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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/series/3060417 Libra and Gemini]]'' is a ''Franchise/{{Kirby}}'' fanfiction written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/ErinPrimette/pseuds/ErinPrimette ErinPrimette]] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn. It is composed of ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/40994067/chapters/102737022 Discovering Hearts and Smiles]]'' and ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/41747778 Roche Aftermath]]'', the latter of which is still ongoing.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/series/3060417 Libra and Gemini]]'' is a series of ''Franchise/{{Kirby}}'' fanfiction written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/ErinPrimette/pseuds/ErinPrimette ErinPrimette]] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn. It is composed of ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/40994067/chapters/102737022 Discovering Hearts and Smiles]]'' and ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/41747778 Roche Aftermath]]'', the latter of which is still ongoing.
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* SeriesFic: One that currently contains two fanfics that takes place in the same continuity, but in very different points of time.
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''Roche Aftermath'' follows the events of ''VideoGame/KirbyAndTheForgottenLand'' as Elfilis and Vesa are brought back up to speed on the events that have happened in the years that have gone by, getting to know the inhabitants of Dream Land as they figure out what to do with their lives.
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''Roche Aftermath'' follows is set after the events of ''VideoGame/KirbyAndTheForgottenLand'' as Elfilis and Vesa are brought back up to speed on the events that have happened in the years that have gone by, getting to know the inhabitants of Dream Land as they figure out what to do with their lives.
lives and their budding relationship.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: In general, Fecto Elfilis is portrayed in a much more sympathetic light compared to their canon counterpart, with greater emphasis placed on their positive traits and the trauma they went through while trapped in Lab Discovera.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: In general, Fecto Elfilis is portrayed in a much more sympathetic light compared to their canon counterpart, with greater emphasis placed on their positive traits and the trauma they went through while trapped in Lab Discovera.
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* WhamLine: Daroach gives Kirby this warning in Chapter 53:
--> '''Daroach''': ''"I'll try to plead in your favor, but expect some nighttime visitors in the near future…and keep your loved ones close."''
--> '''Daroach''': ''"I'll try to plead in your favor, but expect some nighttime visitors in the near future…and keep your loved ones close."''
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* WhamLine: Daroach gives Kirby this warning in Chapter 53:
--> '''Daroach''': ''"I'll try to plead in your favor, but expect some nighttime visitors in the near future…and keep your loved ones close."''
--> '''Daroach''': ''"I'll try to plead in your favor, but expect some nighttime visitors in the near future…and keep your loved ones close."''
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* ShipperOnDeck: Hyness seems really happy to see Fecto Elfilis in a relationship with Vesa, going so far as to snap photos of them together at any chance he gets for an album.
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* PokemonSpeak: Save for some occasional words or simple phrases, Kirby tends to speak "Poyo". Strangely enough, those with magic can understand what he's saying.
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'''Beware of unmarked spoilers for VideoGame/KirbyAndTheForgottenLand'''!
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'''Beware of unmarked spoilers for VideoGame/KirbyAndTheForgottenLand'''!
''VideoGame/KirbyAndTheForgottenLand'''''!
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Tying into AdaptationalNiceGuy below, this version of Elfilis is a benevolent life-bringer who was [[BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil driven mad by the torture he endured]] while trapped in Lab Discovera rather than an out-and-out OmnicidalManiac.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Tying into AdaptationalNiceGuy below, this version of Elfilis is a benevolent life-bringer who was [[BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil driven mad by the torture he they endured]] while trapped in Lab Discovera rather than an out-and-out OmnicidalManiac.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Tying into AdaptationalNiceGuy below, this version of Elfilis is a benevolent life-bringer who was [[BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil tortured into madness]] while trapped in Lab Discovera rather than an out-and-out OmnicidalManiac.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Tying into AdaptationalNiceGuy below, this version of Elfilis is a benevolent life-bringer who was [[BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil tortured into madness]] driven mad by the torture he endured]] while trapped in Lab Discovera rather than an out-and-out OmnicidalManiac.
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** '''Zan Partizanne''': ''"The answer is no. Wait...your...turn!"''
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Zan Partizanne as she rebukes Marx's tantrum in Chapter 49:
** '''Zan Partizanne''': ''"The answer is no. Wait...your...turn!"''
** '''Zan Partizanne''': ''"The answer is no. Wait...your...turn!"''
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* BlowingARaspberry: Marx does this twice; once after Zan Partizanne refuses to answer his question about King Dedede's treasury room and the second time after Zan Partizanne insists that he wait for King Dedede to finish his conversation with his administration cabinet before Marx and Magolor can discuss with him about the venue of their wedding.
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* BlowingARaspberry: Marx does this twice; twice in Chapter 49; once after Zan Partizanne refuses to answer his question about King Dedede's treasury room and the second time after Zan Partizanne insists that he wait for King Dedede to finish his conversation with his administration cabinet before Marx and Magolor can discuss with him about the venue of their wedding.
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* BlowingARaspberry: Marx does this after Zan Partizanne insists that he wait for King Dedede to finish his conversation with his administration cabinet before Marx and Magolor can discuss with him about the venue of their wedding.
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* BlowingARaspberry: Marx does this twice; once after Zan Partizanne refuses to answer his question about King Dedede's treasury room and the second time after Zan Partizanne insists that he wait for King Dedede to finish his conversation with his administration cabinet before Marx and Magolor can discuss with him about the venue of their wedding.
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* BlowingARaspberry: Marx does this after Zan Partizanne insists that he wait for King Dedede to finish his conversation with his administration cabinet before Marx and Magolor can discuss with him about the venue of their wedding.
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* AngryChef: Chef Osaka gets serious over anything that happens in the kitchen, going so far as to criticize the Waddle Dee chefs in Castle Dedede.
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* AngryChef: Chef Osaka gets serious over anything that happens in the kitchen, going so far as to criticize the Waddle Dee chefs chefs' kitchen habits in Castle Dedede.
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* LethalChef: Chef Kawasaki's decline of culinary skills is caused by [[spoiler:a demonic possession that eats away his memories of what he's been taught under Chef Osaka. Fecto Elfilis performs an exorcism on him.]]
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* AngryChef: Chef Osaka gets serious over anything that happens in the kitchen, going so far as to criticize the Waddle Dee chefs in Castle Dedede.
