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--> ''Toki''': [[TokenGoodTeammate I gets it!]] You wants her to be happies without wantin' nothings in returns. Thinks abouts it: what would you do if you saws Charlie sads?
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Given how many Dethklok concerts become outright massacres, as well as the sheer attrition the Klokateers experience, it makes perfect sense that Hell is absolutely crawling with fanatically loyal minions desperate to do Dethklok's bidding.
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* ZergRush: The Klokateers swarm Duke Sallos' forces with reckless abandon when the Grand Duke's forces invade the Dethklok concert, rushing their demonic foes with such fervor that Captain Gallia is briefly horrified that they're so willing to die if it means taking their enemies down with them.them.
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*AbhorrentAdmirer: William Murderface, despite not being given a demon form, is repulsive as ever. He attempts to seduce [[LipstickLesbian Vaggie]] with his usual charm, which she [[GroinAttack vigorously rebuffs.]]
*AchievementsInIgnorance: Grand Duke Sallos attacks the concert with thirty legions of demonic soldiers, only to be defeated by concert security and Dethklok's Doomstar powers. The kicker? Dethklok didn't even notice, mistaking a defeated Sallos for a LoonyFan when he falls on the stage.
--> '''Murderface''': Who's thish douchebag?
*AchievementsInIgnorance: Grand Duke Sallos attacks the concert with thirty legions of demonic soldiers, only to be defeated by concert security and Dethklok's Doomstar powers. The kicker? Dethklok didn't even notice, mistaking a defeated Sallos for a LoonyFan when he falls on the stage.
--> '''Murderface''': Who's thish douchebag?
*BigBrotherInstinct: Nathan towards Toki, naturally, when he effortlessly trounces [[TheDreaded Alastor]] for trying to intimidate him. Dethklok collectively begins to feel this way towards [[TheCutie Charlie]], sincerely wishing to help her in her fulfill her dream. Even [[{{Jerkass}} Murderface.]]
--> '''Nathan''': Listen, because I’m only going to say this once: [[MySisterIsOffLimits no hitting on Charlie]]. We gotta stay focused on being ‘good’ or whatever if we’re gonna get outta this sh*riff*hole, and I will not have you torpedo this operation with your gross, pervy bullsh*riff*. Also, it’s just… [[{{Squick}} wrong.]]
--> '''Murderface''': I know! I don’t wanna get in her pantsh! It’d be like–like… it’d be like f*riff*in’ shomeone’sh mom!
--> '''Skwissgar''' [[CallBack Gods forbids.]]
--> '''Murderface''': [[SincerityMode No, no, look… I can’t exshplain it. It’sh like, I wanna shee her happy, and have her like me and think I’m cool but I don’t wanna shleep with her!]]
--> '''Skwisgaar''': [[ShallowCannotComprehendTrueLove ...Yous amsn’t making sense, Moidaface.]]
--> ''Toki''': [[TokenGoodTeammate I gets it!]] You wants her to be happies without wantin’ nothings in returns. Thinks abouts it: what would you do if you saws Charlie sads?
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--> '''Skwissgar''': [[{{Tsundere}} (visibly disturbed)]] I don’ts likes this new emoshkuns.
--> '''Nathan''': This Hell f*riff*ing sucks…
--> '''Nathan''': Listen, because I’m only going to say this once: [[MySisterIsOffLimits no hitting on Charlie]]. We gotta stay focused on being ‘good’ or whatever if we’re gonna get outta this sh*riff*hole, and I will not have you torpedo this operation with your gross, pervy bullsh*riff*. Also, it’s just… [[{{Squick}} wrong.]]
--> '''Murderface''': I know! I don’t wanna get in her pantsh! It’d be like–like… it’d be like f*riff*in’ shomeone’sh mom!
--> '''Skwissgar''' [[CallBack Gods forbids.]]
--> '''Murderface''': [[SincerityMode No, no, look… I can’t exshplain it. It’sh like, I wanna shee her happy, and have her like me and think I’m cool but I don’t wanna shleep with her!]]
--> '''Skwisgaar''': [[ShallowCannotComprehendTrueLove ...Yous amsn’t making sense, Moidaface.]]
--> ''Toki''': [[TokenGoodTeammate I gets it!]] You wants her to be happies without wantin’ nothings in returns. Thinks abouts it: what would you do if you saws Charlie sads?
