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* AgeLift: In this story, the main members of the Holy Quintet (sans Homura) and Nagisa seems to have grew in some years and all are in high school (Nagisa still being in elementary though), with Madoka being 16 years old.
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* DoomedHometown: Mitakihara City is destroyed in the Heartless attack, along with the rest of their world.
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* DoomedHometown: Mitakihara City is destroyed in the Heartless attack, along with the rest of their world. The good news is that at the very least, Xehanort manage to seal the keyhole of that world, so it won't appear at the Realm of Darkness anytime soon.
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* AdaptationExpansion: Since this story is based around Kingdom Hearts III, we get to see new worlds that the Holy Quintet are visiting, such as [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Mitakihara City]], and [[Film/ThorTheDarkWorld The Nine Realms]], while Homura's visits the canon worlds of the story.
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* ArtAttacker: In Olympus, Homura, Hercules, and Sora's crew face an original Heartless that resembles a giant Greek vase covered with images of death, which it animates and sends the resulting {{Living Drawing}}s to attack them and then repeat the process with a new picture.
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* AdaptationalWimp: While fleeing the destruction of Mitakihara by car, Madoka and friends are chased by Hot Rods. Their numbers are endless, but they die in one shot to Mami's muskets and Nagisa's BubbleGun.
* ArtAttacker: In Olympus, Homura, Hercules, and Sora's crew face an original Heartless that resembles a giant Greek vase covered with images ofdeath, which it Heracles's Twelve Labors. It animates the images, causing the whichever monster is currently depicted to kill the image of Heracles and any other human subjects in the picture and sends the resulting {{Living Drawing}}s to attack them Sora and then repeat company before repeating the process with a new picture.picture. It gets through five of them before the Heartless's main body, a cat-like creature inside the vase, is destroyed.
* ArtAttacker: In Olympus, Homura, Hercules, and Sora's crew face an original Heartless that resembles a giant Greek vase covered with images of
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* ReligiousAndMythologicalThemeNaming: The fiery spear-wielding Wraith-like Heartless that claims Tatsuya's heart is named Tapana, after a Buddhist hell where the condemned are impaled on flaming spears. Similarly, an ArtAttacker Heartless that uses pictures of the Twelve Labors of Heracles to conjure minions is named Eurystheus after the king who imposed said Labors in the first place.
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* HopeSpot: After crashing her car thanks to a Heartless jumpscare, Junko manages to crawl out and hears tires squealing to a stop nearby. At first she thinks it's a good samaritan who saw the crash, only for the new car to rear up on two wheels...
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* HopeSpot: After crashing her car thanks to a Heartless jumpscare, Junko manages to crawl out and hears tires squealing to a stop nearby. At first she thinks it's a good samaritan who saw the crash, only for the new car to rear up on two wheels...
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* ArtAttacker: In Olympus, Homura, Hercules, and Sora's crew face an original Heartless that resembles a giant Greek vase covered with images of death, which it animates and sends the resulting {{Living Drawing}}s to attack them and then repeat the process with a new picture.
* CompositeCharacter: Chaos has his appearance and titles from ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyXII'', complete with his bestiary entry being quoted verbatim in the author's notes. Despite this, he also has a connection to [[VideoGame/FinalFantasyI the Four Fiends]], [[spoiler:whom he lends to Homura, possibly due to seeing a kindred spirit in her]].
* HopeSpot: After crashing her car thanks to a Heartless jumpscare, Junko manages to crawl out and hears tires squealing to a stop nearby. At first she thinks it's a good samaritan who saw the crash, only for the new car to rear up on two wheels...
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Not to be confused with another fellow Kingdom Hearts fanfiction with a similar name: Fanfic/KeysToTheKingdomKingdomHearts.
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-->'''Mami''': More video games?!\\
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Homura paused, taking in all of his words. It… all made sense. Everything that she had experienced now made sense! It was as if a piece had been added to a puzzle that she wasn't even aware was incomplete, and now she could see the whole picture! Madoka was one of the few islands of kindness in a vast ocean of wretchedness. And now she was thrown into that sea, completely at its mercy. Homura had been right all along. She needed to be protected. The universe depended on it. She turned towards Xehanort.\\
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* EmpathicWeapon: Keyblades, as per canon, link to their masters Hearts and respond to their wills.
