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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: As Kirby learns the hard way, punching a metal surface (Mecha Knight's face) full-force with no protection isn't a good idea.
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* FunWithAcronyms: '''H'''alstar's '''W'''orld '''C'''ommentary and '''H'''altmann '''W'''orks '''C'''ompany. I wonder if they're related.
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* [[WhoNamesTheirKidDude Who Names Their Kid "Max Profitt"?]]: Well, Max isn't that weird of a name, but adding "Profitt" to it does make it weird.
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* [[WhoNamesTheirKidDude Who Names Their Kid "Max Profitt"?]]: WhoNamesTheirKidDude: Well, Max isn't that weird of a name, but adding "Profitt" to it does make it weird.
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Now also posted in [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/14841734?view_full_work=true AO3]].
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* [[WhoNamesTheirKidDude Who Names Their Kid "Max Profitt"?]]Profitt"?]]: Well, Max isn't that weird of a name, but adding "Profitt" to it does make it weird.
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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: [[spoiler: Susie knows better than to mess with President Sectonia.]]
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* FunWithAcronyms: '''H'''alstar's '''W'''orld '''C'''ommentary and '''H'''altmann '''W'''orks '''C'''ompany. [[CaptainObvious I wonder if they're related]].
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* FunWithAcronyms: '''H'''alstar's '''W'''orld '''C'''ommentary and '''H'''altmann '''W'''orks '''C'''ompany. [[CaptainObvious I wonder if they're related]].related.
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* NiceGuy: Kirby. Some people say he has a cotton candy heart. [[CaptainObvious He doesn't]]. [[CloudCuckooLander He checked]].
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* CoffeeShopAUFic: The fanfic is a coffee shop AU of ''Kirby'' that revolves around Kirby's Dream Cafe.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12062015/1/Kirby-s-Dream-Caf%C3%A9-Robobot-Mall Kirby's Dream Café: Robobot Mall]]'' is a coffee shop AU fanfiction of the [[VideoGame/KirbyPlanetRobobot Kirby Planet Robobot]] game. It has 10 chapters: a prologue, an epilogue, author notes, and the 7 game chapters parallels. It was written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5219144/ ViridiHarmonia64]] from July 21 to August 21, 2016.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12062015/1/Kirby-s-Dream-Caf%C3%A9-Robobot-Mall Kirby's Dream Café: Robobot Mall]]'' is a coffee shop AU fanfiction of the [[VideoGame/KirbyPlanetRobobot Kirby Planet Robobot]] ''VideoGame/KirbyPlanetRobobot'' game. It has 10 chapters: a prologue, an epilogue, author notes, and the 7 game chapters parallels. It was written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5219144/ ViridiHarmonia64]] from July 21 to August 21, 2016.
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* TheWoobie: [[spoiler: Haltmann. He was raised to cheat and lie to get more money on all they already had, got married and had descendance just to get a heir, his money didn't save his wife, and he had to kick out his daughter for her not to be like him. Then she betrays him and she goes scot-free, and he remains in prison. Poor guy.]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12062015/9/Kirby-s-Dream-Caf%C3%A9-Robobot-Mall Kirby's Dream Café: Robobot Mall]]'' is a coffee shop AU fanfiction of the [[VideoGame/KirbyPlanetRobobot Kirby Planet Robobot]] game. It has 10 chapters: a prologue, an epilogue, author notes, and the 7 game chapters parallels. It was written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5219144/ ViridiHarmonia64]] from July 21 to August 21, 2016.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12062015/9/Kirby-s-Dream-Caf%C3%A9-Robobot-Mall net/s/12062015/1/Kirby-s-Dream-Caf%C3%A9-Robobot-Mall Kirby's Dream Café: Robobot Mall]]'' is a coffee shop AU fanfiction of the [[VideoGame/KirbyPlanetRobobot Kirby Planet Robobot]] game. It has 10 chapters: a prologue, an epilogue, author notes, and the 7 game chapters parallels. It was written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5219144/ ViridiHarmonia64]] from July 21 to August 21, 2016.
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* AllThereInTheManual: [[http://charlesjones1997.tumblr.com/post/147821187175/recap-of-how-games-went-on-the-kirbys-dream-caf%C3%A9 A tumblr post]] of the author shows what happened in the previous games/stories. It ends up useless, as the author promised to write those too.