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--> '''Skwissgar''': [[{{Tsundere}} (visibly disturbed)]] I don’ts likes this new emoshkuns.
--> '''Nathan''': This Hell f*riff*ing sucks…
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** Murderface manages to gross out most of the Hazbin Hotel residents with his bass solo thanks to the fact that he basically played the bass ''[[{{Squick}} with his ownpenis]]''.penis]]''.
** Dethklok becomes protective and affectionate towards Charlie over time, showing genuine concern when she opens for Dethklok at the concert in front of their violently critical [[LoonyFan audience]]. Luckily, as sweet and carefree as Charlie is, she's still the Princess of Hell and [[WinBackTheCrowd rocks their fans' socks off.]]
** Murderface manages to gross out most of the Hazbin Hotel residents with his bass solo thanks to the fact that he basically played the bass ''[[{{Squick}} with his own
** Dethklok becomes protective and affectionate towards Charlie over time, showing genuine concern when she opens for Dethklok at the concert in front of their violently critical [[LoonyFan audience]]. Luckily, as sweet and carefree as Charlie is, she's still the Princess of Hell and [[WinBackTheCrowd rocks their fans' socks off.]]
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''Life After Dethklok'' is a crossover between ''WebAnimation/HazbinHotel'' and ''WesternAnimation/{{Metalocalypse}}'' by Creator/WriteAnon. It can be accessed on Website/FanfictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13420749/1/Life-After-Dethklok here]], Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/19740967/chapters/46723216 here]], and Website/{{Spacebattles}} [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/life-after-dethklok-metalocaylypse-hazbin-hotel-crossover.809690/ there]].
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''Life After Dethklok'' is a crossover between ''WebAnimation/HazbinHotel'' ''WesternAnimation/HazbinHotel'' and ''WesternAnimation/{{Metalocalypse}}'' by Creator/WriteAnon. It can be accessed on Website/FanfictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13420749/1/Life-After-Dethklok here]], Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/19740967/chapters/46723216 here]], and Website/{{Spacebattles}} [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/life-after-dethklok-metalocaylypse-hazbin-hotel-crossover.809690/ there]].
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Murderface manages to gross out most of the Hazbin Hotel residents with his bass solo thanks to the fact that he basically played the bass ''with his own penis''.
* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: Dropped nearly word-for-word by Nathan after he and the rest of Dethklok found out that they all had sex with Angel Dust while they were in Hell.
* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: Dropped nearly word-for-word by Nathan after he and the rest of Dethklok found out that they all had sex with Angel Dust while they were in Hell.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Murderface manages to gross out most of the Hazbin Hotel residents with his bass solo thanks to the fact that he basically played the bass ''with ''[[{{Squick}} with his own penis''.
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* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: Dropped nearly word-for-word by Nathan after he and the rest of Dethklokfound out reveal to each other that they all had sex with Angel Dust while they were in Hell.
* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: Dropped nearly word-for-word by Nathan after he and the rest of Dethklok
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: After the end of Dethklok's concert in Hell, Charlie tells them that they they can be brutal and still be good people by using their music to unite people before the band returns to the world of the living.
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* InTheStyleOfInTheStyleOf: The fic is written in the style of a typical episode of ''Metalocalypse'', except set within the Hell of ''Hazbin Hotel''.
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* AttackOfTheFiftyFootWhatever: Mustakrakish is summoned by Dethklok during their charity concert via one of their songs and immediately gets to work fighting against the mutated crocodile monster that Sallos created.
* BrokenPedestal: Dethklok are sorely disappointed to find out that Hell isn't as metal as they thought it to be and decide to find a way out of the place.
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** Grand Duke Sallos transforms his crocodilian steed into a gigantic monster with his demonic magic during his invasion of the Dethklok concert.
** Mustakrakish is summoned by Dethklok during their charity concert viaone of their songs song "Awaken" and immediately gets to work fighting against the mutated previously mentioned crocodile monster that Sallos created.
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* BrokenPedestal: Dethklok are sorely disappointed to find out that Hell isn't as metal as they thought it to be and decide to find a way out of theplace.place just to spare themselves the embarassment.
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* ThisCannotBe: Sallos is incredulous that he, the Grand Duke of Hell, was defeated by people who, by all accounts, were supposedly nobodies by Hell's standards after Dethklok manage to repel his attack on their concert with the power of the Doomstar.