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* EmpathicWeapon: Keyblades, as per canon, link to their masters masters' Hearts and respond to their wills.
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* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: The Magus Sisters, Mindy especially, tend to make non-sequitor jokes and references.
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* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: The Magus Sisters, Mindy especially, tend to make non-sequitor non-sequitur jokes and references.
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* FillerArc: Namechecked by Mindy in reference to the girls' detour to Asgard on the way to Radiant Garden.
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* PopCultureOsmosisFailure: Mami doesn't understand any of Kyoko's ''Literature/HarryPotter'' references, much to her shock.
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* PopCultureOsmosisFailure: PopCulturalOsmosisFailure: Mami doesn't understand any of Kyoko's ''Literature/HarryPotter'' references, much to her shock.
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* FillerArc: Namechecked by Mindy in reference to the girls' detour to Asgard on the way to Radiant Garden.
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* YankTheDogsChain: At the end of Chapter 50, [[spoiler:Madoka's mother Junko shows up in Radiant Garden, but it quickly becomes apparent that she's a [[EmptyShell Nobody]].
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* YankTheDogsChain: At the end of Chapter 50, [[spoiler:Madoka's mother Junko shows up in Radiant Garden, but it quickly becomes apparent that she's a [[EmptyShell Nobody]].Nobody]] and in no condition to provide emotional support.]]
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* IKnowMortalKombat: A RunningGag with Kyoko, who claims to have learned to drive from ''GTA'':
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* DestroyedHometown: Mitakihara City is destroyed in the Heartless attack, along with the rest of their world.
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* DestroyedHometown: DoomedHometown: Mitakihara City is destroyed in the Heartless attack, along with the rest of their world.
* IKnowMortalKombat: A RunningGag with Kyoko, who claims to have learned to drive from ''GTA'':
-->'''Mami''': ''VideoGame/GrandTheftAuto''? Are you ''serious''?!\\
'''Kyoko''': Well if you didn't like that, then ya' ain't going to like how I found us this car. Although it is thematically appropriate...\\
'''Mami''': [[BigWhat WHAT?!]]\\
'''Kyoko''': Hey, in my defense, the guy was definitely already a Heartless! He wasn’t gonna be using it!
** It comes again when she suggests that she fly the Gummi Ship because she's played ''VideoGame/AceCombat''.
-->'''Mami''': More video games?!\\
'''Kyoko''': Well have you ever even played ''VideoGame/{{Asteroids}}''?!\\
'''Sayaka''': Are we seriously having this conversation again?!
* InnocentlyInsensitive: Madoka and Sayaka both lose their families in the Heartless invasion of Mitakihara, but are relieved to learn from Ramuh that they have a chance of bringing them back. Their relief blinds them to the fact that the other girls all lost their parents under different circumstances and have no such chance of seeing them again, with Kyoko in particular taking this badly. Madoka is quick to apologise when she realises what Kyoko is going through.
* ItsAllMyFault: Kyoko blames herself for [[Film/ThorTheDarkWorld getting Frigga killed]].
* JerkassRealization: Kyoko's bitterness about Madoka having a chance of bringing her family back spills over when [[spoiler:Junko Kaname does show up as a Nobody and Kyoko feels vindicated. She admits to Nagisa how messed up she is, giving a WhatTheHellHero to herself.]]
-->'''Mami''': ''VideoGame/GrandTheftAuto''? Are you ''serious''?!\\
'''Kyoko''': Well if you didn't like that, then ya' ain't going to like how I found us this car. Although it is thematically appropriate...\\
'''Mami''': [[BigWhat WHAT?!]]\\
'''Kyoko''': Hey, in my defense, the guy was definitely already a Heartless! He wasn’t gonna be using it!
** It comes again when she suggests that she fly the Gummi Ship because she's played ''VideoGame/AceCombat''.
-->'''Mami''': More video games?!\\
'''Kyoko''': Well have you ever even played ''VideoGame/{{Asteroids}}''?!\\
'''Sayaka''': Are we seriously having this conversation again?!
