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Discussion about the story and fanart can be found in SpaceBattles in [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/last-child-of-krypton-redux-nge-superman.213955/ this thread]].
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Discussion about the story and fanart can be found in SpaceBattles Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom in [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/last-child-of-krypton-redux-nge-superman.213955/ this thread]].
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* AllLovingHero: Misato is shocked when Shinji states he doesn't like or trust Kaworu. He had never disliked anybody until then.
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* BoldlyComing: Shinji -Kryptonian- and Asuka -Amazon- get together. At the end of the rewrite, Asuka's gotten pregnant.
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* TakeUpMySword: A retired Wonder Woman shows Asuka her tiara, her bracelets and her Lasso and asks her to pick them and carry in her stead. Asuka accepts.
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* {{Flight}}: Shinji finds out he can fly when he tests how high he can jump.
-->"No. The speed came first. I remember that from when I was little. I didn't fit it at the school in my uncle's village. Some bullies chased me, and I outran them easily. I started to run, a lot. One day I noticed was running faster than a car, and I kept getting faster, and I could jump higher. One time I decided to see how high I could jump, and I just didn't come down."
-->"No. The speed came first. I remember that from when I was little. I didn't fit it at the school in my uncle's village. Some bullies chased me, and I outran them easily. I started to run, a lot. One day I noticed was running faster than a car, and I kept getting faster, and I could jump higher. One time I decided to see how high I could jump, and I just didn't come down."
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** Kaji manages to sneak up on Shinji several times despite Shinji's SuperSenses. [[spoiler: Just as you'd expect from someone who was trained by, and [[LegacyCharacter eventually became]], {{Batman}}.]]
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** Kaji manages to sneak up on Shinji several times despite Shinji's SuperSenses. [[spoiler: Just as you'd expect from someone who was trained by, and [[LegacyCharacter eventually became]], {{Batman}}.Franchise/{{Batman}}.]]
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* NighInvulnerability: Shinji Ikari is as invulnerable as any Kryptonian. At one point he gets hit with one dozen of nukes and survives.
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* SuperHeroOrigin: Origin story detailing how Shinji Ikari gained Kryptonian powers and became his world's first and greatest hero.
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** "I'm/He's Superman. I/He can do anything."
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** "I'm/He's "[I'm/He's] Superman. I/He [I/He] can do anything."
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* ArcWords:
** "I'm/He's Superman. I/He can do anything."
** In a ShoutOut to the [[SupermanTheMovie 1978 movie]], "I believe a man can fly."
** "I'm/He's Superman. I/He can do anything."
** In a ShoutOut to the [[SupermanTheMovie 1978 movie]], "I believe a man can fly."
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** Kaji manages to sneak up on Shinji several times despite Shinji's SuperSenses. [[spoiler: Just as you'd expect from someone who was trained by, and eventually became, {{Batman}}.]]
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** Kaji manages to sneak up on Shinji several times despite Shinji's SuperSenses. [[spoiler: Just as you'd expect from someone who was trained by, and [[LegacyCharacter eventually became, became]], {{Batman}}.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: In chapter 3 Asuka moved so fast that even Shinji was surprised. In chapter 12 she slapped Shinji and again he got stunned by her speed and surprised because her slap actually stung (even though he is nearly invulnerable). Then she ''tackled him'' before kissing him. A few chapters later [[spoiler:it was revealed her mother was an Amazon,]] so her greater-than-average strength and speed made sense.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: {{Foreshadowing}}:
** In chapter 3 Asuka moved so fast that even Shinji was surprised. In chapter 12 she slapped Shinji and again he got stunned by her speed and surprised because her slap actually stung (even though he is nearly invulnerable). Then she ''tackled him'' before kissing him. A few chapters later [[spoiler:it was revealed her mother was an Amazon,]] so her greater-than-average strength and speed madesense.sense.
** Kaji manages to sneak up on Shinji several times despite Shinji's SuperSenses. [[spoiler: Just as you'd expect from someone who was trained by, and eventually became, {{Batman}}.]]
** In chapter 3 Asuka moved so fast that even Shinji was surprised. In chapter 12 she slapped Shinji and again he got stunned by her speed and surprised because her slap actually stung (even though he is nearly invulnerable). Then she ''tackled him'' before kissing him. A few chapters later [[spoiler:it was revealed her mother was an Amazon,]] so her greater-than-average strength and speed made
** Kaji manages to sneak up on Shinji several times despite Shinji's SuperSenses. [[spoiler: Just as you'd expect from someone who was trained by, and eventually became, {{Batman}}.]]