* ZergRush: The Klokateers swarm Duke Sallos' forces with reckless abandon whenthey the Grand Duke's forces invade Dethklok's the Dethklok concert, inundating his rushing their demonic forces foes with such fervor that Captain Gallia is briefly horrified that they're so willing to die if it means taking their own bodies as they fight ferociously to keep them out of the premises.enemies down with them.
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* CensoredForComedy: In true ''Metalocalypse'' fashion, every swearword to come out of the mouths of every character is covered up with a guitar riff, which shows up as *riff* for the offensive parts of their obscenities.
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* ThePowerOfRock: Dethklok invoke the power of the Doomstar and heavy metal to fend off Grand Duke Sallos' attack on their concert, managing to defeat the Grand Duke of Hell with their combined efforts.
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* ThePowerOfRock: Dethklok invoke the power of the Doomstar and heavy metal HeavyMetal to fend off Grand Duke Sallos' attack on their concert, managing to defeat the Grand Duke of Hell with their combined efforts.
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* HiddenDepths: Sure, Dethklok may be a group of lunkheads who have no idea on how to live a normal life, but they do demonstrate that they're not completely morons with their knowledge of music production and removing stains from clothing.
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* ZergRush: The Klokateers swarm Duke Sallos' forces with reckless abandon when they invade Dethklok's concert, inundating his demonic forces with their own flesh as they fight ferociously to keep them out of the premises.
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* ThePowerOfRock: Dethklok invoke the power of the Doomstar and heavy metal to fend off Grand Duke Sallos' attack on their concert, managing to defeat the Grand Duke of Hell with their combined efforts.
* ZergRush: The Klokateers swarm Duke Sallos' forces with reckless abandon when they invade Dethklok's concert, inundating his demonic forces with their ownflesh bodies as they fight ferociously to keep them out of the premises.
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* ThePowerOfRock: Dethklok invoke the power of the Doomstar and metal to fend off Grand Duke Sallos' attack on their concert, managing to defeat the Grand Duke of Hell with their combined efforts.efforts.
* ZergRush: The Klokateers swarm Duke Sallos' forces with reckless abandon when they invade Dethklok's concert, inundating his demonic forces with their own flesh as they fight ferociously to keep them out of the premises.
* ZergRush: The Klokateers swarm Duke Sallos' forces with reckless abandon when they invade Dethklok's concert, inundating his demonic forces with their own flesh as they fight ferociously to keep them out of the premises.
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''Life After Dethklok'' is a crossover between ''WebAnimation/HazbinHotel'' and ''WesternAnimation/Metalocalypse'' by Creator/WriteAnon. It can be accessed on Website/FanfictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13420749/1/Life-After-Dethklok here]], Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/19740967/chapters/46723216 here]], and Website/{{Spacebattles}} [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/life-after-dethklok-metalocaylypse-hazbin-hotel-crossover.809690/ there]].
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''Life After Dethklok'' is a crossover between ''WebAnimation/HazbinHotel'' and ''WesternAnimation/Metalocalypse'' ''WesternAnimation/{{Metalocalypse}}'' by Creator/WriteAnon. It can be accessed on Website/FanfictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13420749/1/Life-After-Dethklok here]], Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/19740967/chapters/46723216 here]], and Website/{{Spacebattles}} [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/life-after-dethklok-metalocaylypse-hazbin-hotel-crossover.809690/ there]].
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* BrokenPedestal: Dethklok are sorely disappointed to find out that Hell isn't as metal as they thought it to be and decide to find a way out of the place.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Murderface manages to gross out most of the Hazbin Hotel residents with his bass solo thanks to the fact that he basically played the bass ''with his own penis''.
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* GeniusDitz: As clueless as they may be about how to live a 'normal' life, the Dethklok members are ''very'' good at negotiating contracts thanks to their long experience as famous musicians.
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* GeniusDitz: As clueless as they HiddenDepths: Sure, Dethklok may be about a group of lunkheads who have no idea on how to live a 'normal' normal life, the Dethklok members are ''very'' good at negotiating contracts thanks to but they do demonstrate that they're not completely morons with their long experience knowledge of music production and removing stains from clothing.
* NiceGirl: Charlie, asfamous musicians.in canon, is still the sweet and optimistic cinnamon roll that we all know and love, best shown when she genuinely compliments Dethklok's musical talent and suggests more constructive hobbies to them out of pure kindness.
