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* AdaptationalBadass: In the show, Wally's father Wigbert was a polo player and not much of a fighter. In the retelling of "Swamp and Sensibility", however, [[spoiler:he is shown to be a boxing champion from Oxfrog (a spoof of Oxford) and takes on a cannibalistic toad convict that's terrorizing his mansion]].
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* AdaptationalBadass: Most of the characters in this fic are shown to be more badass compared to their portal in the canon series. For example:
** Even though Sprig was already brave in the canon show, in this fic, he does cool things like fight giant bats or kill a mutant pumpkin.
** In the show, Wally's father Wigbert was a polo player and not much of a fighter. In the retelling of "Swamp and Sensibility", however, [[spoiler:he is shown to be a boxing champion from Oxfrog (a spoof of Oxford) and takes on a cannibalistic toad convict that's terrorizing his mansion]].
** Even though Sprig was already brave in the canon show, in this fic, he does cool things like fight giant bats or kill a mutant pumpkin.
** In the show, Wally's father Wigbert was a polo player and not much of a fighter. In the retelling of "Swamp and Sensibility", however, [[spoiler:he is shown to be a boxing champion from Oxfrog (a spoof of Oxford) and takes on a cannibalistic toad convict that's terrorizing his mansion]].
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** Two new characters, Indy and Rivet, are based on [[VideoGame/GodOfWar2018 Brok and Sindri]].
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** Two [[spoiler:Two new characters, Indy and Rivet, are based on [[VideoGame/GodOfWar2018 Brok and Sindri]].]]
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** The design of Hellcat's Claw is based on the [[VideoGame/GodOfWar2018 Leviathan Axe]] when fully upgraded.
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** The design of Hellcat's Claw is based on the [[VideoGame/GodOfWar2018 Leviathan Axe]] when fully upgraded.Axe]].
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** Two new characters, Indy and Rivet, are based on [[VideoGame/GodOfWar2018 Brok and Sindri]].
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler: In the "Little Frogtown" chapter, the floor manager at Sal's factory survives with only an injury caused by Frank instead of falling into a vat of sauce like in the canon series.]]
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* DisproportionateRetribution: [[spoiler:As part of Frank's DarkAndTroubledPast, the corrupt shoe manager had Frank sentenced to 10 months of juvenile detention for stealing a pair of shoes (which was actually Sasha's doing) and assaulting him and his assistant. Of course, the man had bribed the judge and jury by using his influence.]]
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* HowWeGotHere:
** The first chapter of the story opens with Frank and Anne waking up in Amphibia and being chased by a horde of snakes before the two end up in a river. Then a flashback reveals what happened two hours earlier with Frank catching Anne stealing the Calamity Box and getting them both teleported along with Sasha and Marcy.
** Chapter 5 begins with Frank and Anne hunting and killing an elder elephant beetle before a flashback reveals what got them into this predicament.
** The first chapter of the story opens with Frank and Anne waking up in Amphibia and being chased by a horde of snakes before the two end up in a river. Then a flashback reveals what happened two hours earlier with Frank catching Anne stealing the Calamity Box and getting them both teleported along with Sasha and Marcy.
** Chapter 5 begins with Frank and Anne hunting and killing an elder elephant beetle before a flashback reveals what got them into this predicament.
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* ArcherArchetype: Anne becomes this in Chapter 9 after finding a bow and arrows in the spider cave.
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** Despite being ruthless, Captain Grime comments in Chapter 23 that he disliked Lieutenant Tartarus due to his ego.
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** Despite being ruthless, Captain Grime comments in Chapter 23 that he disliked Lieutenant Tartarus Tartarus, due to his massive ego.
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* LosingAShoeInTheStruggle: While Anne loses her right shoe like in the canon series, Frank loses ''both'' of his the first day he and Anne arrive in Amphibia, leaving him barefooted. [[spoiler:He eventually gets a pair of sandals in Chapter 28.]]
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* LosingAShoeInTheStruggle: While Anne loses her right shoe like in the canon series, Frank loses ''both'' of his the first day he and Anne arrive in Amphibia, leaving him barefooted. [[spoiler:He eventually gets a pair of sandals in Chapter 28.28 from Marcy.]]
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* NeverMyFault: It is revealed in a flashback that it was [[spoiler:Sasha who stole the shoes and tossed them to avoid arrest, only for them to land on top of Frank. She believed it was his fault for just being in the wrong place and the wrong time]].
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* NeverMyFault: It is revealed in a flashback that it was [[spoiler:Sasha who stole the shoes and tossed them to avoid arrest, only for them to land on top of Frank. She believed it was his fault for just being in the wrong place and the wrong time]]. [[spoiler:She eventually admits to Grime that it ''was'' her fault Frank's life went downhill because of her.]]
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* BaitAndSwitch: In the "Anne Hunter" chapter, it seems that the heroes, like in the show, will be hunted by the Scorpileo [[spolier: only for it to be immediately killed by the Night Feeder, who is the real villain of the chapter]].
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* BaitAndSwitch: In the "Anne Hunter" chapter, it seems that the heroes, like in the show, will be hunted by the Scorpileo [[spolier: Scorpileo, [[spoiler: only for it to be immediately killed by the Night Feeder, who is the real villain of the chapter]].
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** In the rewrite of "Scavenger Hunt", instead of getting trapped in the manhole like in canon, [[spoiler:the sewer gator is killed by Anne after she slices its throat with Hellcat's Claw]].
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: As petty and vengeful as he is, even Barry finds the song "Summertime Loving, Loving in the Summer (Time)" to be annoying despite cursing Anne.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: EvenEvilHasStandards:
** As petty and vengeful as he is, even Barry finds the song "Summertime Loving, Loving in the Summer (Time)" to be annoying despite cursingAnne.Anne.
** Despite being ruthless, Captain Grime comments in Chapter 23 that he disliked Lieutenant Tartarus due to his ego.
** As petty and vengeful as he is, even Barry finds the song "Summertime Loving, Loving in the Summer (Time)" to be annoying despite cursing
** Despite being ruthless, Captain Grime comments in Chapter 23 that he disliked Lieutenant Tartarus due to his ego.
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* WeUsedToBeFriends: Anne and Frank were friends, but drifted apart when the former sought to build a relationship with [[AlphaBitch Sasha]]. [[spoiler:All of this stems from when Frank ratted them out, including Marcy, for skipping school to have fun at the arcade three years ago, causing all three girls to be grounded until the end of the month.]] They have reconciled as the story progressed.
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* WeUsedToBeFriends: Anne and Frank were friends, but drifted apart when the former sought to build a relationship with [[AlphaBitch Sasha]]. [[spoiler:All of this stems from when Frank (allegedly) ratted them out, including Marcy, for skipping school to have fun at the arcade three years ago, causing all three girls to be grounded until the end of the month.]] They have reconciled as the story progressed.
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** The design of Hellcat's Claw is based on the [[VideoGame/GodOfWar2018 Leviathan Axe]].
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** The design of Hellcat's Claw is based on the [[VideoGame/GodOfWar2018 Leviathan Axe]].Axe]] when fully upgraded.