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Compare and contrast with ''Fanfic/SOE2LoneHeirOfKrypton'', another story where an Eva character gains Superman powers, and with ''Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K'', ''Fanfic/GodsAngelsAndKings'', ''Fanfic/ThousandShinji'' and ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfAnElderGod'', other {{Crossover}} fics where Shinji becomes a {{Badass}} and/or gains powers due to circumstances that change his personality profoundly and turn him into TheHero... or an AntiHero.
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Compare and contrast with ''Fanfic/SOE2LoneHeirOfKrypton'', another story where an Eva character gains Superman powers, and with ''Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K'', ''Fanfic/GodsAngelsAndKings'', ''Fanfic/ThousandShinji'' and ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfAnElderGod'', other {{Crossover}} fics where Shinji becomes a {{Badass}} badass and/or gains powers due to circumstances that change his personality profoundly and turn him into TheHero... or an AntiHero.
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* {{Badass}}: Shinji/Superman. Most fights between him and the Angels are rather, well, [[CurbStompBattle one-sided]].
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* VillainousCrush: Kaworu -who is a full-fledged villain in the rewrite- is infatuated with Asuka (who hates his guts).
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* CameFromTheSky: Details vary between versions, but when the Kryptonian rocket crashed down on Antarctica, Yui Ikari found it.
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* FlingALightIntoTheFuture: Jor-El (Kal-El in the second version) sent a sample of his DNA to Earth and a recording of the last days of Krypton because he thought that "[Earthlings] cry out for a champion". Yui found the rocket and modified Shinji's genetic makeup with Kryptonian DNA to protect the future of humankind.
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* SuperStrength: Superman Shinji first demonstrates his superhuman strength when he defeats a massive eldritch monster with his bare hands.
-->She forced her eye open and she saw, through the Eva's eyes, as the impossible happened. The Angel stopped in its tracks, great spindly arms flailing, as if it were confused. For a moment, she wondered how, why the creature would stop in its relentless advance, stop trying to murder her and reach its goal. Then she spotted the tiny blue figure pushing against it, pushing it back. She willed the Eva and Eva answered her, tightening her view. This was not possible.\\
There was a person, and he was pushing the Angel back with ''his bare hands''. She gasped, the pain momentarily forgotten, as the tiny figure wound up, drew a fist back, and punched the Angel full on in the face. To her shock, it moved, it actually moved, he was pushing it back.
-->She forced her eye open and she saw, through the Eva's eyes, as the impossible happened. The Angel stopped in its tracks, great spindly arms flailing, as if it were confused. For a moment, she wondered how, why the creature would stop in its relentless advance, stop trying to murder her and reach its goal. Then she spotted the tiny blue figure pushing against it, pushing it back. She willed the Eva and Eva answered her, tightening her view. This was not possible.\\
There was a person, and he was pushing the Angel back with ''his bare hands''. She gasped, the pain momentarily forgotten, as the tiny figure wound up, drew a fist back, and punched the Angel full on in the face. To her shock, it moved, it actually moved, he was pushing it back.
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* EyeBeams: Shinji has heat vision thanks to his Kryptonian DNA. He uses it most memorably to [[spoiler:burn [[EldritchAbomination Leliel]] down when it tries to MindRape Asuka]] in a scene which is a homage to ''ComicBook/ForTheManWhoHasEverything''.
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* XRayVision: Shinji has X-ray vision thanks to his Kryptonian DNA. He has to remind himself to NOT look at Asuka's room when she's changing clothes lest he sees through the walls accidentally.
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* ClarkKentOutfit: Shinji wears shirts, baggy pants and multiple layers of clothing to hide his super-human muscles. The only time he wears -reluctantly- a skintight [[LatexSpaceSuit plug suit]], Misato and Ritsuko note that he's shockingly brawny and muscular.
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Before long Misato and Asuka realize that Shinji is quiet, soft-spoken... and one of the most caring, kindest and most compassionate persons they have ever met. Asuka cannot help to be drawn to him, but she also notices that he is anormally strong and seems to be hiding something.
Unbeknown to her, her own past also hids secrets... and the survival and freedom of humankind depends on Shinji, her and other people learning the secrets of their pasts and mastering powers and capabilities beyond human understanding.
Unbeknown to her, her own past also hids secrets... and the survival and freedom of humankind depends on Shinji, her and other people learning the secrets of their pasts and mastering powers and capabilities beyond human understanding.