* NiceGirl: Charlie, as
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* ThePowerOfRock: Dethklok invoke the power of the Doomstar and metal to fend off Grand Duke Sallos' attack on their concert.
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* ThePowerOfRock: Dethklok invoke the power of the Doomstar and metal to fend off Grand Duke Sallos' attack on their concert.concert, managing to defeat the Grand Duke of Hell with their combined efforts.
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* CensoredForComedy: In true ''Metalocalypse'' fashion, every swearword to come out of the mouths of every character is covered up with a guitar riff, which shows up as *riff* for the offensive parts of their obscenities.
* LoudnessWar: InUniverse example; Nathan and Pickles point out to Charlie that while she's not a bad singer, her sound mixing is kinda out there, not to mention that the latter half of "Inside of Every Demon is a Rainbow" was chock-full of audio clutter.
* GeniusDitz: As clueless as they may be about how to live a 'normal' life, the Dethklok members are ''very'' good at negotiating contracts thanks to their long experience as famous musicians.
* LoudnessWar: InUniverse example; Nathan and Pickles point out to Charlie that while she's not a bad singer, her sound mixing is kinda out there, not to mention that the latter half of "Inside of Every Demon is a Rainbow" was chock-full of audio clutter.
* GeniusDitz: As clueless as they may be about how to live a 'normal' life, the Dethklok members are ''very'' good at negotiating contracts thanks to their long experience as famous musicians.
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''Life After Dethklok'' is a crossover between ''WebAnimation/HazbinHotel'' and ''WesternAnimation/Metalocalypse'' by Creator/WriteAnon. It can be accessed on Website/FanfictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13420749/1/Life-After-Dethklok here]], Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/19740967/chapters/46723216 here]], and Website/{{Spacebattles}} [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/life-after-dethklok-metalocaylypse-hazbin-hotel-crossover.809690/ there]].
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''Life After Dethklok'' is a crossover between ''WebAnimation/HazbinHotel'' and ''WesternAnimation/Metalocalypse'' by Creator/WriteAnon. It can be accessed on Website/FanfictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13420749/1/Life-After-Dethklok here]], Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/19740967/chapters/46723216 here]], and Website/{{Spacebattles}} [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/life-after-dethklok-metalocaylypse-hazbin-hotel-crossover.809690/ there]].there]].
Through some odd coincidence, the Dethklok gang end up in hell after they get involved in a ritual involving a Belarusian Five-Headed Pit Viper. Now, they have to find a way out of the place while also helping Charlie Magne, daughter of the Devil himself and owner of the Hazbin Hotel, promote her redemption initiative to the masses of Hell.
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Through some odd coincidence, the Dethklok gang end up in hell after they get involved in a ritual involving a Belarusian Five-Headed Pit Viper. Now, they have to find a way out of the place while also helping Charlie Magne, daughter of the Devil himself and owner of the Hazbin Hotel, promote her redemption initiative to the masses of Hell.
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''Life After Dethklok'' is a crossover between ''WebAnimation/HazbinHotel'' and ''WesternAnimation/Metalocalypse'' by Creator/WriteAnon. It can be accessed on Website/FanfictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13420749/1/Life-After-Dethklok here]], Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/19740967/chapters/46723216 here]], and Website/SpacebattlesForums [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/life-after-dethklok-metalocaylypse-hazbin-hotel-crossover.809690/ there]].
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''Life After Dethklok'' is a crossover between ''WebAnimation/HazbinHotel'' and ''WesternAnimation/Metalocalypse'' by Creator/WriteAnon. It can be accessed on Website/FanfictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13420749/1/Life-After-Dethklok here]], Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/19740967/chapters/46723216 here]], and Website/SpacebattlesForums Website/{{Spacebattles}} [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/life-after-dethklok-metalocaylypse-hazbin-hotel-crossover.809690/ there]].
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''Life After Dethklok'' is a crossover between ''WebAnimation/HazbinHotel'' and ''WesternAnimation/Metalocalypse'' by Creator/WriteAnon. It can be accessed on Website/FanfictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13420749/1/Life-After-Dethklok here]], Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/19740967/chapters/46723216 here]], and Website/SpacebattlesForums [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/life-after-dethklok-metalocaylypse-hazbin-hotel-crossover.809690/ there]].
