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* AwfulTruth: In Chapter [[spoiler:51]], [[spoiler:One Eye tells everyone the truth behind the Dark Forest: One Eye's curse is sustained by any cat that gets sent there. Sparrowfeather may very well have been condemned to cat Hell solely because if One Eye runs out of cats to feed off of, the curse vanishes and One Eye would kill a lot of innocent Starclan cats.]]
* BackInMyDay: Oakstar expresses this opinion word for word.
* BoltOfDivineRetribution: How Maggottail/[[spoiler:Ripplestar]] died.
* BackInMyDay: Oakstar expresses this opinion word for word.
* BoltOfDivineRetribution: How Maggottail/[[spoiler:Ripplestar]] died.
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* AwfulTruth: In Chapter [[spoiler:51]], 51, [[spoiler:One Eye tells everyone the truth behind the Dark Forest: One Eye's curse is sustained by any cat that gets sent there. Sparrowfeather may very well have been condemned to cat Hell solely because if One Eye runs out of cats to feed off of, the curse vanishes and One Eye would kill a lot of innocent Starclan cats.]]
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The story is almost complete, with one chapter left, and it can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3101516/chapters/6719675 here]].
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The story is almost complete, with one chapter left, completed, and it can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3101516/chapters/6719675 here]].
* AwfulTruth: In Chapter [[spoiler:51]], [[spoiler:One Eye tells everyone the truth behind the Dark Forest: One Eye's curse is sustained by any cat that gets sent there. Sparrowfeather may very well have been condemned to cat Hell solely because if One Eye runs out of cats to feed off of, the curse vanishes and One Eye would kill a lot of innocent Starclan cats.]]
** [[spoiler:Snowfur, Mapleshade and Spottedleaf are all killed by One Eye, Thistleclaw is killed by Sparrowfeather, and One Eye is killed by Hollyleaf in Chapter 51.]]
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* EldritchAbomination: The creature in the cave in the Dark Forest is a vaguely cat-shaped apparation with a single glowing eye. [[spoiler:This is implied to be what is left of One Eye from ''Dawn of The Clans''.]]
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* EldritchAbomination: The creature in the cave (AKA [[spoiler:One Eye]]) in the Dark Forest is a vaguely cat-shaped apparation apparition with a single glowing eye. [[spoiler:This is implied eye that [[spoiler:is cursed and slowly feeds off of any cat that goes to be what is left the Dark Forest, and can rapidly absorb the lifeforce of One Eye from ''Dawn of The Clans''.other cats just by touching them.]]
** [[spoiler:As it turns out, the Dark Forest is tied to One Eye. If One Eye were to stop existing, so would the Dark Forest.]]
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* FisherKingdom: Cats who stay for too long in the Dark Forest will turn shadowy and ghoulish, with yellow fangs, a foul smelling breath and corpse-like eyes. Interestingly, it seems that how monstrous a Dark Forest cat looks depends on how evil they are, as cats like Sparrowfeather and Snowtuft still look normal while sexual predator Thistleclaw and serial killer Mapleshade are described as rotting corpses. It's mentioned late-story that Hollyleaf's stars are fading.
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* FisherKingdom: Cats who stay for too long in the Dark Forest will turn shadowy and ghoulish, with yellow fangs, a foul smelling breath and corpse-like eyes. Interestingly, it seems [[spoiler:This is because One Eye is feeding off anything that how monstrous a comes to the Dark Forest cat looks depends on how evil they are, as cats like Sparrowfeather and Snowtuft still look normal while sexual predator Thistleclaw and serial killer Mapleshade are described as rotting corpses. It's mentioned late-story that Hollyleaf's stars are fading.to sustain his curse.]]
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Mapleshade]] seems to be heading down this path, learning kindness by helping Hollyleaf evade Thistleclaw, sabotaging Thistleclaw's evil plans, [[spoiler:remembering her original motives by reuniting with one of her dead kits,]] and in Chapter 50 [[spoiler:stopping Sorreltail from killing Snowfur to save her from condemnation]].
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** At the ending, [[spoiler:Snowfur and Mapleshade are both killed off before they can begin thinking about redemption.]]