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* AllThereInTheManual: [[http://charlesjones1997.[[http://viridiharmonia64.tumblr.com/post/147821187175/recap-of-how-games-went-on-the-kirbys-dream-caf%C3%A9 A tumblr post]] of the author shows what happened in the previous games/stories. It ends up useless, as the author promised to write those too.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12062015/9/Kirby-s-Dream-Caf%C3%A9-Robobot-Mall Kirby's Dream Café: Robobot Mall]]'' is a coffee shop AU fanfiction of the [[VideoGame/KirbyPlanetRobobot Kirby Planet Robobot]] game. It has 10 chapters: a prologue, an epilogue, author notes, and the 7 game chapters parallels. It was written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5219144/ CharlesJones1997]] from July 21 to August 21, 2016.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12062015/9/Kirby-s-Dream-Caf%C3%A9-Robobot-Mall Kirby's Dream Café: Robobot Mall]]'' is a coffee shop AU fanfiction of the [[VideoGame/KirbyPlanetRobobot Kirby Planet Robobot]] game. It has 10 chapters: a prologue, an epilogue, author notes, and the 7 game chapters parallels. It was written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5219144/ CharlesJones1997]] ViridiHarmonia64]] from July 21 to August 21, 2016.
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* IdiotBall: Haltmann. [[spoiler: He hired his daughter he practically kicked out of the family, taught her about cheating and lying in corporate bussiness, let her stay when all employees were fired and replaced by robots, and somehow didn't expect her to betray him.]]
* JackOfAllStats: Kirby. [[spoiler: He wins both the fights in the fanfiction by adding some actual hand-to-hand combat in the middle of swordfighting. It saves Meta Knight]] Meta Knight, although begrudgingly, concedes he could learn a thing or two from Kirby.
* JackOfAllStats: Kirby. [[spoiler: He wins both the fights in the fanfiction by adding some actual hand-to-hand combat in the middle of swordfighting. It saves Meta Knight]] Meta Knight, although begrudgingly, concedes he could learn a thing or two from Kirby.
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* GracefulLoser: [[spoiler: Both Haltmann and Susie. Haltmann concedes defeat after Kirby shows him they have enough evidence for trial. Susie takes over, and knowing the trial will start long after KDC is destroyed, initiates anyway. This gets interrupted by ''President Sectonia'', and there she concedes defeat.]]
* IdiotBall: Haltmann. [[spoiler: He hired his daughter he practically kicked out of the family, taught her about cheating and lying in corporatebussiness, business, let her stay when all employees were fired and replaced by robots, and somehow didn't expect her to betray him.]]
* JackOfAllStats: Kirby. [[spoiler: He wins both the fights in the fanfiction by adding some actual hand-to-hand combat in the middle ofswordfighting.sword-fighting. It saves Meta Knight]] Meta Knight, although begrudgingly, concedes he could learn a thing or two from Kirby.
* LeetSpeak: [[spoiler: Star Dream's Operator text name: TH35T4RDR3AM.]]
* IdiotBall: Haltmann. [[spoiler: He hired his daughter he practically kicked out of the family, taught her about cheating and lying in corporate
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* LeetSpeak: [[spoiler: Star Dream's Operator text name: TH35T4RDR3AM.]]
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*SoreLoser: [[spoiler: Nova. He didn't handle Kirby's intruding on his plan of fame well, so he plans to get revenge. He gains all of Haltmann's money and has Kirby at a stop, and drops the chance to peacefully live rich for stunning Kirby and Meta Knight, and trying to upload their profiles to the INTERPOL.]]
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->'''Magolor:''' ''[curious]'' That's a silly question. Did I not just say I turned out to need it??
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Kirby and Ribbon. [[spoiler: Ribbon can throw a man out of a window and scare an A.I. into shutdown, and Kirby can destroy a robot and two legendary gang warriors in combat, as well as a legal kicking to a billionaire.]]
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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: Susie begind the café's demolition, and a limo stops it. Magolor and Adeleine get out of it, bringing president Sectonia to stop HWC.]]
