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** ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/160302/rehurricane-blossomforth Re:Hurricane Blossomforth]]'': A rewritten version of the story. All of the pegasi are tasked of getting water from Manehattan's Horsepower Park in what is called "Operation Rainrise". As Blossomforth and Daring Do help out with the mission, a promising young Wonderbolt Academy recruit-in-training named Lightning Dust may immobilize the mission and cause problems for the Mane 6. In-Progress.


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* CanonDiscontinuity: The original version of ''Hurricane Blossomforth''.


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** The pegasi moving the water up to Cloudsdale is called Operation Rainrise.

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* OhCrap: Blossomforth and Fluttershy's reaction to learning they accidentally entered the Best Fliers Competition

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* OhCrap: Blossomforth and Fluttershy's reaction to learning they accidentally entered the Best Fliers Competition Competition.
** Trixie's reaction when her mother shows up.
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* FullNameUltimatum: Trixie's mother Moonlight uses this on her.
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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/134057/mother-shows-best Mother Shows Best]]'': Trixie's mother has come to Manehattan, and she's here to drag her prodigal daughter back to Canterlot and take up her house's title, whether she wants to or not! In-progress.

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The story diverges some months before the events of [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E1MareInTheMoon Episode 1]] , the Elements of Harmony were discovered and moved to a museum by [[spoiler:Honey "Daring" Do]]. As a result, Princess Celestia sends to Twilight to Manehattan to oversee the preparations of the Summer Sun Celebration. Once there, events play out as Twilight meets several different ponies and learns the Magic of Friendship, Manehattan style.

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The story diverges some months before the events of [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E1MareInTheMoon Episode 1]] , the Elements of Harmony were discovered and moved to a museum by [[spoiler:Honey Honey "Daring" Do]].Do. As a result, Princess Celestia sends to Twilight to Manehattan to oversee the preparations of the Summer Sun Celebration. Once there, events play out as Twilight meets several different ponies and learns the Magic of Friendship, Manehattan style.



* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/94143/daring-do-and-the-soluna-stone Daring Do and the Soluna Stone]]'': Spike and Twilight accompany Honey [[spoiler: Daring]] Do on one of her archaeological expeditions. Complete.

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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/94143/daring-do-and-the-soluna-stone Daring Do and the Soluna Stone]]'': Spike and Twilight accompany Honey [[spoiler: Daring]] Daring Do on one of her archaeological expeditions. Complete.



* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/101732/hurricane-blossomforth Hurricane Blossomforth]]'': When Manehattan is offered to help Cloudsdale get water, all pegesi are to help out. So Honey [[spoiler: Daring]] Do and Blossomforth must help out the city using the water reservoir. In midst off it all, Blossomforth has a secret she can't tell which could put the whole event in jeopardy. Complete.

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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/101732/hurricane-blossomforth Hurricane Blossomforth]]'': When Manehattan is offered to help Cloudsdale get water, all pegesi are to help out. So Honey [[spoiler: Daring]] Daring Do and Blossomforth must help out the city using the water reservoir. In midst off it all, Blossomforth has a secret she can't tell which could put the whole event in jeopardy. Complete.



* BadassBookworm: In addition to Twilight Sparkle, there's also Professor Honey Do, [[spoiler:AKA Daring Do]].

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* BadassBookworm: In addition to Twilight Sparkle, there's also Professor Honey Do, [[spoiler:AKA Do (AKA Daring Do]].Do).



* BerserkButton: A subtle one that results more in annoyance than anger, but Honey Do doesn't like it when [[spoiler: people compare her to her fictional counterpart]].

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* BerserkButton: A subtle one that results more in annoyance than anger, but Honey Do doesn't like it when [[spoiler: people compare her to her fictional counterpart]].counterpart.



* CunningLinguist: Honey [[spoiler:"Daring"]] Do speaks twenty languages, half of which are dead. Octavia similarly took up linguistics in college.

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* CunningLinguist: Honey [[spoiler:"Daring"]] "Daring" Do speaks twenty languages, half of which are dead. Octavia similarly took up linguistics in college.