* InnocentlyInsensitive: Madoka and Sayaka both lose their families in the Heartless invasion of Mitakihara, but are relieved to learn from Ramuh that they have a chance of bringing them back. Their relief blinds them to the fact that the other girls all lost their parents under different circumstances and have no such chance of seeing them again, with Kyoko in particular taking this badly. Madoka is quick to apologise when she realises what Kyoko is going through.
* ItsAllMyFault: Kyoko blames herself for [[Film/ThorTheDarkWorld getting Frigga killed]].
* JerkassRealization: Kyoko's bitterness about Madoka having a chance of bringing her family back spills over when [[spoiler:Junko Kaname does show up as a Nobody and Kyoko feels vindicated. She admits to Nagisa how messed up she is, giving a WhatTheHellHero to herself.]]
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* ShoutOut: To, of all things, ''WebVideo/KingdomHeartsInANutshell''"
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* ShoutOut: To, of all things, ''WebVideo/KingdomHeartsInANutshell''"''WebVideo/KingdomHeartsInANutshell'':
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* YankTheDogsChain: At the end of Chapter 50, [[spoiler:Madoka's mother Junko shows up in Radiant Garden, but it quickly becomes apparent that she's a [[EmptyShell Nobody]].
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Some two years after the events of ''[[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaTheMovieRebellion Rebellion]]'' Madoka has been living in something resembling normalcy, though with the constant feeling that something is off. Her peaceful life is shattered by the occurrence of a strange dream, followed by the appearance of strange shadowy creatures and the even stranger appearance of a giant key in her hands. It doesn't take long after that for her entire world to begin crumbling around her.
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Some two years after the events of ''[[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaTheMovieRebellion Rebellion]]'' Madoka has been living in something resembling normalcy, though with the constant feeling that something is off. Her peaceful life is shattered by the occurrence of a strange dream, followed by the appearance of [[TheHeartless strange shadowy creatures creatures]] and the even stranger appearance of a giant key in her hands. It doesn't take long after that for her entire world to begin crumbling around her.
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* ShoutOut: To, of all things, ''WebVideo/KingdomHeartsInANutshell''"
-->'''Homura''': But then, what will you do with Kingdom Hearts? What makes you different from this Maleficent?\\
'''Xehanort''': I seek to restore Kingdom Hearts to its rightful place in a balanced universe. Ever since its departure, the universe has been in a slow decline, rotting and decaying. And so I ask your help, Homura. It is not an easy burden to bear, there is much that is wrong with the World, but someone has to step up, and prevent the weak from polluting the World with their endless darkness.\\
Homura paused, taking in all of his words. It… all made sense. Everything that she had experienced now made sense! It was as if a piece had been added to a puzzle that she wasn't even aware was incomplete, and now she could see the whole picture! Madoka was one of the few islands of kindness in a vast ocean of wretchedness. And now she was thrown into that sea, completely at its mercy. Homura had been right all along. She needed to be protected. The universe depended on it. She turned towards Xehanort.\\
'''Homura''': [[RunningGag Okay, I believe you.]]
-->'''Homura''': But then, what will you do with Kingdom Hearts? What makes you different from this Maleficent?\\
'''Xehanort''': I seek to restore Kingdom Hearts to its rightful place in a balanced universe. Ever since its departure, the universe has been in a slow decline, rotting and decaying. And so I ask your help, Homura. It is not an easy burden to bear, there is much that is wrong with the World, but someone has to step up, and prevent the weak from polluting the World with their endless darkness.\\
Homura paused, taking in all of his words. It… all made sense. Everything that she had experienced now made sense! It was as if a piece had been added to a puzzle that she wasn't even aware was incomplete, and now she could see the whole picture! Madoka was one of the few islands of kindness in a vast ocean of wretchedness. And now she was thrown into that sea, completely at its mercy. Homura had been right all along. She needed to be protected. The universe depended on it. She turned towards Xehanort.\\
'''Homura''': [[RunningGag Okay, I believe you.]]
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