him just as to blame as Hop Pop for her current situation. This happens again in
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Chapter 46 after Anne completely snaps and chews out Sasha for tricking everyone into helping them stage a rebellion on Newtopia, and learning that Darrel and the Salamanders knew it would happen but didn't tell anyone. While Anne was still ready to give Sasha hell for her betrayal, Darrel is still easily forgiven and she even gives him a kiss before foiling the Toad Rebellion.
* RobeAndWizardHat: Darrel obtains such attire as of Chapter 43, when he and the girls get their EleventhHourSuperpower. The hat bears a strong resemblance to the sorcerer's hat in WesternAnimation/{{Fantasia}}.



* SoapboxSadie: Darrel often lectures Anne whenever he's seen her doing something wrong or uncomfortable.

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* SoapboxSadie: Darrel often lectures Anne whenever he's seen her doing something wrong or uncomfortable. Many of these instances lead to her apologizing to him.
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* CosmicEntity: [[spoiler: As in canon, Anne is offered the opportunity to become one, which she turns down in favor of living her normal life first. But this time, The Guardian agrees to wait til the end of her natural life ''and'' save a place for Darrel beside her, simply by virtue of being her future spouse.]]
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* SatelliteCharacter: Pretty much all of Admiral's OCs fall into this trope. In both his art and his fiction, Darrel and his Salamanders are almost always seen with Anne and the Plantars and Darrel Loyalität is almost always with Anne in every crucial moment (Sprig even lampshades this in Chapter 63). They're often just doing whatever they are doing, while also forcing his OCs in every scene, even when it isn't necessary for them to be there, such as Darrel using Calamity Powers whenever Anne does (even though he's already a powerful wizard), and he and occasionally Tint are often edited into scenes just meant for Anne and Sprig. Tint; when not with Darrel, is often with Sprig, and often gets into the same hijinks and situations with him. Such as both being held hostage by Andrias and nearly gets dropped to their deaths, and later the two become superheroes together. Plus, Cronaxx during Season 1 and 2 is sometimes seen with Hop Pop, and gets stabbed along with Marcy. Subverted though, cause unlike Marcy, who survives her injuries, Cronnax [[KilledOffForReal really does die]].
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* LastWords: [[spoiler: Cronaxx’s]] are a quiet "I’m sorry, everyone… I tried… "

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* BrokenAesop: Part of Darrel's character arc in Season 1 of the fanfiction is about him learning to be loyal to himself as well as others by having him wonder if he should pursuit a relationship with Anne and break up with Sasha or not. While it's an interesting concept, it is executed horrendously, as Darrel ultimately confesses his feelings for Anne and kisses her on lips while still being in a relationship with Sasha. Even though Sasha was a bad girlfriend for Darrel, this still goes against his namesake and makes him a cheater.

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* BrokenAesop: Part of DelicateAndSickly: Darrel's character arc in Season 1 of mother is this, due to her stage 3 pancreatic cancer. She's the fanfiction is about him learning to be loyal to himself as well as others by having him wonder if he should pursuit a relationship with Anne and break up with Sasha or not. While it's an interesting concept, it is executed horrendously, as main reason Darrel ultimately confesses his feelings for Anne wants to return home so badly.
--> '''Darrel ''': If something happens to her
and kisses her on lips while still being in a relationship with Sasha. Even though Sasha was a bad girlfriend for Darrel, this still goes against his namesake and makes him a cheater.I'm not there, I could never forgive myself!
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The fanfic is a retelling of ''Amphibia'' starring Dyllan Loyalität, a thirteen-year-old boy who gets transported to Amphibia alongside the main trio via the Calamity Box. Darrell ends up with a group of Salamander wizards who teach him magic via the Eternal Staff.

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The fanfic is a retelling of ''Amphibia'' starring Dyllan (formerly known as Darrel) Loyalität, a thirteen-year-old boy who gets transported to Amphibia alongside the main trio via the Calamity Box. Darrell Dyllan ends up with a group of Salamander wizards who teach him magic via the Eternal Staff.
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* AdaptationalNameChange: Darrel was renamed to Darrell, then Dyllan This was done to avoid self-insert allegations.

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* AdaptationalNameChange: Darrel was renamed to Darrell, then Dyllan Dyllan. This was done to avoid self-insert allegations.
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* UnrelatedInTheAdaptation: In the original story, Matthew is Darrell's biological father while Amelia and Jane are his biological sisters. Here, he is Dyllan stepfather and they are his stepsisters.

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* UnrelatedInTheAdaptation: In the original story, Matthew is Darrell's Dyllan's biological father while Amelia and Jane are his biological sisters. Here, he is Dyllan Dyllan's stepfather and they are his stepsisters.
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The fanfic is a retelling of ''Amphibia'' starring Darrell Loyalität, a thirteen-year-old boy who gets transported to Amphibia alongside the main trio via the Calamity Box. Darrell ends up with a group of Salamander wizards who teach him magic via the Eternal Staff.

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The fanfic is a retelling of ''Amphibia'' starring Darrell Dyllan Loyalität, a thirteen-year-old boy who gets transported to Amphibia alongside the main trio via the Calamity Box. Darrell ends up with a group of Salamander wizards who teach him magic via the Eternal Staff.



* AdaptationalNameChange: Downplayed as Darrell's name is spelled with an extra 'l' in the rewrite while still pronounced exactly the same as the original. This was done to avoid self-insert allegations.
* PaperDestructionOfAnger: Upon recieving the voicemail from his father, Darrell walked off into an alley and began destroying trash in a teary rage.
* UnrelatedInTheAdaptation: In the original story, Matthew is Darrell's biological father while Amelia and Jane are his biological sisters. Here, he is Darrell's stepfather and they are his stepsisters.

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* AdaptationalNameChange: Downplayed as Darrell's name is spelled with an extra 'l' in the rewrite while still pronounced exactly the same as the original. Darrel was renamed to Darrell, then Dyllan This was done to avoid self-insert allegations.
* PaperDestructionOfAnger: Upon recieving the voicemail from his father, Darrell Dyllan walked off into an alley and began destroying trash in a teary rage.
* UnrelatedInTheAdaptation: In the original story, Matthew is Darrell's biological father while Amelia and Jane are his biological sisters. Here, he is Darrell's Dyllan stepfather and they are his stepsisters.

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