* [[spoiler:IAmNotSpock]]: Pretty much sums up [[spoiler:Daring]]'s attitude towards [[spoiler:her fictional self]].
** This is turning into a meta problem, as all but a couple of authors seem to be overlooking that [[spoiler: Daring]] is her nickname, and treat her real name as an alias.

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* [[spoiler:IAmNotSpock]]: IAmNotSpock: Pretty much sums up [[spoiler:Daring]]'s Honey/Daring's attitude towards [[spoiler:her her fictional self]].
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** This is turning into a meta problem, as all but a couple of authors seem to be overlooking that [[spoiler: Daring]] "Daring" is her nickname, and treat her real name as an alias.



* LateArrivalSpoiler: The very first story of the series reveals that museum curator Honey Do is the real life Daring Do, whose exploits are the basis for the popular book series, but she keeps this fact a secret so that ponies will treat her normally.



* ShoutOut: During her first visit to the Equestrian Museum of Supernatural History, Twilight is startled by a giant Jormungandr skin. Honey Do sympathizes, saying that she "[[Film/IndianaJones really hates snakes.]]" [[spoiler:Also doubles as {{Foreshadowing}} since Daring Do is often presented as an Indy {{Expy}}.]]

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* ShoutOut: During her first visit to the Equestrian Museum of Supernatural History, Twilight is startled by a giant Jormungandr skin. Honey Do sympathizes, saying that she "[[Film/IndianaJones really hates snakes.]]" [[spoiler:Also Also doubles as {{Foreshadowing}} since Daring Do is often presented as an Indy {{Expy}}.]]
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* AnswerCut: In chapter two of ''What You Are In The Dark'', when Twilight and Honey are having trouble finding information on the mystery creature Blossomforth saw, Twilight wonders if Blossomforth's having any better luck. Cut to Blossomforth yelling about how her group's not having any better luck.


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* CryptidEpisode: ''What You Are In The Dark'' is shaping up to be one, as the only evidence the Manehattan Six have found on Blossomforth's mystery creature points toward beings that are supposedly either extinct or nonexistent.


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** This is turning into a meta problem, as all but a couple of authors seem to be overlooking that [[spoiler: Daring]] is her nickname, and treat her real name as an alias.
* ImagineSpot: Spike has one in ''What You Are In The Dark'', seeing himself destroying the monster and getting a big kiss from Octavia... only to turn out he nearly kissed Blossomforth's flank.


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** While investigating the creature Blossomforth saw and reaching an apparent dead-end, Twilight quotes SherlockHolmes' CatchPhrase "If you eliminate the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth".
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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/129458/fillies-play Fillies' Play]]'': After a failed attempt to score big by stealing the Soluna Stone, Team Grifficorn is now in financial crisis. With nowhere left to go, they seek out the Manehattan 6 for help and hope to swindle them out of money, but get roped into a catastrophe they've caused when a spell of Twilight's goes horribly wrong. In-Progress.

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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/129458/fillies-play Fillies' Play]]'': After a failed attempt to score big by stealing the Soluna Stone, Team Grifficorn is now in financial crisis. With nowhere left to go, they seek out the Manehattan 6 for help and hope to swindle them out of money, but get roped into a catastrophe they've caused when a spell of Twilight's goes horribly wrong. In-Progress.Complete.

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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/128463/tangerine-sashay-of-power Tangerine Sashay of Power]]'': When Tangerine is chosen to be the school's new hall monitor, she feels that she cannot live up to the task. Her cousin Babs however, with the help of their new friend Featherweight, is determined to help her by toughening her up a bit. But there might be consequences after the lessons... In-Progress

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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/128463/tangerine-sashay-of-power Tangerine Sashay of Power]]'': When Tangerine is chosen to be the school's new hall monitor, she feels that she cannot live up to the task. Her cousin Babs however, with the help of their new friend Featherweight, is determined to help her by toughening her up a bit. But there might be consequences after the lessons... In-ProgressComplete.