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Mapleshade]]seems to be heading slowly heads down this path, learning kindness by helping Hollyleaf evade Thistleclaw, sabotaging Thistleclaw's evil plans, [[spoiler:remembering her original motives by reuniting with one of her dead kits,]] and in Chapter 50 [[spoiler:stopping Sorreltail from killing Snowfur to save her from condemnation]].
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Mapleshade]]
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* NothingIsTheSameAnymore: [[spoiler:In chapter 51, Mapleshade, Snowfur and what's left of Spottedleaf are killed by One Eye, One Eye unleashes an awful truth about how the Dark Forest works, and Hollyleaf decides to destroy the Dark Forest for good.]]
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* TheDarkSideWillMakeYouForget: A recurring element for those who stay for too long in the Dark Forest. Mapleshade makes no effort to deny the untrue rumors that she drowned her own kits, embracing her homicidal tendencies instead. It takes Mapleshade [[spoiler:accidentally reuniting with Petalkit, one of her dead kits,]] to force her to drop her cynical mask and admit her real original motive for her actions.
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* TheDarkSideWillMakeYouForget: A recurring element for those who stay for too long in the Dark Forest. Mapleshade makes no effort to deny the untrue rumors that she drowned her own kits, kits on purpose, embracing her homicidal tendencies instead. It takes Mapleshade [[spoiler:accidentally reuniting with Petalkit, one of her dead kits,]] to force her to drop her cynical mask and admit her real original motive for her actions.murder spree.
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* FisherKing: The Dark Forest exists because [[spoiler:One Eye ended up in Starclan, but was cursed to become some dark shadow thing stuck in a cave as a punishment -and everything around him is cursed to rot.]]
* FisherKingdom: Cats who stay for too long in the Dark Forest will turn shadowy and ghoulish, with yellow fangs, a foul smelling breath and corpse-like eyes. Interestingly, it seems that how monstrous a Dark Forest cat looks depends on how evil they are, as cats like Sparrowfeather and Snowtuft still look normal while sexual predator Thistleclaw and serial killer Mapleshade are described as rotting corpses. It's mentioned late-story that Hollyleaf's stars are fading.
* FisherKingdom: Cats who stay for too long in the Dark Forest will turn shadowy and ghoulish, with yellow fangs, a foul smelling breath and corpse-like eyes. Interestingly, it seems that how monstrous a Dark Forest cat looks depends on how evil they are, as cats like Sparrowfeather and Snowtuft still look normal while sexual predator Thistleclaw and serial killer Mapleshade are described as rotting corpses. It's mentioned late-story that Hollyleaf's stars are fading.
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* TheDarkSideWillMakeYouForget: A recurring element for those who stay for too long in the Dark Forest. Mapleshade makes no effort to deny the untrue rumors that she drowned her own kits, embracing her homicidal tendencies instead. It takes Mapleshade [[spoiler:accidentally reuniting with Petalkit, one of her dead kits,]] to force her to drop her cynical mask and admit her real original motive for her actions.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes:
** Mapleshade and her three deceased kits Patchkit, Petalkit and Larchkit. [[spoiler:Reuniting with Petalkit late in the story makes her remember the original motive for her murder spree.]]
** [[spoiler:Snowfur and Thistleclaw]] are mates, and [[spoiler:their evil plan is to leave Starclan to be happy with each other, no matter what collateral damage they have to inflict to get it]].
** Mapleshade and her three deceased kits Patchkit, Petalkit and Larchkit. [[spoiler:Reuniting with Petalkit late in the story makes her remember the original motive for her murder spree.]]
** [[spoiler:Snowfur and Thistleclaw]] are mates, and [[spoiler:their evil plan is to leave Starclan to be happy with each other, no matter what collateral damage they have to inflict to get it]].
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* EvilVersusEvil: Mapleshade and Thistleclaw hate each other, and are constantly trying to sabotage each other. Ever since Thistleclaw started his evil plot, Mapleshade has been trying to undermine his plans.
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* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler:Snowfur]] underwent this when [[spoiler:Thistleclaw was banished to the Dark Forest]].
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* HeelFaceDoorSlam: A lot of the remaining cats in the Dark Forest, such as Sparrowfeather, were condemned to the Dark Forest after their deaths even though they died trying to cut ties with the Dark Forest.
** Played straighter is [[spoiler:Redwillow, who is killed again by Thistleclaw and Darkstripe before he can be judged and potentially sent back to Starclan in the future.]]