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Before long Misato and Asuka realize that Shinji is quiet, soft-spoken... and one of the most caring, kindest and most compassionate persons they have ever met. Asuka cannot help to be drawn to him, but she also notices that he is anormally abnormally strong and seems to be hiding something.
Unbeknown Unbeknownst to her, her own past also hids hides secrets... and the survival and freedom of humankind depends on Shinji, her and other people learning the secrets of their pasts and mastering powers and capabilities beyond human understanding.
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* RedHeadedHero: Asuka starts out as a HumongousMecha AcePilot that rides a giant robot to fight massive alien monsters and later becomes [[spoiler:Wonder Woman -or Supergirl depending on the version-]], upgrading the "hero" part to super-hero.
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* OutsideContextHero: Shinji -Superman- is capable lift mountains, faster than a speeding bullet, nearly invulnerable, capable to fly... He can crush an Evangelion or Angel with his bare hands, Gendo and SEELE have no way to counteract their powers and abilities and they have no way to harm him.
* OutsideContextVillain: [[spoiler:''[[Comicbook/NewGods Darkseid]]'']] was this to NERV. Giant aliens? Sure, we can deal with it. An ancient, malevolent, overwhelming powerful alien GodOfEvil? Hell, no.
* OutsideContextVillain: [[spoiler:''[[Comicbook/NewGods Darkseid]]'']] was this to NERV. Giant aliens? Sure, we can deal with it. An ancient, malevolent, overwhelming powerful alien GodOfEvil? Hell, no.
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* OutsideContextHero: OutsideContextProblem:
** Shinji -Superman- is capable lift mountains, faster than a speeding bullet, nearly invulnerable, capable to fly... He can crush an Evangelion or Angel with his bare hands, Gendo and SEELE have no way to counteract their powers and abilities and they have no way to harm him.
* OutsideContextVillain: ** [[spoiler:''[[Comicbook/NewGods Darkseid]]'']] was this to NERV. Giant aliens? Sure, we can deal with it. An ancient, malevolent, overwhelming powerful alien GodOfEvil? Hell, no.
** Shinji -Superman- is capable lift mountains, faster than a speeding bullet, nearly invulnerable, capable to fly... He can crush an Evangelion or Angel with his bare hands, Gendo and SEELE have no way to counteract their powers and abilities and they have no way to harm him.
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* WhatIf: What if Shinji Ikari was Superman?
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* ManOfSteelWomanOfKleenex: Subverted with Shinji and Asuka. At the beginning, it looks like they're going to have this trouble... until [[spoiler:it's revealed Asuka is an Amazon, and nearly as strong as Shinji.]] In the final story version, she [[spoiler:becomes a Kryptonian via bio-engineering.]]
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* SuperheroPrevalenceStages: At the beginning of his career, Shinji fought thugs and put fires off. Later on, he fought giant alien monsters and super-villains. At the end of the story, he fought [[spoiler:Darkseid.]]
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* SuperheroPrevalenceStages: At the beginning of his career, Shinji fought thugs and put fires off. Later on, he fought giant alien monsters and super-villains. At the end of the story, he fought [[spoiler:Darkseid.]]there's a single superhuman (Superman) and his existence is unknown to the public. Later on, some more characters become heroes and several supervillains pop up. In the rewrite, though, there are a grand total of two superheroes (Superman and Supergirl) and a single supervillain who is an alien menace.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: The change done to Kaworu between both versions of the story: while on the original he is forced to fight Shinji via BrainwashedAndCrazy (and before and after the fight he is a very useful ally), the Redux version ''starts'' as a slimy bastard and only gets more horrible as it goes.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: AdaptationalVillainy:
** While Gendo was never a kind or understanding man, he was never outright abusive to Ritsuko in Canon.
** The change done to Kaworu between both versions of the story: while on the original he is forced to fight Shinji via BrainwashedAndCrazy (and before and after the fight he is a very useful ally), the Redux version ''starts'' as a slimy bastard and only gets more horrible as it goes.
** While Gendo was never a kind or understanding man, he was never outright abusive to Ritsuko in Canon.
** The change done to Kaworu between both versions of the story: while on the original he is forced to fight Shinji via BrainwashedAndCrazy (and before and after the fight he is a very useful ally), the Redux version ''starts'' as a slimy bastard and only gets more horrible as it goes.
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: The timeline of events starts changing at the first chapter: Rei sorties in Unit 01 because Shinji was too late. Sachiel is defeated by an unknown party. Shinji is unable to synch with Unit 01, and NERV brings Asuka in.