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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Tangerine's reaction when she realizes what a bully she's become.


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* ShamingTheMob: When Tangerine decides to apologize for her actions as hall monitor to the rest of the student body, they're not willing to listen at first and act antagonistically to her. However, they back down when Tangerine's friends point out that they all only wanted to hall monitor themselves so that they could do whatever they want, so they don't have a right to be judgmental of her.

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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/129458/fillies-play Fillie's Play]]'': After a failed attempt to score big by stealing the Soluna Stone, Team Grifficorn is now in financial crisis. With nowhere left to go, they seek out the Manehattan 6 for help and hope to swindle them out of money, but get roped into a catastrophe they've caused when a spell of Twilight's goes horribly wrong. In-Progress.

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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/129458/fillies-play Fillie's Fillies' Play]]'': After a failed attempt to score big by stealing the Soluna Stone, Team Grifficorn is now in financial crisis. With nowhere left to go, they seek out the Manehattan 6 for help and hope to swindle them out of money, but get roped into a catastrophe they've caused when a spell of Twilight's goes horribly wrong. In-Progress.


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* HeWhoFightsMonsters: A mild example, but Tangerine's attempts to be an assertive hall monitor turns her into a bully, with all the rest of the students fearing her.


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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Babs' reaction when she realizes that her assertiveness training turned Tangerine into a bully.
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* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: Sherbet and Mosely apparently agreed to this in regards to Mosely's failed attempts at herding cattle when they were younger.
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* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: In ''Fillies Play'', when the ponies are regressed, they start to mentally regress to the way they were at that age as well.
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** While sorting books in the library, Spike finds one [[Literature/{{Twilight}} with Twilight's name on it]]. [[TakeThat He gets the feeling she won't like it]].
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-->''"You have my little ponies\\

-->Do you know you're all my very best friends?"''\\


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-->My Little Pony, My Little Pony\\

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And magic makes it all complete!\\

-->You have my little ponies\\

-->Do you know you're all my very best friends?\\


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* ATeamMontage: When the group is going over Twilight's plan to restore Trixie reputation.

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* ATeamMontage: When the group is going over Twilight's plan to restore Trixie Trixie's reputation.

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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/112736/blossomforth-with-all-your-might Blossomforth With All Your Might]]'': While in Cloudsdale to buy tickets for the Best Younger Fliers competition, Blossomforth accidentally ends up signing up for it. Now how can she get out of it without looking like a total fool? In-Progress.

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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/112736/blossomforth-with-all-your-might Blossomforth With All Your Might]]'': While in Cloudsdale to buy tickets for the Best Younger Fliers competition, Blossomforth accidentally ends up signing up for it. Now how can she get out of it without looking like a total fool? In-Progress.Complete.


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** Rainbow Dash apparently geeked out after reading about [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/124636/daring-do-and-the-tunnels-of-terror Daring Do's search for the Amulet of Kaboo]].

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* DarkSecret: Blossomforth treats her poor flying skills like this.

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* DareToBeBadass: ''Blossomforth'' does this to ''Rainbow Dash'' during the Best Young Fliers competition, mostly because she's annoyed that Dash has been pushing her and Fluttershy to get ready for the show for days but is now considering backing out herself. It works.
* DarkSecret: Blossomforth treats her poor flying skills like this.this, initially.


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** During the Best Young Fliers competition, Trixie performs while singing a modified version of "[[Theatre/WestSideStory I Feel Pretty]]".
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** Apple Bloom, Babs, and Tangerine found the Cutie Mark Crusaders after meeting at the Apple Family Reunion, with the latter two starting up the Manehattan chapter and AB starting the Ponyville branch. And WordOfGod states that she hadn't yet met Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo yet.
* FountainOfYouth: The plot of ''Fillie's Play'' is driven by a botched spell of Twilight's turning her and the rest of the Manehattan 6 into fillies.
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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/129458/fillies-play Fillie's Play]]'': After a failed attempt to score big by stealing the Soluna Stone, Team Grifficorn is now in financial crisis. With nowhere left to go, they seek out the Manehattan 6 for help and hope to swindle them out of money, but get roped into a catastrophe they've caused when a spell of Twilight's goes horribly wrong. In-Progress.