** Played straighter is [[spoiler:Redwillow, who is killed again by Thistleclaw and Darkstripe before he can be judged and potentially sent back to Starclan in the future.]]
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Mapleshade]] seems to be heading down this path, learning kindness by helping Hollyleaf evade Thistleclaw, sabotaging Thistleclaw's evil plans, [[spoiler:remembering her original motives by reuniting with one of her dead kits,]] and in Chapter 50 [[spoiler:stopping Sorreltail from killing Snowfur to save her from condemnation]].
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* IllKillYou: When Thistleclaw manages to [[spoiler:kidnap Hollyleaf and Maggottail]] and leaves them with [[spoiler:Tallstar]] under Darkstripe's watch, Mapleshade threatens to kill off Thistleclaw's goons one by one.
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** [[spoiler:Snowfur]]'s involvement as [[spoiler:the accomplice]] may come off as quite a surprise, but observant readers can predict that she's suspicious long before her involvement is revealed. During [[spoiler:Thistleclaw's trial]], [[spoiler:Snowfur]] is said to have protested [[spoiler:Thistleclaw]]'s punishment even after Spottedleaf testified that everthing Redtail and Bluefur brought up was true and accurate, and after [[spoiler:the trial]] she disappeared into Endmost Forest, where [[spoiler:there is a back entrance to the Dark Forest.]]
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** [[spoiler:Snowfur]]'s involvement as [[spoiler:the accomplice]] may come off as quite a surprise, but observant readers can predict that she's suspicious long before her involvement is revealed. During [[spoiler:Thistleclaw's trial]], [[spoiler:Snowfur]] is said to have protested [[spoiler:Thistleclaw]]'s punishment even after Spottedleaf testified that everthing Redtail and Bluefur brought up was true and accurate, and after [[spoiler:the trial]] she disappeared into Endmost Forest, where [[spoiler:there is a back entrance to the Dark Forest.]]Forest]].
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** Of course [[spoiler:Honeyfern is double-dead]] -it is said that her scent just suddenly ends, and that could only truly make sense if she just stopped existing somehow.
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** Of course [[spoiler:Honeyfern is double-dead]] -it is said that her scent just suddenly ends, and that could only truly make sense if she [[spoiler:she just stopped existing somehow.somehow]].
** Even though [[spoiler:Mudclaw]] is acting belligerent and antagonizing innocent cats unnecessarily, he is not the culprit. As he only cares about ruling Windclan, which he missed his chance to do now that he's dead, [[spoiler:Mudclaw]] has no real reason to work with Thistleclaw or murder Tallstar or Honeyfern.
** Even though [[spoiler:Mudclaw]] is acting belligerent and antagonizing innocent cats unnecessarily, he is not the culprit. As he only cares about ruling Windclan, which he missed his chance to do now that he's dead, [[spoiler:Mudclaw]] has no real reason to work with Thistleclaw or murder Tallstar or Honeyfern.
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** [[spoiler:Snowfur]]'s involvement as [[spoiler:the accomplice]] may come off as quite a surprise, but observant readers can predict that she's suspicious long before her involvement is revealed. During [[spoiler:Thistleclaw's trial]], [[spoiler:Snowfur]] is said to have protested [[spoiler:Thistleclaw's]] punishment even after Spottedleaf testified that everthing Redtail and Bluefur brought up was true and accurate, and after [[spoiler:the trial]] she disappeared into Endmost Forest and was presumably sulking.
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** [[spoiler:Snowfur]]'s involvement as [[spoiler:the accomplice]] may come off as quite a surprise, but observant readers can predict that she's suspicious long before her involvement is revealed. During [[spoiler:Thistleclaw's trial]], [[spoiler:Snowfur]] is said to have protested [[spoiler:Thistleclaw's]] [[spoiler:Thistleclaw]]'s punishment even after Spottedleaf testified that everthing Redtail and Bluefur brought up was true and accurate, and after [[spoiler:the trial]] she disappeared into Endmost Forest and was presumably sulking.Forest, where [[spoiler:there is a back entrance to the Dark Forest.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing:}} As this is a mystery story, there's lots.
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* {{Foreshadowing:}} {{Foreshadowing}}: As this is a mystery story, there's lots.
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* Foreshadowing: {{Foreshadowing:}} As this is a mystery story, there's lots.