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* CrazyPrepared: Magolor. He carries smoke bombs wherever he goes. Adeleine goes on to ask why he would do that
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->'''Magolor:''' ''[curious]'' That's a silly question. Did I not just say I turned out to need it??
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* JackOfAllStats: Kirby. [[spoiler: He wins both the fights in the fanfiction by adding some actual hand-to-hand combat in the middle of swordfighting. It saves Meta Knight]] Meta Knight, although begrudgingly, concedes he could learn a thing or two from Kirby.
* NiceGuy: Kirby. Some people say he has a cotton candy heart. [[CaptainObvious He doesn't]]. [[CloudCuckooLander He checked]].
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* [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Woman]]: Adeleine. She's in art school, which according to the author, is 'the school you need to be the most insane to go to', and despite that, she sides with a café runner who knows swordsmanship, a woman that scared an A.I. into shutdown with a glare, and a guy who walks around with smoke bombs, brass knuckles and a shovel. Yikes.
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* BatmanGambit: A small one: Kirby knows the API group can do some serious harm, and there's no way they'd admit to work for HWC or viceversa.[[spoiler: So Kirby leaves the place, leaves the keys at the door, puts a sign that taunts them, and they're caught red-handed as they tear Kirby's café apart. Once there, they try to use HWC's sponsorship as an escape route, but they deny any involvement. This also slightly reduces their popularity.]]
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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: Susie begind the café's demolition, and a limo stops it. Magolor and Adeleine get out of it, bringing president Sectonia to stop HWC.]]
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* BookEnds: The story started on July 21, ended in August 21. Similarly, the approximate number of words for each chapter started with a 1000 in the prologue, peaked at 2000+, and went back to a 1000 in the epilogue, going through a similar number of words per chapter as its inverse(ch.1 and 7, ch, 2 and 6, ch 3 and 5).
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* FunWithAcronyms: '''H'''alstar's '''W'''orld '''C'''ommentary and '''H'''altmann '''W'''orks '''C'''ompany. [[CaptainObvious I wonder if they're related]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12062015/9/Kirby-s-Dream-Caf%C3%A9-Robobot-Mall Kirby's Dream Café: Robobot Mall]]'' is a coffee shop AU fanfiction of the [[VideoGame/KirbyPlanetRobobot Kirby Planet Robobot]] game. It has 9 chapters: a prologue, an epilogue, and the 7 game chapters parallels. It was written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5219144/ CharlesJones1997]] from July 21 to August 20, 2016.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12062015/9/Kirby-s-Dream-Caf%C3%A9-Robobot-Mall Kirby's Dream Café: Robobot Mall]]'' is a coffee shop AU fanfiction of the [[VideoGame/KirbyPlanetRobobot Kirby Planet Robobot]] game. It has 9 10 chapters: a prologue, an epilogue, author notes, and the 7 game chapters parallels. It was written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5219144/ CharlesJones1997]] from July 21 to August 20, 21, 2016.
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The plot revolves around Kirby's Dream Café, a little coffee shop in the Pop Star district, being under duress as a sign indicates the great Haltmann Works Company wishes to get their restaurant and demolish it to set up a mall. Kirby refuses, and HWC, along with the everywoman Susie, turn to less than legal measures to get the shop under their hands.
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The plot revolves around Kirby's Dream Café, a little coffee shop in the Pop Star district, being under duress as a sign indicates the great Haltmann Works Company wishes to get their restaurant and demolish it to set up a mall. Kirby refuses, and HWC, along with the everywoman Susie, turn to less than legal measures to get the shop under their hands.
* AIIsACrapshoot: [[spoiler: Susie's coffee machine gains sentience and goes into the internet to buy nuke codes online.]]
* AllThereInTheManual: [[http://charlesjones1997.tumblr.com/post/147821187175/recap-of-how-games-went-on-the-kirbys-dream-caf%C3%A9 A tumblr post]] of the author shows what happened in the previous games/stories. It ends up useless, as the author promised to write those too.
* AllThereInTheManual: [[http://charlesjones1997.tumblr.com/post/147821187175/recap-of-how-games-went-on-the-kirbys-dream-caf%C3%A9 A tumblr post]] of the author shows what happened in the previous games/stories. It ends up useless, as the author promised to write those too.