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: The timeline of events starts changing at the first chapter: Rei sorties in Unit 01 because Shinji was too late. Sachiel is defeated by an unknown party. Shinji is unable to synch with Unit 01, and NERV brings Asuka in.in a month before canon and makes her Unit 01's pilot.
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* SuperpowerLottery: Shinji has the full Kryptonian package: super-strength, super-speed, invulnerability, super-senses, flight... in a world where super-humans are scarce. [[spoiler:Asuka]] has the Franchise/WonderWoman pack or the Kryptonian pack and is a high-powered FlyingBrick.
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* WorldsStrongestMan: In this crossover, Shinji is Superman and [[spoiler:Asuka is Wonder Woman (Supergirl in the story's second version)]]. They're the two strongest humans in the planet. In his first public appearance, Shinji beat a giant monster up with his bare hands.
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Check ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'', ''Fanfic/TheChildOfLove'', ''Manga/{{Evangelion 303}}'', ''Fanfic/HigherLearning'', ''Fanfic/TheIkaris'', ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'', ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'' or ''Fanfic/MobileFighterEvangelion'' to see other AU Eva fics. Check ''Fanfic/ACrownOfStars'', ''Fanfic/{{HERZ}}'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionR'', ''Fanfic/ScarTissue'', ''Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' and ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionGenocide'' to see other Eva continuation fics. Check ''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'', ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'', ''Manga/ReTake'', ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'' to see PeggySue Eva stories.
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Check ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'', ''Fanfic/TheChildOfLove'', ''Manga/{{Evangelion 303}}'', ''Fanfic/HigherLearning'', ''Fanfic/TheIkaris'', ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'', ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'' ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'', or ''Fanfic/MobileFighterEvangelion'' to see other AU Eva fics. Check ''Fanfic/ACrownOfStars'', ''Fanfic/{{HERZ}}'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionR'', ''Fanfic/ScarTissue'', ''Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' and ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionGenocide'' to see other Eva continuation fics. Check ''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'', ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'', ''Manga/ReTake'', ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'' to see PeggySue Eva stories.
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Check ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'', ''Fanfic/TheChildOfLove'', ''Manga/{{Evangelion 303}}'', ''Fanfic/HigherLearning'', ''Fanfic/TheIkaris'', ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'' and ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'' to see other AU Eva fics. Check ''Fanfic/ACrownOfStars'', ''Fanfic/{{HERZ}}'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionR'', ''Fanfic/ScarTissue'', ''Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' and ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionGenocide'' to see other Eva continuation fics. Check ''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'', ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'', ''Manga/ReTake'', ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'' to see PeggySue Eva stories.
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Check ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'', ''Fanfic/TheChildOfLove'', ''Manga/{{Evangelion 303}}'', ''Fanfic/HigherLearning'', ''Fanfic/TheIkaris'', ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'' and ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'', ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'' or ''Fanfic/MobileFighterEvangelion'' to see other AU Eva fics. Check ''Fanfic/ACrownOfStars'', ''Fanfic/{{HERZ}}'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionR'', ''Fanfic/ScarTissue'', ''Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' and ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionGenocide'' to see other Eva continuation fics. Check ''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'', ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'', ''Manga/ReTake'', ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'' to see PeggySue Eva stories.
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* PleaseDontLeaveMe: In chapter 11 (original version) Shinji is trying to [[spoiler:burst in Leliel's illusion to save Asuka from being {{Mind Rape}}d]].]] When he tries talk Asuka into lowering her mental shields and letting him into she replies that he will just leave her. Shinji assures that he will not do, and she asks him if he promises (what he does).
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* PleaseDontLeaveMe: In chapter 11 (original version) Shinji is trying to [[spoiler:burst in Leliel's illusion to save Asuka from being {{Mind Rape}}d]].]] When he tries talk Asuka into lowering her mental shields and letting him into she replies that he will just leave her. Shinji assures that he will not do, and she asks him if he promises (what he does).
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* PowerPerversionPotential: Shinji has –among other powers- X-ray vision, telescopic vision, super speed… however he makes a conscious effort to not use them in improper ways.
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** When Asuka is taking a shower and getting dressed in their apartment he is careful to look anywhere but at the space she would occupy.
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* PowerPerversionPotential: Shinji has –among other powers- X-ray vision, telescopic vision, super speed… however he makes a conscious effort to not use them in improper ways.
** Whenways. So, when Asuka is taking a shower and getting dressed in their apartment he is careful to look anywhere but at the space she would occupy.
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