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* ADayInTheLimelight: Like the canon Cutie Mark Crusaders, the Manehattan CMC get their own stories.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/128463/tangerine-sashay-of-power Tangerine Sashay of Power]]'': When Tangerine is chosen to be the school's new hall monitor, she feels that she cannot live up to the task. Her cousin Babs however, with the help of their new friend Featherweight, is determined to help her by toughening her up a bit. But there might be consequences after the lessons... In-Progress

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''[[http://www.*''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/128463/tangerine-sashay-of-power Tangerine Sashay of Power]]'': When Tangerine is chosen to be the school's new hall monitor, she feels that she cannot live up to the task. Her cousin Babs however, with the help of their new friend Featherweight, is determined to help her by toughening her up a bit. But there might be consequences after the lessons... In-Progress
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/128463/tangerine-sashay-of-power Tangerine Sashay of Power]]'': When Tangerine is chosen to be the school's new hall monitor, she feels that she cannot live up to the task. Her cousin Babs however, with the help of their new friend Featherweight, is determined to help her by toughening her up a bit. But there might be consequences after the lessons... In-Progress
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* HeroOfAnotherStory: What the rest of the Canon Mane Six have become.
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** When Trixie and Twilight reconscile, Trixie apologizes for [[FanFic/FriendshipIsEmpathy calling her Twilight Snarkle]].
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* GoneHorriblyWrong: Twilight's plan in ''Brag You Down''. As she summarizes:
-->'''Twilight:''' "I...I just don't understand. What went wrong? We were just trying to set an example, not humiliate her! At what point did everypony think that was what we were trying to convey?!"
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* FixFic[=/=]DeconstructionFic: The first half of ''Brag You Down'' has Twilight enacting the Mare-Do-Well plot to teach Trixie a lesson. The second half deals with the consequences.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: If Capital Gain had just waited until [[spoiler:the month ran out]] instead of interrupting the Apple Family Reunion, Orange Sherbert wouldn't have found out how [[spoiler:they were about to lose the farm]], and couldn't intervene.


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* PoorCommunicationKills: Orange Sherbert fears that her family despises her and sees her as 'an Orange now, not an Apple'. She also thinks that Applejack suffered a BrokenPedestal moment when she saw what her Auntie was like. AJ, for her part, feels like [[spoiler:her Auntie must be ashamed of how she ran away from her rather than explaining how she felt, and that she can't live up to her business acumen]].
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* EyeScream: [[spoiler:Twilight]] suffers one in ''The Wrong Place at the Right Time''. Fortunately, [[spoiler:the injury was all an illusion]].


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* MasterOfIllusion: [[spoiler:The flying foxes use illusions to trick victims, only striking for real once they're paralyzed with fear.]]


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* NeverSplitTheParty: Octavia gets seperated from the others in the museum, and has an adventure of her own before reuniting with the others.


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* ThroughHisStomach: Spike's crush on Octavia was only helped along by how, when they first met, she went out of her way to feed him a good meal of rubies, sapphires, tea and cake.

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--> Ahh, ahh, ahh, ahhh…\\

-->(My Little Pony!)\\

-->I used to wonder what friendship could be\\

-->(My Little Pony!)\\

-->Until you all shared its magic with me\\

-->Great discoveries!\\

-->Tricks galore!\\

-->A rich slice of life,\\

-->And a heartfelt score.\\

-->Budding courage\\

-->It's an easy feat\\

-->And magic makes it all complete!\\

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-->Great discoveries!\\

-->Tricks galore!\\

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me\\
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-->Budding courage\\

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* AllThereInTheManual: Little Jackie Papercut has started a forum thread detailing how events have been playing out in Ponyville (some similar, some different) due to the differences from canon.

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