* BeyondTheImpossible: [[spoiler: Somehow, in the span of running to Kirby's coffee shop and coming back, Susie's coffee machine gains sentience and goes into the internet to buy nuke codes online.]]
* BlandNameProduct: Halbucks.
* CaptainErsatz: [[Creator/WaltDisney Waddlet Deesney.]]
* BlandNameProduct: Halbucks.
* CaptainErsatz: [[Creator/WaltDisney Waddlet Deesney.]]
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* RuleOfThree: In a flashback of the first day of Kirby at the coffee shop. Three times does Marx's drink play a role in an incident, and making it worse due to the alcohol in it. Each time getting worse. See SerialEscalation below.
* RunningGag: The author stating Kirby's copyright, thanking Nova for one of the Kirby games, and pointing out the best pointsFTW!FTW!
* SerialEscalation: First day at the Kirby's Dream Café. First, the coffee machine lights on fire, Kirby throws Marx's coffee at it, and the alcohol in it makes it burn more. Then, a customer receives his hot drink to the face, Kirby throws Marx's cold latte at the client's face. The alcohol lights the client's face on fire. [[spoiler: Finally, after the first day, Keeby, Kirby and Marx celebrate the first day. Marx comments he left his tea inside. THE COFFEE SHOP EXPLODES.]]
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* RunningGag: The author stating Kirby's copyright, thanking Nova for one of the Kirby games, and pointing out the best points
* SerialEscalation: First day at the Kirby's Dream Café. First, the coffee machine lights on fire, Kirby throws Marx's coffee at it, and the alcohol in it makes it burn more. Then, a customer receives his hot drink to the face, Kirby throws Marx's cold latte at the client's face. The alcohol lights the client's face on fire. [[spoiler: Finally, after the first day, Keeby, Kirby and Marx celebrate the first day. Marx comments he left his tea inside. THE COFFEE SHOP EXPLODES.]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12062015/9/Kirby-s-Dream-Caf%C3%A9-Robobot-Mall Kirby's Dream Café: Robobot Mall]]'' is a coffee shop AU fanfiction of the [[VideoGame/KirbyPlanetRobobot Kirby Planet Robobot]] game. It has 9 chapters: a prologue, an epilogue, and the 7 game chapters parallels. It was written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5219144/ CharlesJones1997]] from July 21 to August 20, 2016.
The plot revolves around Kirby's Dream Café, a little coffee shop in the Pop Star district, being under duress as a sign indicates the great Haltmann Works Company wishes to get their restaurant and demolish it to set up a mall. Kirby refuses, and HWC, along with the everywoman Susie, turn to less than legal measures to get the shop under their hands.
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* ArcWords: We Stay. They represent Kirby's coffee shop desire to stay. They appear at least once every chapter except the prologue (which set up from ''what'' they were staying) and the 4th chapter, [[spoiler: where they left at the end to get Kirby to a hospital.]]
* IdiotBall: Haltmann. [[spoiler: He hired his daughter he practically kicked out of the family, taught her about cheating and lying in corporate bussiness, let her stay when all employees were fired and replaced by robots, and somehow didn't expect her to betray him.]]
* RunningGag: The author stating Kirby's copyright, thanking Nova for one of the Kirby games, and pointing out the best points FTW!
The plot revolves around Kirby's Dream Café, a little coffee shop in the Pop Star district, being under duress as a sign indicates the great Haltmann Works Company wishes to get their restaurant and demolish it to set up a mall. Kirby refuses, and HWC, along with the everywoman Susie, turn to less than legal measures to get the shop under their hands.
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!! In this fanfic you will find:
* ArcWords: We Stay. They represent Kirby's coffee shop desire to stay. They appear at least once every chapter except the prologue (which set up from ''what'' they were staying) and the 4th chapter, [[spoiler: where they left at the end to get Kirby to a hospital.]]
* IdiotBall: Haltmann. [[spoiler: He hired his daughter he practically kicked out of the family, taught her about cheating and lying in corporate bussiness, let her stay when all employees were fired and replaced by robots, and somehow didn't expect her to betray him.]]
* RunningGag: The author stating Kirby's copyright, thanking Nova for one of the Kirby games, and pointing out the best points FTW!
